Y5/6: Autumn Term Fiction: Plan 1B Historical stories Main texts: WarHorse by Michael Morpurgo & War Game by Michael Foreman Wk 1 Monday Tuesday Wednesday Thursday Friday Whole class teaching It is essential to read two or three chapters of War Horse the day before the day that they are used in the teaching. Read these chapters just before the end of school for best effect. Explain that during this unit we are Read Chapters 4 & 5 of WarHorse Read Chapters 7, 8 & 9 of Read Chapters 10 to 14 of Read Chapters 15 & 16 of going to look at books based on to chn. Discuss what happened. WarHorse to chn. Ask for WarHorse to chn. Which new WarHorse to chn. Point out things that happened in WW1. Show How did Joey feel? How did Albert volunteers to retell in their own characters have we met since Joey that we are learning things chn WarHorse by Michael Morpurgo. feel? Had the Y5 chn made the words what happened to Joey went to war? List them on f/c. about WW1 by reading this Read the blurb. Then read the right prediction about what was and Topthorn. Look at some Captain Nicholls, Corporal Samuel book, e.g. Tanks were a Author’s Note, which sounds true, going to happen to Joey? Point that examples of sentences Perkins, Topthorn, Captain Stewart, British invention & were first but is also fiction. Explain to chn that that MM has used different types containing commas (plan Trooper Warren, the doctor, Herr used in September 1916. MM had however, chatted to old of sentences in his writing. Show resources). Some separate Hauptmann, Emilie & her What other things have we men in the village where he lived, chn three sentences from Chapter phrases, some separate clauses, Grandpapa, old Friedrich. Write learnt about the war? Why it two of whom had worked with 4 in plan resources. Ask chn if they some indicate brackets and some fought and cough on f/c. These began, the use of horses, the horses during WW1 and a third who can remember what each type of separate items in a list (words or words could be used in trenches, the fact that lots of could remember horses in the village sentence is called: simple, phrases). Also, fronted adverbials descriptions of some of the men were killed, the muddy being bought by the army to take to compound and complex are followed by a comma characters – write a simple conditions, that letters were war. His wife had also been given a respectively. Highlight conjunctions (remind chn of work done in sentence for each, e.g. Topthorn delivered to the men at the painting that showed horses used in the compound and LKS2). Commas clarify meaning suffered from a nasty cough. Herr front, etc. What do chn think suffering in WW1. These and a boy complex sentences (multi-clause and help the reader to know Hauptmann fought in WW1. What will happen to Joey now? who struck up a relationship with a sentences). Remind chn that the when to pause (draw breath!) do the words have in common? Give chn 5 minutes to horse on MM’s farm, were his real conjunctions, and, but and or, are and to use the correct tone when The letter-string ough. Using plan discuss their ideas in pairs. inspiration for the story. Read used in compound sentences, but reading aloud. They are also used resources explain ough is one of Then bring the class back Chapter 1 to chn. Ask who is telling that there are many conjunctions to separate vocatives (chn don’t the trickiest spellings in English, as together & ask for the story (the narrator) – Joey, the that can be used in complex need to remember this word), it can be used to spell a number of suggestions, making notes horse. What other characters were sentences (plan resource). Point i.e. the person or persons to different sounds. Have we met any on f/c. Chn justify their introduced? Zoey, an older horse; out that so-called simple sentences whom we are speaking or other words containing ough in the predictions. If chn have Albert; Albert’s mother & father. can be quite complicated, whereas writing, e.g. But Sally won’t write, story? E.g. plough, through. Ask already seen the film, read What is the setting? A farm. How old compound or complex sentences Joey, because she can’t, well not chn what they can remember the book or seen the show in were Joey and Albert at the start of can be quite straightforward. Also very well anyway. If there were about each character. Model London then they must not the story? Model writing a summary show chn how commas are used in no commas the sentence would making notes, then writing a ‘give the game away’! of the chapter. Spoken language 1/ some complex sentences. imply that Sally couldn’t write the description of a character. Spoken language 2/ Comprehension 1 Grammar 1 word ‘Joey’. Grammar 2 Transcription 1/ Composition 1 Composition 2 Spoken language Objectives a. listen appropriately to their peers g. use spoken language to develop understanding d. articulate and justify answers Pupils should be taught to: d. articulate and justify opinions i. participate in discussions g. use spoken language to explore ideas k. consider and evaluate different viewpoints Dimension 1. Monday: Group reading and discussion In mixed ability groups, chn read & discuss the next two chapters of WarHorse. Y6 chn make notes of key events as they read. See Comprehension 1. 