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are
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biological disturbances/biotic
biological disturbances
factors
biological disturbances/biotic
biological disturbances
factors
greatly affected
significantly affected
unpalatable weeds
unpalatable weed
biological disturbances/biotic
biological disturbances
factors
around the world (Day and Buckley
around the world ( Wiesmeier et
2013; Harris 2010; Zhang et al. 2011;
al. 2009)
Wiesmeier et al. 2009)
added "resource allocation"
added " (Brandta et al. 2013; Gao et al.
2009; Gao et al. 2013; Harris 2010; Luo
et al. 2009; Shang and Long 2007; Wen
et al. 2012)"
Qinghai-Tibetan Plateau
QTP
(referred to as "the roof of the
removed "(referred to as "the roof of the
world")
world")"
Among 18.9 million km2 of
Over 85% of the 18.9 million km2 of
total land in this area, over 85%
QTP is covered by …
is covered by …
Thay have also provided a great
They also provided …
deal of …
Shang and Long 2005
Shang and Long 2007
being
removed "being"
Shang and Long 2005
Shang and Long 2007
especially of meadows
especially meadows
Globally
For alpine vegetation
4 200 m
4,200 m
The annually average
The annual average
1 459 mm
1,459 mm
added "The grasslands on sunny slopes
are normally grazed by Tibetan sheep in
the cold season from October to the next
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May, lasting for almost 200 days."
The degraded grasslands
suffered damage from mole rats
(Myospalax bailey).
Four paralled 250 m transects
were set at …
Degraded grasslands on the sunny slope
suffered damage from overgrazing and
zokor (Myospalax bailey) activities.
Four 250 m transects were set on …
added a comma after "(north facing)"
added a comma after " on the same
mountain"
The vegetation dominated by
forb on the sunny aspect was
sampled in …
The forb-dominated vegetation on the
sunny slope was sampled within …
added "The vegetation on the shady slope
was dominated by shrubs with a
forb/herbaceous under canopy. "
added "on both slopes"
added " (Floyd and Anderson 1987)
...by recording the times that
each species appeared in all
quadrats in each sampling plot.
In each plot
the vegetation composition and
plant diversity were identified,
and
(number of mole rat holes)
...by recording the number of individuals
of each species occurring in all quadrats.
added "According to the criteria for
grading alpine grassland degradation (Ma
et al. 2002), each quadrat was divided
into five levels of degradation: severe
degradation (SD), heavy degradation
(HD), moderate degradation (MD), light
degradation (LD), or non-degraded
grassland (ND)."
In each quadrat
removed "the vegetation composition and
plant diversity were identified, and"
added "were analyzed" before semicolon
removed "(number of mole rat holes)"
added "(Gerlacha et al. 2006)"
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The grasslands on sunny aspects
are normally grazed by Tibetan
sheep in the cold season from
October to the next May, lasting
for almost 200 days.
mole rat
On this basis, the
ralationships …
Ren (Ren 1998)
IVS
Paul Jaccard (Jaccard 1912)
The correlations between the
species importance (IV) and
biotic and abiotic factors were
analyzed using SPSS 11.5.
sunny aspect
The most popular families of
plants recorded were Asteraceae
(n represents how many species
appearing at the study site
belonged to this family, n=20),
Cyperaceae (n=9),
Ranunculaceae (n=11), Poaceae
(n=11), Rosaceae (n=8),
Gentianaceae (n=6), Fabaceae
(n=10), Polygonaceae (n=6), and
Scrophulariaceae (n=8),
presented at 100%, 98.3%,
97.1%, 96.6%, 96.6%, 93.7%,
92.0%,89.7% and 87.9% of
these sampled quadrates,
respectively.
The most common genera were
Kobresia (n=3), Potentilla (n=4),
Saussurea (n=7), presented at
97.7%, 95.4% and 92.5% of
these sampled quadrates,
respectively.
The highest occurrence …
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removed "The grasslands on sunny
aspects are normally grazed by Tibetan
sheep in the cold season from October to
the next May, lasting for almost 200
days. "
zokor
The relationships …
Ren (1998)
Ivs
Jaccard (1912)
removed “The correlations between the
species importance (IV) and biotic and
abiotic factors were analyzed using SPSS
11.5. ”
sunny slope
The most popular families of plants
recorded were Asteraceae, Cyperaceae,
Ranunculaceae, Poaceae, Rosaceae,
Gentianaceae, Fabaceae, Polygonaceae,
and Scrophulariaceae (Table 1).
The most common genera were Kobresia,
Potentilla, Saussurea.
The most frequent occurrence …
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According to the criteria for
grading alpine grassland
degradation (Ma et al. 2002),
each quadrat on the sunny slope
was divided into four degrees of
degradation (Table I): severe
degradation (SD), heavy
degradation (HD), moderate
degradation (MD), or light
degradation (LD), whereas the
quadrats on the shady slope were
all categorized as non-degraded
grassland.
