Summer Reading Projects Wilmington Middle School Grades 6, 7, & 8 Diary / Blog 4 Complete 5 entries of 100-200 words each. Content Each entry tells of an important event in the character’s life and how he/she is feeling. No information is given that the character would not have known. Sentences and paragraphs are complete, wellconstructed, and of varied structure. Sentences & Paragraphs Voice Entries sound entirely like they could have been written by the character. Each entry uses the first person. Conventions (Grammar / Spelling) Writer makes none or almost no errors in grammar, punctuation, or spelling. Entries were clearly proofread. Format Blog: Entries are accurately dated and posted online in an easy-to-understand blogging format Paper: All entries are typed, accurately dated, and bound to look like a diary. Presentation Effort was clearly put into designing blog or diary that looks like it was made by the character. (Blog: background images, fonts, etc.; Paper: bound, looks old, etc.) Total: _______ / 28 = 3 2 4 entries of 100-200 words each OR 5 entries, but some are not 100-200 words. Each entry of an important event in the character’s life and how he/she is feeling. Some information is given that the character should not have known. All sentences are complete and wellstructured for the particular character. Paragraphing is generally done well. Entries typically sound like they could have been written by the character, but there are occasional lapses. One entry accidentally uses the third person. 3 entries of 100-200 words each OR 4-5 entries, but most are not 100-200 words. 1 entry is not about an important event in the story, or some entries do not include the character’s emotional reaction to the event. 2 or less entries of 100200 words each OR none of the entries are the correct length. 2 or more entries are not about important events. No entries say how the character is feeling. Most sentences are complete and wellconstructed. Paragraphing needs some work. Many sentence fragments or run-on sentences OR paragraphing needs lots of work. Entries occasionally sound like they could have been written the character, but often have the student’s voice. More than one entry accidentally uses the third person. Writer makes quite a few errors in grammar, punctuation, and/or spelling that make some sentences confusing. Attempts to date entries accurately have been made, but some dates don’t make sense OR all entries are dated, but significant time jumps are made within an entry that don’t make sense. Entries sound like the student, not the character, or they are mostly written in the third person, not first person. More effort could have been put into making the blog or diary look like it was made by a specific character, but there are some customizations. Blog or diary look generic. Blog is plain with no background images, or diary is printed on plain white paper and only bound with a staple. Writer makes a couple errors in grammar, punctuation, and/or spelling, but errors do not take away from the reader’s understanding. Blog: Entries are accurately dated and posted online, but the format might be difficult to understand (out of order) Paper: All entries are typed and accurately dated, but not bound to look like a diary. Some effort was put into designing blog (background images, fonts, etc.) or diary to look like a character had really made it. 1 Amount of errors in spelling, grammar, and punctuation make most of the writing difficult to understand. Entries are not dated. Summer Reading Projects Wilmington Middle School Grades 6, 7, & 8 Alternate Ending 2 1 There is one clear, wellfocused topic. Main idea stands out and is supported by detailed, descriptive information. The pacing is wellcontrolled. The writer knows when to slow down and elaborate, and when to pick up the pace and move on. 4 Main idea is clear, but the supporting information is general. Main idea is somewhat clear, but there is a need for more supporting information. The pacing is generally well-controlled, but the writer occasionally does not elaborate enough. Sentence Fluency (Flow and Rhythm) All sentences sound natural and are easyon-the-ear when read aloud. Each sentence is clear and has an obvious emphasis. Word Choice Writer uses vivid words and phrases that linger or draw pictures in the reader’s mind, and placement of the words seems accurate, natural, and not forced. Almost all sentences sound natural and are easy-on-the-ear when read aloud, but a couple are stiff and awkward or difficult to understand. Writer uses vivid words and phrases that linger or draw pictures in the reader’s mind, but occasionally the words are used inaccurately or seem overdone. The pacing is generally well-controlled, but the writer sometimes repeats the same point over and over, or spends too much time on details that don’t matter. Most sentences sound natural and are easyon-the-ear when read aloud, but several are stiff and awkward or are difficult to understand. Writer uses words that communicate clearly, but the writing lacks variety, punch, or flair. The main idea is not clear. There is a seemingly random collection of information. The pacing often feels awkward to the reader. The writer elaborates when there is little need, and then leaves out necessary supporting information. Voice (Personality) The new ending reads like it was written by the book’s author. All of the characters keep their personalities in dialogue. The writer’s own flair for language is shown. 