记叙文体之(一)——写人记叙文
一、文体解读
以写人为主的记叙文，应该注意肖像描写、行动描写、
语言描写、心理描写以及对细节的描写。考生应根据写作的
要求、灵活掌握、突出重点。写作过程中要注意以下几个方
面的问题：
1．人物写作通常需要介绍人物的姓名、年龄、外貌、
学历、经历、专业、爱好、特长、事迹、性格等多个方面，
但考试时需要严格按照写作要求来写，包括所给的全部信息
点，既不能遗漏，也不能随意添加。
2．对题目所给的信息要进行适当重组，安排好写作
顺序，突出重点信息。重点信息通常是写作的目的所在，
比如求职要重点突出学历、经历；新闻报道要重点突出事
迹；介绍自己的老师、朋友要突出他们的特点等。
3．注意运用正确的时态。描写人物的外貌、性格、
兴趣等常用一般现在时；而描写人物的出生、教育背景、
经历、事迹常用一般过去时。
二、写作范句必备
1．外貌特征：
beautiful, a big nose, black eyes, fat, goodlooking,
handsome, ordinarylooking, pretty, short, strong, tall, thin, etc.
2．性格特点：
absentminded, badtempered, be ready to help others, bright,
confident, diligent, friendly, generous, have a good temper,
humorous, independent, kindhearted, lazy, narrowminded,
naughty, patient, think of others, smart, talkative, warmhearted,
wise, etc.
3．兴趣爱好：
be delighted in, be good at, be interested in, be fond of,
be crazy about, be pleased with, be sick for, do well in, enjoy,
expect, have a strong desire to do, long for (long to do), put
one's heart into, take a pleasure in, etc.
4．他人评价：
be respected by, be honored as, be considered as, be
famous/known as, be regarded as, make great contributions
to, set a good example to, speak highly of, etc.
(2012·广东高考)你接受了一项写作任务，要为英语校
报写一篇人物介绍。
[写作内容]
请根据以下信息，介绍一位传奇人物。
姓名：Allan Stewart
国籍：澳大利亚
出生日期：1915年3月7日
世界纪录：2006年获硕士学位*时年龄
最大
学习态度：挑战自我，永远为时不晚。
第一个学位：1936年获得
第二个学位：医学博士**
第三个学位：80多岁时决定学习法律，2006年获得硕士学位。
第四个学位：2012年通过网络学习获得，善于合理安排学习
时间，受到老师表扬。
*硕士学位： master's degree; * *博士： doctor
[写作要求]
只能用5个句子表达全部内容。
[评分标准]
句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯。
第一步：列好提纲，不漏要点
Stewart的基本情况；
1． 介绍Allan
____________________________
Stewart的学习态度；
2． Allan
________________________
Stewart的学位获得情况。
3． Allan
___________________________
第二步：翻译句子，营造亮点
1．Allan Stewart是澳大利亚人，出生于1915年3月7日，
2006年获硕士学位时年龄最大。
Allan Stewart, an Australian old man, born on
①______________________________________________
March 7, 1915, is already the holder of the world record for
____________________________________________________
being the oldest graduate.
_______________________(简单句)
Stewart, who is from Australia, was born on
② Allan
______________________________________________
March 7, 1915 and he is still the oldest of those getting a
____________________________________________________
master‘s degree.
________________(定语从句)
2．他在80多岁时决定学习法律，并在2006年获得了第
三个学位——博士学位。
When he was over eighty, he made up his mind to
① ____________________________________________
study law, and in 2006 he got his third degree, that is, the
___________________________________________________
master‘s degree.
________________(含有状语从句的并列句)
decided to study law in his eighties, and he got
② He
___________________________________________
the master‘s degree in 2006, which was his third degree.
________________________________________________(含有
定语从句的并列句)
第三步：做好衔接，连句成文
Allan Stewart, an Australian old man, born on March
__________________________________________________
7,
1915, is already the holder of the world record for being
______________________________________________________
the
oldest graduate. He thinks it is never too late to
______________________________________________________
challenge
oneself to achieve something worthwhile. He got
______________________________________________________
his
first degree in 1936, later along with a doctor's degree
______________________________________________________
of
medicine. He decided to study law in his eighties, and he
______________________________________________________
got
the master's degree in 2006, which was his third degree.
______________________________________________________
In
2012, he received his fourth degree by network learning,
______________________________________________________
who
was praised for his proper arrangement on his study
______________________________________________________
schedule.
__________________
(2013·福建模拟)假如你是李明，在上网时，看了网友
整理的“2011年感动中国小人物”榜单，收集的人和事令你
非常感动。其中“周口阿婆”的事情让你深有感触。请根据
下表提示用英语写一篇短文，讲述“周口阿婆”的故事和你
的感想。
*祖籍河南周口的阿婆和老伴在深圳生活，
居无定所；
*阿婆每晚在深圳大学附近卖画，饿了就吃两
周口阿婆 口干粮；
*10元一幅的彩笔画，一晚上也只能画好两幅；
*处境艰难但阿婆自尊心强，不愿乞讨，坚持
卖画为生，自食其力
你的感想 ……
注意：
1．对所给要点逐一陈述，可适当发挥，不要简单翻译；
2．词数120左右。
When surfing the Internet, I came across_____________
____________________________________________________
____________________________________________________
____________________________________________________
参考范文：
When surfing the Internet, I came across a list of ordinary
people who moved China in 2011. I was especially touched by
an old lady from Zhoukou, Henan Province.
The old lady and her husband are homeless, wandering in
Shenzhen. Every evening, she sits near Shenzhen University
and sells her paintings. When hungry, she just eats several
pieces of dry food she carries with her. Usually she can only
finish two paintings one night and for each she charges 10 yuan,
Though life is tough, the old lady has her pride and refuses to
beg money from others.
The old lady teaches me a good lesson. Obviously
she knows the value of work. She prefers to go through
all hardships rather than lose her sense of pride. Her
story puts me to shame, for I always complain that my
learning load is heavy and has a habit of depending on
others.