Grade 4th - Unit 1 Title The Arc of Story: Writing Realistic Fiction Unit 1 Table of Contents Unit 1 Title: The Arc of Story: Writing Realistic Fiction Section 1|Page Unit Essential Questions Unit Goals and Sub Goals (Task Analysis) Unit Language (Spanish, Russian, English) Unit Assessment Checklist Unit Assessment Rubric Sample Unit Calendar Page Number Skip Done English, Spanish Done Skip Done Grade 4th - Unit 1 Title The Arc of Story: Writing Realistic Fiction Grade 4 Content Unit 1 Bend 2: Drafting and Revising with an eye toward Believability Unit Title: The Arc of Story: Writing Realistic Fiction Stage 1 Identify Desired Results Standards: W.4.3a,b,d,, W.4.4, W.4.5, W.4.9a, W.4.10 (Alpha-numeric RL.4.1, RL.4.3, RL.4.5 RL 4.10 listing of standards incorporated in the SL4.1, SL.4.2, SL.4.4 unit) L.4.1, L4.2, L.4.3.a, L.4.5a Essential Questions: (These goals should be aligned to Essential Questions.) Goals: (These should be aligned to the Goals above) Learning Targets (aligned to goals) 2|Page Good writers plan and write scenes with the character in mind. Los buenos escritores planean y escriben escenas teniendo presente al personaje. 6 I can show how my characters unfolding step by step. Soy capaz de mostrar como mis personajes se desenvuelven paso a paso. Good writers can create good leads, setting and endings. Los buenos escritores pueden crear buenas introducciones, escenarios y finales. 8 I can effective leads to engage my readers. Soy capaz de crear introducciones efectivas para enganchar a mis lectores. 7 I can become the main character in my story by standing in their shoes and seeing through their eyes. Soy capaz de convertirme en el personaje principal de mi historia poniéndome en sus zapatos y viendo a través de sus ojos. 9 I can create a scene by keeping the dialogue and action grounded in the setting. Soy capaz de crear una escena con diálogos y acciones que sucedan dentro del escenario. 10 I can create an ending that meshes with and serves the Good writers use transition words to connect scenes in a story. Los buenos escritores usan palabras de transición para conectar escenas en una historia. I can use transition words to connect scenes in a story. Soy capaz de usar palabras de transición para conectar las escenas de una historia. Dates of Unit: Grade 4th - Unit 1 Title The Arc of Story: Writing Realistic Fiction purposes of the story. Soy capaz de crear un final coherente y que se relacione con el propósito de la historia. 3|Page Grade 4th - Unit 1 Title The Arc of Story: Writing Realistic Fiction Stage 2 Academic Language Function(s): Determine Assessment Evidence Bend 2 Academic Language (What language will students need to sound like experts?) Academic Language Stems: Easy for Beginners Describe people, places, things and events/ Describir personas, lugares, cosas y eventos. Use regular and irregular past tense verbs/ El uso de verbos regulares e irregulares en tiempo pasado. Use transition words (to connect scenes in a story)/ El uso de palabras de transición (para conectar las escenas de una historia). (Who) (What)(Where)/ (Quién) (Qué)(Dónde) I stood on the playground. Me paré en el patio de recreo First, Next, Then, etc./ Primero, después, entonces, etc. Medium for Intermediate Academic Vocabulary: Scene/ Escena Dialogue/ Diálogo Setting/ Escenario Unfolding/ Desenvoltura, desarrollo All of the sudden/ De repente When/ Cuando First, Next, Then/ Primero, después, entonces One day/ Un día The following week/ A la semana siguiente Transition words link: http://web.woodburn.k12.or.us/departments/curriculum/ld/28summarize.php Assessment Tools: 4|Page Goals Rubric Assessment Checklist (Who)(What)(Where)(When)/ Quién) (Qué)(Dónde) (Cuándo) I stood on the playground of the Mario Gabientto School. Me paré en el patio de recreo de la escuela Mario Gabientto. One day, The next moment, etc./ Un día, en un momento Difficult for Advanced and Fluent (Who)(What)(Where)(When)(How)/ Quién) (Qué)(Dónde) (Cuándo)(Cómo) I stood in the playground of the Mario Gabientto School to await my fate. . Me pare en el patio de recreo de la escuela Mario Gabientto esperando mi destino. All of the sudden, The following week, etc./ De repente, a la semana siguiente. Student Name 5|Page B = Beginning D = Developing I can use transition words to connect scenes in a story. I I can create an ending that meshes with and serves the purposes of the story. I can create a scene by keeping the dialogue and action grounded in the setting. I can effective leads to engage my readers. I can become the main character in my story by standing in their shoes and seeing through their eyes. I can show how my characters unfolding step by step. Grade 4th - Unit 1 Title The Arc of Story: Writing Realistic Fiction Unit of Study Assessment Checklist Bend 2 P = Proficient Notes M=Mastery Nombre del estudiante 6|Page B = Beginning Lista de Control: Escritura narrativa D = Developing Soy capaz de usar palabras de transición para