Grade 5 - Unit 1 Title Narrative Craft Unit 1 Table of Contents Unit 1 Title Narrative Craft Section 1|Page Unit Essential Questions Unit Goals and Sub Goals (Task Analysis) Unit Language (Spanish, Russian, English) Unit Assessment Checklist Unit Assessment Rubric Sample Unit Calendar Page Number Skip Done English, Spanish Done Skip Done Grade 5 - Unit 1 Title Narrative Craft Grade 5 Content Unit 1 Bend 2: Moving Through the Writing Process: Rehearsing, Drafting, Revising, and Editing Unit Title: Narrative Craft Stage 1 Identify Desired Results Standards: W.5.3.a.e, W.5.4, W.5.5, W.5.8, W.5.10 (Alpha-numeric RL.5.1, RL.5.2, RL.5.5, RL.5.6 listing of standards incorporated in the SL.5.1, SL.5.4, SL.5.6 unit) L.5.1, L.5.2, L.5.3 Essential Questions: (These goals should be aligned to Essential Questions.) Goals: (These should be aligned to the Goals above) Learning Targets (aligned to goals) 2|Page Good writers develop the elements of their story though revision. Los buenos escritores desarrollan los elementos de su cuento al revisar. Good writers draw on all they know about editing. Los buenos escritores utilizan todo lo que saben sobre editar. 6 I can draft by writing fast and furious Soy capaz de escribir mi borrador al escribir de prisa. 7 I can engage in large-scale, wholenew-draft revisions, by asking myself that the story is really about. Soy capaz de hacer revisiones por completo al preguntar de qué se trata realmente la historia. 8 I can revise my narrative by bringing out the story structure. Soy capaz de revisar mi narración al enfocarme en el arco dramático de 12 I can put the final touches on my writing by using checklists and charts while I edit. Soy capaz de poner los toques finales en mi escrito al utilizar listas de control y tablas cuando edito. Good writers use different verb tenses correctly. Los buenos escritores utilizan los tiempos de los verbos correctamente. I can use the past perfect tense. Soy capaz de utilizar el pretérito perfecto. I can use the past progressive tense. Soy capaz de utilizar el pasado progresivo. I can use transition words and phrases to connect elements of my story. Soy capaz de utilizar palabras y Dates of Unit: Grade 5 - Unit 1 Title Narrative Craft la historia. 9 I can elaborate on parts of my story that show meaning by using writing techniques. Soy capaz de explicar las partes con más significado en la historia usando varias técnicas de escribir. 10 I can bring out the internal story by using scenes from the past and future. Soy capaz de desarrollar la trama interna al usar escenas del pasado y futuro. 11 I can end my stories so that they tie back to the big meaning of the story. Soy capaz de terminar mis cuentos de tal manera que se relacionan con el tema principal de la historia. 3|Page frases de transición para conectar los elementos de mi historia. Grade 5 - Unit 1 Title Narrative Craft Stage 2 Determine Assessment Evidence Bend 2 Academic Language (What language will students need to sound like experts?) Academic Language Function(s): Academic Language Stems: Easy for Beginners Describe people, places, things and events. (Who) (What)(Where) Describir a personas, lugares, cosas y eventos. (Quién)(Qué) (Cuándo) I watched dad in the kitchen. Use past perfect and past progressive tenses. Yo miré a Papá en la cocina. Utilizar los tiempos pretérito, pasado y pasado progresivo. Medium for Intermediate Academic Vocabulary: Flash Drafting / Redactar de prisa Story Arc / arco dramático Internal / interno Scenes / escenas Techniques / técnicas (Who)(What)(Where)(When) (Quién)(Qué)(Dónde)(Cuándo) I watched dad cleaning the dirty dishes in the kitchen. Yo miré a Papá lavando los trastes sucios en la cocina, Difficult for Advanced and Fluent (Who)(What)(Where)(When)(How) (Quién)(Qué)(Dónde)(Cuándo)(Cómo) I watched dad as he plunged his hands in soapy water, cleaning the dirty dishes in the kitchen sink. Yo miré a Papá cuando sumergió sus manos en el agua enjabonada, lavando los trastes sucios en el fregadero. Assessment Tools: 4|Page Goals Rubric Assessment Checklist Student Name 5|Page B = Beginning D = Developing P = Proficient M=Mastery I can use transition words and