Linguistic Models of the Translation Process XV The

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Linguistic Models of the Translation Process I
1/ Analysis and synthesis
An exciting research topic: modeling a translator’s activity
also means modeling text comprehension (the path from
linguistic form to the mind) and text production (the path
from the mind to linguistic form).
Transfer from one sign system to the other: divided into
two phases: at the first stage the translator analyses the SL
text (analysis), whereas he constructs the TL text in the
second (synthesis).
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The transfer phase
Nida’s ford metaphor raises several questions:
Where is the ford?
How does analysis take place?
In what language? Can it be divided into sub-phases?
How does the phase of synthesis take place? In what
language?
What temporal relationship can be detected between the two?
At which point does the second replace the first?
What is there between the two?
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Phase of transfer
• Between analysis and synthesis: the interference of some
transmitting/mediator language (interlanguage) is hypothesized.
• Opposite: no rigid dividing line between them can be drawn as the TL
can play a significant role in the comprehension of the SL text, and,
conversely, the SL is of pivotal importance to creating the TL text
(reading a text in a foreign language, one instinctively translates it into
one’s native language; a huge number of translations that reflect the
strong influence of the SL.
• Segments of analysis: morphemes, words, sentences, paragraphs?
• Segments of synthesis: are they longer than those of analysis?
• Do analysis and synthesis occur simultaneously?
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Modelling the translation process
Two basic types of translation models: denotative and transformational
(Rezvin and Rosentzveig 1964)
Denotative (situational): way from SL to TL leads through reality (the
translator uses his/her knowledge of the world at the point of transfer interpretation)
Transformational: direct path from SL to TL (translation proper)
Two more models added by Komissarov (1972, 1973):
Semantic model
The model of equivalence-levels +
other attempts at the systematisation of models
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The denotative (situational) model I
Starts from the principle that, apart from some minor differences, the real
world surrounding us is common to us all: which means that the
objects signified (denotata) are the same, it is only the linguistic signs
denoting them that are different.
In the phase of analysis of the translation process the translator traces
back the source language signs to the world of objects denoted by them
(that is why the model is called denotative). As this world is common
to everybody, by doing so the translator makes it clear what particular
situation of objective reality is described in the SL text (that is where
the term “situational model” derives from).
In the phase of synthesis, the translator describes the same denotata and
situations by using the tools of the TL. What the translator should
avoid, however, is the setting up of a direct reference between the SL
and the TL.
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The denotative (situational) model II: advantages and
disadvantages
Correct reflection of the translation process inasmuch as in several cases
equivalents in the TL can only be found if the real situation behind SL
text is taken into account. If an object or phenomenon does not have a
generally accepted name in the TL, the translator has to (re-)create it
on the basis of what s/he knows about the object or phenomenon in
question: realia (culture-bound terms, culture-specific terms).
Devices translators can use: taking over the foreign word, finding some
similar realia in the TL, inventing a new word for the TL (csűrdöngölő
’frolicsome Hungarian dance, barn-stamper, barn dance, Transylvanian
dance’).
However: „No one can understand the word ‘cheese’ unless he has a
nonlinguistic acquaintance with cheese” (Bertrand Russell)
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The denotative (situational) model III: advantages and
disadvantages
Used when there is only one solution in the TL:
Keep off the grass!
tracing back
to reality
Fűre lépni tilos!
recreating
the same denotatum
in the TL
Considering only what the TL text says;
What happens or does anything happen between the two phases?
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The denotative (situational) model IV: advantages and
disadvantages
cannot be used to explain cases in which the target language
has several linguistic tools for the description of an object,
phenomenon or situation and it is up to the translator to
choose the best of them. In such cases it is not just the
piece of reality described with the SL signs that is taken
into account by the translator. What is important is not just
what is said but also how it is said.
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The transformational model I
The translator identifies the SL signs not with reality but with the TL
signs, as the TL equivalents of the SL signs are given in his mind
beforehand, which means that translation consists in the simple
replacement of SL signs with TL signs.
However: such a model would be practicable only if the SL and the TL
were totally identical regarding the number, arrangements and
functional rules of elements in them, which means that each SL sign
would correspond to only one TL equivalent, and this single TL
equivalent would be connected to all the other TL signs under the same
rules and conditions as the SL sign is connected to all the other SL
elements → obviously impossible in natural languages.
