Overview How to utilise these Lessons Học IELTS in 30 Days thế nào? What to do with the lessons Time management Manual One by one accordingly How to truly utilise these lessons Absorb at your own pace Write notes Use the Textbook - this IS THE TEXTBOOK Use this to FOLLOW the lessons Nộp Bài Tập Về Nhà thế nào? How to submit your homeworks Time management Manual Daily Homeworks For the next 30, 60, 90 days MUST complete daily homeworks Weekly to-dos are available in lessons 1 of "Tăng Cường Tiếng Anh Cấp Tốc" Follow the lessons along, and you will find the Weekly to-dos within this Textbook as well Time management Nhận bài chữa How to utilise your reviewed homeworks Manual Reviewed Homeworks These are your CURATED LESSONS CBA spends a FORTUNE for this system This is the difference maker, we are delivering 1-1 lessons TO YOU through these reviewed Homeworks It is CRUCIAL, extremely VITAL, and of UTMOST IMPORTANCE that you must complete your Homeworks. This is for YOU, use it. Time management One on one HELP Your personalised tutor class@cbavn.com IELTS Reading Dừng Đoán Mò - Tìm Đáp Án Chính Xác 100% of the time Đọc không hiểu Tăng Tiếng Anh Thần Tốc Problem 3 Vấn Đề Chủ Yếu khi làm Reading Không thấy đáp án Thêm từ khoá nữa, thêm từ khoá mãi Mất thời gian Đọc 20%, Đáp Án 80% Đọc Không Hiểu Tăng Tiếng Anh Thần Tốc 3 Bài Đọc It's like doing the reading IELTS passages, but not really. Cách Tăng Đọc Hiểu Money, Business, Success, Life PITCH DECK V 1.0 Không phải BBC và CNN CNBC Make It BuzzfeedNews News Around the World. Không thấy đáp án Tìm khó, nhiều từ đồng nghĩa. Không có luật tìm từ khoá không phải chọn trạng từ, danh từ, động từ hay tính từ Thêm Từ Khoá Chọn từ khoá để HIỂU - không phải để "chọn" PITCH DECK V 1.0 More, not less, it's not broken, it's just not working YET! Your own understanding Your own memory Chọn từ khoá để NHỚ NỘI DUNG - không phải để cắm đầu tìm đáp án Mất thời gian Đọc 20% Bài Đọc - Ra 80% Đáp Án 1) Nhận dạng câu hỏi Fill in the blanks Short answers True False Not Given / Yes No Not Given Choosing from the list Matching Heading Difference maker PITCH DECK V 1.0 The 20-80 Rule 2) Hai Câu Đầu Từng Đoạn + Tiêu Đề Đọc Chậm + Đọc đủ = Save time = Đọc nhanh 3) Ghi Ý Chính Từng Đoạn Đọc xong, viết ý chính ngắn gọn nhất (VN/ENG) 4) Đọc Câu hỏi - Chọn Keyword(s) Chọn để Hiểu và Nhớ 5) Tìm + Đối Chiếu Keyword(s) Tìm keyword(s) tương tự trong bài đọc - đối chiếu, rồi mới ra đáp án Difference maker PITCH DECK V 1.0 The 20-80 Rule 6) Thứ Tự Dạng Câu hỏi 1 - 3 = Đáp Án theo thứ tự Thứ tự làm các dạng câu hỏi: 1) Dạng 1-3 2) Dạng 4 3) Dạng 5 IELTS Listening Focus Nghe không hiểu Tăng Tiếng Anh Problem 3 Vấn Đề Chủ Yếu khi làm Listening Nghe không kịp Đọc trước + Đoán trước Chép Chính Tả Waste of time Nghe không hiểu Tăng Tiếng Anh Thật lòng với bản thân Bạn thật sự đang nghe được bao nhiêu? 1-5 Cách Tăng Tiếng Anh Nghe như Bản Xứ cực kì dễ. PITCH DECK V 1.0 Cho Listening Aim big Consistency Repetition over perfectionism Nghe không kịp Vừa nghe vừa đọc, vừa đọc vừa nghe Dạng câu hỏi IELTS Listening Nội Dung Section 1 - 4 Dạng câu hỏi 2 Dạng Nội Dung Section 1-4 2 người Gọi Điện Thoại giữa 2 người Customer to Advisor / Sales rep Hỏi linh tinh Section 1 PITCH DECK V 1.0 Phone calls Nội dung: Hỏi linh tinh về các việc như đặt vé, đặt bàn ăn, sửa xe, đi chơi ở đâu, v.v Dễ nhất Warm up section 1 Người (hoặc 2) Tự thoại Giải thích về địa điểm Section 2 Dễ vừa PITCH DECK V 1.0 Tour guide - Location details Nội dung: Tour guide. Getting serious 2 - 4 người Công việc / học tập Làm việc nhóm Section 3 PITCH DECK V 1.0 Thảo Luận máu lửa Nội dung: Project trên lớp, công ty. Giáo viên - học sinh, học sinh - học sinh, Đồng nghiệp Hard Pay attention 1 người nói Anything topic is possible Bài Giảng trên Đại học, Thuyết trình trong công ty Section 4 PITCH DECK V 1.0 Bài Giảng Academic Nội dung: Project trên lớp, công ty. Hard Pay close attention PITCH DECK V 1.0 Cuộc đời mới là khó nhất You got this. The Woodsman Rule for Listening Prep 1) Đọc trước Difference maker 2) Chọn Từ khoá Chọn Nội Dung Chính PITCH DECK V 1.0 Woodsman Rule for Preparation Đọc trước câu hỏi trong thời gian Cho Phép (rất nhiều) 3) Đoán trước và trong Trước là trước khi nghe Trong là trong lúc nghe 4) Bút không rời khỏi giấy Difference maker 5) Cứ viết tiếp Đáp án sai, viết ra Đán án đúng, viết ra Sửa sau PITCH DECK V 1.0 Woodsman Rule for Listening Không phải đáp án, vẫn nghe, vẫn di theo 6) Tận dụng TOÀN BỘ THỜI GIAN Trước khi nghe: Đọc - Chọn - Đoán Trong lúc nghe: Đoán - Nghe - Viết/Di Bút Chép chính tả Không phải bài kiểm tra trí nhớ Nghe những gì cần nghe NOT Nghe tất cả và nhớ tất cả IELTS Writing Bố Cục - Nội Dung > Từ Khó - Cấu Trúc Bí Ý Tưởng Nội Dung -> Ý tưởng, Bố Cục -> Ý Tưởng Ý Tưởng nào cũng có khả năng 8.0 Problem 3 Vấn Đề Chủ Yếu khi làm Writing Bí Từ, Bí Nội Dung IELTS không chấm Bạn biết bao nhiêu từ khó. IELTS chấm Bạn biết dùng các từ vựng như thế nào - Time & Place Writing Task 1 Dễ hơn Bạn Nghĩ rất rất nhiều. Bí Ý Tưởng Nội Dung bắt nguồn từ Hiểu Các Dạng Đề Line graph 7 Dạng PITCH DECK V 1.0 Các Dạng đề Task 1 Bar chart 7 Dạng PITCH DECK V 1.0 Các Dạng đề Task 1 Pie Chart 7 Dạng PITCH DECK V 1.0 Các Dạng đề Task 1 Table 7 Dạng PITCH DECK V 1.0 Các Dạng đề Task 1 Multiple Diagrams 7 Dạng PITCH DECK V 1.0 Các Dạng đề Task 1 Map 7 Dạng PITCH DECK V 1.0 Các Dạng đề Task 1 Process 7 Dạng PITCH DECK V 1.0 Các Dạng đề Task 1 Two-sides essay Các Dạng đề Task 2 PITCH DECK V 1.0 4 Dạng Agree or disagree Advantages and disadvantages Discuss both sides One-side essay Cause-problem-solution Agree or Disagree Two-sides PITCH DECK V 1.0 Các Dạng đề Task 2 The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the healthcare system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in school curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Advantages & Disadvantages Two-sides PITCH DECK V 1.0 Các Dạng đề Task 2 In many cities the use of video cameras in public places is being increased in order to reduce crime, but some people believe that these measures restrict our individual freedom.Do the benefits of increased security outweigh the drawbacks? Discuss both sides Two-sides PITCH DECK V 1.0 Các Dạng đề Task 2 Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. Cause-problem-solution One-side PITCH DECK V 1.0 Các Dạng đề Task 2 Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem? Bí Từ, Bí Nội Dung Không biết viết cái gì, Không biết dùng từ gì Bố cục Nội dung là gì? Câu từ Từng đoạn viết những câu từ nào sẽ "hay". Rõ ràng, Dễ Đọc PITCH DECK V 1.0 The Science Behind "Context" Từng đoạn viết cái gì Đây mới là cái IELTS cần Rõ ràng: Đọc đi đọc lại vẫn rõ ý Dễ đọc: Đọc đi đọc lại không thấy lủng củng. Writing Task 1 The missing factor. Viết cái gì? Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Cái gì mới là khó? PITCH DECK V 1.0 Task 1 quá dễ Main features - Cái gì đang đập vào mắt? Cái gì cũng đúng Câu từ Nghe như một người 8.0+? Lập Kế Hoạch Không cần từ vựng, ngữ pháp, ý tưởng khủng hơn. WritingTask1 Line, bar, pie, table, multi, map. Intro (1 sentence) Paraphrased question Overview (2-3 sentence) 2 to 3 main features of the diagram NO DATA 1st Body Paragraph (3-4 sentences) Number and location to back up main features 2nd Body Paragraph (3-4 sentences) Number and location to back up main features Process Intro (1 sentence) Paraphrased question Overview (2-3 sentence) Number of stages and number of parts/locations/positions. 1st Body Paragraph (3-4 sentences) First half of the stages and parts/locations/positions 2nd Body Paragraph (3-4 sentences) Second half of the stages and parts/locations/positions. Average global prices of both rose between 2000 and 2011. Trends for both commodities were similar. PITCH DECK V 1.0 Line graph Line graph Average global prices of both rose between 2000 and 2011. PITCH DECK V 1.0 In year 2000, the average global oil price was close to $25 per barrel, and the food price index stood at just under 90 points. From 2000 to 2004 both prices remained relatively stable, before rising steadily between 2004 and 2007. In that same year, the average oil price had more than doubled, to nearly $60 per barrel, and food prices had risen by around 50 points. Line graph Trends for both commodities were similar. PITCH DECK V 1.0 A dramatic increase in both commodity prices was seen from 2007 to 2008, with oil prices rising to a peak of approximately $130 per barrel and the food price index reaches to 220 points. By the beginning of 2009 the price of oil had however, dropped by roughly $90, and the food price index plummeted by about 80 points. Lastly, in 2011, the average oil price rose once again, to nearly $100 per barrel, while the food price index reached its peak, at almost 240 points. Calls made via local, fixed lines were the most popular The lowest - mobile calls, also saw the most dramatic increase PITCH DECK V 1.0 Bar chart Bar chart Calls made via local, fixed lines were the most popular PITCH DECK V 1.0 In 1995, people in the UK used fixed lines for a total of approximately 70 billion minutes for local calls, and about half of that amount of time for national or international calls. On the contrary, mobile phones were only used for around 4 billion minutes. Over the following four years, the figures for all three types of phone call increased