phrases to connect elements of my story. I can use the past progressive tense. I can use the past perfect tense I can put the final touches on my writing by using checklists and charts while I edit. I can end my stories so that they tie back to the big meaning of the story. I can bring out the internal story by using scenes from the past and future. I can elaborate on parts of my story that show meaning by using writing techniques. I can revise my narrative by bringing out the story structure. I can engage in large-scale, whole-new-draft revisions, by asking myself that the story is really about. I can draft by writing fast and furious Grade 5 - Unit 1 Title Narrative Craft Unit of Study Assessment Checklist Bend 2 Notes Nombre del estudiante 6|Page B = Beginning D = Developing P = Proficient M=Mastery Soy capaz de utilizar palabras y frases de transición para conectar los elementos de mi historia. Soy capaz de utilizar el pasado progresivo. Soy capaz de utilizar el pretérito perfecto. Soy capaz de poner los toques finales en mi escrito al utilizar listas de control y tablas cuando edito. Soy capaz de terminar mis cuentos de tal manera que se relacionan con el tema principal de la historia. Soy capaz de desarrollar la trama interna al usar escenas del pasado y futuro. Soy capaz de explicar las partes con más significado en la historia usando varias técnicas de escribir. Soy capaz de revisar mi narración al enfocarme en el arco dramático de la historia. Soy capaz de hacer revisiones por completo al preguntar de qué se trata realmente la historia. Soy capaz de escribir mi borrador al escribir de prisa. Grade 5 - Unit 1 Title Narrative Craft Lista de control, grado 5, unidad 1, sección 2 Notas Student Name 7|Page Punctuation: I used commas to set off introductory parts of sentences, such as One day at the park, I went on the slide; I also used commas to show talking directly to someone, such as Are you mad, Monm? Development Spelling: I used what I knew about word families and spelling rules to help me spell and edit. I used the word wall and dictionaries when needed. I varied my sentences to create the pace and tone of my narrative. I included precise details and used figurative language so that readers could picture the setting, characters, and events. I used some objects or actions as symbols to bring forth my meaning. Structure Craft: I showed why characters did what they did by including their thinking and their responses to what happened. I slowed down the heart of the story. I made less important parts shorter an less detailed and blended storytelling and summary as needed. Elaboration: I developed characters, setting, and plot throughout my story, especially the heart of the story. To do this, I used a blend of description, action, dialogue, and thinking. Organization: I used paragraphs to separate different parts or time of the story and to show when a new character was speaking. Some parts of the story were longer and more developed than others. Ending: I wrote an ending that connected to the main part of the story. The character said, did, or realized something at the end that came from what happened in the story. I gave readers a sense of closure. Transitions: I used transitional phrases to show passage of time in complicated ways, perhaps by showing things happening at the same time( Meanwhile, at the same time) or flashback and flashforward (early that morning, three hours later). Lead: I wrote a beginning in which I not only showed what was happening and where, but also gave some clues to what would later become a problem for the main character. Overall: I wrote a story of an important moment. It read like a story, even though it might be a true account. Grade 5 - Unit 1 Title Narrative Craft Narrative Unit Student Checklist, Grade 5 Language Conventions Nombre del estudiante 8|Page Puntuación: Utilicé comas para separar oraciones introductorias tales como Un día en el parque, fui a la resbaladilla; También usé comas para mostrar que estoy hablando directamente a una persona, como por ejemplo: ¿Pedro, fuiste al parque? o ¿Fuiste al parque, Pedro? Desarrollo Ortografía: Utilicé mi conocimiento sobre las