Chun-Hung Chang, M.D. Email: b89401068@ntu.edu.tw Oct 29, 2013 Dr Roger Pinder Editor-in-Chief Neuropsychiatric Disease and Treatment RE: Ref: ID: 54964 Title: Acute Stimulation Effect of the Ventral Capsule/Ventral Striatum in Patients with Refractory Obsessive-Compulsive Disorder – A Double-blinded Trial Dear Editors: Thank you for the helpful reviews of our manuscript. Following the suggestions of the reviewers, we have made the relevant revisions. All the changes and our specific responses to the comments are given on separate sheets. We are extremely pleased that, despite the problems noted with the manuscript, we are encouraged to revise and resubmit the paper. We hope that the paper now meets the high standards of Neuropsychiatric Disease and Treatment. Sincerely, Chun-Hung Chang, M.D. 1 Author’s Responses to Reviewers’ Comments Ref: ID: 54964 Title: Acute Stimulation Effect of the Ventral Capsule/Ventral Striatum in Patients with Refractory Obsessive-Compulsive Disorder – A Double-blinded Trial Reviewer #1 1). The novelty of this paper is the blinded stimulation, but there are few details on the blinding procedure. Did patients know that they were going to receive stimulation and just weren't aware of the settings?. We have added the information as follows (p 2, Lines 15~19) …………To reduce operation duration, risk, patients’ discomfort, and to avoid anesthesia effects, we didn’t perform intraoperative test stimulation. Postoperative test stimulation was performed at least two weeks after the DBS surgery. The patient sat comfortably in a chair and was continuously videotaped during each testing. In accordance with stimulation settings employed by other groups5, 6, 11, we fixed the pulse width at 210 μs, the stimulation frequency at 130 Hz, and used a monopolar mode. A test condition was defined as the application of a particular voltage at a particular contact. Each contact (0, 1, 2, and 3) of the lead was stimulated 2 postoperatively at increasing voltages (0, 2, 4, 6, 8 V) and turned to zero between each, giving a total of possible test. After completing testing of the left electrode, we tested the right electrode. One psychiatrist adjusted parameter settings according to prepaired flowchart, for example, contact 0, 2, 1, 3, or 3, 2, 1, 0 in a specific order. The patients knew that they were going to receive testing, but not aware of the settings. Another psychiatrist who evaluated the patient’s response was also blind to the parameter settings. One camera was used to record their verbal and behavioral response. 3 2) It often takes months to manifest a meaningful clinical response with VC/VS DBS in OCD, but the authors stimulation testing took place over an hour. Were they concerned about unknown washout/washon effects? We have added the information as follows (p 2, Lines 15~19) ………………術後急性測試並比較三年(36月後)的治療反應 . Mean severity of OCD was a Y-BOCS score of 36.3±2.1 before surgery. At the end of 36 months follow-up, there was a ???% decrease in OCD severity (Y-BOC score 24.3±9.1, p=0.001). The Y-BOCS score of the patients decreased from 36/36/33/38 at baseline to ????after 36 months of follow-up respectively. Similar findings were seen for HAM-D. Baseline HAM-D score was 36.3±6.3. At 36-month follow-up, there was a ???% decrease in severity of depression (HAM-D score=????????) (Tabe?). 蔡醫師這四個人手術前跟手術後 36 月(3 年)我不太確定 想請你幫忙 而且稍微試算後 P 值沒有小於 0.05? Variable Y-BOCS total score Baseline HAM-D score 36-month Baseline 36-month case1 秦 36 32 30 28 case2 施 36 22 36 20 case3 李 34 16 34 12 case4 蘇 39 36 45 38 4 5 Table . Changes in the Severity of OCD, Depression, and Cognition after 36-month of DBS surgery. Variable Baseline After Mean 36-month [95%CI] (SD) P value % Improvement of surgery Y-BOCS total score 36.25±2.06 26.5±9.15 9.75 (7.41) 0.078 [-2.04-21.54] HAM-D score 36.3±6.3 24.5 ? WAIS-III WAIS-FIQ 81.25±20.16 83.00±20.54 WAIS-PIQ 70.25±21.72 76.75±26.29 WAIS-VIQ 91.25±17.91 89.00±15.25 6 3) No conclusion can be drawn regarding the predictive nature of acute stimulation. No correlation statistics are provided, and it is unclear, to this reviewer, what are "laugh conditions" are. We have added the information as follows (p 2, Lines 15~19) …………PubMed 或論文對 smile laughter 的定義 …smile/laughter is a emotional express??? Smile means “a slow, gentle, sideward and upward pull of mouth, without rhythmical movements or contraction of other facial muscles,” and laughter is smile accompanied by vocal sounds (Early Hum Dev. 2006 Jan;82(1):61-6. Epub 2005 Sep 26. Origins of smile and laughter: a preliminary study. Kawakami K, Takai-Kawakami K, Tomonaga M, Suzuki