1 5th Grade - Poetry Unit Making Words our Brush and Palette Name______________________ 1 2 Unit Breakdown The poetry unit is broken into four bends 1) Immersion into Poetry This bend exposes students to a variety of poems and teaches students a number of different poetic elements Time: Approx. 5-7 hrs. of instruction time + 3 hrs. of H/W 2) Interpretation of Figurative language This bend exposes students to a variety of different types of figurative language. Students learn how to write poetry using figurative language and interpret the meaning of figurative language. Time: Approx. 5-7 hrs. of instruction time + 3 hrs. of H/W 3) Interpretation of Poetry This bend introduces students to the concept of the message behind poems. It does so in a none threatening way by using popular music laced with poetry. Students also learn a system for interpreting poetry (P.O.E.T.R.Y.) Time: Approx. 2 hrs. of instruction time + 1 hr of H/W 4) Reasons for Writing poetry This bend exposes students to the doors of poetry. It shows students the reasons we write poetry and its impact on the world. Time: Approx. 5-7 hrs. of instruction time + 3 hrs. of H/W Overall – approx. 4 weeks of reading and writing class should be devoted to this unit. Students will complete their only anthology of poems and place them into a booklet similar to the examples shown 2 3 Session 1 Defining Poetry & The Poetic Heart In this first session, students learn that poetry comes from the heart. 1) Begin a discussion around these questions: Define the term ‘poetry’ What makes poetry different from prose? What do you like/dislike about poetry? 2) Show students this clip from “Dead Poets Society” – Understanding Poetry http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tmayC2AdkNw Reiterate to students – “The powerful play of life goes on and that they may contribute a verse – What will their verse be?” 3) Set up your writer’s notebook for your poetry Set up a page in your Writers’ Notebook for poem ideas Set up a page in your Notebook for poetic words and phrases 4) Tell students that great poetry comes from the heart and if they are going to be great poets, they need to be open their hearts Ideas adapted from Georgia Herd’s Book “Awakening the Heart” Students are expected to brainstorm around these themes: • What has really affected your heart? • What people have been important to you? • What are some experiences or central events you'll never forget? • What happy or sad memories do you have? • What secrets have you kept in your heart? • What small things or objects are important to you? Students are then given a blank template of a heart that they use to create a collage of pictures, images, notes, photos, and drawing of their poetic heart Students can then write a poem once their heart is completed 3 4 Resource for Session 1 My Poetic Heart 4 5 Session 2 Immersion into Poetry: SEE THNK WONDER Today, you will get your students to see the beauty of poetry as well as beginning to list some of the most common poetic elements Model first with – 1) the painting 2) the poem – In Flanders Field a) Reading For Meaning What they see, think, wonder as they read the poems Memorable words and ideas Images that they see in the poems Thoughts they have as they read Show students the youtube interpretation of the poem. (link on powerpoint) How were their notes similar/different? http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6e4jqTF6aks Have your students browse through an assortment of poetry books that you have checked out from your school library. As the students read the poems have them write down in their notebooks ideas from list a) above 5 6 Session 3: Characteristics of Effective Poetry Ask the students to read in Flanders Field again. This time have them list the poetic elements they see in the poem Now ask your students to look for poetic elements in poems they read. They can use stick notes or write a list in their writers notebooks Title/author Journey Organization – Beg/middle/End Word Choice Stanzas Balance 3 Rs Poetic Devices Punctuation White Space and line breaks Rule follower or Rule Breaker? Share as a class Conclude by telling students that effective poems contain both elements from yesterday’s lesson and from today’s Poems always have a purpose and poems are use poetic elements to make them different from other writing genres Have your students browse through an assortment of poetry books that you have checked out from your school library. As the students read the poems have them write down in their notebooks ideas from A and B 6 7 Resource for Session 2 + 3 In Flanders Fields by John McCrae, May 1915 In Flanders fields the poppies blow Between the crosses, row on row, That mark our place; and in the sky The larks, still bravely singing, fly Scarce heard amid the guns below. We are the Dead. Short days ago We lived, felt dawn, saw sunset glow, Loved and were loved, and now we lie In Flanders fields. Take up our quarrel with the foe: To you from failing hands we throw The torch; be yours to hold it high. If ye break faith with us who die We shall not sleep, though poppies grow In Flanders fields. 