conectar las escenas de una historia. Soy capaz de crear un final coherente y que se relacione con el propósito de la historia. Soy capaz de crear una escena con diálogos y acciones que sucedan dentro del escenario. Soy capaz de crear introducciones efectivas para enganchar a mis lectores. Soy capaz de convertirme en el personaje principal de mi historia poniéndome en sus zapatos y viendo a través de sus ojos. Soy capaz de mostrar como mis personajes se desenvuelven paso a paso. Grade 4th - Unit 1 Title The Arc of Story: Writing Realistic Fiction Lista de control de unidad 1, sección 2 P = Proficient Notas M=Mastery Nombre del estudiante 7|Page Usé comas para escribir correctamente las oraciones compuestas y para hacerlas más claras. Desarrollo Usé mi conocimiento de silabas y ortografía para ayudarme a deletrear y editar mi escrito. Utilicé el muro de palabras y el diccionario cuando los necesité. Usé la voz narrativa y transmití la emoción o el tono de mi cuento a través de descripciones, frases, dialogo, y pensamientos. Para dar más vida a mi historia, incluí detalles precisos y sensoriales. También usé lenguaje figurativo (símil, metáfora, personificación). Estructura Oficio del escritor: Hice que algunas partes de la historia sucedan rápido y otras lentamente. Oficio del escritor: Mostré por que el personaje hizo lo que hizo al incluir sus pensamientos. Elaboración: Además de acciones y dialogo, enriquecí mi historia con oraciones descriptivas de sentimientos y pensamientos. Organización: Usé párrafos y dejé renglones para separar lo que pasó al comienzo de lo que pasó luego y al final. Final: Escribí un final relacionado con el comienzo o el desarrollo de la historia. Finalicé la historia con una acción, un diálogo, o un sentimiento. Conectores: Mostré la cronología del tiempo con palabras y oraciones para indicarlo como: “justo entonces, “de repente” (para mostrar la rapidez) y “ después de un rato“ un poco más tarde” para mostrar cuando un poco de tiempo ha pasado. Introducción: Escribí el comienzo en el cual introduje al lector en el mundo de mi historia mostrándole qué estaba sucediendo y en dónde. En general: Conté la parte importante de un evento paso a paso y omití los detalles sin importancia. Grade 4th - Unit 1 Title The Arc of Story: Writing Realistic Fiction Normas de escritura Student Name 8|Page When writing long, complex, sentences, I used commas to make them clear and correct. Development I used what I knew about word families and spelling to help me spell and edit. I used the word wall and dictionaries when needed. I used a storytelling voice and conveyed the emotion or tone of my story through description, phrases, dialogue, and thoughts I included precise and sometimes sensory details and used figurative language (simile, metaphor, personification) to bring my story to life. Structure Craft: I made some parts of the story go quickly, some slowly. Craft: I showed why characters did what they did by including their thinking Elaboration: I added more to the heart of my story, including not only actions and dialogue but also thought and feelings. I used paragraphs to separate the different parts or times of the story or to show when a new character was speaking. Ending: I wrote an ending that connected to the beginning or middle of the story. I used action, dialogue, or feeling to bring my story to a close. Transitions: I showed how much time went by with words and phrases that mark time. Lead: I wrote a beginning in which I showed what was happening and where, getting readers into the world of the story. Overall: I wrote the important part of an event bit by bit and took out unimportant parts. Grade 4th - Unit 1 Title The Arc of Story: Writing Realistic Fiction Student Checklist : Narrative, Grade 4 Language Conventions Grade 4th - Unit 1 Title The Arc of Story: Writing Realistic Fiction Unit of Study Assessment Rubric Unit # - Unit Title… Learning Target Language Learning Target 9|Page Mastery Proficient Developing Beginning Grade 4th Stage 3 - Unit 1 Title The Arc of Story: Writing Realistic Fiction Plan Learning Experiences and Instruction There are about 40 teaching days in Quarter 1. This is a suggested timeline that has incorporated Learning and Language Goals. Please modify and adjust according to the needs of your students. Monday Tuesday Wednesday Thursday Friday Bend 1: Day 1: Session 1. Imagining Stories from Ordinary Moments Learning Goal: I can get ideas for stories from small moments in my life. Day 2: Session 2. Imagining Stories We Wish Existed in the World Learning Goal: I can take my small personal moments to imagine books I wish existed in the world. Day 3: Session 3. Developing Believable Characters Learning Goal: I can get ideas by thinking about issues in my life. Day 5: Optional lesson: Midworkshop teaching, “Building the characters Self-View” (page 27) Day 6: Session 4: Giving Characters Struggles and Motivations Learning Goal: I can develop characters by