J, Kusaka T, Okai T.) But it’s difficult to distinguish smile or laughter because of small voice, rapid progress from smile to laughter or ???. We recorded smile/laughter when the patient showed smile or laughter. . Smile and clinical outcome (統計還要修改) The percentage of laugh conditions for four cases was 25%, 43.8%, 62.5% and 12.5%. After 36-month follow, the improvement of the Y-BOCS score was 11.11%, 38.89%, 52.94% and 7.692% respectively. The improvement of the HAMD score was 7 6.67%, 44.44%, 64.71% and 15.56% respectively. Therefore, our finding agreed with Haq’s group. The larger the percentage of laugh conditions for individual patients, the greater the percentage of reduction in YBOCS at 36-month follow-up (Spearman's rho=0.841, p-value =0.034). The other correlations between clinical outcomes and percent of smile/laugh conditions were not statistically significant (Fig. Table). 8 9 % % Improvement Smile/Laughter conditions Spearman rho p-value Y-BOCS at 36 months 1? <0.01? HAM-D score at 36 months 1? <0.01? 10 4) Is table 2 the contacts from the right or left lead? Were both leads tested? and if so, what were the results of the second lead 刪掉兩個 score 或 改用 Haq 的統計圖表? We have added the information as follows (p 2, Lines 15~19) …………From the left; only show left side of one patient !? 11 Table 2 Results of left ventral capsule/ventral striatum (VC/VS) deep brain stimulation (DBS) testing with the pulse width at 210 μs, the frequency at 130 Hz. ????? 12 Author’s Responses to Reviewers’ Comments Ref: ID: 54964 Title: Acute Stimulation Effect of the Ventral Capsule/Ventral Striatum in Patients with Refractory Obsessive-Compulsive Disorder – A Double-blinded Trial Reviewer #2 1. The methodology employed needs to be clearer: - It is unclear whether the authors performed any intraoperative stimulation testing. We have added the information as follows (p 2, Lines 15~19) …………To reduce operation duration, risk, patients’ discomfort, and to avoid anesthesia effects, we didn’t perform intraoperative test stimulation. Postoperative test stimulation was performed at least two weeks after the DBS surgery. 13 - It is unclear to me whether smile and laughter events were determined solely by the rater at the time of their occurrence, or whether some events were discovered on video review afterwards. We have added the information as follows (p 2, Lines 15~19) ……Smile means “a slow, gentle, sideward and upward pull of mouth, without rhythmical movements or contraction of other facial muscles,” and laughter is smile accompanied by vocal sounds (Early Hum Dev. 2006 Jan;82(1):61-6. Epub 2005 Sep 26.Origins of smile and laughter: a preliminary study. Kawakami K, Takai-Kawakami K, Tomonaga M, Suzuki J, Kusaka T, Okai T.) But it’s difficult to distinguish smile or laughter because of small voice, rapid progress from smile to laughter or ???. We recorded smile/laughter when the patient showed smile or laughter at per contact, voltage setting (by the rater at the time of their occurrence). And we rated mood change (euphoria) according to 10-point Liker scale. 14 - The authors state that they used a scale of "0 to 10 that best described his current mood and obsession; 0 would mean 'No euphoria/No obsession', and 10 would mean 'Best possible euphoria/Worst obsession' " I assume there were two separate scales (no euphoria/euphoria and obsessive sx/worst obsessive sx) and not a single combined scale, but this should be made explicit. We have revised the information as follows (p 2, Lines 15~19) ……We evaluated mood at each condition via a ten-point Liker scale. 0 would mean 'No euphoria, and 10 would mean 'Best possible euphoria ". Figure 2 showed that if smile/laughter was noted, euphoria increased with voltage. 15 - How often were patients seen after implantation for programming adjustment? We have added the information as follows (p 2, Lines 15~19) ……Psychiatric evaluations were conducted preoperatively, postoperatively, and at follow-up visits every 3 months 16 - Why was a 15month endpoint chosen rather than the more typical 12, 18, or 24? We have added the information as follows (p 2, Lines 15~19) ……Psychiatric evaluations were conducted preoperatively, postoperatively, and at follow-up visits every 3 months. Till now 36-month followup data was available. 