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The transformational model II
But: this does not at all mean that none of their elements is arranged in the
same way or functions under the same rules.
Basis of translation from one language into another: the common domain,
which the translator reaches after carrying out a series of intralingual,
i.e., language-internal transformations.
Antecedents to the transformational model
Chomsky’s Aspects of the theory of Syntax (1965): concept of „deep
structure”
Nida’s Science of Translating (1964) and The Theory and Practice of
Translation (1969): kernels – „the minimal number of structures from
which the rest can be … derived;”
basic structures – remarkable similarities between them in different
languages
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The transformational model II
The translation process according to the transformational model
SL surface structure
intralingual
transformation
(analysis)
TL surface structure
intralingual
transformation
(synthesis)
SL deep structure
interlingual transformation
(SL deep structure replaced with the equivalent
deep structure of the TL )
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The transformational model III
Nida-Taber (1969)
analysis phase: “back transformation”
phase of synthesis: “restructuring”
Between these two phases: “transfer” from language A to language B
Result of analysis: “kernel” or “core” structures consisting of four classes: objects
(e.g. man, dog, tree, sun, river, oil, etc.), events (walk, see, run, jump, do, etc.),
abstracts (e.g. red, big, quickly, much, etc.) and relation indicators (e.g.
because, and, not, etc.);
Not identical with parts of speech: e.g. promise is a noun in the surface structure
of the SL, is an event name in the deep kernel and at the surface level of the
TL it can be realized even as a verb. Deep structures are characterized by the
relation of their elements being expressed in the clearest and simplest possible
way and being prepared for transfer.
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The transformational model IV: advantages and
disadvantages
Advantages
1/ By introducing the concept of intralingual transformations and
describing their functions, it gives a true picture of different moments
of the translation process: the constant consideration of various TL
options, which is an organic part of the daily routine of translators, can
be regarded as transformation.
2/ Intralingual transformations are also carried out in the process of
understanding the SL text. E.g. a complex SL NP can be mentally
broken down to several simple sentences. Back-and forth
transformations can be useful in translator training
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The transformational model V: advantages and
disadvantages
3/ Intralingual transformations: estimation of the degree of equivalence. A
SL sign may not be directly related to a TL one not only because their
respective positions are different in the systems of the two languages
but also because their “transformational histories” are different. E.g. E
development is not always equivalent to H fejlődés, since the former is
transformed from develop vt and develop vi, while the H noun is
derived from one verb only: fejlődik.
4/ Important role in machine translation: if there is a domain that two
languages share (equivalent lexical and grammatical structures,
transfer can be done by a machine (pre- and post-editing required).
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The semantic model I
In the transformational model it is tacitly posited that meaning (sense),
remains unchanged.
Antecedents of the semantic model
1/ Research in semantics (beginning: the 60s) has influenced TT as well.
2/ Relevant for translation: the ability to decide whether
• a sentence has only one or more than one meaning,
(He might have told us he would be late)
• two (or more) sentences have a common meaning, ie., are synonymic
(Peter likes/cares for/takes to/is keen on/is attracted to/has affection for
Mary)
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The transformational model VI: advantages and
disadvantages
Disadvantages:
1/ Separates the SL and the TL and neglects the fact that the way the SL
original is formed plays a significant role in shaping the TL surface.
2/SL and TL structures are related to each other in a way that cannot be
traced back to the common domain that the two languages share. These
equivalencies can be interpreted under the denotative-situative model,
in which the linguistic form plays hardly any role, so there is a way of
putting something in one language and a different way in the other:
Keep off the grass – Fűre lépni tilos, Staff only – Idegeneknek tilos a
bemenet.
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The semantic model II
3/ the decomposability of meaning, e.g. bachelor: (Noun), (Human),
(Male), (one who has never married), etc.
Words of the SL broken down to such semantic components → in the
phase of SL analysis it is not basic lexical units or grammatical
structures that the original text is traced back to but to elementary
semantic units, called semes. They form a certain system depending on
the context and speech situation: some of them will be relevant (or
central), others will be secondary (or peripheral).
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The semantic model III
The translation process as described by the semantic model
SL surface text
TL surface text
intralingual
intralingual
transformation
transformation
(analysis)
(synthesis)
SL semantic deep structure
interlingual transformation
(SL semantic deep structure replaced with the
equivalent deep structure of the TL )
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The semantic model IV
Melchuk and Zholkovsky’s semantic model
“Text-sense-text” semantic model: insight into the hypothesised semantic
deep structure → a translator first understands the text to be translated
then expresses what he has understood - the sense of the text - in the
TL.