telling about their motivations and struggles. Day 11: Session 6: Continue Show, Don’t Tell Learning Goal: Draft the story scene by scene. Language Goal: I can correctly conjugate both regular and irregular verbs in the past tense I use in my writing. Day 16: Session 9: Continues: Orienting Readers with Setting Language Goal: I can use transition words to connect scenes in a story. Day 7: Session 4: Showing Characters by Writing Scenes page 37 Language Goal: I can use prepositional phrases to describe where or when things happen. Day 8: Session 5: Plotting with a Story Arc Learning Goal: I can use a story arc to sketch out possible plot lines for stories. Day 4: Session 3 Continued: Developing Believable Characters Learning Goal: I can develop characters from a seed idea by creating their external and internal traits. Language Goal: I can use precise adjectives to describe details. Day 9: Session 5: Continue Plotting with a Story Arc Day 12: Session 7: Feeling and Drafting the Heart of your Story Learning Goal: I can become the main character in my story by standing in their shoes and seeing through their eyes. Day 13: Session 7: Continue Feeling and Drafting the Heart of your Story Learning Goal: Introduce the Narrative Writing Checklist (page 72) Day 14: Session 8: Studying Published Texts to Write Leads Learning Goal: I can effective leads to engage my readers. Day 15: Session 9: Orienting Readers with Setting Learning Goal: I can create a scene by keeping the dialogue and action grounded in the setting. Day 17: Session 10: Writing Powerful Endings Learning Goal: I can create an ending that meshes with and serves the purposes of the story. Bend 3: Day 18: Session 11: Revision Learning Goal: I can revise my story by re-reading with a lens so that what I want to write is what I actually wrote. Day 19: Session 12: Making a space for Writing Learning Goal: I can create a space for writing in my notebooks and at home. Day 20: Session 13: Using Mentor Texts to Flesh out Characters Learning Goal: I can improve my writing by noticing what mentor writers do that work 10 | P a g e Bend 2: Day 10: Session 6: Show, Don’t Tell Learning Goal: I can show how my characters unfolding step by step. Grade 4th - Unit 1 Title The Arc of Story: Writing Realistic Fiction Day 21: Session 13: Continue Using Mentor Texts to Flesh out Characters Language Goal: I can compare and contrast my writing with mentor texts and make changes to improve my writing. Bend 4: Day 26: Session 16: Launching Independent Fiction Projects Learning Goal: I can take all I’ve learned about writing fiction to new projects Day 31: Session 19: Focusing the Reader’s Gaze Learning Goal: I can study the work I do as a reader of fiction and apply those skills to my writing revisions. Day 36: Session 20: Choosing Punctuation for Effect Learning Goal: I can use punctuation to have an effect on how readers engage with the text 11 | P a g e Day 22: Session 14: Editing with Various Lenses Learning Goal: I can edit with different lenses Day 27: Session 17: Planning and Drafting Stories with Agency Learning Goal: I can quickly apply my planning and drafting skills to new projects Day 23: Session 14: Continue Editing with Various Lenses Language Goal: I can edit for correct verb tense, and agreement of pronouns Day 28: Session 18: Mining the connections between Reading and Writing Fiction Learning Goal: I can study the work I do as a reader of fiction and apply those skills to my writing revisions. Day 32: Additional Session Day 33: Session 19: Continue Language Goal: I can use Focusing the Reader’s Gaze transition words to Returning to the connect scenes in a Narrative Checklist with story. Increasing Independence (page 176) Day 37: Session 21: Surveying Your Work and Planning for the Future Learning Goal: I can reflect on the work I have done, celebrating accomplishments and making new goals. Day 24: Session 14: Continue: Editing with Various Lenses I can edit with a writing partner Day 25: Session 15: Publishing Anthologies Learning Goal: I can celebration published writing Day 29: Session 18: Continue Planning and Drafting Stories with Agency Developing Conflict and Tension page 167 Language Goal: I can use precise adjectives to describe details. Day 34: Additional Language Language Goal: I can edit for correct verb tense, and agreement of pronouns. Day 30: Session 18: Continue Planning and Drafting Stories with Agency Gearing Writing Toward a Particular Audience page Day 35: Session 20: Choosing Punctuation for Effect Learning Goal: I can use punctuation to make sentences easier to understand Grade 4th - Unit 1 Title The Arc of Story: Writing Realistic Fiction Lunes Martes Miércoles Jueves Viernes Bend 1: Day 1: Session 1. Imagining Stories from Ordinary Moments Learning Goal: I can get ideas for stories from small moments in my life. Day 2: Session 2. Imagining Stories We Wish Existed in the World Learning Goal: I can take my small personal moments to