steadily. Bar chart The lowest - mobile calls, also saw the most dramatic increase PITCH DECK V 1.0 Coming to the year 1999, the amount of time spent on local calls using landlines had reached a peak at 90 billion minutes. Afterwards, the figure for this category fell, but the rise in the other two types of phone call were still on the rise. In 2002, the number of minutes of national and international landline calls passed 60 billion, while the figure for mobiles rose to around 45 billion minutes. Customer satisfaction increased from 2005 to 2010. Most hotel guests rated satisfactory or poor in 2005, majority - good or excellent in 2010. PITCH DECK V 1.0 Pie chart Pie chart Customer satisfaction increased from 2005 to 2010. PITCH DECK V 1.0 Looking at the positive responses, in 2005 merely 5% of the hotel’s visitors rated its customer service as excellent. This figure however, rose to 28% in 2010. Furthermore, while only 14% of guests described customer service in the hotel as good in 2005, almost three times as many people gave this rating five years later. Pie chart Most hotel guests rated satisfactory or poor in 2005, majority - good or excellent in 2010. PITCH DECK V 1.0 Looking over to the negative reviews, guests who considered the hotel’s customer service to be poor fell from 21% in 2005 to only 12% in 2010. Similarly, the proportion of people who thought customer service was very poor dropped from 15% to only 4% over the 5-year period. Finally, a fall in the number of ‘satisfactory’ ratings in 2010 reflects the fact that more people gave positive responses to the survey in that year. Largest - food, drinks and tobacco. Leisure/education - lowest PITCH DECK V 1.0 Table Table Largest - food, drinks and tobacco. PITCH DECK V 1.0 Out of the five countries, consumer spending on food, drinks and tobacco was noticeably higher in Turkey, at 32.14%, and Ireland, at nearly 29%. The proportion of spending on leisure and education was also highest in Turkey, at 4.35%, while expenditure on clothing and footwear was significantly higher in Italy, at 9%, than in any of the other countries. Table Leisure/education - lowest PITCH DECK V 1.0 It can be seen that Sweden had the lowest percentages of national consumer expenditure for food/drinks/tobacco and for clothing/footwear, at nearly 16% and just over 5% respectively. Spain had slightly higher figures for these categories, but the lowest figure for leisure/education, at only 1.98%. Americans travelled in 2009 was to commute to and from work. Primary concern of travelling for Americans was the cost. PITCH DECK V 1.0 Multiple diagram Multiple Americans travelled in 2009 was to commute to and from work. PITCH DECK V 1.0 Looking more closely at the bar chart, 49% of the trips made by Americans in 2009 were for the purpose of commuting. By contrast, only 6% of trips were visits to friends or relatives, and one in ten trips were for social or recreation reasons. Shopping was cited as the reason for 16% of all travel, while unspecific ‘personal reasons’ accounted for the remaining 19%. Multiple Primary concern of travelling for Americans was the cost. PITCH DECK V 1.0 With regards to the pie chart, price was the key consideration for 36% of American travellers. Almost one in five people cited safety as their foremost travel concern, while aggressive driving and highway congestion were the main issues for 17% and 14% of the travelling public. Finally, a total of 14% of those surveyed thought that access to public transport or space for pedestrians were the most important travel issues. Construction of a ring road around the centre. Various developments shops and housing PITCH DECK V 1.0 Map Map Construction of a ring road around the centre. PITCH DECK V 1.0 Looking at the map of Islip as it is now, we can see that a main road runs through its centre from east to west. The second map shows the planned pedestrianisation of this road. Traffic will be diverted on to a dual carriageway that will form a ring around the town centre. Map Various developments -shops and housing PITCH DECK V 1.0 Currently there is a row of shops along either side of the main road. However, it appears that the shops along the north side of the new pedestrian street will be demolished to make way for a bus station, shopping centre, car park and new housing area. The shops along the south side of the street will remain, but it seems that the town’s park will be reduced in size so that more new houses can be built within the ring road. Five stages in the production of cement Four different materials are mixed together - concrete. PITCH DECK V 1.0 Process Process Five stages in the production