0-1 errors in spelling, grammar, or punctuation. Clearly proofread for mistakes. The new ending sounds like it could have been written by the book’s author. Most dialogue fits with the characters’ personalities. The new ending sounds similar to the style of the book’s author. The writer may not have included dialogue to show characters’ personalities. A couple errors in spelling, grammar, or punctuation. Multiple errors in spelling, grammar, or punctuation. May not have been proofread. Paragraph explains how your ending is different from the original, and why you chose to change it in this manner. Writing is detailed and complete. 8-10 dynamic sentences, typed. Paragraph explains how your ending is different from the original, and why you chose to change it. 8-10 sentences, typed. Paragraph explains how your ending is different from the original. 4-7 sentences OR not typed. Focus on Topic (Content) Organization Conventions (Grammar / Spelling) Explanation of Writing (Paragraph) Total: _______ / 28 = 3 The sentences are difficult to read aloud because they sound awkward, are distractingly repetitive, or difficult to understand. Writer uses a limited vocabulary that does not communicate strongly or capture the reader’s interest. Jargon or clichés may be present and detract from the meaning. The new ending doesn’t sound authentic to the way the book was written. The way the characters sound doesn’t fit with how they were represented in the original book. Amount of errors in spelling, grammar, or punctuation make the writing difficult to understand. Paragraph does not explain any changes to the original ending OR it is 0-3 sentences OR not typed. Summer Reading Projects Wilmington Middle School Grades 6, 7, & 8 Diorama 3 2 1 Complete All characters and scenery from the scene in the text are represented in the diorama. The diorama is a specific scene and not just a setting. 4 All characters and most scenery from the scene in the text are represented in the diorama. The diorama is a specific scene and not just a setting. Several characters and/or a lot of scenery are missing from the diorama. Labeled Labels are used to distinguish all characters and locations. The diorama faithfully represents the descriptions of people and places in the book. Labels are used to distinguish most characters and locations. The diorama attempts to represent the descriptions of people and places, but has a couple noticeable, minor differences. Most characters and some scenery from the scene in the text are represented in the diorama. The diorama may only represent a setting and not a specific scene. Labels are used to distinguish a couple characters OR locations. All items in the diorama are 3D, to scale, and extremely detailed in color, texture, and shape. Project is neat and tidy without visible smudges, tape, or glue All items in the diorama are 3D, mostly to scale, and somewhat detailed in color, texture, and shape. Project is mostly neat and tidy. Any visible smudges, tape, or glue does not get in the way. Paragraph Paragraph clearly explains (1) what is happening in the scene, (2) why you chose to use this particular scene, and (3) what creative decisions you made when designing it. Conventions (Grammar / Spelling) Paragraph is typed and contains none or extremely minor errors in spelling, grammar, and punctuation. Paragraph is missing explanations of ONE of the following: (1) what is happening in the scene, (2) why you chose to use this particular scene, and (3) what creative decisions you made when designing it. Paragraph is typed and contains a couple errors in spelling, grammar, or punctuation. Accurate Detail Neatness Total: _______ / 28 = The diorama attempts to represent the descriptions of people and places, but has several noticeable differences or one major difference. Nearly all items in the diorama are 3D, to scale, and somewhat detailed in color, texture, and shape. Project is somewhat neat and tidy. Some visible smudges, tape, or glue is quite noticeable. Paragraph is missing explanations of TWO of the following: (1) what is happening in the scene, (2) why you chose to use this particular scene, and (3) what creative decisions you made when designing it. Paragraph is typed but contains many errors in spelling or grammar OR paragraph is not typed. No labels are used. It is unclear which figures represent which characters. While the people and places are in the diorama, they do not match the descriptions from the text. Several items in the diorama are noticeably NOT 3D, to scale, or detailed in color, texture, and shape. Project is messy, or looks like it was thrown together. Paragraph does NOT explain the diorama in any way OR no paragraph was submitted with the diorama. Amount of errors in spelling, grammar, or punctuation make the writing difficult to understand.