LANGUAGE ANALYSIS AUDIENCE Consider: What audience is the article written for? How would the audience that the article is written for influence the writer’s use of language? e.g. An article on genetic modification of apple crops, written for an audience of scientists, would be written in much more formal, scientific language than if the audience was everyday supermarket shoppers. e.g. An opinion piece supporting euthanasia for the terminally ill, written for the Australian Euthanasia Society, would use science, logic, reason and evidence, while a similar piece in the HeraldSun, which relies on an audience of mainly working-class Victorians, would rely more on personal anecdotes and stories to make its point. During your analysis, comment on how the persuasive techniques are suited to the particular chosen audience that the article is written for. Include how visuals (photographs, cartoons, etc) are used in the article and what appeal they have for the nominated audience. Be aware of the different audiences who are attracted to the tabloid Herald Sun, considerably different to the audience who read the broadsheet The Age. LINKING WORDS Use linking words to indicate: A new point similar to the previous one A new point different, or contrasting, to the previous one A conclusion, or summing up A complete change of topic A NEW POINT – SIMILAR In addition Similarly Likewise Moreover Furthermore On top of this Added to this First of all, second, third LINKING WORDS AND PHRASES A NEW POINT – DIFFERENT Conversely On the contrary However In contrast In spite of (this) On the other hand Meanwhile At the same time Yet Nevertheless Although Despite (this) 1 CONCLUSION – SUMMING UP As a result therefore For this reason hence finally consequently thus In conclusion Linking words used by a journalist in an article will make an argument seem more convincing. They are very important to the structure and flow-on of both your own writing and newspaper articles. Make sure that you: Identify them in opinion articles, letters and editorials as adding to the strength of the argument being developed Use them in your own analysis to strengthen and link your own ideas STRUCTURE OF YOUR ANALYSIS What should your language analysis look like? There is some very good information in your English textbook, pg. 188 and 190-191, to help you set out your analysis. Below is a model that you can also use to help you write your analysis of one or more articles. Introduction – Paragraph 1 In a . . . titled . . . written by . . . and published in the . . . . on . . . . , the issue of . . . . is discussed. In a largely . . . tone, . . . . contends that . . . . Written for an audience of . . . and . . ., the article is couched in an. . . . . style that influences the reader to . . . . . . Paragraph 2 – The writer introduces a personal anecdote early in the article to give the Anecdotes/Stories, impression that he . . . (Give example of anecdote) This creates an emotional Inclusive language response in the reader that . . .and is effective because . . . Furthermore, the deliberate use of inclusive language such as . . . and . . . following the personal anecdote create an impression that . . . . and make the reader want to believe in . . . . Paragraph 3 – Facts/statistics In an attempt to appear rational and factual, the writer quotes statistics from the latest . . . to support his contention. The examples used add weight to . . . and make his argument more compelling by . . . However, this evidence is limited in that . . Paragraph 4 – Following the use of statistical evidence, in a change of tone from moderate to Colourful and . . ., the writer introduces several emotional and colourful words and phrases emotional that are designed to . . . Words such as. . . convey . . . and serve to . . . By language deliberately using language such as this, the writer effectively . . . Paragraph 5 – Similarly, writing in an outraged tone, the author questions the funding of . . . . Appeal to the hip- and gives estimates of . . . He then directly links these estimates with public pocket nerve money such as . . . The effect of this on the reader is to . . . Paragraph 6 – The writer moderates his tone when he uses repetition, notably of the words . . Repetition and . . and the quote from . . . to emphasise his point that . . . This creates a more . alliteration . . tone in the article, which, coupled with the alliteration of . . . in the repeated words, creates an insistent impression that . . . Paragraph 7 – Following on from his emphatic repetition, the writer concludes the article with Rhetorical the use of two rhetorical questions, which raise . . . . The self-evident answers questions and position the reader to agree with . . . . and have the effect of . . . . , leaving conclusion little doubt in the uncritical reader’s mind and creating a resounding sense of closure. Never express your own opinion about the contention in any way. 2 3