of cement PITCH DECK V 1.0 At the first stage in the production of cement, limestone and clay are crushed to form a powder. This powder is then mixed before it passes into a rotating heater. After heating, the resulting mixture is ground, and cement is produced. Finally, the cement is packaged in large bags. Process Four different materials are mixed together concrete. PITCH DECK V 1.0 Cement is one of the four raw materials that are used in the production of concrete, along with gravel, sand and water. To be exact, concrete consists of 50% gravel, 25% sand, 15% cement and 10% water. All four materials are blended together in a rotating machine called a concrete mixer. WritingTask2 Two-sides essay Introduction (2-3 sentences) Paraphrase the question (1 sentence) Thesis (2-3 sentences) 2 to 3 main ideas 1st Body paragraph (3-4 sentences) Main idea (1 sentence) Evidence (1-2 sentences) Supporting/Resulting Idea (1 sentence) 2nd Body paragraph (3-4 sentences) Main idea (1 sentence) Evidence (1-2 sentences) Supporting/Resulting Idea (1 sentence) Conclusion (1-2 sentences) Paraphrase the question again Paraphrase your thesis Agreeordisagree The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the healthcare system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in school curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Habits are best developed during early ages. Habits stay during adulthood as well. Active culture for future generation changes in diet - further prevent health issues. PITCH DECK V1.0 PLANNING: Agreeordisagree The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the healthcare system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in school curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Being overweight has been one of the most common yet problematic health issues for many nations. Many people suggest a definite chief aim to encourage and educate youngsters a more active lifestyle at school. I am completely on board with this solution. PITCH DECK V1.0 PARAPHRASED + THESIS: Agreeordisagree The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the healthcare system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in school curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree? BODY 1: Planning: Habits are best developed during early ages. Firstly, regular physical activity is the number one solution to solving weight related problems. This habit of constantly being on foot is best developed at an early age as sports and aerobatic exercises are most enjoyed from the age of 7 to 15. Statistics have shown that during this time, 65% of active habits encountered would continue to be a part of an adult's lifestyle. Hence, individuals who had developed a passion for sports of any kind during earlier school years would be extremely more likely to stay active when they reach adulthood, preventing obesity and similar health issues. PITCH DECK V1.0 Habits stay during adulthood as well. Agreeordisagree The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the healthcare system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in school curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree? BODY 2: Planning: changes in diet - further prevent health issues. Furthermore, school environment plays a major role in forming an active lifestyle. If the norm is encouraging an active form of living at schools, a healthier culture can be set in the youths' mind. This can improve diets of many families and later generation to support the regular physical activities as these children grow up, which can further ease the financial strain on healthcare systems. PITCH DECK V1.0 Active culture for future generation Agreeordisagree The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the healthcare system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in school curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree? In conclusion, to help nations lower expenditure on weight related healthcare, schools must incorporate a physical curriculum in children's formal education to encourage a more active lifestyle. PITCH DECK V1.0 CONCLUSION: Agreeordisagree The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the healthcare system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in school curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Being overweight has been one of the most common yet problematic health issues for many nations. Many people suggest a definite chief aim to encourage and educate youngsters a more active lifestyle at school. I am completely on board with this solution. Firstly, regular physical activity is the number one