North Lawndale College Prep High School’s Interdisciplinary Project Presentation Rubric, 2012-2013 Student Name:___________________________ Panelists’ Names:___________________________________________________ Date:__________________ Organization Language Mechanics CONTENT of the Senior Project Presentation (50%) Ideas/Evidence Skill An A Presentation has A B Presentation has A C Presentation has An F Presentation has Thesis/Claim The B: the statement of your argument; the essay’s “main idea” Supporting Ideas/ Evidence Ideas and evidence (As) that support your thesis/claim (B), including appropriate set-ups for secondary sources Analysis of Supporting Ideas/Evidence Logical link of ideas/ evidence (As) to your thesis/claim (B) Introduction A preview of the essay body that includes a thesis/claim (B) and gives its context Body Paragraphs and Transitions Organization at the paragraph level; each paragraph has a clear topic sentence stating its main idea and supporting sentences (MELCon). Connections from one paragraph to another and within paragraphs Conclusion A fresh restatement of thesis/claim and a thoughtful ending to the presentation Style Vocabulary, sentence structure and variety used to establish a unique speaker’s voice Tone An appropriate use of language that shows an awareness of audience, purpose, and occasion Grammar and Usage No unintended problems with subject-verb & pronounantecedent agreement, and verb tenses An exceptional thesis/claim (B) that responds to the assignment An effective thesis/claim (B) that responds to the assignment A somewhat effective thesis/claim (B) that somewhat responds to the assignment No thesis/claim (B), one that does not make sense, or one that does not respond to the assignment Exceptional supporting ideas/evidence (As) that logically support the thesis/claim (B) Effective supporting ideas/evidence (As) that logically support the thesis/claim (B) Supporting ideas/ evidence (As), which somewhat support the thesis/claim (B) Either very few or no supporting ideas/evidence (As) or ideas/evidence which do not support the thesis/claim (B) Exceptional explanations that link the ideas/evidence (As) to the thesis/claim (B) Effective explanations that link the ideas/evidence (As) to the thesis/claim (B) Somewhat effective explanations that link the ideas/evidence (As) to the thesis/claim (B) Ineffective or no connection of ideas/evidence (As) to the thesis/claim (B) An exceptional introduction that includes a thesis/claim (B), its context and a preview of the essay body An effective introduction that includes a thesis/claim (B), its context and a preview of the essay body No introduction, or an introduction without a thesis/claim (B), context or preview of the essay body Paragraphs with exceptional topic sentences, supporting sentences and concluding sentences (MELCon) Paragraphs with effective topic sentences, supporting sentences and concluding sentences (MELCon) A somewhat effective introduction that includes a thesis/claim (B), its context and a preview of the essay body Paragraphs with somewhat effective topic sentences, supporting sentences and concluding sentences (MELCon) Effective transitions between and within paragraphs Somewhat effective transitions between and within paragraphs An exceptional conclusion Points Possible (5) An effective conclusion Points Possible (4) A somewhat effective or off-topic conclusion Points Possible (3.5) Ineffective or no conclusion Points Possible (3) Exceptionally advanced and complex vocabulary, frequently varied sentence structure and length Points Possible (5) Effectively advanced and complex vocabulary, occasionally varied sentence structure and length Points Possible (4) A mostly accurate vocabulary, some varied sentence structure and length Points Possible (3.5) Inaccurate vocabulary; rarely varied sentence structure and length Points Possible (3) A tone that shows an exceptional awareness of audience, purpose and occasion Points Possible (5) A tone that shows an effective awareness of audience, purpose and occasion Points Possible (4) A tone that shows a somewhat effective awareness of audience, purpose and occasion Points Possible (3.5) A tone that shows ineffective or no awareness of audience, purpose and occasion Points Possible (3) Exceptional control of grammar and writing conventions with no errors Effective control of grammar and writing conventions, with few errors that do not prevent understanding Points Possible (4) Somewhat effective control of grammar and writing conventions, with occasional errors that limit understanding Points Possible (3.5) A lack of control of grammar and writing conventions, with frequent errors that prevent understanding Points Possible (3) Formatting Any assignment-specific directions Correct assignment-specific directions Points Possible (5) Mostly correct assignment-specific directions Points Possible (4) Somewhat correct assignmentspecific directions Points Possible (3.5) Incorrect assignment-specific directions Points Possible (3) Exceptional transitions between and within paragraphs Points Possible (5) Paragraphs with ineffective or no topic sentences, supporting sentences or concluding sentences (MELCon) Ineffective or no transitions between or within paragraphs Points Skill DELIVERY VISUAL AID for the Senior Project Presentation (25%) of the Senior Project Presentation (25%) EYE CONTACT Develop rapport with the audience through eye contact An A Presentation has Exceptional eye contact with the entire audience, seldom returning