Scoring Rubric for Analytical Writing Score Score Point 3 Point 2 Construct Measured Score Point 4 Reading Comprehension of Key Ideas and Details What: Student response shows that reading was clearly understood and analyzed. Written Expression Development of Ideas Writing Written Expression Organization Score Point 0 What: Student response shows little understanding of the reading. What: Student response shows incorrect or no understanding of reading. How: Student has chosen and cited some evidence to prove their point but does not fully explain or understand evidence chosen. How: Student chooses to cite no evidence from the text or incorrectly uses the evidence. What: Student response shows that the reading was clearly understood. What: Student response shows that the reading was somewhat understood. How: Student has chosen and cited strong evidence to prove their point and some inferences have been made. How: Student has chosen and cited evidence to prove their point but has made minimal inferences when explaining that evidence/ text. What: Student response clearly answers the prompt and clearly supports and develops response while convincing the reader. What: Student response clearly answers the prompt and clearly supports and develops response. What: Student response addresses the topic but does not clearly develop supporting details and evidence. What: Student response addresses topic but support is not clearly developed. What: Student response does not address topic or is appropriate. How: Response contains clear, specific details and evidence from the text that enhances the reason for writing (task) and the audience in mind. How: Response contains specific details and evidence from the text that, for the most part, keeps the audience and task in mind. How: Response contains some details or textual support that keeps the audience in mind but may not be fully explained. How: Response contains minimal details or textual support that does not keep the task in mind and is not fully explained. How: Response contains no response and no attempt is made to answer the prompt. What: Student response is clear, has a purpose, and all details/ evidence fit together to make the writing one, clear successful piece. What: Student response is clear, has a purpose, and most of the details/ evidence fit together to make the writing mostly one clear, successful piece but logical flow is needed. How: Student response contains an introduction and conclusion and the information in the body paragraphs work together to form a clear argument and logical progression. What: Student response has a purpose and contains details that are grouped together to make the response somewhat clear and logical. What: Student response is not clear or well organized and may spend more time off topic than on topic. What: Student response is not clear or well organized. How: Student response contains no clear introduction or conclusion and supporting details or body paragraphs only partially relate to the argument. . How: There is an overall lack of paragraphs, supporting evidence, and introduction/ conclusion. How: Student has chosen and cited the best evidence to prove their point and has done so by making inferences and coming to their own conclusions. Writing Score Point 1 How: Student response contains a clear introduction and conclusion along with additional paragraphs that prove and support student’s point of view. It contains a logical and clearly purposeful flow of ideas and supporting examples. How: Student response contains an introduction and conclusion and body paragraphs that somewhat connect to each other but may go off topic at times or is awkwardly transitioned. Scoring Rubric for Analytical Writing Writing Written Expression Clarity of Language What: Student response shows a non-boring, purposeful style and voice without using informal language. How: Response consistently contains descriptive words, transitions, strong vocabulary, and words and phrases that clarify how the student feels about the topic. Writing Knowledge of Language and Conventions What: Student response shows a nonboring, purposeful style or voice without using informal language. How: Response contains descriptive words, transitions, strong vocabulary, and words that show how the student feels about the topic, although it may not be consistent throughout the work. What: Student response shows a somewhat boring style that seems robotic. What: Student response lacks style and voice or may sound too informal. What: Student response has an inappropriate style or complete lack of voice. How: Response contains some descriptive words, transitions, strong vocabulary, and words that show how the student feels about the topic, although it may not be consistent throughout the work or may hinder the clarity of the work. How: Response contains limited descriptive words, transitions, strong vocabulary, and words that show how the student feels about the topic. How: Response contains little to no descriptive words, transitions, and/ or strong vocabulary. What: The student response shows strong command of the English language and has been edited for mistakes. What: The student response shows command of the English language and editing is evident. What: The student response shows inconsistent command of the English language with a pattern of errors. What: The student response shows limited command of the English language with multiple errors. What: The student response shows limited command of the English language with many distracting errors. How: The response contains little or no errors in grammar, word usage, and mechanics. How: The response contains a few errors that may be distracting but does not hurt the overall message in the writing. How: The response contains errors that are more frequent, and those errors can sometimes hurt understanding. How: The response contains multiple mistakes with grammar and word usage that hurts understanding. How: The response contains a pattern of errors that distracts and prevents understanding of the writing.