solution to solving weight related problems. This habit of constantly being on foot is best developed at an early age. Sports and aerobatic exercises are most enjoyed from the age of 7 to 15. Statistics have shown that during this time, 65% of active habits encountered would continue to be a part of an adult's lifestyle. Hence, individuals who had developed a passion for sports of any kind during earlier school years would be extremely more likely to stay active when they reach adulthood, preventing obesity and similar health issues. Furthermore, school environment plays a major role in forming an active lifestyle. If the norm is encouraging an active form of living at schools, a healthier culture can be set in the youths' mind. This can improve diets of many families and later generation to support the regular physical activities as these children grow up, which can further ease the financial strain on healthcare systems. In conclusion, to help nations lower expenditure on weight related healthcare, schools must incorporate a physical curriculum in children's formal education to encourage a more active lifestyle. Discussbothsides Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. Tertiary education puts you ahead. Unis are getting competitive means greatly valued in the work place Extra soft skills = extra advantage This help fierce competition turns into an advantage Depends on the field of work Medicine, law need educational background, whereas business needs real life experience. PITCH DECK V1.0 PLANNING: Discussbothsides Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. It is considered by some that being a university graduate is the key to securing a good job, while there are others who think that it is better to have experience in soft skills. In my opinion, I believe that having university education is essential for academic jobs while soft skills and experience are more useful in business. PITCH DECK V1.0 PARAPHRASED + THESIS: Discussbothsides Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. Planning: Tertiary education puts you ahead. Unis are getting competitive means greatly valued in the work place On the one hand, many think it is easier for most people to find a good job if they are university graduates with a good degree. In other words, having tertiary education puts people one step ahead of others who do not and this can be the deciding factor in getting a good job. The competition to get into universities and the increasing number of graduates show just how significant this level of education is for people's future work opportunities PITCH DECK V1.0 BODY 1: Discussbothsides Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. BODY 2: On the other hand, having work-experience and soft skills such as leadership skills and other interpersonal skills can also throw the balance in favour of the applicant, according to some. For many positions, there are an overwhelming number of applicants and, therefore, it is often thought that having relevant experience in that line of work or having acquired useful soft skills that can be valuable to a company, can put one ahead of the game when applying for a position. PITCH DECK V1.0 Planning: Extra soft skills = extra advantage This helps fierce competition turn into an advantage Discussbothsides Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. Planning: Depends on the field of work Medicine, law need educational background, whereas business needs real life experience. Finally, in my opinion, whether needing high level education or skills and experience, depends on the position being applied for. Take for example law, medicine, or teaching, it is impossible to be considered for the position without the required educational background. In contrast, in business, it would be more important for a candidate to have soft skills and experience in that line of business so they can step into a position without further training and be of immediate benefit to the company. PITCH DECK V1.0 BODY 3: Discussbothsides Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. In conclusion, getting a good job requires a relevant background either in experience or education depending on the type of work and field. People should make sure they attain the necessary skills or degrees before applying for a job in order to be sure of success. PITCH DECK V1.0 CONCLUSION: Discussbothsides Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. It is considered by some that being a university graduate is the key to securing a good job, while there are others who think that it is better to have experience in soft skills. In my opinion, I believe