DEPORTES ESSAY
1
2
3
4
Communication
The essay was nearly
impossible to follow due
do the many moments of
confusion.
The essay was difficult to
understand and follow at
several points and as a
reader, I often felt lost or
confused.
There were 3 or so points
of confusion but I still
followed the overall idea
of the paper.
The paper was somewhat
easy to follow, though
there were one or two
points where I felt a bit
lost or confused.
Irregular verbs
0- 1 irregular verbs used
(totally irregular, stem
changing, irregular yo
form, irregular yo form
with stem changing)
2 different irregular verbs
used (totally irregular,
stem changing, irregular
yo form, irregular yo form
with stem changing)
3 different irregular verbs
used (totally irregular,
stem changing, irregular
yo form, irregular yo form
with stem changing)
4 different irregular verbs
used (totally irregular,
stem changing, irregular
yo form, irregular yo form
with stem changing)
Verb conjugation
5+ mistakes in irregular
verb conjugations (wrong
stem change, spelling
issue, wrong ending)
4 mistakes in irregular
verb conjugations (wrong
stem change, spelling
issue, wrong ending)
3 mistakes in irregular
verb conjugations (wrong
stem change, spelling
issue, wrong ending)
2 mistakes in irregular
verb conjugations (wrong
stem change, spelling
issue, wrong ending)
Subject/Verb Matching
5+ mistakes in subject
verb matching
4 mistakes in subject/verb
matching
3 mistakes in subject/verb
matching
2 mistakes in subject/verb
matching
The paper as a whole was
easy to follow and
understand. There were
no moments of confusion
while reading the mini
essay.
5+ different irregular
verbs used (totally
irregular, stem changing,
irregular yo form, irregular
yo form with stem
changing)
No more than 1 mistake in
irregular verb
conjugations (wrong stem
change, spelling issue,
wrong ending)
No more than 1 mistake in
subject/verb matching
Gender/# Matching
5+ mistakes in gender/#
matching
4 gender/# matching
mistakes
3 mistakes in gender/#
matching
2 mistakes in gender/#
matching
No more than 1 mistake in
gender/# matching
Spelling
5+spelling mistakes
4 spelling/accents
mistakes
3 spelling/accent mistakes
2 spelling/accent mistakes
No more than 1 mistake in
spelling/accents.
Order/Neatness
The paper wasn’t typed,
was far too short, had
many written in corrects,
or seriously lacked
organization of ideas.
The paper was typed but
was too short, had written
in accents, and/or needed
more organization.
The paper was typed but
was too short, had written
in accents, and/or had a
couple issues with
organization.
The paper was typed but
might have been a bit
short, had written in
accents, or had an issue
with organization.
The paper was neatly
typed, at least 1 page long
and had clear organization
throughout.
Total Score (out of 35)
5
Deportes
Presentation
1
2
3
4
5
Communication
The presentation was nearly
impossible to follow due to
the numerous errors in
grammar and pronunciation.
There were several moments of
confusion during your
presentation due to grammar or
pronunciation.
There were a couple
moments of confusion
during your presentation due
to grammar or
pronunciation.
The presentation was fairly easy
to follow, though there was a
moment of confusion due to
grammar or pronunciation.
Your presentation was easy
to follow. There were no
moments of confusion due to
errors in grammar in
pronunciation.
Pronunciation
Incomprehensible
Very Americanized
Some English sounds
Minor English sounds
Native
Verbs
There were 5+ mistakes in
your verbs in the presentation
(subject/verb matching,
proper stem changing, etc.)
There were 4 mistakes in your
verbs in the presentation
(subject/verb matching, proper
stem changing, etc.)
Other grammar
issues
The grammar mistakes were
so distracting it was hard to
focus on and follow the
presentation.
There were many mistakes and
several were quite distracting
and/or confusing during the
presentation.
Target Language
Your presentation was
basically Spanglish.
Several moments of English
popped up in the presentation.
Content
Your presentation showed no
planning or organization.
Your presentation needed more
planning and organization and
we were left with quite a few
questions after.
Presentation
You didn’t really present but
rather just read your notes.
Your visual aid did nothing to
help the presentation.
You did a lot of reading from
your notes and your visual aid
could have used more work.
There were 3 mistakes in
your verbs in the
presentation (subject/verb
matching, proper stem
changing, etc.)
There were several grammar
mistakes and a couple of
them were quite distracting
during the presentation.
You slipped into English once
during the presentation but
overall you stayed in
Spanish.
There could have been
better planning and
organization shown in your
presentation and/or it left us
with a few questions.
You were reading from your
notes quite a lot rather than
presenting and/or your
visual aid needed work.
There were 2 mistakes in your
verbs in the presentation
(subject/verb matching, proper
stem changing, etc.)
While there may have been
grammar mistakes present, they
did distract much from the
overall presentation.
Your presentation included
several different verbs and was
entirely in Spanish.
Your presentation showed pretty
good organization and planning
though there were one or two
thoughts that could have been
more fleshed out.
You did a pretty good job with
the presentation but your visual
aid could have used more work
or you read from your notes a
couple times rather than
presented.
Total score:
There was no more than 1
mistake in your verbs in the
presentation (subject/verb
matching, proper stem
changing, etc.)
There was no more than 1
mistake in grammar in the
presentation (gender/#
matching, word order, etc.)
You used a variety of verbs
and sentence structures in a
fluid manner in your
presentation.
Your presentation showed
clear organization and
planning and gave us a full
explanation of the points you
brought up.
You used your notes and
visual aid to make a clear and
confident presentation.
/35