Sense: the speaker’s ability to express the same thought in different ways
and the listener’s ability to perceive the identity of sense between
statements that look/sound different. The sense of a given text means
the common elements that can be found in all the texts that are
intuitively regarded as equivalent. This common semantic invariant is
described in terms of a special semantic language, or basic language.
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The semantic model V
Process of translation (E→H):
idiomatic English
sense
analysis
E semantic invariant
(basic language)
idiomatic Hungarian
sense
synthesis
switching from E basic language to the H one
(translation proper)
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The semantic model VI
What does the lexis of the basic language consist of?
Three types of elements:
1/ predicates,
2/ nominals,
3/ adjuncts,
subdivided into constant elements + changing elements (lexical
functions/correlates of the given word)
a/ substituting correlates, e.g.:
synonyms: storm → Syn → tempest
antonyms: good → Ant → bad
b/ connecting correlates , e.g.:
rain
→ Incep → begin
mourning → Magn → deep
sleep
→
Fin
→ wake up
engine
→
Fin → shut off
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The semantic model VII
Lexical functions
•
make the paraphrasing of the SL possible, i.e. explain, express, clarify
semantic relations below the surface of the sentence;
• contribute to the deconstruction of SL meaning and to the reconstruction of the
TL meaning.
Each language has tools to express meanings like:
• beginning (Incep)
• end (Fin)
• operation (Oper)
which vary from language
• causing something to happen (Caus)
to language.
• annihilation or liquidation (Liqu),
• degradation (Degrad), etc.
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The semantic model VIII
If phrases like a hal/hús megbüdösödik, a tej/bor megsavanyodik, a kenyér
megszárad, a gép leáll, az óra megáll are to be translated from H into a
foreign language (E), what has to be looked for is not the dictionary
equivalents of these verbs but how how the TL language expresses the
semantic function (Degrad) after the equivalents of hal, hús, tej,
kenyér, gép, óra, etc.:
•
•
•
•
fish taints quickly
meat becomes stinky
bread becomes dry/stale
milk tuns sour
• wine turns acid
• engine fails
•the clock is out of order
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The semantic model IX
Such a limited number of semantic functions (cca. 60) – makes it possible to
systematise core meanings as well as decompose and restructure them.
Melchuk and Zholkovsky have added a few syntactic rules and filters to
eliminate incorrect solutions on the way to the TL surface.
Advantages and disadvantages I
1/ The translator traces the SL sentences back to sense relations rather than to
basic lexical units or elementary grammatical structures. The equivalence
between basic lexical units and elementary syntactic structures – no matter
whether it is intralingual or interlingual – can be stated only on the basis of
identity of sense.
2/ Can answer questions like why should the H verb csinál go into the translator’s
mind on one side and the E verb tidy come out on the other, although a
dictionary will not give them as equivalents in one entry? It is because under
the semantic function (Caus) they should come together in the phrase rendet
csinál (a szobában) – tidy (up) the room.
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The semantic model X
Advantages and disadvantages II
3/ Even if it were more exhaustive, the semantic model would not be able to
explain instances in which the SL form has no effect whatsoever on the TL
surface phrase, which should then be found on the basis of the given situation
or the given goal of communication.
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Komissarov’s model: levels of equivalence
Nida’s “ford” metaphor:
• the models have put the ford where the river can be crossed either a
long way away (denotative/situative: distancing from linguistic signs);
• or very near (transformational: switching from one language to the
other without having to leave the level of linguistic signs).
Neither of them reflects what the translator actually does. In reality, the
translator always wants to cover the route from the SL to the TL at the
level of linguistic signs, which is the shortest, and the longer is chosen
only if there are no other options. All this means that he applies
different models and the level of switching from one language to the
other is always determined by the specific task to be carried out.
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Levels of transfer in Komissarov’s theory I (1973)
1/ the level of linguistic signs,
2/ the level of utterance,
3/ the level of message,
4/ the level of situation,
5/ the level of the communicative goal
content levels (to which both
the SL and the TL text can
be broken down)
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Levels of transfer in Komissarov’s theory II
5/ The level of communicative goal:
The speaker, say, wants to inform the reader, the listener, i.e., the receiver about
something, would like to raise some emotion in them, or would like to make
them carry out an act (e.g., a tenant would like the landlord to mend the roof).