that having university education is essential for academic jobs while soft skills and experience are more useful in business. On the other hand, having work-experience and soft skills such as leadership skills and other interpersonal skills can also throw the balance in favour of the applicant, according to some. For many positions, there are an overwhelming number of applicants and, therefore, it is often thought that having relevant experience in that line of work or having acquired useful soft skills that can be valuable to a company, can put one ahead of the game when applying for a position. Finally, in my opinion, whether needing high level education or skills and experience, depends on the position being applied for. Take for example law, medicine, or teaching, it is impossible to be considered for the position without the required educational background. In contrast, in business, it would be more important for a candidate to have soft skills and experience in that line of business so they can step into a position without further training and be of immediate benefit to the company. In conclusion, getting a good job requires a relevant background either in experience or education depending on the type of work and field. People should make sure they attain the necessary skills or degrees before applying for a job in order to be sure of success. PITCH DECK V1.0 On the one hand, many think it is easier for most people to find a good job if they are university graduates with a good degree. In other words, having tertiary education puts people one step ahead of others who do not and this can be the deciding factor in getting a good job. The competition to get into universities and the increasing number of graduates show just how significant this level of education is for people's future work opportunities. One-side essay Introduction (2-3 sentences) Paraphrase the question (1 sentence) Cause + Problem + Solution Overview (2-3 sentences) 2-3 Causes + 1-2 Solutions 1st Body paragraph (3-4 sentences) 1 Cause (1 sentence) Evidence (1 sentence) 1 Cause (1 Sentence) 1 Evidence (1 sentence) 2nd Body paragraph (3-4 sentences) 1 solution (1 sentence) 1 benefit (1-sentence) 1 solution (1 sentence) 1 benefit (1 sentence) Conclusion (1-2 sentences) Paraphrase the question again Paraphrase your causes + problems + Solutions Cause-problem-solution Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem? Cause + Problem: Lack of rehabilitation whilst in prison. Around with other criminals - no positive example to change Hard to find employment with no new skill-sets More prone to commit crime. Solution: Retraining: Better employment opportunity. Supervision: Won't commit more crime since being closely watched. PITCH DECK V1.0 PLANNING: Cause-problem-solution Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem? A large number of criminals who serve their first prison sentence, leave prison only to reoffend. This is mainly because of the lack of rehabilitation and difficulty finding regular employment once released. There are a number of solutions which should be implemented to deal with criminals who reoffend. PITCH DECK V1.0 PARAPHRASED + THESIS Cause-problem-solution Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem? Planning: Cause + Problem: Lack of rehabilitation whilst in prison. Around with other criminals - no positive example to change Hard to find employment with no new skill-sets More prone to commit crime. Firstly, the reason for most first time offenders committing crimes again, once they have been released from prison, is due to the lack of rehabilitation whilst in prison. In other words, offenders are not given a chance to retrain and learn new skills for their future or develop a deeper understanding of correct moral behaviour and instead mix with other criminals, which only strengthens their criminal intentions . Secondly, repeat offending is also owing to the difficulty in finding employment after being released. As a result, many of them struggle financially which leads them back to crime, regardless of the consequences. PITCH DECK V1.0 BODY 1 Cause-problem-solution Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem? BODY 2 There are two effective solutions to the problem of repeat offenders. One way to tackle this is to ensure that all criminals entering prison are given the chance to retrain with useful skills which will hopefully ensure them a job after they have served their sentence. By doing this, it will help them reintegrate back into society and give them some means of supporting themselves financially. Another method of dealing with criminals who reoffend is to