17 - I did not see mention of how lead coordinates were calculated. Was it from post-operative MRI? CT? What formula was employed? We have added the information as follows (p 2, Lines 15~19) ……A high resolution, T1-weighted image (T1WI) with 0.7 mm slice thickness was obtained one day before the surgery using a 1.5T magnetic resonance imaging (MRI) scanner. We applied a Leksell stereotactic frame under local anesthesia. A high-resolution head computed tomography (CT) scan with a slice thickness of 1.25 mm was performed. The images were sent to a workstation with BrainLAB, and then the MRI and CT-based images were fused. Electrodes were implanted according to a set of anatomical landmarks -- anterior commissure (AC) and posterior commissure (PC), AC-PC plane, and the anterior limb of the internal capsule -- using a Leksell stereotactic frame under general anesthesia. 18 - when calculating the percentage of laughter/euphoria events: were laughter events and euphoric events totaled together? Were they counted on a per voltage setting basis, or on a per-contact basis? We have added the information as follows (p 2, Lines 15~19) ……We count smile/laughter and euphoria separatively. When we noted smile/laugter, we asked the patient if experienced mood change. If the patient felt euphoria, he pointed out the score 0-10 at 10-point Likert scale. On a per contact and voltage setting base. For example, smile/laughter was noted on Contact 0, voltage 6. 19 - It is unclear whether Table 2 is meaningful without more information on the variability in contact coordinates between patients. For example, depending on the arc angle, contact 3 could be in dramatically different locations in different patients, preventing meaningful comparison of euphoria and obsession values or of patient-reported side effects. We have added the information as follows (p 2, Lines 15~19) ……Table showed the coordinates of contact 0, 1, 2, 3 of each patient. 20 21 Table 5 Coordinates (x, y, z) according to Schaltenbrand-Wahren atlas for all contact sites. Case number Left side x y z 0 7.1 1.2 -2.3 1 8.4 2.4 0.4 2 10.4 3.6 3 3 12.5 4.6 5.7 Contact 1 0 1 2 3 2 0 1 2 3 3 4 0 1 2 3 22 2. I would like additional information in the Results section: - did the authors explore the possibility of a voltage dependent effect on euphoria/smile? Were patients more likely to smile or be euphoric at higher voltages? This can be inferred from the data, but I did not see whether this was statistically examined. We have added the information as follows (p 2, Lines 15~19) ……We evaluated mood at each condition via a ten-point Liker scale. 0 would mean 'No euphoria, and 10 would mean 'Best possible euphoria ". Figure 2 showed that if smile/laughter was noted, euphoria increased with voltage. Voltage dependent effect was noted if the patent showed smile/laughter on the contact. 23 - Only the lead tip locations appear to be given (Table 1). The x,y,z coordinates of each contact will be crucial to make full use of this data and to compare the authors' results to those of other trials. 放上四人四點的座標 擔心產生更多問題? 不放? 放一個人? 放四個人? 若放 四個人 table1 要刪掉 xyz We have added the information as follows (p 2, Lines 15~19) 24 …………Table showed the coordinates of contact 0, 1, 2, 3 of each patient. 25 Table 5 Coordinates (x, y, z) according to Schaltenbrand-Wahren atlas for all contact sites. Case number Left side x y z 0 7.1 1.2 -2.3 1 8.4 2.4 0.4 2 10.4 3.6 3 3 12.5 4.6 5.7 Contact 1 0 1 2 3 2 0 1 2 3 3 4 0 1 2 3 合計 998 908 90 來源: 虛擬資料,僅供舉例之用 26 - Did patients' depressive symptoms improve over the 15 month follow up period? - - was there any evaluation of cognition before or after surgery? Were any effects of stimulation/surgery on cognition observed? We have added the information as follows (p 2, Lines 15~19) ……. Mean severity of OCD was a Y-BOCS score of 36.3±2.1 before surgery. At the end of 36 months follow-up, there was a ???% decrease in OCD severity (Y-BOC score 24.3±9.1, p=0.001). The Y-BOCS score of the patients decreased from 36/36/33/38 at baseline to ????after 36 months of follow-up respectively. Similar findings were seen for HAM-D. Baseline HAM-D score was 36.3±6.3. At 36-month follow-up, there was a ???% decrease in severity of depression (HAM-D score=????????) (Tabe?). 