4/ The level of situation:
To achieve this goal, the speaker informs the recipient about real objects, persons,
abstract phenomena or the relationship between them (miserable living
conditions: the roof is leaking).
3/ The level of message:
The situation, however, cannot be completely covered at one single time, and its
different characteristics are described in different ways: The roof needs
mending. When the autumn rains set in you have to wear a macintosh even
indoors. Or, as Petőfi put it in Pató Pál úr: the sky peeps in through the attic
“Pallásról néz be az ég...”
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Levels of transfer in Komissarov’s theory III
2/ The level of utterance:
When the message is being worded, the linguistic signs available for it
have to be arranged in a linear order, in which the elements can be
organized into different structures. The message of the roof having to
be mended can be conveyed by various utterances: The roof should be
repaired; It is to be mended; The roof wants mending; Why not mend
the roof?
1/ The level of linguistic signs:
In utterances of similar structures different words can be used: The roof
should be mended. The roof ought to be fixed.
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Levels of transfer in Komissarov’s theory IV
• The production of a text is the result of numerous decisions. The
sender can choose one of the situations available for the desired goal of
communication. To describe the selected situation he chooses one of
the messages. To formulate the selected message one of the several
utterances is chosen and a selection of the linguistic signs available is
made.
• The comprehension of a text: the receiver covers the same way in the
opposite direction, i.e., starts from the linguistic signs and reaches the
sender’s communicative goal.
• The translator, both a receiver and a sender, covers both ways. In the
analysis phase he proceeds from the linguistic signs to the goal of
communication, whereas in the synthesis phase he proceeds from the
goal of communication to the linguistic signs.
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Levels of transfer in Komissarov’s theory V
• Thus, the selection of the TL equivalent is determined by the goal of
communication, irrespective of what situation, message, utterance or
linguistic signs it is expressed by in the SL, even if one’s linguistic
behaviour is described, for example, if a character has a foreign accent.
The fact that someone pronounces the consonant /r/ in a French
manner can be translated only with words containing this consonant.
The following example is a frequently quoted translation error: “Ó, de
boldog vagyok, hogy eljött – mondta a grófnő franciásan ropogtatva az
r-eket.” (I’m so happy you’ve come, said the countess, crunching the rs like the French do)
• The level of situation: can also exclude the equivalence of all the other
lower levels. Vigyázat, mázolvaI in E: Wet paint! irrespective of how it
is structured in H.
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Levels of transfer in Komissarov’s theory VI
• The level of message: excludes lower level equivalents, e.g., if you are
to comfort someone by saying Cheer up! Chin up! Don’t lose heart!, it
can only be translated into H Ne lógasd az orrod!
• The level of utterance determines the formulation of the TL equivalent
of an E passive in H: The doctors were puzzled by the fact... Az
orvosok rejtélyesnek találták a tényt..., his meals were brought to him
in bed...a kosztot ágyba hordták neki...(Heller: Catch 22, A 22-es
csapdája).
• The level of linguistic signs allows no choice in the translation of
international organisations which have a constant equivalent in the TL
(ENSZ-UNO).
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Levels of transfer in Komissarov’s theory VII
Advantages and disadvantages of the equivalence level model
1/ Advantages: gives a more nuanced picture of the work of a translator,
who pursues various strategies at the same time.
2/ On the other hand, he idealizes the translator’s work saying that in the
phase of analysis the translator always covers all the steps from the
level of linguistic signs to that of the goal of communication, and some
of this trouble can be spared only if the selection of the TL equivalent
is determined by the goal of communication or the situation, which are
“higher levels”.
3/ In reality, translators translate elements, as a rule, at the level of
linguistic signs and step a stage higher only if setting up equivalents at
this level meets with some unexpected difficulty.
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Summary
• The translator is constantly moving to and fro between the two
languages, is constantly relating the SL and TL signs to each other and
reality. Once the TL equvalent has been found, the understanding of
the SL text may be made easier, however, it can also lead to
misunderstanding.
• The deeper the translation grasps the SL text, the more TL versions
that have already been found may be rejected by him. The translation
process can, perhaps, be best described as the simultaneous functioning
of the two languages. The linguistic models of translation contribute to
a better understanding of this complicated process.
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