Curriculum Leaders/NRRC Summer Writing Institute Rubric Template 2012-13 Grade: 6 Subject: Writing Narrative Informative Argument Writing Prompt You are a consumer who has been asked to evaluate a particular invention by the company that manufactures it. Select your favorite invention. It could be the cell phone, the television, a video game, a book, or any other. In a well-developed composition, explain how the invention works and why it is significant in your life. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Standards 6.W.2 Write informative/explanatory texts to examine a topic and convey ideas, concepts, and information through the selection, organization, and analysis of relevant content. a. Introduce a topic; organize ideas, concepts, and information, using strategies such as definition, classification, comparison/contrast, and cause/effect; include formatting (e.g., headings), graphics (e.g., charts, tables), and multimedia when useful to aiding comprehension. b. Develop the topic with relevant facts, definitions, concrete details, quotations, or other information and examples. c. Use appropriate transitions to clarify the relationships among ideas and concepts. d. Use precise language and domain-specific vocabulary to inform about or explain the topic. e. Establish and maintain a formal style. f. Provide a concluding statement or section that follows from the information or explanation presented 6.W.4 Produce clear and coherent writing in which the development, organization, and style are appropriate to task, purpose, and audience. 6.L.1. Demonstrate command of the conventions of standard English grammar and usage when writing or speaking. a. Ensure that pronouns are in the proper case (subjective, objective, possessive). b. Use intensive pronouns (e.g., myself, ourselves). c. Recognize and correct inappropriate shifts in pronoun number and person. d. Recognize and correct vague pronouns (i.e., ones with unclear or ambiguous antecedents). e. Recognize variations from standard English in their own and others' writing and speaking, and identify and use strategies to improve expression in conventional language. 6.L.2. Demonstrate command of the conventions of standard English capitalization, punctuation, and spelling when writing. a. Use punctuation (commas, parentheses, dashes) to set off nonrestrictive/parenthetical elements. b. Spell correctly. 6.L3 Use knowledge of language and its conventions when writing, speaking, reading, or listening. a. Vary sentence patterns for meaning, reader/listener interest, and style.* Maintain consistency in style and tone.* 6.L.4 Determine or clarify the meaning of unknown and multiple-meaning words and phrases based on grade 6 reading and content, choosing flexibly from a range of strategies. a. Use context (e.g., the overall meaning of a sentence or paragraph; a word’s position or function in a sentence) as a clue to the meaning of a word or phrase. b. Use common, grade-appropriate Greek or Latin affixes and roots as clues to the meaning of a word (e.g., audience, auditory, audible). c. Consult reference materials (e.g., dictionaries, glossaries, thesauruses), both print and digital, to find the pronunciation of a word or determine or clarify its precise meaning or its part of speech. Verify the preliminary determination of the meaning of a word or phrase (e.g., by checking the inferred meaning in context or in a dictionary). 6.L.5 Demonstrate understanding of figurative language, word relationships, and nuances in word meanings. a. Interpret figures of speech (e.g., personification) in context. b. Use the relationship between particular words (e.g., cause/effect, part/whole, item/category) to better understand each of the words. c. Distinguish among the connotations (associations) of words with similar denotations (definitions) (e.g., stingy, scrimping, economical, unwasteful, thrifty). 6.L.6 Acquire and use accurately grade-appropriate general academic and domain-specific words and phrases; gather vocabulary knowledge when considering a word or phrase important to comprehension or expression. Suggested Administration (for example- accommodations, timeframes, etc): 2 /45 minute session First session- Planning and Drafting - Second Session Revising and Editing 4 Exceeding Strongly examines a topic and conveys ideas, concepts, and information through selection and analysis of relevant content Ideas Thoroughly develops topic with original, surprising, and relevant facts, definitions, concrete details, quotations, or other information and examples Consistently stays on topic throughout the piece Carefully organizes all ideas, concepts and information using strategies such as definition, classification, Organization comparison/contrast and cause/effect with appropriate formatting Uses sophisticated transitions to clarify the relationship among ideas and concepts Provides an interesting concluding statement or section that follows from the information or explanation presented Includes evidence of writer’s Voice personality and begs to be read aloud Writer thoughtfully creates a personal connection with the reader Voice is consistently appropriate for the purpose, audience, topic and/or genre