I welcome the publication of this document. As a practising Renal Physician I recognise that my specialty is one which regrettably carries a high mortality, and therefore guidance on the management of end of life is welcomed. I strongly agree with the authors in the second paragraph in the Introduction (page 23, lines 10-21) that the Liverpool Care Pathway was a valuable contribution to patient care, but any failings were more due to implementation of the care pathway than of the care pathway itself. With this in mind, I furthermore strongly welcome the emphasis throughout the guidance on the importance of communication between the caring team and the patient and those close to them, plus the regular review of the appropriateness of the care plan. Despite broadly welcoming the document I do have a few specific comments relating to its use by our specialty. These are listed below 1) Guidance regarding withdrawal of life-sustaining treatment Firstly, a great deal of the document is concerned with managing new end of life symptoms with pharmacological and non-pharmacological interventions. In paragraph 54 of the summary (page 17, lines 24-17) mention is made of changing/stopping medications. It is my view that the guidelines would be improved by addition of a section providing guidance regarding the continuation or discontinuation of existing physical life-sustaining treatments. In our specialty a very significant consideration is whether dialysis should be continued or not. I expect other specialties might have similar challenges (eg motor neurone disease treatment and assisted ventilation). I believe that many renal physicians will have experienced continuing dialysis for patients whose prognosis is terminal even up to the last few days, where our judgment would have been that continuation would not have been extending life, and might have had very questionable impact on quality of life. Guidance around this might be very helpful for us in future practice. 2) Guidance around prescribing in organ failure I note a large amount of the guidance relates to using pharmacological treatments to alleviate end of life symptoms, and balancing their use against side effects. Obviously, drug pharmacodynamics are significantly altered in organ failure including renal failure. I believe it might be helpful to acknowledge this as a caveat regarding all prescribing. I know that in my own area we developed a local prescribing pathway for end of life care specifically for renal patients and I suspect many other areas will have done likewise. I would welcome a section in the guidance acknowledging the issue and promoting or supporting such initiatives. 3) Improved clarity around timing of end of life care planning and advance care planning In my view the second section of the guidance regarding assessing for signs and symptoms suggesting a person is entering the last days of life are a little confusing. Document1 In my view some of the symptoms cited are associated with death within hours (eg mottled skin) and others associated with death within weeks (eg fatigue). I would welcome some clarification regarding those associated with imminent death and those associated with death soon. I would also welcome advice that those which could still indicate a prognosis of days to weeks would represent an opportunity to discuss and create an Advance Care Plan, prior to development of symptoms which would suggest an even shorter prognosis. Dr Andrew Mooney, Renal Physician, Leeds Teaching Hospitals, 25 August 2015 for the Renal Association Document1