MISS REPRESENTATION RESEARCH PAPER Driving Question: How does the media shape how we see others and ourselves? Assignment: As the documentary Miss Representation explains, “The media is now the message and the messenger.” Every day, we take in countless hours of media that influence how we view others and in turn how we view ourselves. It is our responsibility to consume media in an intelligent way AND fight back against negative messages put forth by the media. Research Paper: You will choose a specific group in American society (gender, race, etc.). You will then explore how that group is represented in a variety of media (television, film, music, video games, etc.) and what affect that has on our society and on members of that group. Your research should include both primary sources (the media – shows, songs, films, etc.) AND secondary sources (criticism of media, news articles, studies on racial or gender groups, etc.) o Possible Groups: Men, Women, Asian Americans, African Americans, Latino Americans o Requirements: Three Pages, with at least THREE body paragraphs Written in MLA format, with in-text citations and a Bibliography page Includes analysis of at least THREE media sources References at least TWO secondary sources that critique the media. Use a variety of sentence structures, FREE from run-ons and fragments, spelling errors and MLA pagination. o Honors: You will pick a person who is a member of the group that you are researching who counteracts the stereotypes generally presented about that group in the media. (For example, if I was writing a paper about women’s portrayal in the media, I could write about Supreme Court Justice Sonia Sotomayor – a woman in a powerful position.) Then, you will write TWO body paragraphs explaining the individual and how the individual is paving the way for others of that specific group in American society. Due Dates: Deliverables Source Sheet Outline First Draft Final Draft Research Paper Due Date Complete? **Note: these are subject to change* Research Paper Requirements Three Pages, with at least THREE body paragraphs Written in MLA format, with in-text citations and a Works Cited page Includes analysis of at least THREE media sources CATEGORY 4 3 References at least TWO critical or expository sources Use a variety of sentence structures FREE from run-ons, fragments, spelling and grammar issues. 2 1.5 1 0 Essay Organization I have three body paragraphs (five for honors) and utilize transitions and connections between paragraphs to help enhance the essay. I have two body paragraphs and utilize transitions to support the flow of my essay. I have two body paragraphs & sometimes use transitions to support the flow of my essay. I have two body paragraphs and rarely use transitions to support the flow of my essay. I have two body paragraphs and never use transitions to support the flow of my essay. I have not done enough work to provide evidence of my essay organization MLA Formatting I have formatted my paper to MLA with the correct spacing and citations. I have a couple mistakes in my formatting. I have more than two mistakes in my formatting. I attempted to use MLA but there are many mistakes. I have no evidence; my MLA format is incorrect. I have no evidence; I did not follow MLA formatting. Grammar and Mechanics. I do not make grammatical mistakes. I use academic language. I make some grammatical mistakes and use mostly academic language. I make some grammatical mistakes and use mostly informal language. I make grammatical mistakes and use mostly informal language. I do not appear to have knowledge of English conventions and use informal language. I have not done enough work to provide evidence I included ample evidence to solidly prove my thesis. My evidence includes examples from primary sources but only one from a secondary source. My evidence may not solidly prove my thesis, but I have all of the requirements. I do not cite three media sources and two secondary sources. I have not done enough work to provide evidence; I did not include textual evidence in my writing I write analyses that demonstrate high-level and in-depth thought about both primary and secondary sources. I sometimes write analyses that demonstrate depth of thought about both primary and secondary sources. I write analysis that explains the source but does not explain what affect that has on society. I do not explain the importance of my media sources or secondary sources. The reader is left to interpret. I have not done enough work to provide evidence. Use of Evidence My evidence includes examples of media’s portrayal of my group and secondary sources that provide criticism of the media on my group. Analysis My analysis included a thorough discussion of how media represents the group and what affect that has on our society. RESEARCH PROPOSAL STEP 1 Select one group of people in American society ‘to research. It may be a combination of groups: for example, African-American men. (1 sentence) Men Women Asian Americans African Americans Latino Americans Other… I will be researching how ____________________ are represented in the media. Caucasians American Indians Homosexuals Heterosexuals Youth Elderly STEP 2 1. Why do you want to research this? (3-4 sentences; Honors: 5 sentences) 2. What question will you answer in your research? (1 Sentence) 3. What do you think you will find about the topic (what do other people say about it)? (1 sentence; Honors: 2 sentences) 4. What do you think about this topic? (2 sentences) 1. This topic interests me because… I care about this topic because… If people continue to be represented this way, then… 2. How are _______________ represented in the media? How does this affect this group of people? 