10th Literature Research Paper Rubric Content Name:__________________ “A” (90-100) EXEMPLARY Stands as a model for future papers on the topic. Papers receiving a 90 to 100 show clear and consistent mastery of content and organization, as well as reasonably consistent mastery in the categories of language use and mechanics/vocabulary. Content Thesis includes name of the speaker and the speech - Presents rhetorical devices to be analyzed in the paper Rhetorical analysis is persuasively worded and logically supports thesis with a related quote/point Body paragraphs contain well-chosen documented material (quotes) that effectively support the main points Quotes are embedded in lead-in sentences Commentary presents insightful, well-developed analysis Effectively uses relevant research to develop points Maintains focus on controlling idea - all points are substantial and well-developed Clearly demonstrates attention paid to the audience and purpose Concluding paragraph draws conclusions that go beyond restating thesis Organization: Paragraphs logically sequenced - Smooth transitions between paragraphs create coherence and unity Documented material arranged logically within paragraphs to support topic sentences Fluent expression of ideas Topic sentences follow same order as the thesis - Focus maintained throughout paper Language Use/Vocabulary: Sentences varied in length and structure - Appropriate academic writing Word choice reflects unique, confident and engaging voice/style Effective diction - Proper syntax “B” (80-89) VERY GOOD – GOOD Papers receiving a grade of 80 to 89 show reasonably consistent mastery in the categories of content and organization, as well as adequate mastery in the categories of language use and mechanics/vocabulary. Content: Thesis includes most components of an “A” paper – Presents rhetorical devices to be analyzed in paper Rhetorical analysis supports thesis with a related quote/point, though wording may be imprecise or somewhat vague Body paragraphs contain adequate documented material that support the thesis, though some quotes may not be as strong as others Most quotes are embedded in lead-in sentences Commentary is generally insightful but could be developed further Maintains focus on controlling idea, though some points could further clarified or developed Generally demonstrates attention paid to audience and purpose Concluding paragraph generally effective, though it may restate thesis or points already made Organization: Paragraphs logically sequenced - Transitions between most paragraphs, though coherence can be strengthened Documented material arranged logically within paragraph to support topic sentences - Focus generally maintained Topic sentences for most paragraphs follow order of the thesis - Focus maintained fairly well Language Use/Vocabulary: Some sentence variety with effective but simple sentence constructions - Some complex constructions Word choices are adequate for the assignment Occasional errors in diction - Generally effective syntax “C” (70-79) SATISFACTORY Papers receiving a grade of 70 to 79 show adequate mastery in the categories of content and organization, as well as developing mastery in the categories of language use and mechanics/vocabulary. Content: Thesis present but vaguely or imprecisely stated – May be missing some required elements Rhetorical analysis is weak and/or summarizes quotes Topic sentences may be missing - Unrelated to thesis - Not in order of thesis Body paragraphs may contain documented material that is not well-chosen - May be irrelevant - May not effectively support topic sentences Quotes may not be properly embedded in lead-in sentences or may be missing Commentary tends to restate the quote - Does not make developed or insightful points May not maintain focus of controlling idea - Tends to wander or treat topic in a superficial manner Little or no attention paid to audience and purpose Concluding paragraph may be weak or missing Organization: Paragraphs may not flow logically- Weak or missing transitions between paragraphs hamper coherence Documented material may be disconnected, poorly chosen and/or arranged Topic sentences may be weak, out of order of thesis, and/or missing Paper may not be effectively unified and tends to lack coherence Language Use/Vocabulary: Problems with simple/complex constructions - Sentences may be choppy or syntax may be awkward Word choice reflects no distinct voice or style Errors in diction and/or syntax “F” (60-69) UNSATISFACTORY Papers receiving a grade of 60 to 69 show developing mastery in the categories of content and organization, as well as limited mastery in the categories of language use and mechanics/vocabulary. Content: Thesis vague or not discernible - Controlling idea is vague or not present Rhetorical analysis very weak or missing Topic sentences do not relate to thesis or are not present Documented material may be missing or irrelevant Commentary restates quotes – No insightful analysis Little attention paid to audience and purpose Conclusion is very weak or missing Organization: Paragraphs not logically sequenced Points randomly made Lacks coherence and unity Language Use/Vocabulary: Problems with sentence construction Word choice simple /confusing Problems with diction, grammar and/or syntax “F” (0-59) UNACCEPTABLE Papers receiving a grade below 59 do not demonstrate mastery in any categories. Content: No identifiable thesis or controlling idea - Does not respond to assignment Insufficient effort - poorly written Does not meet page and/or documentation requirements Organization: No apparent organization to essay Language Use/Vocabulary: Major problems with sentence construction Word choice is simple and/or confusing Major problems with diction, grammar, and/or syntax Total Content _______/100 Grammar: A. (50) Good – There are very few grammatical/mechanical errors; errors do not interfere with reader’s understanding of text. B. (30) Needs Improvement – There are many grammatical/mechanical errors that hinder complete understanding of the text. C. (10) Substandard – The text exhibits little knowledge of grammatical/mechanical rules, and consistent errors, including fragments, comma splices, and/or run-on sentences, interfere with meaning of the text. Total Grammar _____/50 Breakdown of grade: A. Content: B. Works Cited C. MLA Format ___/100 ___/20 ____/10 Final Grade: D. Parenthetical documentation E. Grammar ____/20 ___/50 ___/200