Pupils should be taught to write sentences by: Plan by: Developing positive attitudes towards and stamina for writing by : Writing narratives about personal experiences and those of others ( real & fictional) Writing about real events Writing poetry Writing for different purposes Draft and write by: Considering what they are going to write before beginning by : Planning or saying out loud what they are going to write about Writing down ideas and/or key words, including new vocabulary Encapsulating what they want to say, sentence by sentence Evaluate and edit by: Making simple additions, revisions and corrections to their own writing by: Evaluating their writing with the teacher and other pupils Re-reading to check that their writing makes sense and that verbs to indicate time are used correctly and consistently, including verbs in the continuous form Proof-reading to check for errors in spelling, grammar and punctuation (e.g. ends of sentences punctuated correctly) Performing Writing Read aloud what they have written with appropriate intonation to make the meaning clear. Vocabulary, grammar and punctuation Use the grammatical terminology in Appendix 2 in discussing their writing Year 2: Writing Composition (Writing Transcription - Please refer to the NC and Appendix 1) Assessment of writing takes place continually as pupils plan, draft, write and edit their work across a range of writing activities. Meeting the standards for year 1 Working Towards the expected Working at the expected standard Working at greater depth within the Y2 objectives differ from Y1 objectives standard for year 2 For year 2 expected standard for year 2 Pupils are willing to write Pupils produce a range of different text There is evidence of children producing Pupils show very positive attitudes independently. They might need some types (narratives, reports, poems) and a range of completed pieces of writing towards writing and can sustain support (modelled writing, word lists) are using some key features for (narratives, reports, and poetry). attention on pieces for long periods. There is evidence of writing for different text types. There is evidence of children adopting They are familiar with a range of text narrative, poetry, real events and for an appropriate style for the text type types and can adapt writing to suit the different purposes e.g., letters, and purpose text type and purpose. instructions Pupils can discuss what they are going to write about, but are also able to refer to any success criteria. This helps them to structure their writing, usually on a sentence by sentence basis. Occasionally, these pupils say their sentences aloud while writing them simultaneously. Pupils can draw basic pictures to show what they are going to write about. They can add key words and phrases (e.g., big blue shoes) Pupils can produce basic plans before writing, including pictures and key words and phrases. If asked, children can talk about what they want to write. Pupils are able to produce plans before writing. These include pictures, key words and add details (may use, adjectives, openers, adverbs, similes) Pupils may start to plan for paragraphs Pupils refer to these plans when writing Pupils can discuss, plan, and evaluate writing in simple terms with teacher or peers (e.g. I’m going to write about…I used ‘amazing’ because…) Pupils can hear mistakes/words left out when re-reading aloud, and immediately make changes. Most work is presented without many obvious omissions of basic punctuation or words. Pupils are beginning to recognise errors in their writing when re-reading it. They are not always sure of how to correct it. Pupils can read their work aloud with intonation and expression. They usually adopt a suitable voice to the purpose they have written for Pupils will say what is good about their writing. Pupils can proof read their work and correct mistakes. They are starting to change words for better vocabulary choices. Pupils have re-read their work and made simple corrections. For example: added missing words, changed words and phrases, checked for consistent tense, and have used verbs correctly and consistently. Work is proof read and errors in spelling, punctuation and grammar have been corrected (see below) Pupils can say which their favourite sentence is and why. They can suggest how to improve sentences. There is a range of work in evidence where children have edited and corrected their work. Work is proof read and errors in spelling, Punctuation and grammar have been corrected (see below), with some more ambitious choice of vocabulary and punctuation. Pupils can read their work aloud with intonation and expression. They adopt a suitable voice to the purpose they have written for Pupils can read their work to others with appropriate intonation for the purpose. Pupils can read their work to others with appropriate intonation for the purpose. They are aware of the audience and the purpose of them reading aloud. Pupil’s are starting to use correct terminology when discussing their work Pupil’s are able to discuss their writing using the appropriate terminology Pupil’s are able to talk about their writing using the appropriate grammatical terminology from Pupils refer to these plans when writing Appendix 2 In a range of pupil’s writing, full stops, capital letters, question marks, exclamation marks, commas for lists and apostrophes for contracted forms are used accurately. Learning how to use both familiar and new punctuation correctly ( see Appendix 2), including full stops, capital letters, question marks, exclamation marks, commas for lists and apostrophes for the contracted forms Basic punctuation (capital letters and full stops) is generally consistent. In a range of pupil’s writing there is evidence of full stops, capital letters, question marks, and exclamation marks, commas for lists and apostrophes for contracted forms. In a range of pupil’s writing, full stops, capital letters, question marks, exclamation marks, commas for lists and apostrophes for contracted forms are used mostly accurately. Sentences with different forms: statement, question, exclamation, command. Pupils can write simple and compound sentences, usually with adjectives/verbs where appropriate. Pupils can sometimes write sentences in different forms (eg, questions) There is evidence of features of the given text type and children adopting the appropriate style for the purpose, For example, Headings and subheading for reports, descriptive language in narrative. Pupil’s confidently use a range of sentences in different forms. Expanded noun phrases to describe and specify, e.g. the blue butterfly Pupils can use adjectives to describe setting and character across a range of writing. Pupils can use adjectives consistently (and sometimes in pairs) to describe characters and settings. Evidence of some features of the given text type and adopting appropriate style for purpose, For example, Headings and subheading for reports, descriptive language in narrative. Evidence of children sometimes writing sentences with different forms – statement, question, exclamation or command (Eg, STOP! What’s your name?) There is evidence of expanded noun phrases (The ancient temple, The old, grey dog…) The present and past tenses correctly and consistently including the progressive form Subordination ( using when, if, that, or because) and co-ordination (using or, and, but) Pupils are beginning to understand the different use of tenses. They are not consistent in their use. There is sometimes a reliance on 'and' as the all-purpose connective to join ideas, words and clauses, but use of some others (e.g. ‘because’, ‘but’) offer some variation. As appropriate Pupils can, with support choose the correct tense when writing Work is written in a consistent tense, including the progressive form (She is walking, he is running) There is evidence of subordination. For example using: when, if, that or because There is evidence of co-ordination. For example using: or, and, but Work is written in a consistent tense, including the progressive form (She is walking, he is running) Consistent evidence of subordination. For example using: when, if, that or because Consistent evidence of co-ordination. For example using: or, and, but Transcription Handwriting Pupils can use conjunctions to join ideas, words and clauses (and, so, but, because, when, if) As appropriate Segmenting spoken words in to phonemes and representing these by graphemes, spelling mainly correctly Spelling common exception words Spelling some words with contracted forms Adding suffixes to spell some words correctly e.g. -ment – ness -ful –less –ly Using diagonal and horizontal strokes needed to join letter sin some of their writing Writing capital letter and digits of the There is consistent evidence of expanded noun phrases (The ancient crumbling temple, The old, grey dog…) As appropriate correct size orientation and relationship to one and other and to lower case letters Using spacing between words that reflects the size of the letters