silabas y reglas de ortografía para deletrear y editar. Use el muro de palabras y el diccionario cuando fue necesario. Estructura Composición: Mostré por que los personajes hicieron lo que hicieron al incluir lo que pensaban y como respondieron a lo que pasó. Adicioné más detalles para resaltar más las partes importantes de la historia. Las partes menos importantes las hice más cortas y con menos detalles. También combiné la voz narrativa y el resumen cuando fue necesario. Incluí detalles precisos y lenguaje figurativo para que el lector pudiera imaginar el ambiente, los personajes y los eventos. Utilicé objetos y acciones como símbolos para dar más significado a mi historia. Varié las oraciones para crear el ritmo y tono de mi narración. Elaboración: Desarrollé personajes, ambiente y trama a lo largo de mi historia, especialmente lo más importante de la historia. Para hacer esto, use una combinación de descripción, acción, diálogo y pensamiento. Organización: Utilicé párrafos para separar diferentes partes o tiempos en la narración y para mostrar cuando un nuevo personaje estaba hablando. Algunas partes de la historia están más largas y desarrolladas que otras. Final: escribí un final relacionado con el tema principal de la narración. El personaje dijo, hizo o se dio cuenta de algo al final, como resultado de lo que sucedió en la historia. Conectores: Usé conectores para mostrar el paso del tiempo en diferentes formas; por ejemplo para mostrar cosas sucediendo al mismo tiempo (mientras tanto, al mismo tiempo) o saltos en el tiempo hacia atrás o hacia el futuro (temprano esa mañana, tres horas más tarde). Introducción: Escribí el comienzo el cual no sólo muestra qué está sucediendo y dónde, sino también da algunas pistas sobre lo que más tarde será un problema para el personaje principal. En general: Escribí una narración sobre un momento importante en mi vida. Suena como un cuento aunque es verdadera. Grade 5 - Unit 1 Title Narrative Craft Normas de escritura Grade 5 - Unit 1 Title Narrative Craft Unit of Study Assessment Rubric Unit # - Unit Title… Learning Target Language Learning Target 9|Page Mastery Proficient Developing Beginning Grade 5 - Unit 1 Title Narrative Craft Stage 3 Plan Learning Experiences and Instruction There are about 40 teaching days in Quarter 1. This is a suggested timeline that has incorporated Learning and Language Goals. Please modify and adjust according to the needs of your students. Monday Tuesday Wednesday Thursday Bend 1: Day 1: Session 1: Starting with Turning Points Learning Goal: I can think of turning point moments to come up with ideas for personal narratives. Day 2: Session 1: Continue: Starting with Turning Points Learning Goal: I can think of turning point moments to come up with ideas for personal narratives. Day 4: Session 2: Continue: Dreaming the Dream of the Story Learning Goal: I can write effective narratives by reexperiences episodes before writing. Day 5: Session 3: Letting Other Authors’ Words Awaken Our Own Learning Goal: I can allow another author’s words to spark ideas of my own. Day 6: Session 3: Continue: Letting Other Authors’ Words Awaken Our Own Language Goal: I can use precise adjectives to describe details. Day 7: Session 4: Telling the Story from Inside It Learning Goal: I can tell the story from inside it. Day 12: Session 8: Bringing Forth the Story Arc Learning Goal: I can revise my narrative by bringing out the story structure. Day 9: Session 5: Taking Stock and Setting Goals Learning Goal: I can assess my own growth and set new goals by using a checklist. Day 14: Session 9: Elaborating on Important Parts Learning Goal: I can elaborate on parts of my story that show meaning by using writing techniques. Bend 2: Day 10: Session 6: FlashDrafting Learning Goal: I can draft by writing fast and furious. Day 11: Session 7: What’s this Story Really About? Learning Goal: I can engage in large-scale, whole-new-draft revisions, by asking myself that the story is really about. Day 3: Session 2: Dreaming the Dream of the Story Learning Goal: I can generate story ideas by thinking of places that matter to me and the episodes that occurred in those places. Day 8: Session 4: Continue: Telling the Story from Inside It Language Goal: I can use prepositional phrases to describe where or when things happen. Day 13: Session 8: Continue: Bringing Forth the Story Arc Learning Goal: I can revise my narrative by bringing out the story structure. 