Counterclaims Addressing the other side and how to do it effectively Counterarguments: how you get there. 1.) Identify your main arguments (try to come up with THREE, one for each body paragraph). 2.) Think of arguments someone with the opposite opinion might come up with to prove each argument wrong. Today you will find sources that provide counterarguments. WHY? Because eventually you will… 3.) Rebut! This doesn’t involve your booty. It means disprove the counterarguments your imaginary opponent gives (to make your arguments seem even more LOGICAL and convincing). For Example… Argument Counterargument • We should stop • Mining companies mountain top removal limit damage to local coal mining because it features by “rebuilding destroys local land mountainsides and features; since 1970, restor[ing] the this method of mining aesthetic and has “destroyed 500 environmental quality mountains” (House 18). of the area” (West Virginia Coal Association 39). For Example… Argument Counterargument • We should stop mountain top removal coal mining because it pollutes local water reservoirs “poisoned some twelve hundred miles of rivers and streams” since 1970 (House 21). • Mining companies protect local water resources, as “[w]ater quality is monitored throughout the mining process and steps [are] taken to treat any streams and preserve the biology” (West Virginia Coal Association 39). Argument For example… Counterargument • We should stop mountain top • Mountain top removal removal coal mining because coal mining improves it hurts Appalachians, quality of life for local “scraping away not just coal residents by providing but also the freedoms of Appalachian residents,” who “high-waged jobs must consume water with capable of supporting high “arsenic levels” and families, paying up to send children to schools situated “below ponds twice the average wage holding billions of gallons of in Appalachia” (Quinn sludge” that may flood A10). dangerously (House 19). Group Time: Claims, Counterclaims, and Thesis Development Begin working on outlines when finished 1.) List your main arguments. 2.) List arguments that someone with the opposite opinion might come up with. 3.) Then work on crafting a thesis statement (Turn in copy to teacher) 4.) When finished, divide up your intro. and body paragraphs. (Groups of two may each take 2 paragraphs; Groups of 3 may each take a body paragraph and do the intro. together). 5.) Begin working on your assigned portion of the outline (see attached example). Your completed part of your outline is due next class. We will begin drafting paragraphs from the outline next class and then go to the library or lab to type them up and begin merging the paper. You all can work on your conclusions later. Rebuttals Definition: • When two people debate, one of them makes an argument, and the other follows with a rebuttal, which, plainly put, is the "no, you're wrong and this is why" argument. The following slides have examples of rebuttals for the counterclaims used in the teacher example of mountain top removal mining. For Example… Argument Counterargument REBUTTAL: • We should stop • Mining companies However, while coal “companies are required to put the land top removal limit damage tosoillocal backmountain the way they found it,” they do this simply by “putting back mining because it (Huffington ontocoal the sites and planting trees” Post).by According to features “rebuilding “Margaret Palmer, director Biological Laboratory destroys local land of the Chesapeake mountainsides and at the University of Maryland's Center for Environmental Science, this features; since 1970, restor[ing] quick fix is not really a fix at all” because “the soil that the is put back on ofofmining the this site ismethod so stripped nutrients that aesthetic it would take and 2,000 years for the ecosystem to return to its natural state” (3). In actuality, reclamation has “destroyed 500 environmental quality efforts fail to adequately restore mountains” (House 18).the environment. of the area” (West Virginia Coal Association 39). REBUTTAL: However, evidence suggests that water monitoring practices are not effectively or consistently practiced by • to Mining companies protect • mining We should stop According companies. the “Clean Water Act, local water resources, as mountain top removal the Army Corps of Engineers was supposed to regulate “[w]ater quality is coal mining because the actual filling of the it streambed itself” throughout but opponents monitored the pollutes local water of mountain top removal often miningaccuse processmining and steps reservoirs “poisoned companies of “lack of enforcement” and have [are] taken to treat any some twelve hundredto sue (Mitchell streams and preserve the attempted 106). biology” (West Virginia Coal miles of rivers and Association 39). streams” since 1970 (House 21). REBUTTAL: While coal companies bring jobs to mined areas, they fail to provide adequate economic support. According Argument Counterargument to Erik Reece, a University of Kentucky professor and • We should stop mountain top • Mountain top removal coal environmental activist, mining jobs have not improved removal coal mining because it mining improves quality of hurts Appalachians, “scraping Appalachian poverty rates. 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