have more supervision and checks in place when they are back in society. This solution would hopefully prevent them from taking any chances and deter them from reoffending because they are being so closely watched. PITCH DECK V1.0 Planning: Solution: Retraining: Better employment opportunity. Supervision: Won't commit more crime since being closely watched. Cause-problem-solution Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem? In conclusion, having training in prison and also close observation when first time offenders are released are effective in dealing with the issue. If governments implemented these solutions, crime figures would soon drop. PITCH DECK V1.0 CONCLUSION IELTS Speaking Do you know how to speak English? Problem 1 Vấn Đề Duy Nhất khi làm Speaking Không Tự Nhiên Câu từ Nội dung Ứng xử Không tự nhiên? Vì Tiếng Anh chắp vá Vừa Nói vừa Đoán Sự thật đau lòng Quan Trọng hoá Phát Âm PITCH DECK V 1.0 Định nghĩa Tiếng Anh chắp vá Đoán xem từ nào dùng thì sẽ đúng, Ngữ pháp nào dùng thì sẽ đúng Câu hỏi có ý nghĩa như thế nào là đúng? Lên xuống bừa bãi, Tiếng Anh là 100% phát âm Thế Nội Dung thì sao? Không có sự Tự Tin Not enough QUALITY REPETITION or even No Repetition at all. Khi Tiếng Anh tốt Chiến Thuật làm Speaking mới thăng hoa Từ Vựng + Ngữ Pháp + Phát Âm + Ý tưởng + Sự tự nhiên Part 1 Tell A Story Part 2 PITCH DECK V 1.0 Chiến Thuật IELTS Speaking PPF Be truthful Part 3 You are supposed to communicate in English PITCH DECK V 1.0 Why learn hacks and tricks around it? Why lower your own chances of getting the grade you deserve? It really is not that difficult. Trackable, applicable, understandable English Foundation How to learn English and actually get results? Sau 1 Tháng Tăng 1 Chấm These are your next steps. Time management Accountability Each skill gets 1 band higher READING LISTENING UNDERSTAND UNDERSTAND English proficiency English proficiency KEYWORDS CONCENTRATION locate and find answers faster, more accurately Pen on paper 120% of the time. BETTER ENGLISH BETTER ENGLISH Learn English passively and actively Learn English passively and actively BETTER SKILLS BETTER SKILLS Master all technigues and strategies in Reading Master all techniques and strategies in Listening SPEAKING WRITING How will you set your company from the competition? UNDERSTAND UNDERSTAND Reflex Topic FLUENCY STRUCTURE Real English Paragraphing BETTER ENGLISH BETTER ENGLISH Spoken English Written English BETTER ENGAGEMENT COHERENCE Be human Logical and consistent 3 Passages Reading How to truly improve your Reading comprehension 3 Reading passages per IELTS exam => 3 passages per day It's like doing the IELTS Reading everyday - but not really. Up your English. 3 Times/week - Real Mock Tests Real IELTS Reading Test Up your Keywords Finding Skill 4 Listening Formats Listening How to truly improve your Listening 4 Listening Sections - 4 Listening formats daily Tutorials Interviews Keynotes Pannel Discussions Up your English. 3 Times/week - Real Mock Tests Real IELTS Listening Test Up your Pen on Paper Skill 3 IELTS Speaking Sections Speaking How to truly improve your Speaking - the ability to COMMUNICATE. 1 Speaking Format daily 3 Topic buckets Educate Humour Inspire 3 Talking Points Who What Why Resources: Recommended: YouTube Articles Podcasts Speaking How to truly improve your Speaking - the ability to COMMUNICATE. 2 IELTS Mock Tests Record - send to CBA Up your Fluency 2 IELTS Writing Tasks Writing How to truly improve your Writing 1 Writing Format daily 3 Topic buckets Educate Humour Inspire 3 Writing Points Who What Why Be a journalist Resources: Recommended: CBNBC BuzzfeedNews Writing How to truly improve your Writing 2 IELTS Writing Mock Tests Write - send to CBA Up your Content WEEKLY TO DOS CBA DURATION MON TUE WED THU FRI 15' - Inf Reading Listening Reading Listening Reading Listening Reading Listening Reading Listening 15' - Inf Speaking Writing Speaking Writing Speaking Writing Speaking Writing Speaking Writing Official IELTS duration IELTS Reading - Listening IELTS Speaking - Writing IELTS Reading - Listening IELTS Speaking - Writing IELTS Reading - Listening Notes: WEEKLY TO DOS CBA DURATION SAT SUN 15' - Inf Reading Listening Reading Listening 15' - Inf Speaking Writing Speaking Writing Have Fun Freestyle Freestyle Notes: Sau 1 Tháng Tăng 1500 Từ Mới IELTS These are your next steps. Time management Accountability Each skill gets 1 band higher Read Definition 1500 new words RECORD Listen Definition Sau 1 Tháng Tăng 100 Cấu Trúc IELTS These are your next steps. Time management Accountability Each skill gets 1 band higher Read Definition 100 grammar structures RECORD Listen Definition