Name: _______________________________ Date: ____________ Class: _____ ARGUMENT SCORING RUBRIC 1-2 TASK THESIS IDEA DEVELOPMENT & SUPPORT 3-4 5 little success in developing an argument may substitute a simpler task by responding to the prompt or the writer’s argument tangentially with unrelated, inaccurate, or inappropriate explanations 1: especially simplistic argument or understanding of the prompt inadequate focus on developing an argument; inadequate response to the prompt; may misunderstand, misrepresent, or oversimplify the prompt or the writer’s argument 3: less persuasive in evaluating and developing a position little success in developing a claim; demonstrates only a superficial understanding of the argument; little success in developing directions; little success in developing a universal idea; few thesis components are present and do not justify the argument if one is attempted; perhaps missing thesis little success in controlling syntax and diction 1: especially simplistic argument; weak control of syntax and diction inadequate claim; obvious observations with little abstract analysis; inadequate directions; inadequate, vague, or confusing universal idea; some thesis components are present but inadequately justify the argument inadequate control of syntax and diction; perhaps some simplistic, imprecise, vague, awkward choices 3: less perceptive argument; less maturity in syntax and diction little success in developing a position inadequately attempts to develop a general position; may misrepresent or merely touch on the assertion or claim develops a position; may be general or lapse in focus or persuasiveness concession and refutation, if present, demonstrate little success in understanding opponents’ and proponents’ perspectives; little success in understanding the argument inadequate, inappropriate, or insufficient evidence and explanations concession and refutation, if present, demonstrate an inadequate understanding of opponents’ and proponents’ perspectives; concrete, simplistic understanding generates a onesided argument some adequate, appropriate, or sufficient evidence and explanations; evidence and explanations may be limited, inconsistent, or unevenly developed; may not blend evidence with commentary concession and refutation demonstrate some understanding of opponents’ and proponents’ perspectives; some understanding of other sides to the argument some sufficient use of persuasive appeals and strategies; perhaps overreliance on a particular appeal or strategy unrelated or inappropriate examples; lack of development; may merely summarize information little success is using persuasive appeals and strategies 1: especially simplistic, undeveloped argument, evidence and/or explanations inadequate use of persuasive appeals and strategies; perhaps overreliance on a particular appeal or strategy 3: less persuasive in evaluating an argument and developing a position 1 focus on developing a general argument; lapses in focus evaluates the prompt or the validity of the writer’s argument for the purpose of responding to that argument; inconsistent or uneven evaluation emerging claim; some adequate directions; broad universal idea; most thesis components are present and somewhat justify the argument some control of syntax and diction; perhaps some simplistic, imprecise choices 6-7 8-9 adequate focus on developing an argument adequately evaluates the prompt or the validity of the writer’s argument for the purpose of responding to that argument 7: more complete or purposeful focus and evaluation of the prompt or the writer’s argument adequate, generally sound claim that goes beyond literal observations; adequate directions and universal idea; all thesis components are present and adequately justify the argument adequate control of syntax and diction 7: more thorough, complex argument; more complex syntax and diction adequately develops a generally sound position adequate, appropriate, or sufficient evidence and explanations; evidence and explanations are less developed or cogent than 89 essays; blends evidence with commentary concession and refutation demonstrate an adequate understanding of opponents’ and proponents’ perspectives; adequate understanding of all sides of the argument sufficient and mostly balanced use of persuasive appeals and strategies 7: more complete or purposeful argumentation; stronger evidence creates a more persuasive argument effective, perceptive focus on developing an argument effectively evaluates the prompt or the validity of the writer’s argument for the purpose of responding to that argument 9: especially full, apt, insightful focus and evaluation of the prompt or the writer’s argument effective claim; convincing directions; compelling universal idea; thesis components enhance the argument syntax and diction enhance the thesis 9: especially persuasive and insightful argument; mature, sophisticated syntax and diction effectively develops a mature, sophisticated position appropriate, cogent evidence and explanations throughout; effectively blends evidence with commentary effective concession and refutation demonstrate a complex, sophisticated understanding of opponents’ and proponents’ perspectives; sophisticated understanding of all sides of the argument skillful, balanced use of persuasive appeals and strategies 9: especially full, thorough, or apt development Name: _______________________________ Date: ____________ Class: _____ 1-2 ORGANIZATION 3-4 little success in organization; random introduction does not succeed in engaging the reader; may be missing 5 inadequate organization; major breaks in unity and coherence; immature control introduction inadequately engages the reader; may be inappropriately brief logical organization with lapses in unity and coherence introduction attempts to engage the reader adequate, logical, and coherent organization conclusion adequately discusses the significance of a universal idea; connections within or beyond the passage adequate, logical transitional elements throughout 7: more complex organization; more engaging