The Blue Bowl Jane Kenyon Like primitives we buried the cat with his bowl. Bare-handed we scraped sand and gravel back into the hole. They fell with a hiss and thud on his side, on his long red fur, the white feathers between his toes, and his long, not to say aquiline, nose. We stood and brushed each other off. There are sorrows keener than these. Silent the rest of the day, we worked, ate, stared, and slept. It stormed all night; now it clears, and a robin burbles from a dripping bush like the neighbor who means well but always says the wrong thing. from Otherwise: New & Selected Poems, 1996 Graywolf Press, St. Paul, Minnesota Pugliese 2 Katie Pugliese AP Literature 12 Mr. Lane December 11, 2009 Poetry Explication Charles Dickens once asked, “What greater gift than the love of a cat?” Felines have long been known to provide friendship, warmth, and amusement to humans since the ancient Egyptians worshipped them as gods. Besides being pleasant companions, cats are wonderful stress relievers as well as subjects for many of history’s most famous quotes, books, and poems. Experiencing the death one of these feline comrades is the equivalent of losing a best friend in the eyes of many cat lovers. In Jane Kenyon’s “The Blue Bowl,” tone, imagery, diction, and symbolism illustrate the gloomy scene and affecting emotions that accompany the burial of a much loved feline friend. The poem’s tone is one of humanity as well as sorrow. By setting a melancholy tone, the poet exemplifies the somber atmosphere of the interment as well as the despondent feelings of the narrator. The poem begins with a description of the scene in which “like primitives we buried the cat with his bowl. Bare-handed we scraped sand and gravel back into the hole”(1-4). These lines show the tone of the poem by presenting a poignant image of a dead cat being buried with the bowl from which he once ate. The thought of a once-living creature now covered with sand and gravel forms a moving image in the reader’s mind and creates an ideal tone for the poem’s beginning. The poem also displays a reflective tone by describing the people burying the cat as “primitives” and having bare hands. The narrator describes the basic qualities of the cat’s owners and establishes the tone from a human Pugliese 3 perspective. The sadness of loss coupled with the depiction of the people give the poem a unique tone that allows it to offer a detailed point of view. The poem utilizes detailed imagery to offer an emotionally stirring view of a cat’s burial. The cat has “long red fur” (7), “white feathers between his toes” (7-8), and a “long, not to say aquiline nose” (9). A description of the cat’s nose as “aquiline” provides the image of an animal with humanlike characteristics. In addition, this depiction makes the scene more meaningful because it shows the narrator’s view of the cat as somewhat human. The poem also uses phrases such as “they fell with a hiss and a thud” (5-6) and “a robin burbles from a dripping bush” (14-15) to expand the poem’s imagery and lend realism to the scene. The sound of the sand and gravel covering the cat as well as the robin’s poststorm song are nearly tangible in the poem. The poem’s detailed imagery creates a lasting impression of the various facets of emotion present in the scene. Diction expresses a multiple ideas in the span of only a few words. For example, the poem describes a storm that lasts all night but recedes the next day. Denotatively, the word “storm” means a disturbance in an atmosphere, implying the occurrence of severe weather. Connotatively, “storm” may mean a difficult period of time, either emotionally or physically. The narrator’s grief is epitomized by the event of a storm and the poem’s use of the word provides a duel meaning. The term “primitive”(1) describes a person or thing that is simple, crude, or at an early stage of development. The word “primitive” also refers to the cat’s owners as they bury their pet. This term portrays the humans as archaic; they are burying a dead animal in the same way their ancestors would. The use of the word “primitive” adds humanity to the poem and allows the diction to further develop the poem’s solemn image. The emotional impact created by the dead cat is made more powerful by the poem’s use of symbolism. The poem’s title, “The Blue Bowl,” describes the deceased cat’s food dish. The title symbolizes the dead animal’s past as a once-living creature that ate food and preferred a certain object. Pugliese 4 By suggesting these traits, the symbol of the blue bowl adds sentiment to the poem and generates sympathy towards the cat. The bowl was an important aspect of the cat’s life as it symbolizes the loss of an animal that once lived, breathed, meowed, and consumed food. The bowl’s color also holds meaning as blue is generally a color of sadness or depression. The poem’s use of symbolism describes a token of life once lived and represents the narrator’s memories. “The Blue Bowl” uses several literary techniques to illustrate the poem’s setting as well as the emotions that correspond with the events in the poem. Tone, imagery, diction, and symbolism all function as effective devices within the poem to bring to life the scene of a cat’s burial. Besides describing the situation, these techniques allow the poem to serve as an insight into the complex human emotions that surround the death of a companion. The poem allows its audience to view the situation through the narrator’s eyes, weaving an exquisite tapestry of words that provide a multifaceted emotional experience. Pugliese 5 Works Cited Kenyon, Jane. "Poetry 180 - The Blue Bowl." Library of Congress Home. Web. 11 Dec. 2009. <http://www.loc.gov/poetry/180/004.html>. Name Topic/Title Area Ideas and Content Organization Word Choice Sentence Fluency Voice Lower Order Concerns Presentation (Research Guide) Insight Support Introduction and Conclusion TOTAL GRADE out of 50 Date Score Comments 10 10 9 9 9 9 9 10 10 10 95 47 Thanks for sharing this poem; I'd not read it before; you demonstrate a very good understanding of the poem and how it works; see comments for revisions