LITERARY ANALYSIS RUBRIC - COMPOSITION A (5) B (4) Introduction (15) An engaging hook skillfully relates to the thesis. Effective transition sentences create a smooth flow. A fluid plot summary skillfully retells the story, focusing on the events related to the essay topic. Thesis (5) An arguable, persuasive thesis ends the introduction by eloquently defining two literary devices and theme. Uses active voice and includes author/title. The text has a structure and organization that is carefully crafted to support the thesis. Persuasively worded topic sentences, lead-in sentences, and clinchers effectively reinforce the lit device and the thesis. Compelling arguments and evidence (quotes) develop the thesis by answering So What? Transitions within and between paragraphs create unity and cohesion. The conclusion strengthens the essay by reinforcing ALL evidence presented in each body paragraph while providing deep insight into the author’s theme. The final clincher provides insight into the hook while engaging the reader with further food for thought. Transitional words create unity and cohesion. The text seamlessly integrates three properly cited quotes into each body paragraph. Without quote marks, the reader can’t tell where the writer’s words end and the quote begins. The text presents an engaging, formal, and objective tone while intentionally using standard English conventions of usage and mechanics. Present tense verbs are used to discuss story events. The text effectively utilizes strong active voice. Body (40) Conclusion (15) MLA Style (15) Conventions (10) An interesting hook relates to the thesis. Transitional sentences appear before and after the plot summary. A plot summary retells the story events in relation to the essay topic. Transitions appear within the text. A debatable thesis ends the introduction by including two literary devices, a theme statement, active voice, author, and story title. The text has an effective structure and organization that is aligned with the thesis. Topic sentences, lead-in sentences, and clinchers include the lit device and connect back to the thesis. The text provides relevant evidence (quotes) and analysis to reinforce the thesis and generally connects to the thesis by answering So What? Transitional words signal new ideas, but may lack paragraph transitions. The conclusion briefly summarizes the evidence presented in each body paragraph. Theme is restated, but deep insight into the author’s message may be lacking. The final clincher ends the essay by connecting back to the hook. Transitional words connect sentences. The text incorporates thee quotes into each body paragraph. Citations may not follow MLA guidelines. Quotes appear within the author’s sentences, but may lack smooth integration at times. The text utilizes a formal, objective tone while generally adhering to standard English conventions of usage and mechanics. The text usually uses present tense verbs to discuss story events. The text generally uses active voice, but may not always contain strong verbs. C (3) D (2) F (1) An introductory sentence relates to the thesis. A transitional sentence may be lacking. A plot summary retells story events but may be choppy (lacks transitions) or unconnected to essay topic. The text includes a sentence to introduce the essay. Ideas do not flow smoothly due to a lack of transitional sentences. A choppy, brief plot summary fails to provide adequate story detail. The text demonstrates a lack of awareness of hook statements, transitional sentences, and plot summary. A thesis statement ends the introduction by providing two literary devices, but may lack a clear statement of theme and active voice. The text has an organization and structure aligned with the thesis. Topic sentences, lead-in sentences and clinchers generally include the lit device but may not support thesis. The text provides evidence (quotes) that may not always reinforce thesis. Commentary emphasizes the importance of each trait but may not effectively connect to the thesis by answering So What? Transitions appear infrequently. The conclusion restates some of the evidence presented in each body paragraph. The thesis is simply restated. A concluding sentence connects back to the hook. Opportunities to create flow through transitional words may be missed. The thesis statement is vague and may not clearly define two literary devices and a theme statement. May use passive voice. The text attempts a structure and organization to support the thesis. Topic sentences, lead-in sentences, and clinchers are either lacking altogether or may lack persuasion or a literary device. Commentary and evidence (quotes) do not effectively reinforce the thesis by answering So What? Occasional transitional words may connect ideas. The text lacks a clear thesis statement. It is unclear which devices and/or theme the author will analyze. May use passive voice. The text has limited structure and organization with little connection to the thesis. Topic sentences, lead-in sentences, and clinchers lack persuasion, do not appear, and/or do not clearly reinforce thesis. Commentary and evidence (quotes) either lack completely or do not answer So What? A lack of transitional words creates choppiness. The conclusion merely restates the thesis. The text may fail to restate evidence from body paragraphs. The final sentence may not effectively connect to the hook. The text fails to deeply analyze the theme. The text is choppy due to a lack of transitional words. The text may fail to conclude the argument and may fail to restate evidence from body paragraphs. The text fails to connect the introduction to the conclusion. The text fails to deeply analyze the author’s theme. Ideas are not connected due to a lack of transitional words. The text includes quotes in each body paragraph, but may fail to present three in each. Quotes may lack smooth integration and proper citations. The text contains inconsistent use of cited quotes. Quotes either lack smooth integration or appear by themselves. The text fails to present three cited quotes in each paragraph. Quotes appear by themselves and lack smooth integration. The text presents a formal, objective tone adhering to some standard English conventions of usage and mechanics. The writer may fail to consistently use present tense verbs to discuss story events. The text misses opportunities to use active voice and strong verb choices. The text illustrates a limited awareness of formal tone. The text illustrates limited accuracy in standard English conventions of usage and mechanics. The writer fails to use present tense verbs to discuss story events. The text generally contains weak, passive verbs. The text illustrates a limited awareness or inconsistent tone. The text illustrates inaccuracy in standard English conventions of usage and mechanics. The text fails to use present tense verbs to discuss story events. Verbs are generally weak and passive. LITERARY ANALYSIS RUBRIC - COMPOSITION