Writing Process Supports

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Writing Process Supports

2014/15 Prompt

Write a format article for Maclean’s Magazine explaining how one event, person, or social issue had a significant impact on Canadian identities.

Teaching Points – Prompt

1.

Article

 See below

2.

Event, person, or social issue

Brainstorm events, issues or trends to provoke student interest. For example: o Events – historical moment, political moment (election, debate, court decision),

terrorism o Social Issues – bullying, Gender rights, o Person – historical figure, politician, hero, sports or arts celebrity

3.

Impact

Explanation of how the event, person or issue has made a difference in your life o Because of the death of my dog, I now…. o Because of bullying, I work harder at being kind to everyone. o Because of media’s portrayal of girls, I feel pressure to look a certain way.

Article Structure

Headline

Articles include a headline. Following are different examples with a brief analysis

1.

Includes an explicit thesis statement

Heightened security only increases our fears

Why the best response to the Ottawa shootings is to open Parliament to all Canadians

Poloz says basement kids should work for free

Experience will pay off in long-term

2.

Implicit thesis

Taking selfies in the wrong place

A nationwide conversation about sexual assault has begun. Finally.

3.

Topical statement

Food bank usage spikes across province

Students want gender-neutral school washrooms

The teen rebellion in East Germany before the fall of the Wall

Sample Article

This is a possible article to stimulate discussion about the structure of an article. However, it does NOT address the prompt.: http://www.macleans.ca/news/canada/we-need-less-security-not-more/

MacLean’s magazine, Scott Gilmore, October 23, 2014

Deconstruction

Introduction is 3 paragraphs, with the first two setting the context. The transition to the first point is in the third paragraph – a questions and answer.

Paragraphs 4-6 explain the first point

Paragraph 7 transitions to a new point by referencing the thesis

Paragraph 8 presents a counter point.

Paragraph 9 introduces Canadian identity

Paragraph 10 transitions to the conclusion by referencing the thesis

Paragraph 11concludes with actions that will solidify Canadian identity and connects Canadian identity to the thesis.

What does this article need in order to make it better address the prompt?

This thesis is opinion based. Our prompt asks for less opinion and more explaining. However, at the core of it, implicit opinions are part of an article we are asking for.

Paragraphs 1-3 assume the reader knows the details of the chosen event. Your chosen event/person or social issue will need to be described and explained. If the thesis is not stated in the heading, it will need to be stated in the introductory paragraph(s).

Paragraphs 4-9 present an argument and then a counter argument. The article for this task does not necessarily need that structure. Rather, the body paragraphs should explain 2-3 points with supporting details. The major points should show the reader how Canadian Identity has been formed, challenged, or solidified by the chosen event, person, or social issue. In other words, what is the impact?

Finally, the conclusion should tie all the points together and leave the reader with something that keeps them thinking about the thesis statement.

Rubric Interpretation:

Content/Message includes:

Knowledge of an event, person, social issue

Knowledge of Canadian identity

Explicit explanation of the impact. Impact implies a change or difference being caused by the event, person, or social issue.

Please read the boxes the explain the criteria.

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