Mr. Go - Composition GERRC Paragraph Rubric Date: _____________________ Name (First and Last): _______________________________ Topic: _________________________________ Evaluation Criteria Total _______ out of 26 Level 4 Level 3 Level 2 In-depth, complex arguments are clearly established at start; strong thematic connections of subject or literary work are accurate & thorough; theme connection is made throughout. (8-7) Arguments are clearly established at start; could use more depth. Treatment of subject or literary work is accurate and somewhat probing; more theme connection is needed throughout. (6-5) Arguments need clarification at start; skim surface of analysis. Treatment of subject or literary work has some depth. More higher order critical thinking is required. Lack of theme connection throughout. (4-3) A variety of rich examples and quotations with page references made throughout strongly support analysis on many (literal and figurative) levels. (4) Quotations with page references made throughout accurately support analysis. (3) Level 1 Content /16 Depth of Analysis ( /8) Evidence (varied, relevant) ( /4) Organization of Ideas ( /4) Arguments are unclear and difficult to follow; skim surface of analysis. Treatment of subject or literary work is inaccurate and requires much more higher order critical thinking; little to no theme connection throughout. (21) More relevant, quotations Quotations support required or selections do not analysis on a literal level. effectively support ideas. Select evidence that is Take more time to find the more rich in literary richest, most revealing depth (2) quotations to support your arguments (1) Lacks a strong topic Lacks a strong topic GERRC ¶ structure is used GERRC ¶ structure is sentence with three key sentence with three key to show progression of mostly used to show ideas. Arguments and ideas. Arguments do not arguments clearly and progression of arguments evidence do not follow follow logical or clear highlight connections. GE: clearly; at times connects logical or clear order. order. Analysis is topic is stated with 3 distinct ideas. GE: topic is stated Analysis is formulaic, tends formulaic, tends to merely arguments. Concluding with 2 distinct arguments. to merely report facts report facts without sentence recaps main points Concluding sentence needs without making making connections. and explores new insight. (4) work. (3) connections. Missing Weak or missing concluding sentences. (1) concluding sentences. (2) Style /6 Language (/4) Mechanics and Fluidity ( /2) Format and Process ( /4) 3 rules of formal writing Generally, 3 rules of formal 3 rules of formal writing broken periodically. Some writing not followed. mostly applied. Diction colloquialism and Diction and phrasing are too and phrasing are mostly contractions shift level of informal. Slang, appropriate for academic language from academic contractions, first person audience. to informal. abound. Piece is littered with Occasional mechanical spelling and grammar Incorrect spelling and Flawless spelling, grammar, errors do not interfere with errors – begins to interfere grammar interferes with punctuation. Quotations are meaning. Quotations are with meaning. understanding. Quotations integrated seamlessly. (/2) generally integrated. (/1.5) Quotations “dropped” “dropped”. (/0.5) (/1) 3 rules of formal writing applied. Diction and phrasing are richly appropriate for academic audience. MLA template used (font, Glaring errors in MLA page numbering etc..) match format. Too few stages of Minor errors in MLA format provided. All stages writing process MLA format not used. Most format. Most stages of of writing process employed: employed. This piece stages of writing process writing process employed. Brainstorm, outlined, written would benefit greatly employed. More thorough More thorough peer- and 1st draft, typed 2nd draft from more thorough peeredition required. (/1) self-edition required. (/3) peer and self-edited and self-edition required. thoroughly. (/4) (/2)