27 Table . Changes in the Severity of OCD, Depression, and Cognition after 36-month of DBS surgery. Variable Baseline After Mean 36-month [95%CI] (SD) P value % Improvement of surgery Y-BOCS total score 36.25±2.06 26.5±9.15 9.75 (7.41) 0.078 [-2.04-21.54] HAM-D score 36.3±6.3 24.5 ? WAIS-III WAIS-FIQ 81.25±20.16 83.00±20.54 WAIS-PIQ 70.25±21.72 76.75±26.29 WAIS-VIQ 91.25±17.91 89.00±15.25 Note: WAIS-III, Wechsler Adult Intelligence Scale III; FIQ, Full scale Intelligence Quotient; PIQ, Performance scale Intelligence Quotient; VIQ, Verbal scale Intelligence Quotient; Y-BOCS, Yale-Brown Obsessive Compulsive Scale; 28 3. I would like to see some additional points dealt with in the discussion: - Haq looked solely at bipolar intraoperative stimulation as a predictive response and did not explicitly establish that postoperative stimulation predicted long term improvement. This adds to the novelty of the - Previous papers have noticed that unilateral smiles were easier to induce than bilateral smiles, and that bilateral smiles were easier to induce than laughter. Did the authors notice a similar effect? We have revised the information as follows (p 2, Lines 15~19) ……Haq looked solely at bipolar intraoperative stimulation as a predictive response and did not explicitly establish that postoperative stimulation predicted long term improvement. We are the first report to evaluated the postoperative stimulation predicted long term improvement. We also noted unilateral smiles were easier to induce than bilateral smiles, and that bilateral smiles were easier to induce than laughter. 29 - Other groups have examined patients with much longer OCD symptom durations, usually 15 years or more. Do the authors have any insight into why this might be? We have added the information as follows (p 2, Lines 15~19) ……OC 病史要超過 15 年以上 為什麼? 發生於兒童青少年表示與腦部發展異常 相關?? 30 Minor Points: 1. P5 par 1: "However, whether or not acute stimulation test can provide substantial information for chronic stimulation is not currently documented in these papers. Haq et. al. first reported that acute stimulation-induced laughter may predict long-term OCD response to DBS." This statement appears contradictory. As the authors note, the paper of Haq et al states that acute stimulation predicts the effects of chronic stimulation. We have revised the information as follows (p 2, Lines 15~19) … … However, whether or not acute stimulation test can provide substantial information for chronic stimulation is limited. Haq et. al. reported that acute stimulation-induced laughter may predict long-term OCD response to DBS. 31 2. P6 par 1: "Treatment resistance was defined as failure to improve meaningfully after pharmacotherapy, including adequate trials of at least three serotonin reuptake inhibitors (SRIs) and cognitive-behavioral therapies." We have revised the information as follows (p 2, Lines 15~19) ……Treatment resistance was defined as failure to obtain improvements following multiple trials of pharmacotherapy at maximally tolerated doses, and one or more adequate trials of cognitive behavioral therapy. 32 3. Table 1: The standard convention is to represent left sided values on the AP plane as a negative number. We have added the information as follows (p 2, Lines 15~19) ……left sided values on the AP plane as a negative number. 33 4. Table 1: Though the authors are likely using the standard x,y,z conventions, for ease of reading the table should specify which value represent the AP, the mediolateral, and the rostrocaudal axes. We have added the information as follows (p 2, Lines 15~19) ……We have revised the information as follows (p 2, Lines 15~19) x,y,z value is given for each patient, which presumably represents the lead tip. ……‡ AC-PC, anterior commissure-posterior commissure § Coordinate, the coordinate of the particular lead was presented as the distance lateral to the midline, the distance anterior to the mid-commissural point, and the distance inferior to the AC-PC plane. where x=lateral, y=anteroposterior, z=axial. The lateral (X), antero-posterior (Y), and axial (Z) measurements 34 5. Table 1: A single x,y,z value is given for each patient, which presumably represents the lead tip. This should be stated. We have revised the information as follows (p 2, Lines 15~19) x,y,z value is given for each patient, which presumably represents the lead tip. ……‡ AC-PC, anterior commissure-posterior commissure § Coordinate, the coordinate of the particular lead was presented as the distance lateral to the midline, the distance anterior to the mid-commissural point, and the distance inferior to the AC-PC plane. where x=lateral, y=anteroposterior, z=axial. The lateral (X), antero-posterior (Y), and axial (Z) measurements 35 36 3. It would be helpful to know how long the SSRI trials were for (or at least the minimum length) as well as the minimum length of time CBT was tried for in order to compare these patients to those in previous and ongoing trials. 有可能請助理在統計這四人手術前 做個幾次 SSRI? 幾次 CBT? (我可以幫忙 問昌宏) 不過我看大部分論文都沒有啊 有一篇有 We have revised the information as follows (p 2, Lines 15~19) ……Treatment resistance was defined as failure to obtain improvements following multiple trials of pharmacotherapy at maximally tolerated doses, and one or more adequate trials of cognitive behavioral therapy. 37