Table II
93 plants
were sampled
Table II
0.03
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sunny aspect
sunny aspect
shady aspect
In Figure 1, it can be seen that
the …
MD and HD sites, i.e.,
moderately degraded and
heavily degraded habitats
Szxifraga
Greanium
LD sites, i.e., lightly degraded
habitat
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Each quadrat on the sunny slope was
divided into four levels of degradation
(Table 2), whereas all quadrats on the
shady slope were all categorized as ND.
added "on the sunny slope"
Table 3
93 plant species
were recorded
Table 3
0.030
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sunny slope
sunny slope
shady slope
added "on the shady slope"
removed "In Figure 1, it can be seen that
the "
added "(Fig. 1)"
removed ", i.e., moderately degraded and
heavily degraded habitats"
Saxifraga
Geranium
removed ", i.e., lightly degraded habitat"
added "(LD, MD, HD and SD)"
great variations between the four
sampled habitats in terms of
their species composition (Table
III).
significant variations in species
composition between the four sampled
habitats (Table 3).
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This result indicates that there
were no significant variations in
the species composition along
the altitudinal gradient on the
shady slope.
(Figure 1)
mole rat
Figure 1 displays the ordination
of species constrained by nine
variables.
The factors that most strongly
influenced the species
abundance were the grazing
intensity, bare patch area, rat
disturbance and altitude.
Figure 1
mole rat
mole rat
Figure 2 shows that the …
were
Scnccio kashkarowii
It can be concluded that
unpalatable …
as degradation
dominate
which did not
contrary
Astragalus speciel
Szxifraga
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were
removed "This result indicates that there
were no significant variations in the
species composition along the altitudinal
gradient on the shady slope."
(Fig. 1)
added "Fig. 1 displays the ordination of
species constrained by nine variables. "
zokor
removed "Figure 1 displays the
ordination of species constrained by nine
variables. "
removed "The factors that most strongly
influenced the species abundance were
the grazing intensity, bare patch area, rat
disturbance and altitude. "
added "(Fig. 1)"
Fig. 1
zokor
zokor
added "(Fig. 2)"
The …
was
added "(Fig. 2)"
Senecio kaschkarowii
Unpalatable …
as degradation (removed a space)
dominant
with no
added "This result indicates that there
were no significant variations in the
species composition along the altitudinal
gradient on the shady slope. "
contrast
Astragalus spp.
Saxifraga
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increases
away from
reduced
mole rat
In this study
Fan et al. (2010) found that the
climate change was a factor
associated with reductions in
grassland yields. However,
grazing management has been
reported to be the most
important factor for increasing
grassland quality (Feng et al.
2009).
sunny aspect
Figure 1 and Table 3
Li et al. (2008) has also found
that the vegetation variation
showed no tendency along an
altitudinal gradient with
intervals of 100 m between
2,460 and 3,260 m on Tianshan
Mountain in Xinjiang. Similarly,
there should be no great
variation in the vegetation
composition along the
environmental and geographic
gradients on the sunny slope at a
small scale.
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Geranium
slope
decreses
from
reduces
zokor
added "Fan et al. (2010) found that the
climate change was also a factor
associated with reductions in grassland
yields. "
But, in this small scale study
removed "Fan et al. (2010) found that the
climate change was a factor associated
with reductions in grassland yields.
However, grazing management has been
reported to be the most important factor
for increasing grassland quality (Feng et
al. 2009)."
sunny slope
Fig. 1 and Table 4
removed "Li et al. (2008) has also found
that the vegetation variation showed no
tendency along an altitudinal gradient
with intervals of 100 m between 2,460
and 3,260 m on Tianshan Mountain in
Xinjiang. Similarly, there should be no
great variation in the vegetation
composition along the environmental and
geographic gradients on the sunny slope
at a small scale. "
added a comma after " significantly"
added a comma after "slowly"
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We can also conclude that the
effects of the moisture content
and heat conditions on the
special heterogeneity of the
alpine grassland vegetation at a
small scale were insignificant
compared with those of grazing
and rat disturbance.
scientific grazing
rat control and light grazing
should be first be implemented
in the application of restoration
strategies, …
A previous study implied that
we concluded that diagnosis of
he state
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removed "We can also conclude that the
effects of the moisture content and heat
conditions on the special heterogeneity of
the alpine grassland vegetation at a small
scale were insignificant compared with
those of grazing and rat disturbance. "
added a comma after "factors"
rational grazing
we recommended that zokor controls be
implemented and grazing be limited to
low stock levels (2 sheep units/ha), …
Previous studies have shown
we conclude that the diagnosis of the
state
added "Brandta, J. S., Haynesb, M. A.,
Kuemmerlec, T., Wallerb, D. M., &
Radeloffa, V. C. (2013). Regime shift on
the roof of the world: Alpine meadows
converting to shrublands in the southern
Himalayas. Biological Conservation, 158,
116-127."
added "Day, N. J., & Buckley, H. L.
