Name _____________________________ Unacceptable: Must be re-written Causes of the American Revolution The summary is not present or contains no accurate points when describing the cause of the event, what occurred in the event, or the effect of the event. The Declaration of Independence The summary is not present or contains no accurate points when describing who wrote the Declaration of Independence, how he wrote it, and why it was necessary. The summary is not present or contains no accurate points when answering the following questions: answers to the 5 "W" questions (who, what, why, when, where), a description of the action, key participants from the American and British side, date and specific location of the battle, which side won the battle Revolutionary War Battles Revolutionary War Leader The summary is not present or contains no accurate points when answering the following questions: which side the leader supported, a summary of their major accomplishments, a description of how their life ended, positive character traits such as honesty, patriotism, courage, trustworthiness. Forming a New Government The summary is not present or contains no accurate points when comparing and contrasting the Great Compromise to the weaknesses of the government established by the Articles of Confederation. Rubric for American Revolution Newspaper Fair: Needs some revision, possible need for editing The summary contains many inaccurate points when describing the cause of the event, what occurred in the event, or the effect of the event. The summary contains many inaccurate points when describing who wrote the Declaration of Independence, how he wrote it, and why it was necessary. The summary contains many inaccurate points when answering the following questions: answers to the 5 "W" questions (who, what, why, when, where), a description of the action, key participants from the American and British side, date and specific location of the battle, which side won the battle The summary contains many inaccurate points when answering the following questions: which side the leader supported, a summary of their major accomplishments, a description of how their life ended, positive character traits such as honesty, patriotism, courage, trustworthiness. The summary contains many inaccurate points when comparing and contrasting the Great Compromise to the weaknesses of the government established by the Articles of Confederation. Good: Improvement needed in content or ideas The summary contains several inaccurate points when describing the cause of the event, what occurred in the event, or the effect of the event. The summary contains several inaccurate points when describing who wrote the Declaration of Independence, how he wrote it, and why it was necessary. The summary contains several inaccurate points when answering the following questions: answers to the 5 "W" questions (who, what, why, when, where), a description of the action, key participants from the American and British side, date and specific location of the battle, which side won the battle The summary contains several inaccurate points when answering the following questions: which side the leader supported, a summary of their major accomplishments, a description of how their life ended, positive character traits such as honesty, patriotism, courage, trustworthiness. The summary contains several inaccurate points when comparing and contrasting the Great Compromise to the weaknesses of the government established by the Articles of Confederation. Excellent: Creative, well organized and well written The summary accurately described the cause of the event, what occurred in the event, and the effect of the event. The summary accurately described who wrote the Declaration of Independence, how he wrote it, and why it was necessary. The summary contains accurate points when answering the following: answers to the 5 "W" questions (who, what, why, when, where), a description of the action, key participants from the American and British side, date and specific location of the battle, which side won the battle The summary contains accurate points when answering the following: which side the leader supported, a summary of their major accomplishments, a description of how their life ended, positive character traits such as honesty, patriotism, courage, trustworthiness. The summary contains accurate points when comparing and contrasting the Great Compromise to the weaknesses of the government established by the Articles of Confederation. Revolutionary War Quotations Neatness The summary does not contain two quotations and their authors. The newspaper is neither neat nor creative. The information is illegible. Incorporates the 6+1 Writing Elements (ideas, organization, voice, word choice, sentence fluency, conventions) The newspaper lacks a sense of directions; demonstrates poor word choice; many problems with fluency; numerous errors in spelling, grammar and punctuation. Presentation The audience cannot understand the presentation because there is no sequence of information; the student does not have grasp of the information and cannot answer questions about the subject; the student reads all of the newspaper with no eye contact; the student mumbles, incorrectly pronounces terms, and speaks too quietly for all students to hear. Reflection The reflection used no examples from research and did not justify the following: In your opinion, did the colonists make the correct decision to risk everything they hadtheir homes, families, and even their lives- to be free of Britain and to then be able to create their own government? Comments: The summary contains two quotations and their authors. The newspaper is not neat and is not creative. The information is difficult to read. The newspaper is adequately organized to guide the reader; demonstrates an average level of word choice; writing is stilted; some errors in spelling; grammar and punctuation. The audience has difficulty following the presentation because the student jumps quickly from topic to topic; the student is uncomfortable with the information and is able to answer only simple questions; the student occasionally maintained eye contact, but still reads most of the report; the student’s voice is low, the student incorrectly pronounces terms, audience members have difficulty hearing presentation. The reflection used very few examples from research to justify the following: In your opinion, did the colonists make the correct decision to risk everything they hadtheir homes, families, and even their lives- to be free of Britain and to then be able to create their own government? The newspaper is mostly neat and creative. The information is easy to read and is engaging. The newspaper is nicely organized and has an easy to follow flow; demonstrates colorful word choice, writing flows nicely, few errors I spelling, grammar and punctuation. The student presents the information in a logical sequence which the audience can follow; the student is at ease with the topic, but fails to elaborate; the student maintained eye contact with the audience most of the time; the student mostly uses a clear voice so that all audience members can hear the presentation. The newspaper is neat and creative. The information is very easy to read and is engaging. The reflection used some examples from research to justify the following: In your opinion, did the colonists make the correct decision to risk everything they hadtheir homes, families, and even their lives- to be free of Britain and to then be able to create their own government? The reflection used many examples from research to justify the following: In your opinion, did the colonists make the correct decision to risk everything they had- their homes, families, and even their lives- to be free of Britain and to then be able to create their own government? The newspaper is compelling and moves reader smoothly from one section to the next; words chosen are powerful and engaging; writing is fluid with well-built sentences; minimal errors in spelling, grammar and punctuation. The student presents the information in a logical, interesting sequence which the audience can follow; the student demonstrated full knowledge of the topic; the student maintained eye contact with the audience; the student uses a clear voice so that all audience members can hear the presentation.