Text grammar Structuring information Cohesion and coherence Quick revision dimensions of variation diaphasic: different communicative settings, e.g.different levels of style/register, oral vs. written diastratic: different social groups (according to age, sex, profession ...), different sociolects e.g. young people, hunters‘ Diatopic: different places and regions of the linguistic area, different dialects e.g.Cockney English, Saxonian German diachronic: historical stages on the diachronic axis e.g.extinct, obsolete, old-fashioned, current, fashionable Within a text Different dimensions give variants. Variation can be seen at a number of levels Graphic Phonological or graphological Lexical Grammatical Discourse Patterns of text organisation are grounded in the details of the text. Remember this? A discourse analysis task Look at the task in Worksheet 1 and the texts in Texts 2013 Text Analysis Similarities and differences. Texts and their texture • We looked at how certain language features run through a text and help us to make sense of a text • Now we will look at details of cohesion: overt identifiable features, which you can learn to recognise and name, which make up the texture of a text and contribute to its unity Cohesion • _ "the way certain words or grammatical features of a • sentence can connect that sentence to its predecessors • (and successors) in a text." (Hoey 1991, 3) • _ "The concept of cohesion is a semantic one; it refers to relations of meaning that exist within the text, and that define it as a text.” (Halliday and Hasan 1976, 4) • _ Phonological cohesion • _ Lexical cohesion • _ Grammatical cohesion Phonological cohesion Grammatical cohesion: reference • The idea of reference is that of having to look for the full meaning somewhere else • We can look for the information elsewhere in the text (endophoric reference) or outside the text (exophoric reference) • The grammatical items refer to something or some one and the reader automatically identifies what is being referred to (the referent) Exophoric reference • First and second person pronouns • The writer is being self-referential using I • It is not always possible to identify exactly who we refers to • Many advertisements address the reader directly as you and companies refer to themselves as we • In television news demonstrative reference like this, these, here often refer to elements outside the verbal text but are visible in the visual part of the text. Who exactly? • We can be inclusive or exclusive • It can include the audience (or readers) or it can refer to the speaker/writer and some other people, to a nation or to a small group of people • “Now this is the scene right now in the City, just a few miles from where I am standing. We’ll bring you more on that in a moment.” • he wanted the big economies to be pumping their own money into the system; we can’t do that because we haven’t got any money and that’s why his domestic political standing is what it is. Exophoric you You can be specific, addressing the reader directly (look at the advertisements and the gardening manual for examples) or it can be generic I think in my walk of life you get attacks the entire time. That is part of the business and you should not complain about it normally. Indeed, if you did, you would spend your entire time complaining. relationships • Text advertisement • Real writer • Implied reader advertising copywriter narrator assumptions made in the text about the persona • Real reader the real person • Implied writer Demonstrative reference • The difference between the and a (definite and indefinite articles, part of the demonstrative reference system) are also a matter of different levels of specificity and genericity • Generic: • The femur is the largest bone in the body • The family is a social institution Cohesion - grammatical • Reference: • Remember Exophoric (refers outside the text to the context) • Endophoric (refers within the text) • Anaphoric reference (referring back to an earlier part of the text) • Cataphoric reference (referring forwards to something that comes later in the text Tom said that he was going home. I couldn’t believe it – the house had been destroyed! Grammatical Cohesion • _ Anaphoric reference (e.g. Tom said that he was going home) • Used frequently, a normal part of text texture avoids repetition and holds the text together • _ Cataphoric reference (e.g.I couldn’t believe it – the house had been destroyed!) • Used less frequently. Used for particular effect, more characteristic of literary texts, for example in building suspense… or in news texts as an opening. Anaphoric reference • In many types of discourse we use the anaphorically to refer to something which has already been introduced by using a • Once upon a time there was a king in a foreign land who had a great desire to marry. The king looked high and low in the land but in vain • Take a large pie dish and some peeled and sliced apples; arrange the slices in concentric circles in the dish Comparison • Comparative reference tells the reader to look elsewhere with a particular aim in mind: to compare the items that are being linked as sharing quantity or quality • Comparison involves ideas about quantity and number using forms like more, fewer, less, another and quality using expressions like such and so Point of reference • More cats prefer it • The milder tobacco • Kinder to the environment • For a tastier meal • Gets your clothes whiter • We bake a better biscuit Substitution • Substitution means the writer has substituted one item for another in a text. Often a long phrase is substituted by a short word like one (to replace nouns and noun phrases) do (to replace verbs and verb phrases) or so or not (to replace whole clauses). It avoids tedious repetition. • If you are not sure about phrases and clauses look at WWT Unit 3 Ellipsis • Ellipsis involves omitting elements altogether. It is very common in spoken language where participants know they have shared knowledge and things do not need to be made explicit. In some written texts ellipsis can create an illusion of closeness between writer and reader • See Subaru text p 213 WWT