Grade 3 - Unit 1 – Bend 1: Writing Personal Narratives with Independence Unit 1, Bend 1 Table of Contents Crafting True Stories Section Unit Essential Questions Page Number 2 Unit Goals and Sub Goals (Task Analysis) 3-4 Unit Language (Spanish, Russian, English) 5-7 Bend Assessment Checklists 8-9 Unit Assessment Checklists 10-11 Sample Unit Calendars 12-15 1|Page Grade 3 - Unit 1 – Bend 1: Writing Personal Narratives with Independence Grade 3 Writing Unit 1, Bend1 Unit Title: Stage 1 Standards: (Alpha-numeric listing of standards incorporated in the unit) Essential Questions: Goals: Crafting True Stories Identify Desired Results W.3.3.a,b,c,d Write narratives to develop real or imagined experiences or events using effective technique. descriptive details, and clear event sequences. a. Establish a situation and introduce a narrator and/or characters; organize an event sequence that unfolds naturally. b. Use dialogue and descriptions of actions, thoughts, and feelings to develop experiences and events or show the response of characters to situations. c. Use temporal words and phrases to signal event order. d. Provide a sense of closure. W.3.4 With guidance and support from adults, produce writing in which the development and organization are appropriate to task and purpose. (Grade-specific expectations for writing types are defined in standards 1–3 above.) W.3.5 With guidance and support from peers and adults, develop and strengthen writing as needed by planning, revising, and editing. (Editing for conventions should demonstrate command of Language standards 1–3 up to and including grade 3 on page 29.) W.3.8 Recall information from experiences or gather information from print and digital sources; take brief notes on sources and sort evidence into provided categories. W.3.10 Write routinely over extended time frames (time for research, reflection, and revision) and shorter time frames (a single sitting or a day or two) for a range of discipline-specific tasks, purposes, and audiences. Good writers use notes, lists and other strategies to strengthen their narratives. Los buenos escritores usan apuntes, listas y otras estrategias para mejorar sus narraciones. 2|Page Dates of Unit: Good writers revise as they write. Los buenos escritores revisan conforme van escribiendo. Good writers edit as they write. Los buenos escritores editan conforme van escribiendo. Good writers describe people, places, things, and events. Los buenos escritores describen a personas, lugares, cosas y eventos. Grade 3 - Unit 1 – Bend 1: Writing Personal Narratives with Independence Session 1: I can think about what Session 5: I can pause and ask Learning kind of writing I want to make myself, “How am I doing?” Targets and set goals for myself. Sesión 5: Soy capaz de pausar, (aligned to goals) Sesión 1: Soy capaz de pensar releer, y preguntarme “¿Cómo acerca del tipo de escritura que va mi escrito?” quiero producir y poner metas para lograrlo. Session 2: I can think of a person and brainstorm small moments with that person. Sesión 2: Soy capaz de pensar en una persona y hacer una lluvia de ideas de pequeños momentos con él/ella. Session 3: I can think of a place and list small moments that happen in that place in order to write about that place. Sesión 3: Soy capaz de pensar en un lugar y hacer una lluvia de ideas de pequeños momentos de lo que ocurrió allí. Session 4: I can write stories using scenes rather than summaries. Sesión 4: Soy capaz de escribir historias usando escenas en lugar de resúmenes. 