imagine books I wish existed in the world. Day 3: Session 3. Developing Believable Characters Learning Goal: I can get ideas by thinking about issues in my life. Day 5: Optional lesson: Midworkshop teaching, “Building the characters Self-View” (page 27) Day 6: Session 4: Giving Characters Struggles and Motivations Learning Goal: I can develop characters by telling about their motivations and struggles. Day 11: Session 6: Continue Show, Don’t Tell Soy capaz de escribir el borrador escena por escena. Soy capaz de conjugar los verbos regulares e irregulares en el tiempo pasado. Day 16: Session 9: Continues: Orienting Readers with Setting Soy capaz de usar palabras de transición para conectar las escenas de una historia. Day 7: Session 4: Showing Characters by Writing Scenes page 37 Language Goal: I can use prepositional phrases to describe where or when things happen. Day 8: Session 5: Plotting with a Story Arc Learning Goal: I can use a story arc to sketch out possible plot lines for stories. Day 4: Session 3 Continued: Developing Believable Characters Learning Goal: I can develop characters from a seed idea by creating their external and internal traits. Language Goal: I can use precise adjectives to describe details. Day 9: Session 5: Continue Plotting with a Story Arc Day 12: Session 7: Feeling and Drafting the Heart of your Story Soy capaz de convertirme en el personaje principal de mi historia poniéndome en sus zapatos y viendo a través de sus ojos. Day 13: Session 7: Continue Feeling and Drafting the Heart of your Story Soy capaz de utilizar la lista de control para la escritura narrativa (p. 72) Day 14: Session 8: Studying Published Texts to Write Leads Soy capaz de crear introducciones efectivas para enganchar a mis lectores. Day 15: Session 9: Orienting Readers with Setting Soy capaz de crear una escena con diálogos y acciones que sucedan dentro del escenario. Day 17: Session 10: Writing Powerful Endings Soy capaz de crear un final coherente y que se relacione con el propósito de la historia. Bend 3: Day 18: Session 11: Revision Learning Goal: I can revise my story by re-reading with a lens so that what I want to write is what I actually wrote. Day 19: Session 12: Making a space for Writing Learning Goal: I can create a space for writing in my notebooks and at home. Day 20: Session 13: Using Mentor Texts to Flesh out Characters Learning Goal: I can improve my writing by noticing what mentor writers do that work 12 | P a g e Bend 2: Day 10: Session 6: Show, Don’t Tell Soy capaz de mostrar como mis personajes se desenvuelven paso a paso. Grade 4th - Unit 1 Title The Arc of Story: Writing Realistic Fiction Day 21: Session 13: Continue Using Mentor Texts to Flesh out Characters Language Goal: I can compare and contrast my writing with mentor texts and make changes to improve my writing. Bend 4: Day 26: Session 16: Launching Independent Fiction Projects Learning Goal: I can take all I’ve learned about writing fiction to new projects Day 31: Session 19: Focusing the Reader’s Gaze Learning Goal: I can study the work I do as a reader of fiction and apply those skills to my writing revisions. Day 36: Session 20: Choosing Punctuation for Effect Learning Goal: I can use punctuation to have an effect on how readers engage with the text 13 | P a g e Day 22: Session 14: Editing with Various Lenses Learning Goal: I can edit with different lenses Day 27: Session 17: Planning and Drafting Stories with Agency Learning Goal: I can quickly apply my planning and drafting skills to new projects Day 23: Session 14: Continue Editing with Various Lenses Language Goal: I can edit for correct verb tense, and agreement of pronouns Day 28: Session 18: Mining the connections between Reading and Writing Fiction Learning Goal: I can study the work I do as a reader of fiction and apply those skills to my writing revisions. Day 32: Additional Session Day 33: Session 19: Continue Language Goal: I can use Focusing the Reader’s Gaze transition words to Returning to the connect scenes in a Narrative Checklist with story. Increasing Independence (page 176) Day 37: Session 21: Surveying Your Work and Planning for the Future Learning Goal: I can reflect on the work I have done, celebrating accomplishments and making new goals. Day 24: Session 14: Continue: Editing with Various Lenses I can edit with a writing partner Day 25: Session 15: Publishing Anthologies Learning Goal: I can celebration published writing Day 29: Session 18: Continue Planning and Drafting Stories with Agency Developing Conflict and Tension page 167 Language Goal: I can use precise adjectives to describe details. Day 34: Additional Language Language Goal: I can edit for correct verb tense, and agreement of pronouns. Day 30: Session 18: Continue Planning and Drafting Stories with Agency Gearing Writing Toward a Particular Audience page Day 35: Session 20: Choosing Punctuation for Effect Learning Goal: I can use punctuation to make sentences easier to understand