Tips and Guidelines for Writing Buyer Letters Premier Exhibitor Introduction You have worked very hard and have spent countless hours working with your animal preparing for the Sumter County Fair. You are almost ready but now you need to write your buyer’s letters. Not your most favorite part of your livestock project! Like the hundreds of other livestock exhibitors you want to get the best price possible for your animal and a big part of that is getting buyers to come to the fair and bid on your animal. Good buyer’s letters help not only you but all the entrants at the fair because the buyer you invite may not only bid on your animal, but they might bid on other exhibitor’s animals as well. A General Time Line A Pre-Introduction Visit and/or Note to the Buyer: [November-December] o Introduce yourself o Grade level and school o FFA or 4-H o Your project animal o Where your animal was purchase o About your animal o Why you choose to show Letters to your Buyers and Add-On Persons: [Mid-January/Early February] o It is good to go see several prospective buyers. More than one will get them bidding against each other. Dress nicely and be positive when you visit the buyers. You are not only representing your parents, but the organization you are showing under. o Again, list all of the above, if you wrote a pre-introduction note you may state that you are following up on your first introduction. o List the beginning weight of your animal and the current weight. o Tell them as much about your project as you can, but don’t make it too long as to bore the reader. o Type of feed being fed/standard required treatments/grooming skills learned/medical problems and how you corrected them/Etc. o Add a photo on your letterhead or print some and add in the letter, buyers like to see the animal, even the add-on person. Follow Up: [March] o It is important to keep your buyers informed of you and your project animal’s progress. It is okay to contact them before the Buyer’s Dinner and Sale to give them a friendly reminder. **Look at the records you have been keeping, make a list of all-important things in the months you have had your animal. Add something personal too. Questions and Answers about Buyer’s Letter Q. What is a Buyer’s Letter? A. A buyer’s letter is a letter that a 4-H member sends out to potential buyers before their County Fair to tell them a little about themselves and their animal, and to invite them to the fair and livestock auction. Remember the Sumter County Fair requires each youth to write letters to three NEW buyers and invite them to the livestock show and sale. Copies of your three buyer’s letters must be attached to your record book. Copies of your three buyer’s letters must also be turned into the Sumter County Fair office no later than January 30th, 2015 by 4:00pm. Q. Why Should You Write Buyers Letters? A. It is your responsibility to help get new and returning buyers to come to the livestock sale. Some people come to the fair every year and buy one or more animals but without new buyers a time may come where there aren’t enough buyers to purchase all the animals. New buyers or returning buyers that are happy with the letters they have received are more likely to come to the fair and pay the premium prices we all enjoy receiving for our animals. Buyers pay far more than the market value of the animals we sell and it is up to the individual exhibitor to encourage as many potential buyers as possible to come to the fair and bid on their animals. Buyers like a personal letter from exhibitors, particularly children. It lets them know that you have raised an animal, are exhibiting it at the county fair, and trying to sell it at the market sale. Q. Who Should I Send Buyers Letters To? A. EVERYONE! This might include your family doctor, dentist, eye doctor, orthodontist, insurance agent, and banker. It could include places where your family does business like the grocery store, restaurants, hair stylists, mechanics, contractors, your animal’s veterinarian, feed store, equipment and/or car dealers. Don’t forget to send letters to people who have previously bought your project animals, as well as relatives, neighbors, and family friends. Keep in mind the buyer is interested in what you have learned throughout your livestock project. Make you’re your buyers letters reflect your learning experiences. Invite them to the Sumter County Fair Buyers Dinner and Livestock Sale, tell them the education and knowledge you have gained, problems you have encountered, workshops you have attended and what fun experiences you have had. Your goal is to get as many buyers as possible to the fair during the livestock sale. The more buyers you have the higher the price you will receive for your animal. Remember, it takes at least two buyers to make an auction! You will need to work harder than ever this year. Set the goal of sending out more than the required three letters. You should really try to send at least 5 buyer’s letters. Items to Include in Your Buyer’s Letter: 1. Know who you are writing to a. Owner of a business, family members, friend, etc. Important when addressing the buyer’s letter. 