North Lawndale College Prep High School Senior Project Presentation Rubric: Literary Arts - Fiction 2013-2014 Senior’s Name: __________________________ Panelists’ Names: __________________________________________________ Date: ________________ Literary Arts Teacher: ________________________________________________ Independent Study Teacher: _____________________________________ English Teacher: ____________________________________________________ Math Teacher: ________________________________________________ An A Presentation has A B Presentation has A C Presentation has An F Presentation has Points Skill A somewhat effective beginning which Noor little beginning which describes describes why the topic was chosen why the topic was chosen Points Possible (7) Points Possible (6-0) A somewhat effective thesis/claim that No thesis/claim, one that does not make An exceptional thesis/claim that An effective thesis/claim that responds THESIS/CLAIM somewhat responds to the Driving sense, or one that does not respond to The statement of your argument; the essay’s “main responds to the Driving Question to the Driving Question Question the Driving Question idea” Points Possible (10) Points Possible (9-8) Points Possible (7) Points Possible (6-0) Somewhat effective background BACKGROUND INFORMATION Exceptional background information Effective background information that No or little background information Before the argument begins, appropriate and information that provides appropriate that provides appropriate and necessary provides appropriate and necessary that provides appropriate and necessary necessary information that provides context for the and necessary context for the context for the argument context for the argument context for the argument argument (e.g., historical, socioeconomic, argument Points Possible (10) Points Possible (9-8) Points Possible (6-0) geographical, statistical, etc.) Points Possible (7) Either very few or no ideas/reasons or Exceptional ideas/reasons that logically Effective ideas/reasons that logically Ideas/Reasons that somewhat support ones that do not support the SUPPORTING IDEAS/REASONS support the thesis/claim support the thesis/claim the thesis/claim Ideas/Reasons that support thesis/claim thesis/claim Points Possible (20-18) Points Possible (17-16) Points Possible (15-14) Points Possible (13-0) Exceptional ideas or reasons that Either very few or no opposing Effective ideas/reasons that logically Ideas/reasons that somewhat oppose logically oppose the thesis/claim; ideas/reasons or ideas/reasons which do OPPOSING IDEAS/REASONS oppose the thesis/claim; effective the thesis/claim; somewhat effective exceptional rebuttal to those opposing not oppose the thesis/claim; little or no and REBUTTAL rebuttal to those opposing ideas rebuttal to those opposing ideas Ideas/Reasons that oppose thesis/claim ideas rebuttal to the opposing ideas Points Possible (17-16) Points Possible (15-14) Points Possible (20-18) Points Possible (13-0) SET-UPS and EVIDENCE Exceptional set-ups and evidence, Effective set-ups and evidence, Somewhat effective set-ups and Set-ups and Evidence that support Background Either little or no set-ups and evidence; including at least 2 quantitative data including at least 2 quantitative data evidence, including at least 2 Information, Supporting Ideas/Reasons, and Opposing no quantitative data representations representations representations quantitative data representations Ideas/Reasons and Rebuttal (must include at least 2 Points Possible (13-0) Points Possible (20-18) Points Possible (17-16) Points Possible (15-14) Quantitative Data Representations) Somewhat effective explanations that Ineffective or no explanation of ANALYSIS of EVIDENCE to SUPPORTING or Exceptional explanations that link the Effective explanations that link the link the evidence to the supporting or evidence to the supporting or opposing OPPOSING IDEAS/REASONS evidence to the supporting or opposing evidence to the supporting or opposing Logical explanations that link the evidence to the opposing ideas/reasons and the ideas/reasons and the thesis/claim ideas/reasons and the thesis/claim ideas/reasons and the thesis/claim supporting or opposing ideas/reasons and the thesis/claim Points Possible (13-0) Points Possible (20-19) Points Possible (17-16) thesis/claim Points Possible (15-14) Exceptional proposed idea(s), Somewhat effective proposed idea(s), PROPOSAL Effective proposed idea(s), separated Little or no proposed idea(s), separated One or more major idea to solve the identified separated into parts, with full separated into parts, with full into parts, with full explanation into parts, with full explanation problem, with idea separated into at least three parts; explanation explanation Points Possible (9-8) Points Possible (6-0) full explanation of each part Points Possible (10) Points Possible (7) Awareness of audience, purpose, and Awareness of audience, purpose, and Ineffective awareness of audience, Awareness of audience, purpose, and occasion through the use of occasion through the use of somewhat purpose, and occasion through the INTENDED AUDIENCE FOR PROPOSAL occasion through the use of effective Appropriate use of language, tone, and style to reach exceptionally