Tell Me a Story Write a story (alone or with a partner) using at least 10 vocabulary words and 2 ‘new’ words made from the roots (suffix/prefix). Turn it into a Storybook using iPhoto with at least 1 image representing a vocabulary word per 2 pages. (All images must be properly documented.) 1. Brainstorm story ideas and choose one. 2. Complete the Vocab Table based on your idea chosen. (It would be a good idea to have a couple of extra sentences just in case.) 3. Decide on the order and add B (beginning), M (middle) and E (end) for each sentence. 4. Plan your writing by completing the Beginning, Middle and End chart. (Make any adjustments to your B, M and E’s on the sentences. 5. Download and complete the document “Write your Early Human Vocabulary Story” from the EAP blog the beginning, middle and end plan as a guide. 6. Edit and revise. Print the first draft of your story (print only your story’s pages) and get a pencil. Does your story have a title? Is your title centered? Are all main words in the title are capitalized? Is your story lined up on the left margin? Are your paragraphs indented? Choose a quiet area and read your printed story aloud. Mark any changes on your paper that you need to make. Do you have 12 underlined vocabulary words? If not, make notes where and how you could add them. Make the changes on your document, save and print your second draft (story only). 7. STOP! Get approval to go on. (Mrs. Swanda initials here:________) 8. Did you get Mrs. Swanda’s approval and initials? If no, go back to #8. If yes, get a “Fresh Eyes Checklist” form to complete. 9. Turn in your three drafts and “Fresh Eyes Checklist” paper in this order from top to bottom: Fresh Eyes Checklist, Final Draft, 2nd Draft that Fresh Eyes wrote on, 1st Draft that you wrote on. 10. Gather images. Find at least 4 family photos that you can use for your story. (Think about using your family vacation photos.) a. If they’re not in your iPhoto library, save them to your desktop and drag them into iPhoto. b. Once your images are in iPhoto, make a new Album. FILE-NEW ALBUM c. Title the album “Early Human Vocab Story” and drag your images into it. 11. Make a Storybook in iPhoto: Get instruction sheet. How to make a storybook in iPhoto: Open your story document. Open iPhoto and select your album. Select Keepsakes-Book-Large-Picture Book-Choose Add the title and author. Drag your cover image to the image area. Click the next arrow. Add About this book, information and image. o Early Human Vocabulary from Humanities 6 has been woven together to create a story. Add the title and author to the title page. Next. LAYOUT- ONE-Choose #3 OR #4 with an image on half and writing on the other half. Copy/Paste your beginning into the writing half and adjust your writing. (highlight, right click, font) Drag your image into the image half. Go to the next page and do the same with the middle of your story. Go to the next page and do the same with the end of your story. Click on Slideshow. Pause to read. Click the cog wheel to adjust settings. How to make a storybook in iPhoto: Open your story document. Open iPhoto and select your album. Select Keepsakes-Book-Large-Picture Book-Choose Add the title and author. Drag your cover image to the image area. Click the next arrow. Add About this book, information and image. o Early Human Vocabulary from Humanities 6 has been woven together to create a story. Add the title and author to the title page. Next. LAYOUT- ONE-Choose #3 OR #4 with an image on half and writing on the other half. Copy/Paste your beginning into the writing half and adjust your writing. (highlight, right click, font) Drag your image into the image half. Go to the next page and do the same with the middle of your story. Go to the next page and do the same with the end of your story. Click on Slideshow. Pause to read. Click the cog wheel to adjust settings. #10. Fresh Eyes Checklist With the second draft of your story and a pencil, find someone other than an EAP classmate or Mrs. Swanda to proof your story. Explain that you are a grade 6 EAP student and what your assignment is. Ask this person to read your story You (grade 6 EAP student) ask your “Fresh Eyes” the following questions and you write down the answers. 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. 6. 7. Fresh Eyes Name____________________ Date_________________ Is my title centered with all main words capitalized? Y N Did I underline at least 12 words? Y N Did I indent at least 3 paragraphs? Y N Did I line up my story on the left margin? Y N Is there a problem with clarity? If so, please circle/note it on my story. Did you notice any spelling or punctuation mistakes? If so, please show me what to circle/note. 8. Did you notice a problem with my verb? Are they in the proper tense? Do they match their subjects? If there’s a problem, please show me what to circle/note. Thank your Fresh Eyes and return to class. Revise your document. Save. Print your final draft and continue on with #9 on your “Tell Me a Story” instructions. #10. Fresh Eyes Checklist With the second draft of your story and a pencil, find someone other than an EAP classmate or Mrs. Swanda to proof your story. Explain that you are a grade 6 EAP student and what your assignment is. Ask this person to read your story You (grade 6 EAP student) ask your “Fresh Eyes” the following questions and you write down the answers. 