10 | P a g e Friday Day 15: Session 9: Continue: Elaborating on Important Parts Language Goal: I can use transition words and phrases to connect elements of my story. Grade 5 - Unit 1 Title Narrative Craft Day 16: Session 10: Adding Day 17: Session 10: Continue Scenes from the Past and Adding Scenes from the Past Future and Future Learning Goal: I can Language Goal: I can bring out the internal use the past story by using scenes progressive tense. from the past and future. Bend 3: Day 22: Session 14: Taking Day 21: Session 13: Reading Writing to the Workbench with a Writer’s Eye Learning Goal: I can Learning Goal: I can use my writers’ make my writing notebook as a place powerful by to try new things and emulating narrative work hard at the writing I admire. writing goals I’ve set for myself. Day 26: Session 16: Catching Day 27: Session 17: Every the Action or Image that Character Plays a Role Produced the Emotion Learning Goal: I can Learning Goal: I can further the larger write those exact meaning of the story actions or images to by making sure every evoke the same character has a role emotions or thoughts that connects to it. in readers. Day 31: Session 19: Day 32: Session 20: Reading Mechanics Aloud Your Writing Learning Goal: The Learning Goal: I can teacher can create celebrate my writing mini-lesson by by reading it aloud. assessing students writing needs. 11 | P a g e Day 18: Session 11: Ending Stories Learning Goal: I can end my stories so that they tie back to the big meaning of the story. Day 19: Session 12: Putting On the Final Touches Learning Goal: I can put the final touches on my writing by using checklists and charts while I edit. Day 20: Session 12: Continue: Putting On the Final Touches Language Goal: I can conjugate both regular and irregular verbs in the past tense. Day 23: Session 15: Stretching out the Tension Learning Goal: I can structure my stories by stretching out the problem, telling it bit by bit. Day 24: Session 15: Continue: Stretching out the Tension Language Goal: I can use transition words and phrases to connect elements of my story. Day 28: Session 17: Continue: Every Character Plays a Role Language Goal: I can use precise adjectives to describe details. Day 29: Session 18: Editing Learning Goal: I can make my writing more exact by learning about punctuation, especially commas from writing I admire. Day 25: Session 16: Catching the Action or Image that Produced the Emotion Learning Goal: I can think about which actions or images happened before I felt or thought something. Day 30: Session 18: Continue: Editing Learning Goal: I can make my writing more exact by learning about punctuation, especially commas from writing I admire. Day 33: Session 21: Transferring Learning: Applying Narrative Writing Skills across the Curriculum Learning Goal: I can apply everything I’ve learned about narrative writing and apply it to other genres and tasks. Grade 5 - Unit 1 Title Narrative Craft There are about 40 teaching days in Quarter 1. This is a suggested timeline that has incorporated Learning and Language Goals. Please modify and adjust according to the needs of your students. Lunes Martes Miércoles Jueves Bend 1: Day 1: Session 1: Starting with Turning Points Learning Goal: I can think of turning point moments to come up with ideas for personal narratives. Day 2: Session 1: Continue: Starting with Turning Points Learning Goal: I can think of turning point moments to come up with ideas for personal narratives. Day 4: Session 2: Continue: Dreaming the Dream of the Story Learning Goal: I can write effective narratives by reexperiences episodes before writing. Day 5: Session 3: Letting Other Authors’ Words Awaken Our Own Learning Goal: I can allow another author’s words to spark ideas of my own. Day 6: Session 3: Continue: Letting Other Authors’ Words Awaken Our Own Language Goal: I can use precise adjectives to