(2013). Twenty-five years of plant
community dynamics and invasion in
New Zealand tussock grasslands. Austral
Ecology, doi:DOI: 10.1111/aec.12016."
added "Floyd, D. A., & Anderson, J. E.
(1987). A Comparison of Three Methods
for Estimating Plant Cover. Journal of
Ecology, 75, 221-228."
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Li, K. H., Wang, W. L., Hu, Y.
K., Gao, G. G., Gong, Y. M., &
Yin, W. (2008). Relationships
between belowgrund biomass of
alpine grassland and
environmental factors along an
altitude gradient. Chinese
Journal of Applied Ecology,
19(11), 2364-2368.
removed "Li, K. H., Wang, W. L., Hu, Y.
K., Gao, G. G., Gong, Y. M., & Yin, W.
(2008). Relationships between
belowgrund biomass of alpine grassland
and environmental factors along an
altitude gradient. Chinese Journal of
Applied Ecology, 19(11), 2364-2368."
added "Luo, C., Chang, X., Zhang, Z.,
Duan, J., Zhao, X., Su, A., et al. (2009).
Effects of grazing and experimental
warming on DOC concentrations in the
soil solution on the Qinghai-Tibet
plateau. Soil biology & biochemistry,
41(12), 2493-2500."
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added "Gao, Q. Z., Wan, Y. F., Li, Y.,
Guo, Y. Q., Ganjurjav, Qin, X. B., et al.
(2013). Effects of topography and human
activity on the net primary productivity
(NPP) of alpine grassland in northern
Tibet from 1981 to 2004. International
Journal of Remote Sensing, 34(6),
2057-2069.
Gerlacha, R., Baumewerd-Schmidtb, H.,
Borgc, K. v. d., Eckmeierd, E., &
Schmidtd, M. W. I. (2006). Prehistoric
alteration of soil in the Lower Rhine
Basin, Northwest
Germany—archaeological, 14C and
geochemical evidence. Geoderma,
136(1-2), 38-50. "
Shang, Z. H., & Long, R. J.
(2005). Formation reason and
recovering problem of the "black
soil type" degraded alpine
grassland in Qinghai-Tibet
Plateau. Chinese Journal of
Ecology, 24, 652-656.
Shang, Z. H., & Long, R. J. (2007).
Formation causes and recovery of the
“Black Soil Type” degraded alpine
grassland in Qinghai-Tibetan Plateau.
Frontiers of Agricultrue in China, 1(2),
197-202.
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Table 1
Note: ND=non-degradation,
SD=severe degradation,
HD=heavy degradation,
LG=light degradation, LG=light
grazing, MG=moderate grazing,
OG=over grazing, HG=heavy
grazing. SC= soil total carbon,
SN= soil total nitrogen, TDS=
total dissolved salt.
Table 2
aspects
NOTE: The abbreviations are
the same as in Table 1.
Table 3
NOTE: The abbreviations are
the same as in Table 1.
Figure 1.
rat hole
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added "Wen, L., Dong, S. K., Li, Y. Y.,
Li, X. Y., Shi, J. J., & Dong, Q. M.
(2012). The impact of land degradation
on the C pools in alpine grasslands of the
Qinghai-Tibet Plateau. Plant and Soil,
Doi:10.1007/s11104-012-1500-4."
added "Zhang, G., Kang, Y., Han, G.,
Mei, H., & Sakurai, K. (2011). Grassland
degradation reduces the carbon
sequestration capacity of the vegetation
and enhances the soil carbon and nitrogen
loss. Acta Agriculturae Scandinavica
Section B-Soil and Plant Science, 61(4),
356-364."
added "Table 1 The most popular
families and genera on both sunny and
shady slopes"
added "Note: n represents how many
species appearing at the study sites
belonged to this family."
Table 2
Note: ND=not degraded, LD=light
degradation, MD=moderate degradation,
HD=heavy degradation, SD=severe
degradation, LG=light grazing,
MG=moderate grazing, OG=over
grazing, HG=heavy grazing. SC= soil
total carbon, SN= soil total nitrogen,
TDS= total dissolved salt.
Table 3
slopes
Note: Abbreviations as in Table 2.
Table 4
Note: Abbreviations as in Table 2.
Fig. 1
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Appendix
In old version
ND=non-degradation,
SD=severe degradation,
HD=heavy degradation,
LD=light degradation,
The meaning of the species
abbreviations is given in the
Appendix.
Figure 2.
NOTE: The abbreviations are
the same as in Figure 1.
Astragalus species1
Lvt pal
lvticaoshu palustris
Daucus specie
Meconopsis specie
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ND=not degraded, LD=light degradation,
MD=moderate degradation, HD=heavy
degradation, SD=severe degradation,
Species abbreviations given in the
Appendix.
Fig. 2
NOTE: Abbreviations as in Fig. 1.
Astragalus spp.
Cal pal
Caltha palustris
Daucus spp.
Meconopsis spp.