introduction; conclusion may include more insightful connections to a universal idea lacks transitional elements 1: less organized; less functional introduction; less functional conclusion SYNTAX little success in maintaining control; incorrect syntax throughout; lack of control in grammar and usage 1: weaker control inadequate, immature control; control of grammar and usage begins to interfere with communication 3: less consistent control some control and variety; some control of grammar and usage with errors that do not interfere with communication adequate control and variety; control of grammar and usage relative to length and complexity; some lapses 7: more complex DICTION incorrect or ineffective diction throughout 1: weaker control simplistic, imprecise, vague, awkward, or inappropriate diction throughout 3: less consistent control acceptable, appropriate diction; noticeable lapses into simplistic, imprecise diction acceptable, appropriate diction; some lapses 7: more complex CONVENTIONS lack of control in correctness 1: weaker control inadequate, immature control of correctness that begins to interfere with communication 3: less consistent control some control of correctness; errors do not interfere with communication controlled relative to length and complexity 7: more control PRESENTATION VERBAL TECHNIQUE unsuccessful articulation with mumbling throughout little correct pronunciation; numerous errors in pronunciation detract from the message volume is not loud enough to hear the message tone demonstrates no energy or interest in the message; monotonous tone throughout verbal fillers throughout no evidence of preparation inadequate posture throughout hand gestures and movement are unnatural and/or awkward examples of fidgeting and/or rocking throughout eye contact toward the audience is ineffective throughout; perhaps a complete heavy reliance on notes PRESENTATION NONVERBAL TECHNIOQUE some simplistic transitional elements inadequate transitional elements 3: less organized; less functional introduction; less functional conclusion some clear articulation with mumbling evident some correct pronunciation; numerous errors in pronunciation begin to detract from the message volume is loud enough to be heard some of the time; numerous moments of speaking too quietly/loudly tone demonstrates little energy; several moments of a monotonous tone several verbal fillers little evidence of preparation inadequate posture; evidence of slouching hand gestures and movement seem unnatural and/or awkward; several examples of fidgeting and/or rocking eye contact toward the audience is inconsistent; little adequate eye contact; heavy reliance on notes 2 mostly clear articulation with some moments of mumbling mostly correct pronunciation; some errors in pronunciation do not detract from the message volume is loud enough to be heard throughout the room most of the time; some moments of speaking too quietly/loudly; perhaps some variety in volume for emphasis tone demonstrates some energy; moments of a monotonous tone; some disinterest in the topic some verbal fillers some evidence of preparation Mostly upright, relaxed posture; some slouching hand gestures and movement are somewhat natural and are used to emphasize parts of the message; some awkward or movement that seems forced some fidgeting and/or rocking eye contact toward the audience is somewhat consistent; some inadequate eye contact by looking away from the audience during key moments; some undue reliance on notes 8-9 introduction adequately engages the reader conclusion does not succeed in discussing the significance of the universal idea; no connections; may merely repeat the argument or ideas already presented; may be missing conclusion inadequately discusses the significance of the universal idea; few connections within or beyond the passage; may merely summarize the argument or ideas already presented; perhaps inappropriately brief conclusion attempts to discuss the significance of the universal idea; may attempt to make connections within or beyond the passage; may tend toward summary of the argument or ideas already presented 6-7 clear articulation and correct pronunciation; few errors in pronunciation volume is adequately loud to be heard throughout the room; perhaps some variety in volume for emphasis varied tone demonstrates energy avoids verbal fillers; few examples of fillers in the presentation evidence of preparation upright, relaxed posture hand gestures and movement are natural and are used to emphasize parts of the message avoids fidgeting and rocking; few examples eye contact toward the audience is consistent; looks away from the audience to reference notes only effective organization enhances unity, coherence, and communication introduction effectively engages the reader conclusion effectively discusses the significance of a universal idea; insightful connections within and beyond the passage varied and subtle transitional elements throughout enhance coherence 9: more careful, subtle organization; more engaging introduction; conclusion may include more insightful connections to a universal idea effective control, variety, and complexity enhances meaning; grammar and usage enhances meaning 9: more mature, sophisticated syntax contributes to an impressive style accurate, rich, or precise diction enhances meaning 9: more mature, sophisticated diction contributes to an impressive style control of correctness enhances communication 9: more mature, sophisticated control contributes to an impressive style especially crisp articulation and correct pronunciation volume is adequately loud to be heard throughout the room; deliberate varying of volume for emphasis especially varied tone demonstrates energy and interest in the speaker’s message avoids verbal fillers preparation is obvious upright, relaxed posture; posture exudes confidence hand gestures and movement are natural and effectively emphasize the message avoids fidgeting and rocking eye contact toward the audience is completely consistent and effective; little need to reference notes