appropriate effective ineffective use of appropriate language, tone, and style the intended audience for the proposal language, tone, and style language, tone, and style language, tone, and style Points Possible (9-8) Points Possible (10) Points Possible (7) Points Possible (6-0) CONTENT of the Senior Project Presentation (50%) The Argument: Organization, Analysis/Synthesis, and Continuity INTRODUCTION A beginning which describes why the topic was chosen STATEMENT of INTENT Written statement of purpose and process of the Creative Elements An exceptional beginning which describes why the topic was chosen Points Possible (10) An effective beginning which describes why the topic was chosen Points Possible (9-8) /10 /10 /10 /20 /20 /20 /20 /20 Exceptional explanation of the Effective explanation of the evolution Somewhat effective explanation of the Ineffective explanation of the evolution evolution of critical thought to creative of critical thought to creative ideas to evolution of critical thought to creative of critical thought to creative ideas to ideas to creative work. creative work. ideas to creative work. creative work. CRITICAL REFLECTION on CREATIVE PROCESS Explains key creative influences. Reflects on and Exceptional explanation and documents the evolution of the creative element with documentation of creative influences archival evidence (excerpts from readings, drafts, and creative process editorial notes, journal entries, annotated Points Possible (20-18) bibliographies, etc) Effective explanation and documentation of creative influences and creative process Points Possible (17-16) Total Content Points Somewhat effective explanation and documentation of creative influences and creative process Points Possible(15-14) Ineffective explanation and documentation of creative influences and creative process Possible Points (13-12) /20 /150 An A Presentation has A B Presentation has An exceptional visual narrative that is Effective visual narrative that is artful, VISUALDOCUMENTATION and artful, appropriate, and supported by appropriate, and supported by REALIZATION of CREATIVE INTENT graphics, text, and archival elements graphics, text, and archival elements that: 1) help present the academic that: 1) help present the academic Graphics, text, multimedia, and archival elements research and 2) help document the research and 2) help document the that: 1) help present the academic research and 2) story behind turning that research into story behind turning that research into help document the story behind turning that research creative work creative work The excerpt works into creative work The excerpt works exceptionally as a effectively as a stand-alone creative stand-alone creative piece that piece that exemplifies one or more key Creative excerpt for the presentation works as a exemplifies one or more key points points called out in the digital stand-alone creative piece that exemplifies one or called out in the digital presentation. presentation more key points called out in the digital presentation Points Possible(30-27) Points Possible(26-24) The writing is exceptionally original The writing is effectively original and and rhythmic and features an rhythmic and features an effectively CRAFT: UNIVERSAL The writing is original, rhythmic, and features a exceptionally vivid and efficient use of vivid and efficient use of language vivid and efficient use of language (active verbs, language (active verbs, precise nouns, (active verbs, precise nouns, specific precise nouns, specific details). The writing features specific details). The story contains details). The story contains effectively distinct characters, rich settings, and a fictional exceptionally well-developed well-developed characters, rich narrative structured around a central problem or characters, rich settings, and a fictional settings, and a clear fictional narrative conflict narrative clear structure around a structure around a central problem or central problem or conflict. conflict. Points Possible (30-27) Points Possible(26-24) The writing is an exceptional showcase The writing is an effective showcase of CRAFT: STUDENT CHOSEN The writing showcases the following additional of the student’s chosen element of the student’s chosen element of poetic student-chosen element of genre specific craft poetic craft craft ______________________ Points Possible (30-27) Points Possible (26-24) Exceptional eye contact with the entire Effective eye contact with the audience EYE CONTACT audience, seldom returning to - but some distracting use of notecards Develop rapport with the audience through eye notecards. and/or visual aid. contact Points Possible (10) Points Possible (9-8) ELOCUTION Exceptionally clear, correct, and Clear, correct, and precise Articulate voice precise pronunciation of all words and pronunciation of most words and phrases. phrases. clearly and confidently Spoken GRAMMAR and USAGE Effective control of grammar and No unintended problems with grammar, e.g., Exceptional control of grammar and usage, with few errors that do not subject-verb agreement, pronoun-antecedent usage with no errors prevent understanding agreement, and verb tenses; no unintended Points Possible (10) Points Possible (9-8) usage problems Effective