3|Page Session 6: I can write as clear as possible so others can read my writing. Sesión 6: Soy capaz de escribir lo más claro posible para que otros puedan leer y comprender mi escrito. Session 7: I can conjugate both regular and irregular verbs in the past tense. Sesión 7: Soy capaz de conjugar verbos los regulares e irregulares en el tiempo pasado. Session 8: I can use precise adjectives to describe details. Sesión 8: Soy capaz de usar adjetivos precisos para describir detalles. Session 9: I can use prepositional phrases to describe where or when things happen. Sesión 9: Soy capaz de usar preposiciones para describir dónde o cuándo ocurren las cosas. Session 10: I can use transition words to move my story along. Sesión 10: Soy capaz de usar conectores para indicar la secuencia a lo largo de mi historia. Grade 3 - Unit 1 – Bend 1: Writing Personal Narratives with Independence Stage 2 Determine Assessment Evidence English Academic Language (What language will students need to sound like experts?) Academic Language Function(s): Academic Language Stems: Easy for Beginners Describe people, places, things, and events. Use the past tense. I (past tense verb phrase). I played outside. Describir personas, lugares, cosas y eventos. One day Usar el tiempo pasado. Yesterday First Today Then Academic Vocabulary: Finally Narrative Revise Edit Stamina Independence Scenes Medium for Intermediate I (past tense verb phrase) (prepositional phrase). I played outside at the park with my brother. Last week Last… The other day On my birthday Next Later, After that In the end, Finally Difficult for Advanced and Fluent I (past tense verb phrase) (Adjectives) (prepositional phrase). My older brother and I played soccer at the small park by my house. All of a sudden, As it turned out, Suddenly, Before that Assessment Tools: 4|Page Goals Rubric Assessment Checklist Grade 3 - Unit 1 – Bend 1: Writing Personal Narratives with Independence Determine Assessment Evidence Academic Language (What language will students need to sound like experts?) Academic Language Function(s): Academic Language Stems: Easy for Beginners Describe people, places, things, and events. Use the past tense. Yo + (predicado con verbo en pasado) Yo jugué afuera. Describir personas, lugares, cosas y eventos. Usar el tiempo pasado. (Otros pronombres: Tú, ellos, mi hermano, etc. Usando singular y plural) Academic Vocabulary: Narrative Narrativa /La narración Revise Revisar Edit Editar Stamina Persistencia Independence La Independencia / independientemente Scenes Las escenas 5|Page Conectores de secuencia: Un día Ayer Primero Hoy Entonces /Luego Después de eso Un poco más tarde Al final Medium for Intermediate Yo + (verbo en pasado)+ (preposición). Yo jugué en el parque con mi hermano. Mi hermano y yo jugamos en el parque ayer. Adverbios de tiempo y conectores de secuencia: La semana pasada El / la ________pasado/a… Anoche El otro día El día de mi cumpleaños Después Luego Más tarde, pronto Grade 3 - Unit 1 – Bend 1: Writing Personal Narratives with Independence Al final Difficult for Advanced and Fluent Yo+(verbo en pasado) +(Adjetivo/s) +(preposición). Mi hermano mayor y yo jugamos futbol en el parque pequeño cerca de nuestra casa. Conectores: Goals Rubric Assessment Checklist 6|Page De repente Como resultado Repentinamente Antes de Student Names 7|Page Session 10: I can use transition words to move my story along. Session 9: I can use prepositional phrases to describe where or when things happen. Session 8: I can use precise adjectives to describe details. Session 7: I can conjugate both regular and irregular verbs in the past tense. Session 6: I can write as clear as possible so others can read my writing. Session 5: I can pause and ask myself, “How am I doing?” Session 4: I can write stories using scenes rather than summaries. Session 3: I can think of a place and list small moments that happen in that place in order to write about that place. Session 2: I can think of a person and brainstorm small moments with that person. Session 1: I can think about what kind of writing I want to make and set goals for myself. Grade 3 - Unit 1 – Bend 1: Writing Personal Narratives with Independence Unit Checklist, Grade 3, Unit 1, Bend 1 Nombre del estudiante 8|Page Sesión 10: Soy capaz de usar conectores para indicar la secuencia a lo largo de mi historia. Sesión 9: Soy capaz de usar preposiciones para describir dónde o cuándo ocurren las cosas. Sesión 8: Soy capaz de usar adjetivos precisos para describir detalles. Sesión 7: Soy capaz de conjugar verbos los regulares e irregulares en el tiempo pasado. Sesión 6 : Soy capaz de escribir lo más