2. Information about yourself a. Tell them your name, age, and introduce yourself. This helps the buyer know whose letter they are reading. When they get to the fair it will help them make a connection with you. Some buyers are more likely to bid on animals raised by people they know. 3. Information about your project and club a. Some buyers like to hear about your animal, how you raised it, and what 4-H club or FFA chapter you belong to. They may choose to bid on your animal based on your club/chapter affiliation if they recognize your club/chapter from your activities that they have heard about. 4. The Sumter County Fair Dates a. This helps the buyer because they will know when the fair is and that way they can attend the fair. If they have fun and enjoy themselves they would be more likely to come back. If they don’t know the dates of the fair then they won’t know when to come and look at your animals. 5. The Livestock Sale date, time AND location a. In order for the buyer to bid on your animal they will need to know when the auction is and where it is. If you can’t get them to the auction then they can’t bid on your animal and you won’t sell it as easily. 6. Tell them how they can participate as a buyer a. They can come to the buyer’s dinner the night of the show. b. They will receive a Sumter County Fair Buyer’s Guide and Dinner Invitation if they have purchased in the past. c. If your buyer has not purchased in the past please notify the Fair Office and they can mail your buyer a Buyer’s Guide and Dinner Invitation. 7. Inform them where they can get more information a. Buyers can always contact the Sumter County Fair Office to learn more information about the fair and the livestock sale. b. Mrs. Barbara Kane 352-569-6851 8. Thank them for previous participation if they have purchased from you before a. If you do this, it may motivate the buyer to come back and bid again. It lets them know you appreciated them purchasing your animal last year. 9. Personalize the letters a. This is good because most buyers like letters that are signed by a real person and not photocopied letter, and also they like their names on the letter not just Dear Buyer. The more individualized a letter is, the more likely a person is to read it. 10. Consider adding a picture or yourself and/or your animal a. This can help people see what your animal looks like. Some people think that pictures of animals are cute and this may help them decide to bid on your animal instead of somebody else’s or not bidding at all. Do’s and Do Not’s of a Buyer’s Letter Do’s Write a rough draft and get someone to proof read it for you. Get the name, position title, and proper address of the contact. Be personal, warm and inviting. Use a proper greeting – “Dear Mr. Jones” Check your spelling AND grammar Be gracious. “Please” and “Thank You” go a long way! Use sincerely to close the letter. Sign your letter and include your contact information, the livestock sale dates, and the address to the fair. Do Not’s Send your rough draft without someone proof reading it for you. Never send a letter “To Whom it May Concern” or “Dear Buyer”. Use a cold short form letter. Be a Negative Nancy! Never address the person by their first name – “Dear Bob” Forget to use spell check. Never make demands or state a specific price for animal. Do not use ‘Fondly” or “Regards”. Keep the letter professional. Forget to sign your letter and include contact information. Sample Letter Number 1 July 11, 2006 Dear J. J. Kind, This is my seventh year in 4-H. I am a member of the Big Clovers 4-H Club. I would like to invite you to the Trinity County Fair and Livestock Auction. There is one day of sales at the Trinity County Fairgrounds. The first sale is the sheep sale on Saturday, August 26 at 12:00 pm at the lamb showmanship arena. The steer suction is at 1:00 pm at the steer showmanship arena. The swine sale is at 2:00 pm at the swine showmanship arena. I am planning to sell my market hog at this sale. Small animals sell on Friday August 27 starting at 8:00 AM in the swine arena. I have spent a lot of hours on feeding, watering, walking, and grooming Butch, my Hampshire market hog, for show and sale at the Trinity County Fair. I hope you will be able to attend one or more of this year’s sale to support 4-H project animals. Come enjoy a day at the Fair, see all the 4-H animals and spend some time in the auction barn. Your bids will make a difference whether you buy “Butch” or some other member’s 4H animal. If you need a buyer’s packet, please contact the Trinity County Fair Livestock Auction Committee at 555-1111. Sincerely, Bill Hub Bill Hub Sample Letter Number 2 June 9, 2006 Hayfork Construction 900 Hayfork Road Hayfork, CA 9409 Dear Mr. Bill: My name is Cory Hack and this is my second year in 4-H. I am taking a market lamb project to the fair. My lamb is a whether and his name is Duke. I have spent a lot of time with Duke this summer. I have walked him, fed him, and even given him a bath. I will be showing and selling Duke at the 2006 Trinity County Fair. I would like to invite you to the Trinity County Fair Market Lamb Sale on Wednesday, August 27 at 9:00 AM, at the Lamb Showmanship Arena. I hope you will be able to come to the Fair to see all the 4-H sheep at the Auction. I don’t know what time Duke will sell in the sale. But please come to the Market Lamb Auction and bid if you find a lamb you’d like try to buy. My 4-H club adviser told me you can request a Buyer’s Packet by calling the Livestock Sale Committee at 555-1111. I hope you have a chance to come to the Fair and see my entire 4H club’s sheep. Sincerely, Cory Hack Cory Hack