2. Friday: Discussion about what will happen next Chn spend 5 minutes discussing with a partner what they think will happen to Joey next. Consider his condition, the characters he has met during the story, the fact that he’s still involved in the war, etc. Bring their ideas to a class discussion. Give and receive positive feedback about their ideas. Remind chn that this is a story, even though it is based on facts about WW1, so that may affect the ending. See Composition 2. © Original plan copyright Hamilton Trust, who give permission for it to be adapted as wished by individual users.Y5/6 Aut F Plan 1B Resources See Comprehension 1 None Composition Grammar Word reading Transcription Comprehensi on Y5/6: Autumn Term Fiction: Plan 1B Historical stories Main texts: WarHorse by Michael Morpurgo & War Game by Michael Foreman Maintain positive attitudes to reading by: 1. Monday: Group reading and answering question/writing summaries A copy of a. continuing to read and discuss a range of fiction In mixed ability groups chn read chapters 2 & 3 of WarHorse. Y5 Easy: Chn answer some questions WarHorse Understand what they read by: about the chapters (plan resources). Y6 write a short summary of the two chapters. Plenary: Volunteers for each a. discussing their understanding read out the summary of a chapter read. Has anything important be missed? Did other chn consider that group c. drawing inferences d. predicting what might happen there were other key points? Show chn the facts about the cavalry in WW1 by clicking on the relevant tab (chapters 2 e. summarising main ideas from more than one paragraph on the map at http://www.nationaltheatre.org.uk/discover-more/digital-classroom/horse-power. & 3) Spelling 1. Thursday: Explore words with letter-string ough Chn do this activity for 5-10 minutes maximum. Then come back together. Table of Pupils should be taught to: Look at the table showing one word for each different sound represented by ough (plan resources). Say them together so that words d. understand that the spelling of chn can hear the different sounds. Challenge chn to find other words with the same sounds as the examples discussed. Chn containing some words needs to be learnt can work in pairs or individually and write their ideas on a w/b. Give chn 5-10 min to do this, then bring the class back letter-string specifically together. Fill in a class chart with their findings. Discuss how knowing other words that rhyme with the words that contain the ough: blank e. use dictionaries to check the letter-string ough may help remember their pronunciation. Look at examples of words that do rhyme with the ough words and meaning of words (plan resources) – can chn think of other similar words? completed f. use the first three or four letters of Plenary: Give chn a spelling list (differentiated) to learn for homework (plan resources). If unsure of the meaning of any of the (see a word to check meaning words chn should use a dictionary to check. Encourage chn to move to the section of the dictionary with the first 3 or 4 letters resources) of the word, rather than scanning through several pages. Challenge chn to use these words in their writing. Dictionaries Use and understand the grammatical 1. Tuesday: Recognising different types of sentences Chapter 6 of terminology in Appendix 2 accurately Give chn copies of Chapter 6 of WarHorse (see resources). As they read the chapter together in pairs or 3s they find an WarHorse and appropriately in discussing their example of each of a simple, a compound and a complex sentence and write them on a w/b. They should note down other (see writing and reading conjunctions they spot too on a second w/b. resources) Plenary: Share some of the sentences and conjunctions. Listen to short excerpt of WarHorse by MP at Whiteboards http://michaelmorpurgo.com/books/war-horse (p51 onwards, Chapter 6). How does listening to an excerpt compare with Access to reading it yourself? Why do chn think this particular excerpt was chosen to be put on the MP website? internet Indicate grammatical and other 2. Wednesday: Use of commas in sentences Sentences features by: Together look at a selection of sentences from WarHorse that contain commas. Establish whether they separate items in a for chn to a. using commas to clarify meaning list, separate a subordinate clause from a main clause, separate two main clauses, separate a fronted adverbial from the main annotate or avoid ambiguity in writing clause, indicate parenthesis, or enclose the person(s) to whom the writer is speaking or writing. Challenge chn to annotate (see c. using commas to indicate further sentences (see differentiated plan resources) to show how the commas are used. resources) parenthesis