to notecards. Points Possible (5) ELOCUTION Articulate voice clearly and confidently Exceptionally clear, correct, and precise pronunciation of all words and phrases. Points Possible (5) POSTURE and GESTURES Use body language to enhance presentation Exceptional posture: Standing straight with both feet on the ground, and/or Exceptional gestures: hand gestures enhance audience’s understanding. Points Possible (5) ENTHUSIASM Convey emotion during the presentation INTERACTION with the AUDIENCE and the QUESTION/ANSWER SESSION LAYOUT Enrich and captivate the audience’s understanding through the visual aid TEXT MECHANICS Correctly use grammar; correctly spell, punctuate, and capitalize; and correctly format Effective eye contact with the audience - but some distracting use of notecards and/or visual aid. Points Possible (4) Clear, correct, and precise pronunciation of most words and phrases. Points Possible (4) Exceptional understanding and application of standard English grammar; Correct punctuation and capitalization; and Correct spelling. Points Possible (10-9) Exceptional use of graphics, sound, and/or animation/video to create a consistent overall idea; and Exceptional sizing and resolution. Points Possible (5) A C Presentation has Effective posture: Standing straight with both feet on the ground, with some rocking back and forth; and/or Effective gestures: hand gestures assist audience’s understanding. Points Possible (4) Pleasant attitude about topic during much of the presentation. Points Possible (4) Effective encouragement of audience interaction; and Effective knowledge of the topic displayed while responding directly and appropriately to all audience questions. Points Possible (4) An exceptional visual theme — colors, designs, and proportions; An exceptional use of headings, subheadings, and text to create a consistent overall idea; and An appropriate text length. Points Possible (10-9) GRAPHICS, SOUND, and/or ANIMATION/VIDEO Effectively integrate multimedia into the visual aid Exceptionally strong and positive attitude about topic during the entire presentation. Points Possible (5) Exceptional encouragement of audience interaction; and Exceptional knowledge of the topic displayed while responding confidently, precisely, and appropriately to all audience questions. Points Possible (5) A B Presentation has An effective visual theme — colors, designs, and proportions; An effective use of headings, subheadings, and text to create a consistent overall idea; and A mostly appropriate text length. Points Possible (8) Effective understanding and application of standard English grammar; Some incorrect instances of punctuation and capitalization; and Some misspellings. Points Possible (8) Effective use of graphics, sound, and/or animation/video to create a consistent overall idea; and Effective sizing and resolution. Points Possible (4) Some eye contact with the audience, frequently returning to the distracting use of notecards and/or visual aid. Points Possible (3.5) Clear, correct, and precise pronunciation of some words and phrases. Points Possible (3.5) Somewhat effective posture: Some standing straight, but with rocking back and forth and slumping; and/or Somewhat effective gestures: hand gestures sometimes assist audience’s understanding. Points Possible (3.5) Engaged attitude about topic during the some of the presentation. Points Possible (3.5) Somewhat effective encouragement of audience interaction; and Somewhat effective knowledge of the topic displayed while responding directly and appropriately to all audience questions. Points Possible (3.5) A somewhat effective visual theme — colors, designs, and proportions; A somewhat effective use of headings, subheadings, and text to create a consistent overall idea; and At times, an inappropriate text length. Points Possible (7) Somewhat effective understanding and application of standard English grammar; Several incorrect instances of punctuation and capitalization; and Several misspellings. Points Possible (7) Somewhat effective use of graphics, sound, and/or animation/video to create a consistent overall idea; and Somewhat effective sizing and resolution. Points Possible (3.5) Interdisciplinary Project Presentation Grade: ______/100 (Each student must earn an 80 [B-] or higher in order to pass his/her Interdisciplinary Project Presentation.) An F Presentation has Little or no eye contact with the audience. Points Possible (3) Unclear, incorrect, and/or imprecise pronunciation of words and phrases. Points Possible (3) Ineffective posture: Sits or slumps during entire presentation; and/or Ineffective gestures: few or no hand gestures that assist audience’s understanding. Points Possible (3) Disengaged attitude about topic during the most of the presentation. Points Possible (3) Insufficient encouragement of audience interaction; and Insufficient knowledge of the topic displayed while responding directly and appropriately to all audience questions. Points Possible (3) An ineffective visual theme — colors, designs, and proportions; An ineffective use of headings, subheadings, and text to create a consistent overall idea; and An inappropriate text length. Points Possible (6) Ineffective understanding and application of standard English grammar; Many incorrect instances of punctuation and capitalization; and Many misspellings. Points Possible (6) Ineffective use of graphics, sound, and/or animation/video to create a consistent overall idea; and Ineffective sizing and resolution. Points Possible (3) Points