7 8 Read the following examples of Metaphor Poems – write a metaphor poem about your family following the examples below. Metaphor for a Family My family lives inside a medicine chest: Dad is the super-size band aid, strong and powerful but not always effective in a crisis. Mom is the middle-size tweezer, which picks and pokes and pinches. David is the single small aspirin on the third shelf, sometimes ignored. Muffin, the sheep dog, is a round cotton ball, stained and dirty, that pops off the shelf and bounces in my way as I open the door. And I am the wood and glue which hold us all together with my love. Fifth of July My family is an expired firecracker set off by the blowtorch of divorce. We lay scattered in many directions. My father is the wick, badly burnt but still glowing softly. My mother is the blackened paper fluttering down, blowing this way and that, unsure where to land. My sister is the fallen, colorful parachute, lying in a tangled knot, unable to see the beauty she holds. My brother is the fresh, untouched powder that was protected from the flame. And I, I am the singed, outside papers, curled away from everything, silently cursing the blowtorch. _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________ 8 9 Session 4 Word Choice – Kennings Poem The purpose of doing a session like this so early in a poetry unit is to push from the onset the importance of precise word choice. 1) Define the concept: Kennings Poetry A kenning is a much-compressed form of metaphor, originally used in Anglo-Saxon and Norse poetry. In a kenning, an object is described in a two-word phrase, such as 'whaleroad' for 'sea'. Some kennings can be more obscure than others, and then grow close to being a riddle. 2) Model for students the steps of how to create a kennings poem with teacher i) write the word teacher in the middle of a whiteboard ii) write all the roles of a teacher iii) model for students how the content can be switched into Kennings format e.g. grades papers = paper grader teaches students = learner facilitator writes lesson plans = lesson plan creator Stress the importance of not repeating any vocabulary words and being as descriptive as possible Have students select a person or occupation and begin brainstorming ideas about that describe the person/topic \ Resources: Session 4 9 10 Kennings Read each of the Kennings Poems below. Guess the topic. a. _________________ Nose wiper, bottom swiper, peacemaker, morning waker, food provider, task collider, lie detector, nagging heckler. "No" repeater, morals preacher, bedroom tidier, taxi driver, chore finder, chore reminder, cuddly soother, household hooverer. Fun wrecker, homework checker, Manners monitor, always on at ya, Love radiator, family mediator, "never too old for hugs" articulator. Sharon Rodd b. ______________________ Meter-ruler After-schooler Slave of the state Not your mate Name-shouter Homework-touter Queue-dodger Resource-blodger Chief grammarian Sous librarian Mark-maker Register-taker Parent-meeter Donut-eater Language-tinker Coffee-drinker Spell-checker Playtime-wrecker Whiteboard-writer c.____________________ Egg layer Insect betrayer People scarer Trap preparer Silent creeper Death reaper Meal storer Fly adorer Duster hater Web creator Corner hider Choose a topic that you know a lot about and create your first kennings poem. Min 16 lines. You CANNOT repeat any words at all Session 5: Where do poems hide? 10 11 In this session students will learn that they can find poetry all around them. They are introduced to the idea that if they look at everyday objects much closer, they can find poetry. 1) Select an everyday object and have students in tables write detailed descriptions bullet point descriptions about the object. 2) Have students read poems titled – where do poems hide (teacher can choose to remove titles of poems and see if they can guess what the poem is about) 3) Have students turn their notes into poetry about the everyday objects OR 1) Take students on a tour of the school and get them to try looking at everyday objects differently. 2) Students take detailed notes of their objects e.g. elevator – water fountain – stairs 3) Have students read poems titled – where do poems hide 4) Have students turn their notes into poetry about the everyday objects Resources for session 5 11 12 The Pencil Sharpener I think there are a hundred bees inside the pencil sharpener and they buzz and buzz until my point is sharp! --Zoe Ryder White safety pin Closed, it sleeps On its side Quietly, The silver Image Of some Small fish; Opened, it snaps Its tail out Like a thin Shrimp, and looks At the sharp Point with a Surprised eye. Session 6 Interpreting Figurative Language 12 13 This bend introduces students to the figurative language bend. 1) Begin the session by showing the brainpop video on Figurative language http://www.brainpop.com/english/writing/similesandmetaphors/ 2) Have students read and discuss the poem ‘ Icicles’ – with respect to figurative language 3) Have students search for figurative language in their poetry books around the classroom. Have up x4 pieces of large construction paper titled SIMILE METAPHOR PERSONIFICATION NOT SURE As students find fig. lang in their poems, they go and write them on the large construction paper. Students can also write what they think the language means. 4) Divide the class into four ability groups. Give each group a piece of chart paper. Have the groups discuss the chart paper entries and change as needed. 