describe details. Day 7: Session 4: Telling the Story from Inside It Learning Goal: I can tell the story from inside it. Day 12: Session 8: Bringing Forth the Story Arc Soy capaz de revisar mi Day 9: Session 5: Taking Stock and Setting Goals Learning Goal: I can assess my own growth and set new goals by using a checklist. Day 14: Session 9: Elaborating on Important Parts Soy capaz de explicar Bend 2: Day 10: Session 6: FlashDrafting Soy capaz de escribir Day 11: Session 7: What’s this Story Really About? Soy capaz de hacer Day 3: Session 2: Dreaming the Dream of the Story Learning Goal: I can generate story ideas by thinking of places that matter to me and the episodes that occurred in those places. Day 8: Session 4: Continue: Telling the Story from Inside It Language Goal: I can use prepositional phrases to describe where or when things happen. Day 13: Session 8: Continue: Bringing Forth the Story Arc Soy capaz de revisar mi revisiones por completo al preguntar de qué se trata realmente la historia. Day 16: Session 10: Adding Scenes from the Past and Future Soy capaz de desarrollar la trama interna al usar escenas del pasado y futuro. 12 | P a g e narración al enfocarme en el arco dramático de la historia. Day 17: Session 10: Continue Adding Scenes from the Past and Future Soy capaz de utilizar el pasado progresivo. narración al enfocarme en el arco dramático de la historia. las partes con más significado en la historia usando varias técnicas de escribir. Day 18: Session 11: Ending Stories Soy capaz de terminar Day 19: Session 12: Putting On the Final Touches Soy capaz de poner los mis cuentos de tal manera que se relacionan con el tema principal de la historia. toques finales en mi escrito al utilizar listas de control y tablas cuando edito. Viernes mi borrador al escribir de prisa. Day 15: Session 9: Continue: Elaborating on Important Parts Soy capaz de utilizar palabras y frases de transición para conectar los elementos de mi historia. Day 20: Session 12: Continue: Putting On the Final Touches Soy capaz de conjugar los verbos regulares e irregulares correctamente en el tiempo pasado. Grade 5 - Unit 1 Title Narrative Craft Bend 3: Day 22: Session 14: Taking Day 21: Session 13: Reading Writing to the Workbench with a Writer’s Eye Learning Goal: I can Learning Goal: I can use my writers’ make my writing notebook as a place powerful by to try new things and emulating narrative work hard at the writing I admire. writing goals I’ve set for myself. Day 26: Session 16: Catching Day 27: Session 17: Every the Action or Image that Character Plays a Role Produced the Emotion Learning Goal: I can Learning Goal: I can further the larger write those exact meaning of the story actions or images to by making sure every evoke the same character has a role emotions or thoughts that connects to it. in readers. Day 31: Session 19: Day 32: Session 20: Reading Mechanics Aloud Your Writing Learning Goal: The Learning Goal: I can teacher can create celebrate my writing mini-lesson by by reading it aloud. assessing students writing needs. 13 | P a g e Day 23: Session 15: Stretching out the Tension Learning Goal: I can structure my stories by stretching out the problem, telling it bit by bit. Day 24: Session 15: Continue: Stretching out the Tension Language Goal: I can use transition words and phrases to connect elements of my story. Day 28: Session 17: Continue: Every Character Plays a Role Language Goal: I can use precise adjectives to describe details. Day 29: Session 18: Editing Learning Goal: I can make my writing more exact by learning about punctuation, especially commas from writing I admire. Day 33: Session 21: Transferring Learning: Applying Narrative Writing Skills across the Curriculum Learning Goal: I can apply everything I’ve learned about narrative writing and apply it to other genres and tasks. Day 25: Session 16: Catching the Action or Image that Produced the Emotion Learning Goal: I can think about which actions or images happened before I felt or thought something. Day 30: Session 18: Continue: Editing Learning Goal: I can make my writing more exact by learning about punctuation, especially commas from writing I admire.