3. Other people argue that (can you think of a positive and negative on your topic?) 4. Why is it unfair that people are represented this way? STEP 3 I will find this information by looking at … Where will you find most of your information? (1 sentence) STEP 4 Write your Research Proposal on a new document and Save it to your desktop. STEP 5 Email this proposal to Ms. Vance at EnglishMsVance@gmail.com The Subject of your email should be your NAME and PERIOD. 4 (A) Student writes a strong research question and gives a clear and detailed defense of her/his choice by sharing relevant and interesting information. 3 (B) Student writes an adequate research question and gives detailed reasons for her/his choice. 2 (C) Student meets the sentence requirements, but wrote a basic research question with very little detail about why. 1 (NP) Student does not meet the sentence requirements for each question. Student gives a weak research question that cannot be answered with detailed research. 0 Student does not email me this paper. BRAINSTORM & RESEARCH What specific forms or examples of media come to mind when you think of the particular group? (circle) TV? Radio? Blockbuster Films? Music Videos? Music? Website? Magazine? Billboard Advertisements? Commercial? Source 1 Media Source Citation (___________, ____________. “___________________________.” ___________) Last Name First Name Title Year Stereotype Portrayed/Analyzed “SAY” Summary “MEAN” Significance/Affect “MATTER” Source 2 Media Source Citation Stereotype Portrayed/Analyzed “SAY” Summary “MEAN” Significance/Affect “MATTER” Source 3 Media Source Citation Stereotype Portrayed/Analyzed “SAY” Summary “MEAN” Significance/Affect “MATTER” OUTLINE *This outline includes the three topics you should include and what that type of paragraph should address. You could and SHOULD include more paragraphs about any or all topics below. I. Introduction a. b. c. d. e. Hook: problem with media stereotyping Background Information on stereotyping Your People Group Stereotype: why is this a misrepresentation? Why is it a problem? Negative Affects Thesis II. Body Paragraph 1: How is this group portrayed in the media? a. Topic Sentence b. SAY: Example/Explanation (Should be an original piece of media) c. MEAN/MATTER: Analysis d. SAY: Example/Explanation (Additional media example OR expert criticism of media) e. MEAN/MATTER: Analysis f. Conclusion/Transition III. Body Paragraph 2: Close up on how does this affect those in the group? a. Topic Sentence b. SAY: 3rd example of media portrayal: ie. South Park joke c. MEAN: Explanation – make fun of black people and show them as janitors only i. Analysis – doesn't show AA people in power and uses their skim color to define their intelligence d. MATTER: Affects on people group (may include research/statistics/news source) i. Ie. Continuing to show AAs in limited positions of power will continue a low employment rate of AA in higher paying jobs which is currently at ___% (citation). e. Conclusion/Transition IV. Body Paragraph 3: How does this affect our society? a. b. c. d. e. V. Topic Sentence SAY: Negative affects on society as a whole (include research/statistics/news source) MEAN MATTER Conclusion/Transition Conclusion a. Wrap up main points b. Re-state main arguments c. Leave the reader thinking/ Call to Action FLAT IRON your essay: TRANSITION WORDS To SIGNAL SEQUENCE first finally before now later next second following then previously since later To COMPARE two things: also likewise accordingly as well as additionally consequently similarly in the same way in addition to furthermore along the same lines subsequently moreover To CONTRAST two things: but although as opposed to however regardless however in contrast by contrast nevertheless on the contrary whereas despite the fact that conversely while still To EMPHASIZE A POINT: dddd again to repeat on the other hand even though yet indeed in fact for this reason to emphasize truly with this in mind To CONCLUDE or SUMMARIZE: as a result finally therefore hence consequently thus in summary in sum, accordingly due to all in all then in short in other words to sum up clearly then in conclusion, then to summarize To ADD INFORMATION: again besides moreover another so too likewise as well for instance furthermore finally in addition to along with next additionally for example together with also equally further in fact To GIVE AN EXAMPLE: for example (e.g.) to illustrate case in point such as consider including after all for instance specifically is like to take a To SIGNAL CAUSE-EFFECT RELATIONSHIP: because therefore hence consequently due to this led to as a result for thus accordingly since then To MAKE A CONCESSION: admittedly I concede that granted although it is true that of course to be sure