Plenary: Share chn’s work and discuss how useful a comma can be! Plan their writing by: 1. Thursday: Write a description of a character from WarHorse Chn do this activity after they have finished their spellings. None c. considering how authors have Chn choose one of the characters (have a second choice ready) that they have met in WarHorse so far and then pair up with another developed characters child to write a description of the character together (ensure there are no ‘odd’ chn left, by asking some chn to go for their second Draft and write by: choice). Less able can work in a larger group with an adult (T or TA). Chn can draw a picture of their character. b. in narratives, describing characters Plenary: Volunteers read out their descriptions. Can other chn work out which character is being described? (See Transcription 1.) Plan their writing by: 2. Friday: Predict what will happen to the main character None b. noting and developing initial ideas Chn decide what they think is the most likely ending and write a paragraph explaining what their idea is and why they think that. c. considering how authors have They should refer to other characters (including perhaps ones we’ve not yet met) and must remember that it is taking place in WW1. developed characters Plenary: Ask a volunteer to say what their prediction is and why. Which other chn agree? What other ideas did chn have? Have a show of hands to find out which prediction is the most popular. Read the last chapters of War Horse before Monday’s lesson. © Original plan copyright Hamilton Trust, who give permission for it to be adapted as wished by individual users.Y5/6 Aut F Plan 1B Y5/6: Autumn Term Fiction: Plan 1B Historical stories Main texts: WarHorse by Michael Morpurgo & War Game by Michael Foreman Wk 2 Monday Tuesday Wednesday Thursday Whole class teaching It is essential to read War Game by Michael Foreman before it is used in the teaching on Friday. Read it in sections just before end of school for best effect. Read the remaining chapters of WarHorse Start compiling words that Ask if chn have seen the theatre Today chn will complete their to chn. Was the ending expected? Did can be used to create a production of WarHorse or the film playscripts of WarHorse. Have a anyone make the correct prediction (& had glossary of terms used in version. Explain that on the stage look at 2/3 playscripts that were they already seen or heard the rest of the WW1 (see plan resources). puppet horses were used instead started yesterday. Rehearse the story)? Did chn enjoy the story? Why/why More can be added when of real ones. Show chn video at: features of a playscript. Point out not? Could anyone other than Joey have reading other WW1-based http://www.warhorseonstage.com that each scene should start with been the narrator? No, because Joey was books. Can chn suggest /#videos of horse puppets. Discuss a description of its setting. Why the only character present at all times. The words? When writing in an how lifelike these are with very do we not need to use speech story could however, have been written in historical context writers skilled puppeteers operating them! marks? Model the use of a colon the third person (he, she, they), instead of have to use appropriate The play had to be in the 3rd person to separate what is said from the the first person (I, we). Point out that vocabulary too. We have as the horses could not have character’s name. What advice writers of historical stories have to beware heard Joey as a narrator, speaking parts – see Adaptation at do we need to give actors, e.g. of anachronisms (write on f/c) – including but he would probably have http://www.warhorseonstage.com suggesting that a certain line has things that had not been invented or liked to be able to send /#artistry. Watch part of the DVD to be said angrily or softly? discovered or were not understood in that Albert some letters home of WarHorse with chn. Ensure that Discuss what has to happen historical period, so e.g. tanks couldn’t from the front. When might the section you pick is suitable for during each group’s scene – appear in WarHorse until the war had been he have done this? After his chn (the film is rated age 12). There briefly recap the action. Explain raging for 2 years (first used in Sep 1916). first battle when Captain are differences in all parts of story! that chn need to complete their Briefly discuss other things that had to be Nicholls was killed, after Compare with the book. Is the story playscripts today. Allow groups taken into account, e.g. families back home meeting a new friend – told in the first person? Is the story time to edit and redraft their could not follow the progress of the war on Topthorn, when he first the same? Are there any additional scenes. After they have finished, TV or radio but read newspaper reports teamed up with Trooper or missing characters? Which did use the Plenary to give them instead. The book informs us about everyWarren, after he was