Consistently uses precise language and domain-specific vocabulary to Word Choice inform about or explain topic Words are carefully considered for audience and purpose Avoids overused words and includes a variety of words to convey meaning Establishes and maintains a sophisticated , formal style throughout the piece Includes all complete sentences Creatively uses a variety of sentence types (simple, compound, and Sentence Fluency complex) Includes many varied sentence beginnings and lengths purposefully for effect Has no errors in grade level Conventions appropriate grammar Has no errors in grade level (See Language appropriate punctuation and Standard pg.1) capitalization Has no errors in grade level conventional spelling, spelling patterns and generalizations and few errors on above grade level words Topic Development: _____/20 _________________ Exceeds (17-20), Meets (14-16), Developing (8-13), Beginning (5-7), Trait Name:________________________________________________ 3 Meeting Generally examines a topic and conveys ideas, concepts, and information through selection and analysis of relevant content Develops topic with relevant facts, definitions, details, quotations, or other information and examples Mostly stays on topic Organizes most ideas, concepts and information using strategies such as definition, classification, comparison/contrast and cause/effect with appropriate formatting Uses appropriate transitions to clarify the relationship among ideas and concepts Provides a concluding statement or section that follows from the information or explanation presented Includes evidence of writer’s personality Reader feels a connection with the writer Voice is mostly appropriate for the purpose, audience, topic and/or genre Uses precise language and domainspecific vocabulary to inform about or explain topic Words are appropriate for audience and purpose Avoids overused words Includes a few incomplete sentences relative to the length of the piece Includes a variety of sentence types (simple, compound, and complex) Includes many varied sentence beginnings and lengths Has few errors in grade level appropriate grammar Has few errors in grade level appropriate punctuation and capitalization Has no errors in grade level conventional spelling and spelling patterns and generalizations 2 Developing Beginning to examine a topic and convey ideas, concepts, and information through selection and analysis of relevant content Beginning to develop topic with some relevant facts and details, quotations, or other information and examples May be off topic at times 1 Beginning Does not examine a topic or convey ideas, concepts, and information through selection and analysis of relevant content Scarcely develops topic with limited/irrelevant facts, details, quotations, or other information and examples Is off topic throughout the piece. Some ideas, concepts and information are organized using strategies such as definition, classification, comparison/contrast and cause/effect with appropriate formatting Includes some appropriate transitions to clarify the relationship among ideas and concepts Provides a concluding statement or section that is weak and may not follow from the information or explanation presented Beginning to show evidence of writer’s personality Reader begins to feel a connection with the writer Voice is somewhat appropriate for the purpose, audience, topic and/or genre No evidence of writer’s personality Reader feels no connection with the writer Voice is not appropriate for the purpose, audience, topic and/or genre Beginning to use some precise language and/or domain-specific vocabulary to inform about or explain topic Some words may not be appropriate for intended audience and purpose Includes some overused words Lacks precise language and/or domain-specific vocabulary Words are not appropriate for intended audience and purpose Includes many overused words Includes some incomplete sentences relative to the length of the piece Includes some variety of sentence types (simple, compound, and complex) Includes some varied sentence beginnings and lengths Has some errors in grade level appropriate grammar Has some errors in grade level appropriate punctuation and capitalization Has few errors in grade level conventional spelling and spelling patterns and generalizations Conventions: _____/4 __________________ Exceeds (4), Meets (3), Developing (2), Beginning (1) Date:_______________________________________ Ideas, concepts and information are not logically organized Does not include appropriate transitions to clarify the relationship among ideas and concepts No concluding statement or section is evident Includes many incomplete sentences relative to the length of the piece Includes a limited variety of sentence types (simple, compound, and complex) Includes few or no varied sentence beginnings and lengths Has multiple errors in grade level appropriate grammar Has multiple errors in grade level appropriate punctuation and capitalization Has some errors in grade level conventional spelling and spelling patterns and generalizations Total Score Combined: ______/24__________________ Exceeds (20-24), Meets (16-19), Developing (9-15), Beginning (6-8)