Conjunctions • These are words which express how words, phrases and sentences should be linked, whether the link is temporal, additive, causal, continuative, alternative, adversative etc. • Different types of writing use different types of conjunction so conjunctions often help to identify a text type Conjunction Conjunction: refers to specific devices, conjunctions which link sentences to each other. Additive conjunctions add on information Adversative conjunctions draw a contrast Causal conjunctions make a causal link Temporal conjunctions make a time link between two sentences. Spot the conjunctions "If the neutrinos have broken the speed of light, then it would overturn a keystone theory from the last century of physics. That's possible, but it's far more likely that there is an error in the data. So let me put my money where my mouth is: if the Cern experiment proves to be correct and neutrinos have broken the speed of light, I will eat my boxer shorts on live TV. Now I'd love it if neutrinos really have exceeded the speed of light. But I'm not eating my shorts just yet. Because my money is still on Einstein. He was, after all, pretty smart. And I am not prepared to rewrite my lecture course on relativity just yet. Identify the kind of conjunction If the neutrinos have broken the speed of light, then it would overturn a keystone theory from the last century of physics. That's possible, but it's far more likely that there is an error in the data. So let me put my money where my mouth is: if the Cern experiment proves to be correct and neutrinos have broken the speed of light, I will eat my boxer shorts on live TV. Now I'd love it if neutrinos really have exceeded the speed of light. But I'm not eating my shorts just yet. Because my money is still on Einstein. He was, after all, pretty smart. And I am not prepared to rewrite my lecture course on relativity just yet. Sort these conjunctions: additive, contrastive, causal, or temporal? • Finally, anyway, in addition, or, of course, furthermore, the next day, in other words, yet, however, on the contrary, so, then, for this reason, as a result, one day, up to now, well, surely, but, after all, and, though, consequently, now, likewise, it follows that, then Lexical cohesion the use of the same or similar or related words in successive sentences, is of two types Reiteration, where the same word is repeated. Some writers try to avoid this by the use of what is called elegant variation, this will involve using such devices as Synonyms Superordinates General words Similarity or synonymy It is rare to find a true synonym, there are usually differences in style or association Denotation is the dictionary definition of a word, connotation means the associations a word carries, the personal or emotional meanings that come from the kinds of encounters we have had with the word and the contexts we have found it in Some words are found in particular text types or social or regional varieties Synonyms and varieties Beautiful: Beauteous, bonny, comely, fair, dishy, exquisite, handsome, resplendent, splendid, splendiferous, gorgeous, lovely, picturesque, pretty, pulchritudinous, ravishing, scenic, stunning Good: great, groovy, keen, neat, nifty, smashing,, acceptable, solid, superb, well-behaved Fat: abdominous, chubby, plump,buxom, corpulent, obese, weighty podgy, pudgy, tubby, fleshy, heavy, overweight,gross, porcine, portly, stout Lexical cohesion Can involve other semantic relations between the lexical items in the text. For example contrast or antonymy Hyponymy Evaluation Figurative tropes Contrast or antonymy: different kinds: Complementarity: where the presence of one excludes the other (e.g. dead/alive) Converseness: where there is some kind of logical reciprocity (e.g. husband/wife; buy/sell) Incompatibility: words which are part of a set (such as seasons, days of the week, colours) Antonymy: all of the above but also gradable opposites such as hot/cold, good/bad, big/small Hyponymy As we saw when we looked at lexical cohesion there are also classification relationships such as subordination e.g. animal /cat, coordinates apple/banana; bicycle/motorbike superordinates wheat/ cereal; vehicle/car Hyponymy is where items are included in another term, similar to the examples of sub and superordination Father is a hyponym of man Woman is a hypernym of sister Sets and fields By field of discourse is meant the particular activity, cultural feature, social institution or topic for which a particular set of ideationally related lexical items is evolved or adapted. Each field has a specialised topic-related vocabulary which makes up the lexical set Sets and fields By field of discourse is meant the particular activity, cultural feature, social institution or topic for which a particular set of ideationally related lexical items is evolved or adapted. Each field has a specialised topic-related vocabulary which makes up the lexical set Semantic features and fields • _ Semantic features = components of meaning • _ sea = body of water, saline, large • _ Semantic fields = groups of words with shared • • • • • semantic features _ sea _ river _ lake _ stream _ pond Semantic field Ways of looking: Glare, wink, blink, stare, glance, gaze, scrutinize, look, survey, overlook, Use a dictionary to help you What have they got in common? What kinds of meanings distinguish them? Ways of eating: gobble, slurp, chew, suck, swallow, munch, crunch, nibble, savour, bite, Ways of walking: scuttle, hobble, stride, limp, hop, skip, amble, Semantic field Example: Cookery Artefacts etc.: Pot, jug, kettle, pan, frying pan, saucepan, dish, jug, bowl, ladle, carving-knife, fork, spoon, rolling pin, breadboard, cooker, oven Processes: boil, roast, bake, stew, simmer, poach, grill, cut, dice, slice, chop, carve, peel, skin, mix, stir, beat, whip, fold, strain The field of cookery Properties: tender/ tough (meat), fresh (fish, bread), stale (bread), sour (milk, cream), light (pastry, cakes), well-done, under-done, rare (steaks), hard-boiled, softboiled (eggs) Phrases, collocations etc: boil over, off the boil, carve a joint, bake bread, chop parsley, slice meat, bread, tomatoes; spoon