posture: Standing straight Exceptional posture: Standing straight POSTURE with both feet on the ground, with with both feet on the ground, and/or and some rocking back and forth; and/or Exceptional gestures: hand gestures GESTURES Effective gestures: hand gestures assist Use body language enhance audience’s understanding. audience’s understanding. to enhance presentation Points Possible (10) Points Possible (9-8) Exceptionally strong and positive Pleasant attitude about topic during attitude about topic during the entire ENTHUSIASM much of the presentation. Convey emotion during the presentation presentation. Points Possible (9-8) Points Possible (10) Exceptional transitions between and Effective transitions between and TRANSITIONS among the various parts of the among the various parts of the Connections made between and among the various argument and the creative element argument and the creative element parts of the presentation Points Possible (10) Points Possible (9-8) Exceptional encouragement of Effective encouragement of audience audience interaction; and interaction; and INTERACTION Exceptional knowledge of the topic Effective knowledge of the topic with the displayed while responding displayed while responding directly AUDIENCE confidently, precisely, and and appropriately to all audience appropriately to all audience questions. questions. Points Possible (10) Points Possible (9-8) VOICE Fiction of Senior Project Presentation (30%) of the Senior Project Presentation (20%) The Public Speaking Skills DELIVERY CREATIVE ELEMENT Skill A C Presentation has An F Presentation has Somewhat effective visual narrative Ineffective visual narrative supported that is artful, appropriate, and by ineffective graphics, text, and supported by graphics, text, and archival elements that do NOT help archival elements that: 1) help present present the academic research and do the academic research and 2) help NOT help document the story behind document the story behind turning that turning that research into creative work research into creative work The excerpt does not work as a standThe excerpt works somewhat alone creative piece. The excerpt does effectively as a stand-alone creative not exemplify one or more key points piece that exemplifies one or more key called out in the digital presentation points called out in the digital Points Possible (20-0) presentation. Points Possible (23-21) The writing is somewhat original and The writing is not original or rhythmic rhythmic and features a somewhat and does not feature a vivid and vivid and efficient use of language efficient use of language (active verbs, (active verbs, precise nouns, specific precise nouns, specific details). The details). The story may contain story lacks well-developed characters, somewhat developed or flat characters, rich settings, and a clear factual minimal settings, and a clear factual narrative structure around a central narrative structure around a central problem or conflict. problem or conflict. Points Possible (20-0) Points Possible(23-21) The writing is a somewhat effective The writing is an ineffective showcase of the student’s chosen showcase of the student’s chosen element of poetic craft element of poetic craft Points Possible (23-21) Points Possible (20-0) Some eye contact with the audience, Little or no eye contact with the frequently returning to the distracting audience. use of notecards and/or visual aid. Points Possible (6-0) Points Possible (7) Clear, correct, and precise Unclear, incorrect, and/or imprecise pronunciation of some words and pronunciation of words and phrases. phrases. Somewhat effective control of grammar A lack of control of grammar and and usage, with occasional errors that usage, with frequent errors that prevent limit understanding understanding Points Possible (7) Points Possible (6-0) Somewhat effective posture: Some standing straight, but with rocking back and forth and slumping; and/or Somewhat effective gestures: hand gestures sometimes assist audience’s understanding. Points Possible (7) Ineffective posture: Sits or slumps during entire presentation; and/or Ineffective gestures: few or no hand gestures that assist audience’s understanding. Points Possible (6-0) Engaged attitude about topic during Disengaged attitude about topic during the some of the presentation. the most of the presentation. Points Possible (7) Points Possible (6-0) Somewhat effective transitions between Ineffective or no transitions between and among the various parts of the and among the various parts of the argument and the creative element argument and the creative element Points Possible (7) Points Possible (6-0) Somewhat effective encouragement of Insufficient encouragement of audience audience interaction; and interaction; and somewhat effective knowledge of the Insufficient knowledge of the topic topic displayed while responding displayed while responding directly directly and appropriately to all and appropriately to all audience audience questions. questions. Points Possible (7) Points Possible (6-0) Final Senior Project Presentation Grade: ______/300 (Each senior must earn a B- [80% or 240 points or higher] in order to pass his/her Senior Project Presentation.) Points /30 /30 /30 /10 /10 /10 /10 /10 /10