taken chn prefer – the book or the film? spelling test on the ough words day home life, e.g. horses were still used in as a prisoner of war, etc. Why? Explain that chn are going to from last week. At some point farming rather than tractors and that horses Can chn suggest later times? adapt part of the book into a play. tomorrow give chn the pulling carts was a common means of Discuss the information that Remember that Joey & the other opportunity to act out their transporting goods. Spoken Language 3/ Joey might have shared with horses cannot speak! scenes (e.g. a history exercise). Comprehension 2/ Composition 3 Albert. Composition 4 Spoken language 4/ Composition 5 Composition 5/ Transcription 2 Spoken language Objectives Pupils should be taught to: a. listen and respond appropriately e. express feelings d. articulate and justify opinions f. participate in collaborative conversations e. give well-structured explanations g. use spoken language to develop understanding Friday Read War Game by Michael Foreman to chn. Challenge chn to note down anything that they learn about WW1 from the book & also to list any words that they think should be added to the WW1 glossary. When you have finished the book give chn some time to talk about it in pairs. Then bring the class back together. Ask chn if they liked the book giving reasons. Explain how the story is based on actual games that took place - the Christmas Truce in 1914. Did everyone understand what had happened at the end? Point out that this story was told in the 3rd person. Look at the use of relative clauses (see resources). Discuss how a relative clause gives more information about a person, place, event or thing. Grammar 3/ Comprehension 3 Dimension Resources 3. Monday: Discuss WarHorse with others Chn talk through how the fact that the story is set in the first world war affects the story. How would it have made it harder for Morpurgo to write? Point out that the story is almost the story of WW1. None 4. Wednesday: Compare book and film versions As a class discuss the differences and similarities between part of the book and the same section in the film of WarHorse. Plenary: Ask chn why these changes had to be made. WarHorse DVD WarHorse by Michael Morpurgo © Original plan copyright Hamilton Trust, who give permission for it to be adapted as wished by individual users.Y5/6 Aut F Plan 1B Composition Grammar Transcription Comprehension Y5/6: Autumn Term Fiction: Plan 1B Historical stories Main texts: WarHorse by Michael Morpurgo & War Game by Michael Foreman Maintain positive attitudes to reading by: 2. Monday: Discuss a book they have read a. discussing a range of fiction Discuss the historical content of WarHorse and how the facts contribute to their understanding of the story. e. identifying and discussing themes Ensure chn see how important it is for authors of historical books to research information to underpin the story. Understand what they read by: 3. Friday: Make notes a. discussing their understanding and Chn make notes of facts about WW1 as they listen to War Game by Michael Foreman to help them understand the exploring meaning of words setting/context of the story. Also note any new words for the glossary. f. identify how language contributes Plenary: Share/discuss the facts about WW1 that chn noted. Add new words to the glossary and define together. Spelling Pupils should be taught to: 2. Thursday: Spelling test Give this test after chn have completed their playscripts. d. use knowledge of morphology and Dictate the words containing the letter-string ough given in the spelling lists last week to test chn. Have they etymology in spelling and understand that managed to use any of these words in their writing during this unit? the spelling of some words needs to be learnt specifically Develop their understanding of the 3. Friday: Relative clauses concepts set out in Appendix 2 by: Write ‘Some of them, who had cut their trousers into shorts during the hot weather, looked like fallen schoolboys.’ and ‘It was f. using relative clauses beginning mother who saved you.’ on f/c. Explain that both of these sentences contain relative clauses. Each relative clause is introduced with who, which, where, when, by a word which ‘relates’ the head noun, in these cases them (some soldiers) and mother. ‘Who’ is an example of a relative whose, that or with an implied (i.e. pronoun, others are whom, whose, which, that. Relative adverbs which can also begin relative clauses are: where & when omitted) relative pronoun (also why, while, whence, whereupon, etc.). Chn identify the relative clauses in a set of sentences (plan resources). Plenary: Discuss how the use of relative clauses can elaborate and add interest & details to a sentence. Plan their writing by: 3. Monday: Writing historical stories a. identifying the audience for and Tell chn that they are going to create a guide for writers of historical stories. They will work in pairs or larger groups for the purpose of the