claro posible para que otros puedan leer y comprender mi escrito. Sesión 5: Soy capaz de pausar, releer, y preguntarme “¿Cómo va mi escrito?” Sesión 4: Soy capaz de escribir historias usando escenas en lugar de resúmenes. Sesión 3: Soy capaz de pensar en un lugar y hacer una lluvia de ideas de pequeños momentos de lo que ocurrió allí. Sesión 2: Soy capaz de pensar en una persona y hacer una lluvia de ideas de pequeños momentos con él/ella. Sesión 1: Soy capaz de pensar acerca del tipo de escritura que quiero producir y poner metas para lograrlo. Grade 3 - Unit 1 – Bend 1: Writing Personal Narratives with Independence Lista de control: grado 3, unidad 1, sección 1 Student Name 9|Page Punctuation: I wrote in ways that helped readers read with expression, reading some parts quickly, some slowly, some parts in one sort of voice and others in another. Punctuation: While writing I used punctuation at the end of every sentence. Punctuation: I punctuated dialogue correctly with commas and quotations marks. Spelling: I got help from others to check my spelling and punctuation before I wrote my final draft. Development Spelling: I used what I knew about spelling patterns to help me spell and edit before I wrote my final draft. Craft: I not only told my story but also wrote It in a way that got readers to picture what was happening and that brought my story to life. Structure Elaboration: I worked to show what happened to (and in) my characters. Organization: I used paragraphs and skipped lines to separate what happened first from what happened later (and finally,) in my story. Ending: I chose an action, talk or feeling that would make a good ending and worked to write it well. Transitions: I told my story in order by using phrases such as a little later and after that. Lead: I wrote a beginning in which I helped readers know who the characters were and what the setting was in my story. Over: I told the story bit by bit. Grade 3 - Unit 1 – Bend 1: Writing Personal Narratives with Independence Narrative Unit Student Checklist, Grade 3 Language Conventions Nombre del estudiante 10 | P a g e Puntuación: Escribí de una manera que ayudó a los lectores a leer con entonación, leyendo algunas partes rápidamente , algunas lentamente, utilizando una voz en unas partes y otra voz en otras partes. Puntuación: Usé signos de puntuación al final de cada oración. Puntuación: Escribí correctamente el diálogo usando el guion. Desarrollo Ortografía : Pedí ayuda a mis compañeros para revisar mi ortografía y puntuación antes de escribir la copia final. Ortografía: Usé mis conocimientos sobre las reglas de ortografía para deletrear bien y editar antes que de escribir mi copia final. Estructura Elaboración: Me esforcé para mostrar lo que pasó a (y dentro de) mis personajes. Composición: No solamente conté la historia sino la escribí de una manera que los lectores pudieran ver lo que estaba pasando haciendo la historia más vívida. Organización: Usé párrafos y dejé renglones para separar lo que pasó al comienzo de lo que pasó luego y al final. Final: Escogí una acción, un tema, o el sentimiento que creó un buen final a la historia me esforcé para escribirlo bien. Conectores: Conté la historia en orden utilizando oraciones como “un poco más tarde” y “después de eso”. En general: Conté la historia paso a paso. Introducción: Escribí una introducción para ayudar a los lectores a conocer a los personajes y el escenario . Grade 3 - Unit 1 – Bend 1: Writing Personal Narratives with Independence Lista de Control: escritura narrativa, grado 3 Normas de escritura Grade 3 - Unit 1 – Bend 1: Writing Personal Narratives with Independence Stage 3 Plan Learning Experiences and Instruction Grade 3, Unit 1 Crafting True Stories SAMPLE UNIT CALENDAR Wednesday Thursday Bend 1 Day 1: Session 1: Starting the Writing Workshop: Visualizing Possibilities I can think about what kind of writing I want to make and set goals for myself. What 3rd Grade Notebook Writers…Chart Page 9 Monday Day 2; Session 2: Finding Ideas and Writing up a Storm I can think of a person and brainstorm small