5) Have groups share findings to the class e.g. good/bad entries H/W IMPORTANT Each night this week, students should be given as h/w the poem – Invictus Night 1 What does this poem make you feel? Listen to the sounds and the meaning of the words, what words stand out to you? Does the poem remind you of anything in your own life? What pictures do you see in your mind? Night 2 Draw or paint a picture of the images of the poem in your mind. You can illustrate the poem on a single sheet of paper. Night 3 Home Learning Tonight: for tomorrow, bring in a letter, a photograph, an object, another poem, a book, a song, or anything that will help you connect to the poem. Night 4 Write a call and response poem for this; in other words, a poem for two voices. It is important that students do not see tasks for subsequent nights until the night. End the week by showing the students this video from the movie INVICTUS http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FozhZHuAcCs 13 14 Tell students that Timmy McVey used this poem as motivation for bombing the Oklahoma buidling Message – ‘Poetry is what you get out of it’ Session 6 – H/W Material Invictus Out of the night that covers me, Black as the Pit from pole to pole, I thank whatever gods may be For my unconquerable soul. In the fell clutch of circumstance I have not winced nor cried aloud. Under the bludgeoning of chance My head is bloody, but unbowed. Beyond this place of wrath and tears Looms but the Horror of the shade, And yet the menace of the years Finds, and shall find, me unafraid. It matters not how strait the gate, How charged with punishments the scroll, I am the master of my fate: I am the captain of my soul. 14 15 Session 6 Resources 15 16 Session 7: Personification Walk A) Tell Students We are going on a walk – to the lobby. Write down five things you notice – (i.e. the clouds, sky, leaves, grass, wind, and so on). Choose one and make a list of at least five ways your subject seems human or animal-like. Example: Trees = Giant hands reaching towards the sky. B) Share the poem -The Beach – with the class C) When students return to the class, have them work in small groups and combine their observations work into a poem. 16 17 Session 7 Resources The Beach On my first trip to the beach The sea refused to cooperate. It kept curling and whirling bobbing and weaving clearing its throat whenever a wave drew back. It kept moving and grooving shucking and jiving dishing and dancing razzling and dazzling wouldn’t keep still even long enough to shake hands. Session 8 Spinning Similes 17 18 This lesson is the first of two that really helps students develop their understanding of figurative language Show this quick 30 sec youtube clip http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eg9zNhGiZIk or http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vSet1j_fFCY Tell students that the spinning similes technique makes that you find more than one simile to describe the topic using the same nouns e.g. He traveled a fast as a horse As swift as an eagle Like a bullet Cruising through the sky Have students identify the similes in the stanza and make sure they see how they all relate back to how fast the man travelled. Give students a choice of similes to spin from the list on the powerpoint in groups Session 9 Extended Metaphor Tell students that metaphors are often ‘carried’ through a piece of writing or poetry. 1) Share the poems with students that show an extended metaphor 2) Walk the students through the powerpoint slide on how to create an extended metaphor i) Begin with a metaphor – Her voice was a river ii) show students the list of words that are associated with voice and then with river (on ppoint) iii) Show students how to match up words from both categories (on ppoint) 3) Show the students the finished poem Next powerpoint slide Tell students to select one metaphor from the list and work in pairs to create an extended metaphor. Remind students to identify the two key noouns in the metaphor first and brainstorm categories around those nouns IMPORTANT – Tell your students to bring in a piece of fruit for the next lesson 18 19 Session 10: Inside/Outside Poem This is a fabulous idea for a lesson that students really enjoy. It involves describing a piece of fruit using figurative language (on the outside first) – then cutting it in half and describing it on the inside. Directions (The power point slides take the students through the poem one step at a time. It is important that they only do one line at a time using the categories given on the power point. Knowing Yourself An Outside/Inside Poem Outside. Write a line of poetry that describes the following aspects of your fruit. e.g. Color It is red orange and green NO! It is the shades of fall day YES Color Texture Scent Size Shape Inside Now do the same for the inside of your fruit. (Cut it in half) Color Texture Scent Size Shape Taste Do necessary changes to each line and write a title for your poem H/W Task Write an inside/outside poem that contrasts how others see you (outside) to how you see yourself (inside). You the same format practiced above. – or use a different format if you choose You will have to come up with your own categories (Minimum x6 categories) e.g. Appearance