writing less able and use bullet points to list a set of points. Ask a few questions to set chn thinking. What were popular names in that Draft and write by: time period? What clothes did people wear? What sort of jobs/occupations did people have? What did they do in their leisure e. using further organisational time? What sort of homes did they live in? Plenary: Bring class together and ask for examples of points chn have written. Make devices [for example, bullet points] a class list of helpful points for chn to use in their writing. Display on working wall. Plan their writing by: a. identifying 4. Tuesday: Write a letter from Joey to Albert the audience for and purpose of Briefly discuss how a letter might be laid out (the address might be, e.g. the front line somewhere in France). Chn decide writing b. noting/developing initial when they think Joey might have written a letter & then think about the information he might have shared. He would want to ideas, drawing on reading reassure Albert that he was alright, but also describe his new friends, what had happened to him and how he felt. Chn need to Draft and write by: a. selecting use simple, compound & complex sentences for effect. appropriate vocabulary Plenary: Share some of chn’s letters. Have they used some suitable vocabulary, kept clear of any anachronisms, used historical b. describing settings, characters, etc. detail, etc? How would Albert have felt upon receiving the letter? Draft and write by: 5. Wednesday and Thursday: Convert part of WarHorse into a playscript a. selecting approp. Discuss with chn some suitable sections of the book that could be converted into a scene in a play (see resources). Sort out which group will grammar and cover which scene (try to ensure that each group tackles a different scene and that all scenes are allocated). Remind chn that the horses vocabulary cannot speak, but their handlers can be given stage directions. Discuss the layout of play scripts (see resources), including list of characters, e. using devices to description of setting, use of colons after character’s name, no speech marks, stage directions in italics and in brackets, etc. Chn work in small structure text and to groups to prepare their script. Dialogue from the book can be used. Explain that they will start writing on Wed & finish scripts on Thursday. guide the reader Plenary: Ask for feedback on progress with play scripts. Discuss with chn any props they need to bring in tomorrow to act out their scenes. © Original plan copyright Hamilton Trust, who give permission for it to be adapted as wished by individual users.Y5/6 Aut F Plan 1B WarHorse by Michael Morpurgo War Game by Michael Foreman Differentiated spelling list (see resources) Sentences containing relative clauses (see resources) None None Chapters for conversion to scenes (resources) Playscript features (see resources) Y5/6: Autumn Term Fiction: Plan 1B Historical stories Main texts: WarHorse by Michael Morpurgo & War Game by Michael Foreman Whole class teaching Wk 3 Monday Tuesday Wednesday Thursday Friday Remind chn of War Game by Michael Foreman. Go through the book again this time sharing the illustrations and the associated captions. Chn may add a few historical facts to the notes they took on Friday. The illustrations add to the information about WW1. Point out the Punch cartoon opposite the title page – war is described as a ‘greater game’ than football. Explain to chn that many members of professional football teams enlisted, some joining up with their team mates (see weblinks below & in WW1 Topic). Two battalions (17th and 23rd Service Battalions of the Middlesex Regiment) became known commonly as the Football Battalions because of the number of football players they included. Comprehension 4/ Spoken language 5 Reread the first page of the chapter called The Adventure in War Game. Emphasise the final sentence: They had a lot of explaining to do when they got home that evening. Tell chn that they are going to write a conversation that one of the four lads may have had with their family that evening. To prepare for this rehearse the punctuation used for dialogue (see plan resources). Point out that a full stop might be replaced by a question mark or an exclamation mark. Discuss using words other than ‘said’ to improve the writing, though sometimes the effect is obtained by adding an adverb or a phrase, e.g. “So once again the British Army has to go overseas and sort things out,” said the old men of the village grumpily. “I’d like to, said Billy, eyes shining with excitement. Grammar 4/ Composition 6 Read In Flanders Fields by Norman Jorgensen & Brian Harrison-Lever to chn, showing them the illustrations as you read. What do they notice about the illustrations? They are mostly grey and brown coloured. What stands out (the red of fires and the robin’s breast)? Turn to the final page with extract from the poem In Flanders Fields by John McCrae (and see resources). Establish that the red mirrors the