moments with that person. Language Goal: I can use precise adjectives to describe details. Day 3: Session 3: Drawing on a repertoire of Strategies: Writing with Independence. I can think of a place and list small moments that happen in that place in order to write about that place. When I Run Out of Gas, I can…Chart. Page 31 Day 4: Session 4: Writers Use a Storyteller’s Voice. They Tell Stories, Not Summaries. I can write stories using scenes rather than summaries. “To Write a True Story” Chart. Page37 A Storyteller’s Voice Shows, Not Tells. It…Chart. Page 40 Language Goal: I can use prepositional phrases to describe where or when things happen. Day 5: Session 5: Take Stock: Pausing to Ask, “How Am I Doing?” I can pause and ask myself, “How am I doing?” Narrative Writing Checklist Day 6; Session 6: Editing as We Go: Making Sure Others Can Read Our Writing. I can write as clear as possible so others can read my writing. Spelling tools. Page 58 Bend 2 Day 7: Session 7: Rehearsing: Storytelling and Leads I can rehearse my story before I start my writing by generating alternate leads. Add to “To Write a True Story” Chart Page 69 Day 8: Session 8: Writing Discovery Drafts I can capture my mental movie be writing my draft fast and furiously. Language Goal: I can use transition words to move my story along. Day 9: Session 9: Revising by Studying What Other Authors Have Done I can revise my writing by studying other authors’ craft. What Hesse Did to Make Her Storytelling Voice So Good in Come On, Rain! Chart. Page 85 Day 10: Session 10: Storytellers Develop the Heart of the Story I can revise by asking myself, “What’s the most important part of the story?” and developing that section. REVISE Chart. Page 94 11 | P a g e Tuesday Friday Grade 3 - Unit 1 – Bend 1: Writing Personal Narratives with Independence Day 11: Session 11: Day 12: Optional Lesson Bend 3 Paragraphing to Support Supporting Sequencing and Sequencing, Dialogue, and Elaboration Day 13: Session 12: Becoming Elaboration Mid-Workshop One’s Own Job Captain I can revise by Page 108 I can use what I have grouping related learned to be my own sentences into job captain. paragraphs and To Write a True Story: elaboration those Monitor My Process paragraphs. Checklist. Page 116 When to Start a New Paragraph. Chart Page105 Day 16: Optional Lesson Day 17: Session 15: Revision: Day 18: Session 16: Commas Writers Keep an Eye on Balancing Kinds of Details and Quotation Marks: Deadlines I can think carefully Punctuating Dialogue Mid-Workshop: Conferring about the kind of I can use commas Effectively Page 130 details I add to my correctly with writing (balancing dialogue. dialogue with actions, thoughts, and details I can use quotation about setting). marks correctly with dialogue. Day 21: Optional Lesson Checking for Sense Mid-Workshop Page 159 12 | P a g e Day 22: Session 19: Using Editing Checklists I can use checklists to help me edit my work. Editing Checklist Page 163 Day 23: Session 20: Publishing: A Writing Community Celebrates I can share and celebrate my writing with others. Day 14: Session 13: Revision Happens Throughout the Writing Process I can ask myself, “Does this show all I know?” as I write and revise as I write. Day 15: Session 14: Drafting: Writing From Inside a Memory I can replay life events from memory in order to let the reader hear, feel, and see the experience. Bend 4 Day 20: Session 18: Revising Endings: Learning From Published Writing I can use published writing to help me craft endings to my stories. Day 19: Session 17: Writers Revise in Big, Important Ways I can revise to make my writing ring with clarity and purpose. I can read my writing aloud to make sure it is clear and flows. Narrative Checklist Grade 3 - Unit 1 – Bend 1: Writing Personal Narratives with Independence Grade 3, Unit 1 Crafting True Stories (Español) SAMPLE UNIT CALENDAR Lunes Martes Bend 1 Day 1: Session 1: Starting the Writing Workshop: Visualizing Possibilities Sesión 1: Soy capaz de pensar acerca del tipo de escritura que quiero producir y poner metas para lograrlo Cuaderno de