RUBRIC FOR EVALUATING STUDENT ESSAYS ENGLISH 1301/1302 Evaluative Criteria Thesis Statement: Focus and Clarity Organization or Arrangement Support/ Reasoning: Ideas and Details Use of Sources/ MLA Documentation Usage Excellent Competency “A” Essay Strong Competency “B” Essay Develops fresh and original insight that challenges the reader’s thinking. Demonstrates a strong debatable claim with specific supporting reasons. Completely and imaginatively supports thesis and purpose; topic sentences linked to thesis statement. Sequence of ideas is very effective. Transitions are strongly effective. Thesis is somewhat original and offers insight to the reader. Debatable claim and supporting reasons are mostly effective. Substantial, logical, and concrete development of ideas and arguments. Assumptions are made explicit. Details are relevant, original, and convincingly interpreted and argued. Uses sources to support, extend, and inform, but not substitute writer’s own development of ideas. Combines material from a variety of sources, including personal analysis and arguments, and accurate citations to primary and secondary texts. Does not overuse quotes to texts. Consistently conforms to MLA style manual requirements. Sentence-level usage is virtually free of any grammar errors. Final draft demonstrates excellent revising and proofreading. Average Competency “C” Essay Limited/No Competency “D” or “F” Essay Thesis may be obvious or unimaginative. Debatable claim needs to be more assertive; supporting reasons are somewhat generalized. Evidence of logical organization. One topic sentence does not link to thesis statement. A few abrupt shifts of ideas noted; overall flow of ideas in sentences is fairly competent. Thesis may be omitted. Reader cannot determine thesis and purpose or thesis is not related to the topic and writing assignment. Offers solid, but less original reasoning than in an “A” essay. Some assumptions are not always recognized or made explicit. Contains appropriate details or examples. Uses sources to support, extend, and inform, but not substitute writer’s own development of idea. Does not overuse quotes, but may not always conform to required MLA documentation and formatting. Offers somewhat obvious support that may be too broad in places. Details trend toward generalizations: not interpreted or sometimes repetitive. Offers simplistic, undeveloped, or obscure support for the ideas. Inappropriate or off-topic generalizations, faulty assumptions, and errors of fact very noticeable. Neglects important sources and citing to even primary texts. Overuse of quotations or paraphrasing to substitute writer’s own ideas. MLA conventions are mostly incorrect or not used at all. Essay may border on intentional or unintentional plagiarism. Only a few usage errors noted. A few “typos” and spelling errors noted that could be corrected through more careful editing and proofreading. Errors in grammar, punctuation, and spelling noticeable in several paragraphs. More attention to revising, editing, and proofreading required. Organization clearly supports thesis and purpose. Topic sentences linked to thesis statement. Transitions are mostly appropriate. Uses relevant sources, but lacks in variety of sources and/or the skillful combination of sources. Quotations & paraphrases may be too long and/or inconsistently referenced. MLA conventions for citing and formatting evidence a few errors. Unclear organization or organizational plan is inappropriate to thesis. Topic sentences, if found, do not link to thesis statement. No transitions used. Numerous errors in sentence-level construction and usage occur throughout and compromise the clarity of the essay.