red of the poppies. Briefly discuss the symbolism of poppies today. Discuss the similarities and differences between this book and War Game. Which did chn prefer? Why? How did the illustrations add to both stories? Can they add any further words to the glossary? Write soldier on f/c. Explain that this is a word that chn need to learn how to spell as it isn’t spelt how it sounds. Show chn other words that could be associated with WW1 that they should be able to spell (see plan resources). Comprehension 5/ Transcription 3 Read One Boy’s War by Lynn Huggins-Cooper & Ian Benfold Haywood to chn. Again show chn the illustrations as you read. How does this book compare to War Game & In Flanders Fields? Tell chn that they are going to write a description of the trenches of WW1 using the three books with their illustrations as inspiration. Take a virtual tour of a WW1 trench at http://www.3dhistoryvirtualt our.com/#!portfolio/cjg9 for further inspiration. Also read some first-hand experiences of soldiers together at http://www.historylearningsit e.co.uk/life_trenches.htm. Give chn the opportunity to discuss what they see & hear. Composition 7 Remind chn of the books they have read during this unit. Which did they enjoy the most? Why? Explain that they are going to write a review of their favourite book to encourage other chn to read it. Show chn the scaffold for writing a review and discuss what each section means/ requires. Explain that chn could use evidence from the text. Read the blurbs on each of the books including any quotes from reviews. Discuss how the language used is often very vivid and enthusiastic. Discuss why reviews are written and who reads them. Comprehension 7 Comprehension Spoken language Objectives j. gain and maintain interest of the listener(s) l. select and use appropriate register for effective communication f. participate in collaborative conversations i. participate in presentations Understand what they read by: a. asking questions to improve their understanding e. summarising the main ideas Retrieve, record and present information Dimension Resources 5. Monday: Prepare and give a short presentation Chn work in groups to find out about one aspect of football linked to WW1. They research, discuss & make notes and then prepare a short presentation to give to the rest of the class. Remind chn to speak clearly & slightly more slowly than normal and the face the audience when they are speaking. See Comprehension 4. Access to internet 4. Monday: Research enlisting of footballers during WW1 In groups, chn find out some information about one of the professional footballers who enlisted during WW1, e.g. Walter Tull, Frank Buckley; the Heart of Midlothian football team who joined together; the effect of the war on professional football; the Football Battalions (17th and 23rd Battalions, Middlesex Regiment), etc. Discuss the options – some chn may want to research a particular football team. What will chn be trying to find out? Note some suggested questions on f/c. Give chn time to research, make notes and prepare a short presentation. Plenary: Each group presents the information they discovered to the class. Tell chn that many ‘Pals Battalions’ were also formed, when men from the same village, town, factory, etc. joined up together. Access to internet © Original plan copyright Hamilton Trust, who give permission for it to be adapted as wished by individual users.Y5/6 Aut F Plan 1B Composition Grammar Word reading Transcription Y5/6: Autumn Term Fiction: Plan 1B Historical stories Main texts: WarHorse by Michael Morpurgo & War Game by Michael Foreman Maintain positive attitudes to reading by: 5/6. Wednesday/Thursday: Compare two/three books In Flanders Fields by Norman Jorgensen e. identifying and discussing themes across a range of writing Read In Flanders Field and One Boy’s War to chn and show them & Brian Harrison-Lever f. making comparisons across books the illustrations. Discuss and compare these two books with each One Boy’s War by Lynn Huggins-Cooper Understand what they read by: other and with War Game, looking for both similarities and & Ian Benfold Haywood f. identifying how language and presentation contribute to meaning differences. In Flanders Fields poem (see resources) Maintain positive attitudes to reading by: 7. Friday: Write a book review Book review scaffold (see resources) d. recommending books to their peers Use the scaffold or their own layout to write a review of their favourite WW1-based book. f. making comparisons across books Plenary: Ask if chn ever read any book reviews. How do they choose the books they read? Provide reasoned justifications for views Apply their growing knowledge to 3. Wednesday: Using and learning words from Years 5 and 6 word list Word lists understand the meaning of new words Show chn the list of 25 words taken from the Years 5 and 6 word list in English Appendix 1. All these words can easily be (see that they meet incorporated into a sentence about the people, settings