apuntes de 3er grado Cartel: “Los escritores… escrito. Herramientas ortográficas p. 58 13 | P a g e de pensar en una persona y hacer una lluvia de ideas de pequeños momentos con él/ella Meta de lenguaje: Soy capaz de usar adjetivos precisos para describir detalles. Miércoles Jueves Day 3: Session 3: Drawing on a repertoire of Strategies: Writing with Independence. Sesión 3: Soy capaz Day 4: Session 4: Writers Use a Storyteller’s Voice. They Tell Stories, Not Summaries. Sesión 4: Soy capaz de pensar en un lugar y hacer una lluvia de ideas de pequeños momentos de lo que ocurrió allí. de escribir historias usando escenas en lugar de resúmenes. Cartel: “Cuando se me acaba la batería, puedo… “ P. 31 Pag. 9 Day 6; Session 6: Editing as We Go: Making Sure Others Can Read Our Writing. Sesión 6 : Soy capaz de escribir lo más claro posible para que otros puedan leer y comprender mi Day 2; Session 2: Finding Ideas and Writing up a Storm Sesión 2: Soy capaz Cartel: “Para escribir una historia verdadera…” P. 37 Cartel: Un escritor muestra, no dice” P. 40 Viernes Day 5: Session 5: Take Stock: Pausing to Ask, “How Am I Doing?” Sesión 5: Soy capaz de pausar, releer, y preguntarme “¿Cómo va mi escrito?” Lista de control de escritura narrativa. Meta de lenguaje: Soy capaz de usar preposiciones para describir dónde o cuándo ocurren las cosas Bend 2 Day 7: Session 7: Rehearsing: Storytelling and Leads I can rehearse my story before I start my writing by generating alternate leads. Add to “To Write a True Story” Chart Page 69 Day 8: Session 8: Writing Discovery Drafts I can capture my mental movie be writing my draft fast and furiously. Language Goal: I can use transition words to move my story along. Day 9: Session 9: Revising by Studying What Other Authors Have Done I can revise my writing by studying other authors’ craft. What Hesse Did to Make Her Storytelling Voice So Good in Come On, Rain! Chart. Page 85 Day 10: Session 10: Storytellers Develop the Heart of the Story I can revise by asking myself, “What’s the most important part of the story?” and developing that section. REVISE Chart. Page 94 Grade 3 - Unit 1 – Bend 1: Writing Personal Narratives with Independence Day 11: Session 11: Day 12: Optional Lesson Bend 3 Paragraphing to Support Supporting Sequencing and Sequencing, Dialogue, and Elaboration Day 13: Session 12: Becoming Elaboration Mid-Workshop One’s Own Job Captain I can revise by Page 108 I can use what I have grouping related learned to be my own sentences into job captain. paragraphs and To Write a True Story: elaboration those Monitor My Process paragraphs. Checklist. Page 116 When to Start a New Paragraph. Chart Page105 Day 16: Optional Lesson Day 17: Session 15: Revision: Day 18: Session 16: Commas Writers Keep an Eye on Balancing Kinds of Details and Quotation Marks: Deadlines I can think carefully Punctuating Dialogue Mid-Workshop: Conferring about the kind of I can use commas Effectively Page 130 details I add to my correctly with writing (balancing dialogue. dialogue with actions, thoughts, and details I can use quotation about setting). marks correctly with dialogue. Day 21: Optional Lesson Checking for Sense Mid-Workshop Page 159 14 | P a g e Day 22: Session 19: Using Editing Checklists I can use checklists to help me edit my work. Editing Checklist Page 163 Day 23: Session 20: Publishing: A Writing Community Celebrates I can share and celebrate my writing with others. Day 14: Session 13: Revision Happens Throughout the Writing Process I can ask myself, “Does this show all I know?” as I write and revise as I write. Day 15: Session 14: Drafting: Writing From Inside a Memory I can replay life events from memory in order to let the reader hear, feel, and see the experience. Bend 4 Day 20: Session 18: Revising Endings: Learning From Published Writing I can use published writing to help me craft endings to my stories. Day 19: Session 17: Writers Revise in Big, Important Ways I can revise to make my writing ring with clarity and purpose. I can read my writing aloud to make sure it is clear and flows. Narrative Checklist