out, leave to set. Semantic field Example: air travel Artefacts etc. fuselage, landing-gear, wing, cockpit, check-in, boarding-pass, lounge, gate, tickets, cabin, airline, aircraft, crew, pilot, steward, route Processes: take off, land, stack, taxi, check-in, book, upgrade, Properties: low cost, long-haul, short-haul, first-class, business class, economy, domestic, intercontinental Phrases, collocations: in mid-flight, air traffic control, hand-luggage, cabin-luggage, air-miles, flight attendant, cabin crew, (un)fasten your seatbelts, on board Nouns labelling technical features, artefacts, equipment, structures etc Verbs identifying and distinguishing between processes, types of event methods etc. Adjectives and adverbs indicating conventional properties of the above Phrases and conventional collocations that may expand, modify or combine any of the above Figurative extensions of the terms may be used outside the field of discourse to general usage Cohesion and coherence • Cohesion is provided by overt lexical or grammatical markers in the text • Coherence is a term which is difficult to define but it is concerned with our expectations and our knowledge of the world and the way things fit together Coherence • Coherence is concerned with logical links which mean that the text makes sense as a whole. • Making sense: • A. “That’s the phone!” • B. “I’m in the bath!” • A. “Ok” • We try to find coherence even when there are few overt signs Reading between the lines In what way can B be seen as an answer to A. A. We were thinking of going to see that new film in Sinalunga on Sunday. B. I’ve got an exam on Monday Textual structure • English texts have their own characteristic textual structure, which not only distinguishes them from texts in other languages, but also helps to make them coherent. * In other words, an English text will read like a genuine piece of English writing, only if it conforms to the normal structural patterns of an English text. That is, it structures its information in a particular way , paragraphs, topic sentences etc. Text patterns • Texts have typical patterns which we are accustomed to and • • • • • we fill in the logical link even when there is no obvious cohesive tie. As we have seen there exist sets of texts, text types, which have similar features and are usually linked to similar purposes – these are called genres They can usually be recognised by a number of conventional features They are linked to discourse communities When we read an article we usually have expectations based on our familiarity with the genre Most texts meet the expectations of their readers Look at these two texts. Which is more effective in getting your interest? Why? • 9a) Newspaper text • JET Crash kills 160 • A Chinese airliner crashed yesterday, killing all 160 people on board, following a mid-air explosion. The Russian built Tupolev-154, with 146 passengers and a crew of 14, plunged to the ground just after take-off from the tourist resort of Xian • 9b)(student’s writing) • Plane crash • At 7.30 the Boeing 747 of Air France took off from the airport in Paris to New York. When the plane was flying the passengers were reading, listening to music and sleeping – also the air hostesses were serving dinner, when suddenly a bomb exploded and the plane crashed. A co-operative process • “reader and writer are like dancers following each others’ steps” (Hoey 2001:43) • If the writer takes the trouble to anticipate what the reader might be needing the reader’s task is made easier • This is one of the reasons why we find regular patterning in different genres signals • non-fiction texts contain many signals to guide the reader through by means of the creation of expectations • Some narrative texts contain preview statements that function as signals about the nature of the text to come • Writers anticipate our needs by presenting information in the order we need it • Sometimes our expectations become clearer once a text is underway Patterns and expectations • See Aesop text • As soon as we come to the second episode we have expectations • Matching relations of similarity and contrast can be set up through parallelism and repetition across episodes patterns • Parallelism: a mixture of constants and variables • One day a traveller asked him • A few hours later another traveller asked Aesop • Constants: same day/ a traveller • Variables: different time of day/different traveller Understanding and producing texts • As we have seen then texts have structure. One of the goals of text analysis is to examine how the reader or user of a text recognises that the words/phrases/sentences must be co-interpreted, that parts of the text are dependent on others. • To be able to understand how texts are produced and understood we need discourse competence. Grammar and discourse • Discourse decisions have grammatical implications and every grammatical decision has potential discourse implications • Patterns of text organisation are grounded in the detail of the text Examples Demonstratives can signal how near or close to the writer an element is, this positioning can be understood both physically but also metaphorically in terms of attitude Sometimes that or those mean thing/s person/people we all know about (‘those strimmers’) that Monday morning feeling Kellog’s Puffed Wheat and Ovaltine texts in Working with Texts What part do demonstrative and personal reference play in positioning the readers of the texts? What pattern do the texts illustrate? What questions are the readers expected to ask and get answers to? What semantic fields can you identify? intercity Look at the Intercity texts (p242-244), ask the same questions and try to identify further patterns Try to link the patterns with the titles (e.g. inside vs outside , flat out vs laid back ) Try to link the details with the overall purpose (what do they want you to do what problem of yours are they offering to solve) Things to look for or consider Genre/field Addresser/Addressee relationship – shared social meaning Voice Register- tenor Illocutionary intent /purpose Critical social meaning (representation of a culture’s established imagery, values)