and events of WW1. Challenge chn to choose 5 of the words and resources for Spelling Pupils should be taught to: use them each in a sentence that shows they understand the meaning of the word. More able chn can choose more, and differentiated lists) d. understand that the spelling of some less able chn choose from the shorter list. Chn can use a dictionary to check on the meaning of any of the words. Dictionaries words needs to be learnt specifically Plenary: Share some sentences chn have written. Then challenge chn to spell each of the words. Divide class into 6 Whiteboards e. use dictionaries to check meanings teams and see which team gains the most points. As you read a word out, chn in each group quietly discuss the spelling & write on w/b. On a given signal they hold up the w/b. Every team that has spelt it correctly gains a point. Handwriting Write legibly, fluently, with 4. Thursday: Use cursive handwriting None increasing speed by: Write their description as a final version using careful handwriting. See Composition 7. a. choosing which shape of a letter to use and deciding whether or not to join specific letters Indicate grammatical features by: 4. Tuesday: Punctuating dialogue Dialogue a. using commas to clarify meaning Rehearse with chn the punctuation used when writing dialogue (see plan resources). Remind them to use this knowledge Punctuation Use and understand the grammatical when writing their own dialogue. See Composition 6. Check List terminology in English Appendix 2 (resources) Plan their writing by: b. noting/developing initial ideas, drawing on reading Draft and write by: a. selecting grammar and vocabulary b. integrating dialogue to convey character and advance the action Evaluate and edit by: d. distinguishing between the language of speech & writing and choosing the register Draft and write by: a. selecting appropriate grammar and vocabulary b. describing settings 6. Tuesday: Write dialogue for character in story they have read Chn imagine they overheard the conversation that one of the 4 lads from the football team had with their family (madeup members, e.g. parents, brothers &/or sisters, grandparents, etc.) after they had enlisted. They write it down using the correction punctuation. Use informal language as it’s a family conversation. Any other names should be made-up, but think about the sort of names that were common then, e.g. see http://www.weddingvendors.com/babynames/popular/1914/. Chn who find this hard, work in pairs and create the dialogue to write together. When chn have finished writing they should find a response partner and give each other positive feedback about content and the punctuation/layout. Plenary: Volunteers read out their partner’s conversation. Is it historically correct? Access to internet 7. Thursday: Describe a setting Chn write a description of the trenches. The description can include the plight of the soldiers. Use both text and illustrations of the three books as inspiration. Challenge chn to use at least one relative clause in their description. Plenary: Volunteers read descriptions. Put descriptions on display round a picture of poppies and a copy of In Flanders Fields. © Original plan copyright Hamilton Trust, who give permission for it to be adapted as wished by individual users.Y5/6 Aut F Plan 1B None Y5/6: Autumn Term Fiction: Plan 1B Historical stories Main texts: WarHorse by Michael Morpurgo & War Game by Michael Foreman Books: WarHorse by Michael Morpurgo, Egmont Press, ISBN: 9781405226660/ 9781857930696 War Game by Michael Foreman, Paviliion, ISBN: 9781857930696 In Flanders Fields by Norman Jorgensen & Brian Harrison-Lever, Freemantle Press, ISBN: 9781920731038 One Boy’s War by Lynn Huggins-Cooper & Ian Benfold Haywood, Frances Lincoln, ISBN: 9781847801265 Other WW1 historical stories that you might like to read to your class: Private peaceful by Michael Morpurgo, HarperCollins, ISBN: 9780007150076 Soldier Dog by Sam Angus, Macmillan, ISBN: 9781447220053 Soldier’s Game by James Killgore, Kelpies, ISBN: 9780863158384 DVD: WarHorse directed by Steven Spielberg, 2011, ASIN: B004NBY2GU Websites: http://michaelmorpurgo.com/books/war-horse Excerpt from Chapter 6 of WarHorse http://www.warhorseonstage.com/#videos Clips of the puppet horses in the play of WarHorse http://www.warhorseonstage.com/#artistry The adaptation of the WarHorse story for the stage http://www.nationaltheatre.org.uk/discover-more/digital-classroom/horse-power Useful education materials available for WarHorse including synopses of the book and the play that could be compared and a fantastic interactive map (opens in Firefox if you have problems with IE) http://www.cwgc.org/glorydays/halloffame_ww1.html Football players who died serving during WW1 http://spartacus-educational.com/FWWfootball.htm Details of football players joining the armed forces http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Association_football_during_World_War_I General information about professional football