Reviewer’s comments on Gurd, Helliar and Woods: “Looking for leaders: ‘balancing’ innovation, risk and management control systems”. The paper draws on evidence collected from two case companies, identified as Zeta and Eta, on the challenges associated with balancing innovation and risk management within their respective management control regimes. Both companies were also in the process of accommodating to a need for change, for different reasons, in which new leaders were being sought in attempts to ensure a secure commercial future. The resulting complex of organisational dynamics is viewed initially from a largely conventional management control perspective, with the leadership issues being considered from an institutional work perspective. The paper is organised into six sections. Following an introductory overview, section 2 provides a cursory review of the literature on the relationship between risk and innovation, together with two paragraphs that contextualise this couple from a management control perspective. Section 3 is entitled “Method and Case Introduction” and is constituted by a single paragraph that provides the basic research design details. Section 4 is the longest section in the paper and reports the findings of the interviews conducted in the case companies, Zeta and Eta, which are described in some detail at the outset. The substantive findings are presented in five subsections (pp10-16). Section 5 discusses the findings of the study from the “looking for leaders” perspective identified in the paper’s title, the paper concluding with a short conclusion in which the authors attempt to integrate their various research foci and findings. It is difficult to conclude other than at this time the authors find themselves in a process of transition. This is most clearly evident in the lack of continuity in the paper between sections 4 and 5. Section 4 documents the dynamic that exists within the two case companies between their respective innovation, risk and control regimes, which among other things identifies the diminished role that accountants have in both companies. Section 5 would seem to focus very largely on a second, separate set of findings relating to the imperative to address a need for leadership in both companies. This would seem to suggest that the authors began their study with a particular focus/foci in mind, only to discover another, more interesting set of issues to explore and explain. This accords with what the authors write on page 4, where they set out the three aims of the paper – no mention of “looking for leaders” here. For me, the best way to deal with this dilemma is to develop two papers, although I can appreciate that there may be a chance that neither would be sufficiently robust to secure publication in higher end journals. I have a series of concerns with the findings section of the paper. Initially I do not see the benefit of providing details of the two case companies at the beginning of the empirical chapter. This information probably belongs in section 3 (presently woefully short). Second, cross-case comparison belongs at the end of the section, thereby providing a link into the discussion, acknowledging the previous observation of course. Third, I sensed that there was a difference in space/consideration accorded to Eta in these pages (maybe less interesting?). This is a problem when you are only looking at two case companies, as opposed to 6-10 as in a field study. Fourth, actual quotations from interviewees are very scarce in this section. And finally, there is not a single reference anywhere to be seen in the section. On page 5 the authors state that within section 2 the theoretical framework of institutional work is introduced. It isn’t I’m afraid. There is the beginnings of such an exposition on pages 3-4 and a few more sentences in section 5. This is unfortunate as many readers are probably not well-acquainted with this strain of institutional theorising that finds its roots in the old institutional sociology of Selznick. I suspect his contemporary Gouldner probably has something useful to add here too. This in turn requires the authors to say something about what an institutional work perspective offers beyond the more familiar institutional theory lexicon. A final comment relates to what the paper, presumably unintentionally, demonstrates – the limitations of what I described in my opening paragraph as the “conventional” management control perspective. There is nothing remotely critical about the content of section 4 of the paper, which is essentially made up of descriptions of current management practices within two companies. Serious problems are identified of course but the underlying agenda is to identify how these might be resolved within the constraints attendant upon the prevailing social organisation of work. The question is: does an institutional theory perspective enable us to do anything any different/more radical?