Nominalisation- nurries, nek minit your writing will be g! Changing verbs to nouns 1. By changing the end of the verb form eg: discuss to discussion, arrange to arrangement 2. By adding ing to the verb eg: act to acting Some verbs can be used as nouns without any change eg: a visit, a struggle etc Changing conjunctions to nouns 1. Conjunctions are commonly used to represent a cause eg: Year 9 don’t like Miss DeCourcy because she is annoying. We can change this to a noun by adding in a cause word eg: Year 9’s reason for not liking Miss DeCourcy is the fact that she’s annoying. 2. Conjunctions are commonly used to compare eg: Gilroy is a big school but Oakhill is bigger. We can change this to a noun by adding in a distinction eg: One difference between Gilroy and Oakhill is their size. Changing adjectives to nouns 1. By changing the adjective into the noun form eg: expensive to expense, unstable to instability, tense to tension eg: It was tense in the room. This can be changed to include a noun form. eg: There was a feeling of tension around the room. How to nominalise If the State Government didn't exist there wouldn't be anyone to look after the schools and people would fight and destroy property everyday. 1. What is topic a. State Government 2. What about topic a. Role in the community 3. Identify verbs/conjunctions a. Fight and destroy 4. Turn into nouns a. Fights and destruction of property 5. Cleaning up unsophisticated phrases eg: what’s a better way of saying a. “If state government didn’t exist” “Without the State Government” b. “Everyday” “Commonly occur” Original: When people clear land for houses and roads they change the environment. They destroy the forest and bushland and then many animals lose their homes. More houses and roads will pollute the environment even more. Some animals become extinct because their homes have been destroyed. Nominalised: Clearing and development of land often results in the destruction of the natural habitat of many local species. It may also increase the level of pollution. Loss of habitat has already led to the extinction of many species of animals. General comments from task: ending/terminating/killing- terminate, discontinue aborting/killing - abort killing- euthanising (if Euthanasia) When you phrases like ‘many people OR a lot of people OR people around the world’ you are communicating an understanding of volume as being significant. Instead of using many or a lot use phrases such as “a significant majority of the population”. Population not people, significant majority not many. Word changes o Use significant rather than large or enormous o Use demonstrates or illustrates rather than shows EXAMPLES Original Nominalised Lately there has been an enormous argument about the topic “Euthanasia“, it has been brought to my interest because many say that Euthanasia is wrong and some people think its right. In recent times, the debate about Euthanasia has been significant as there are opposing opinions. Factors that affect couples chances of IVF working and helping someone fall pregnant include: Factors affecting the success rate of IVF include: This issue causes much ethical debate amongst medical professionals and religious groups as it challenges many parts of the value of human dignity. The issue is the source of much ethical debate amongst medical professionals and religious groups as it challenges the value of human dignity. Its unfair so it’s only right that some of them would not want to go on living like this. The unfairness of the situation makes one question the likelihood of the individual to desire living. Euthanasia gives family or friends of the deceased some comfort knowing their loved one did not suffer any more than they already was or were going to. Euthanasia grants, family and friends, comfort with the knowledge that their loved ones did not experience any pain or suffering. Original Nominalised When the baby is born and it grows up this could have negative feelings towards to child, growing up without a father and having your mum play both roles would be a really rough time and cause mental problems to the child. Single parent households have the potential to impact on the mental health of the child, particularly with regards to the role of the mother and father figures.