during WW1 http://www.bbc.co.uk/schools/0/ww1/25403975 Story of Walter Tull, football player http://www.3dhistoryvirtualtour.com/#!portfolio/cjg9 Interactive trench tour https://gbt01.wordpress.com/2011/02/23/the-footballers-memorial-at-longueval/ Footballer’s Memorial at Longueval plus lots of background information http://spartacus-educational.com/WOLVESbuckley.htm Frank Buckley, football player and manager http://www.weddingvendors.com/baby-names/popular/1914/ 100 most popular baby names in 1914 The links to the websites and the contents of the web pages associated with such links specified on this list (hereafter collectively referred to as the ‘Links’) have been checked by Hamilton Trust (being the operating name of the registered charity, William Rowan Hamilton Trust) and to the best of Hamilton Trust’s knowledge, are correct and accurate at the time of publication. Notwithstanding the foregoing or any other terms and conditions on the Hamilton Trust website, you acknowledge that Hamilton Trust has no control over such Links and indeed, the owners of such Links may have removed such Links, changed such Links and/or contents associated with such Links. Therefore, it is your sole responsibility to verify any of the Links which you wish you use. Hamilton Trust excludes all responsibility and liability for any loss or damage arising from the use of any Links. © Original plan copyright Hamilton Trust, who give permission for it to be adapted as wished by individual users.Y5/6 Aut F Plan 1B Y5/6: Autumn Term Fiction: Plan 1B Historical stories Main texts: WarHorse by Michael Morpurgo & War Game by Michael Foreman Outcomes Monday 1. Read the blurb and Author’s Note of a book. 2. Listen to the opening chapter of a story read by an adult. 3. In a group, read & discuss two chapters of a book. 4. Answer comprehension questions. 5. Summarise a chapter. 1. Compare the ending of the story with their prediction. 2. Discuss anachronisms in historical stories. 3. Create guidelines for an author of historical stories. 1. Discuss how the illustrations can enhance a book. 2. Recognise that facts can be gleaned from the illustrations in a historical story. 3. Research historical facts related to the story. 4. Make notes and use them to prepare a presentation in a group. Wednesday Thursday 1.Identify different types of sentences: simple, compound & complex. 2. Recognise that sentences contain one or more clauses. 3. List co-ordinating conjunctions that join main clauses. 4. List subordinating conjunctions that link subordinate clauses to main clauses. 1. Begin compiling a glossary of terms used in that historical period. 2. Understand that specific vocabulary is required for writing historical stories. 3. Write a letter in role as one of the characters. Tuesday 1. Retell part of a story. 2. Investigate the use of commas in sentences. 3. Identify the function of commas in sentences. 1. Compare a book with the play and the film of the book. 2. Rehearse the features of play scripts. 3. Convert a chapter from a book into a play script for a scene. 1. List the main characters met in a book. 2. Explain that the letter-string ough can be used to spell a number of different sounds. 3. Identify words containing the letter-string ough that have the same sound. 4. Write a description of a character. 1. Understand the features of play scripts and use in own writing. 2. Convert a chapter from a book into a play script for a scene. 3. Spell words containing the letter-string ough. 1. Rehearse the punctuation of dialogue. 2. Write dialogue for a character from a story they have read. 3. Recognise that verbs other than ‘said’ can be used in dialogue. 4. Use adverbs or phrases to modify ‘said’. 1. Compare two short stories on a similar theme. 2. Understand how illustrations can enhance a story. 3. Add further words to the glossary. 4. Use and learn to spell words from Years 5 & 6 word list (Appendix 1). 1. Compare another short story on a similar theme. 2. Understand that the style of illustrations can create different effects. 3. Use the short stories as inspiration for a description of a setting. 4. Use cursive handwriting. © Original plan copyright Hamilton Trust, who give permission for it to be adapted as wished by individual users.Y5/6 Aut F Plan 1B Friday 1. Understand that facts can be learnt from a fiction book. 2. Discuss & predict orally what will happen next in a story. 3. Write a prediction of what will happen next. 1. Listen to a short historical story. 2. Add further words to the glossary. 3. Understand that relative clauses can be used to elaborate sentences. 4. List some relative pronouns and relative adverbs that can be used to start a relative clause. 5. Understand that the relative pronoun can be omitted from a sentence but is understood. 1. Choose their favourite from different books on a similar theme. 2. Know why book reviews are written and who reads them. 3. Give an opinion about their favourite book in the form of a review.