Personality etc 19 20 Session 11 – Interpretation of Poetry In this bend students are introduced to a song (it is presented as a poem first) 1) Have students select their favorite line of the poem (song) ask them why. 2) Walk them through the powerpoint slide directions – Each time telling them to look at the poem in this way. 3) Tell students that the directions are actually a mnemonic P.O.E.T.R.Y and that this is what they should use when responding to a poem. 4) Show students this video of the song (WARNING – this song deals with the topic of losing a parent) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sWjtz4V87Vo 5) Tell students that great music contains poetry. Their h/w task is to choose a song (tell them they MUST work with their parents on this) and write an interpretation of the song. Students should present their songs to the class. Advice is to spread this out over a number of future lessons. See examples of work form other students http://www.screenr.com/HKis http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P6UVhZTTWb0 20 21 Session 11 Resources Session 11 Resources 21 22 The Living Years Every generationBlames the one before And all of their frustrations. Come beating on your door I know that Im a prisoner. To all my father held so dear I know that Im a hostage. To all his hopes and fears I just wish I could have told him in the living years Crumpled bits of paper. Filled with imperfect thought Stilted conversations. I’ m afraid thats all weve got You say you just dont see it. He says its perfect sense You just cant get agreement. In this present tense We all talk a different language. Talking in defence Say it loud, say it clear. You can listen as well as you hear Its too late when we die To admit we dont see eye to eye So we open up a quarrel. Between the present and the past We only sacrifice the future.Its the bitterness that lasts So dont yield to the fortunes. You sometimes see as fate It may have a new perspective.On a different day And if you dont give up, and dont give in You may just be o.k. Say it loud, say it clear You can listen as well as you hear Its too late when we die To admit we dont see eye to eye I wasnt there that morning When my father left that day I didnt get to tell him. All the things I had to say I think I caught his spirit. Later that same year Im sure I heard his echo. In my babys new born tears I just wish I could have told him in the living years 22 23 Session 12 and 13 These sessions teachers can do multiple poems or give students choices to choose one/two of the doors to write about. Walk students through the concept that there are doors of poetry. If look inside these doors, we can truly pull out our best poems we Share with students poems from the different doors. Have students select a poem or two from different doors to write about. Below are two wonderful options for the doors OPTION 1Memories Door – Students could write a narrative poem about a world event. (see example from below) Model for students how to change prose into poetry using the Anne Frank text. Left Side - Prose Right side – Prose turned into poetic ideas Have students read the poems titled –Narrative Poetry below. Can they guess the world event? Have student write a narrative poem about a world event they know well. Tell students that they will have to perform the poem using hand motions to the class. OPTION 2 Concerns about the world poetry Tell students that slam poets show their concerns about the world using this technique. Show these examples What do teachers Make http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fuBmSbiVXo0 Have students write a slam on a world topic that makes them really angry 23 24 Session 12 Resources Narrative Performance Poetry 5th Can you identify the historical events that these poems describe? 1. Night twinkling over Boiling men dressed in scars Marching like soldiers All ready to strike Wooden oars hitting water Piercing Tomahawks about to slaughter Tax being tipped King Henry can’t bear Scolding of tea splashing water Roaring of tax haters Cool air, brushes by Everyone replies a chattering cry Next morning tea floats So they ride out on boats Hitting the beverage There’s now no float age Taxes have sunken Event___________ 2. Like a takeoff launched the “Roaring Twenties” Finding a bad deal like looking for pennies This time stocks flew Buying a stock like something new Trouble as heavy as rocks Using credit like flying into fire Because soon the cost would be dire In the clouds sat faith in stocks Before long trouble as heavy as rocks Stores’ doors became shut Conditions now like a shabby hut Stocks must switch hands Worry and fear like noisy bands Trouble as heavy as rocks Mt. St. Helens as horrible as the crash Wall Street came down like Pompeii’s ash Great Depression began here Soon normal life would disappear Trouble as heavy as rocks Event__________ Event___________ 24 25 Session 14 Celebration: Cookies and Cream Poetry Party or Poetry Café It is important that the unit is closed in a celebratory fashion. Students should be encouraged to memorize at least two of their poems. Some teachers use the poetry café format. My personal choice is for a ‘dinner party’ type set up where students eat ice-cream and cookies and read their poems. 25