9. 10. 11. 12. 13. 14. 15. Fresh Eyes Name____________________ Date_________________ Is my title centered with all main words capitalized? Y N Did I underline at least 12 words? Y N Did I indent at least 3 paragraphs? Y N Did I line up my story on the left margin? Y N Is there a problem with clarity? If so, please circle/note it on my story. Did you notice any spelling or punctuation mistakes? If so, please show me what to circle/note. 16. Did you notice a problem with my verb? Are they in the proper tense? Do they match their subjects? If there’s a problem, please show me what to circle/note. Thank your Fresh Eyes and return to class. Revise your document. Save. Print your final draft and continue on with #9 on your “Tell Me a Story” instructions. Early Human Vocabulary Roots (suffixes and prefixes) vor – eat Find some words that use this root. (different from below) migra wander hab, habit – live cult: care for pre: before, in front of devour- (v): to eat greedily; to eat everything carnivore – (n): an animal that eats meat herbivore- (n): an animal that eats only plants omnivore- (n): an animal that eats both plants and animals migrating (v): to go or move from one place to another (migration – (n)) How this word might fit into my story. (Choose at least 2 root words and 10 vocabulary words.) B M E nomad- (n): A member of a people who have no fixed residence but move from place to place usually seasonally and within a well-defined territory habitable (adj): suitable or fit for a person to live inhabit (v): to live or dwell in a place land bridge- (n): a corridor of land that connects two other pieces of land exposed during the ice age and covered by water during warmer periods. band or clan (n): a small group of humans living and working together shaman (n): a person who acts as intermediary between the natural and supernatural worlds, using “magic” to cure illness, foretell the future, control spiritual forces, etc. The “magic” cures are often herbal. technology (n): the collection of ideas or tools that a group of people use to solve problems and make life better invent (v): to make something useful for the first time using the imagination independent invention (n): when a culture invents new technology and ideas without influence from another culture. cultural diffusion (n): when people from one group accept ideas and technology from another culture and adapt it to their own culture prehistory (n): the time before people could read and write oral tradition (n): stories passed down by word of mouth from grandparents to parents, then parents to children Plan your Writing: Complete each section noting on your sentences which section you will put them in (B, M or E). Beginning: This sets up your story so the reader knows what’s going on. Setting: Characters: Problem/Conflict: Middle: This is the plot or what is happening. Stop after you write the climax! (You may not need all the boxes.) First… Next… Then… And… Finally… Climax (This is the most exciting part just before you fix the problem/conflict from the beginning.) Ending: This is where you resolve or fix the problem/conflict from the beginning and bring closure to all little parts. Resolution (How is the problem/conflict Tie up the loose ends and bring closure to the resolved?) story. Save this document in your EAP folder ADDING YOUR NAME TO THE FILE NAME. Write your story using your Beginning, Middle, and End Plan. Underline the vocabulary words you have used in your story. (Be sure to use at least 10 vocabulary words plus 2 new words using the roots.) 1. Beginning: Use your plan to write your beginning here. 2. Go back and UNDERLINE ALL VOCABULARY WORDS YOU USED IN YOUR BEGINNING. 3. Middle: Use your plan to write your middle here. 4. Go back and UNDERLINE ALL VOCABULARY WORDS YOU USED IN YOUR BEGINNING. 5. End: Use our plan to write your middle here. 6. Go back and UNDERLINE ALL VOCABULARY WORDS YOU USED IN YOUR BEGINNING. 7. Now that you have written your story, what would be a good title? Write down 3 choices for a title. a. b. c. 8. Insert a new page. INSERT-BREAK- PAGE BREAK (Do not just hit enter until you’re there. Learn the proper and quick way to insert a page so it doesn’t have to be readjusted later.) 9. Choose a title and add it to the top of the inserted page and center it. 10. Copy and paste the beginning below the title. Adjust the margin (left justify) AND your paragraphs. (Don’t just space over. See Mrs. Swanda for help if you don’t know how to do a proper layout.) 11. Copy and paste the middle below the beginning. Adjust the margin and your paragraphs as before. 12. Copy and paste the end below the middle. Adjust the margin and your paragraphs as before. 13. Use 1.5 spacing and adjust your font to at least 12 point. 14. Save