lOMoARcPSD|35071644 English 10 LAS Quarter 3 AB Philosophy (St. Paul University Manila) Scan to open on Studocu Studocu is not sponsored or endorsed by any college or university Downloaded by MALIDAS JOHANNA (malidas.jo@southernchristiancollege.edu.ph) lOMoARcPSD|35071644 10 ENGLISH Third Quarter LEARNING ACTIVITY SHEETS Note: Practice personal hygiene protocols at all times. Downloaded by MALIDAS JOHANNA (malidas.jo@southernchristiancollege.edu.ph) lOMoARcPSD|35071644 Republic of the Philippines Department of Education REGION II – CAGAYAN VALLEY Enclosure No. 2.c to Regional Memorandum No. ___________, s 2020 Policy Guidelines on the Conduct of Online Quality Assurance of Learning Resources COPYRIGHT PAGE Learning Activity Sheet in ENGLISH (Grade 10) Copyright © 2021 DEPARTMENT OF EDUCATION Regional Office No. 02 (Cagayan Valley) Regional Government Center, Carig Sur, Tuguegarao City, 3500 “No copy of this material shall subsist in any work of the Government of the Philippines. 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SIOCO, JOEAN ANDAL, WILFORD A. MERCADO, MARK VALENTIN MALUTA Content Editor : MERLIE M. BINAY-AN Language Editor: MERLIE M. BINAY-AN : MARYELLE MACAPIA, ARISON PAUL FLORENTINO Layout Artist : CHESTER C. CORTEZ Focal Persons : DINDO JOHN H. MORENO BERMELITA E. GUILLERMO RONNIE F. TEJANO RIZALINO G. CARONAN Printed by: DepEd Regional Office No. 02 Regional Center, Carig Sur, Tuguegarao City Note: Practice personal hygiene protocols at all times. Downloaded by MALIDAS JOHANNA (malidas.jo@southernchristiancollege.edu.ph) lOMoARcPSD|35071644 Table of Contents COMPETENCIES Compose an argumentative essay. EN10WC-IIh-13 Use a variety of informative, persuasive and argumentative writing techniques EN10WC–III b -14.1.2 Compose an independent critique of a chosen selection. (EN10WC-IIIg14) Critique a literary selection based on the structuralist/ formalist, moralist, Marxist, feminist, historical, and reader-response approaches. EN10RC-IIIa-22.1; EN10RC-IIIb-22.2; EN10RC-IIIc-22.3; EN10RC-IIId22.4; EN10RC-IIIe-22.5; EN10RC-IIIf-2.18; EN10RC-IIIg-2.18 Note: Practice personal hygiene protocols at all times. Downloaded by MALIDAS JOHANNA (malidas.jo@southernchristiancollege.edu.ph) PAGE 1-8 9-22 23-30 31-46 lOMoARcPSD|35071644 ENGLISH 10 Name of Learner:_______________________________ Section:______________________________________ Grade Level:______________ Score:____________________ LEARNING ACTIVITY SHEET Argumentative Essay Background Information for Learners An argumentative essay aims to convince the reader to agree with the argument being made about a debatable issue. The given issue is also called a proposition. In this type of academic writing, the writer must take a stand whether he/she is pro (in favor) or anti (against) the issue. Writing an argumentative essay is akin to engaging one’s self in a debate – the writer needs to carefully weigh in both sides of the argument and decide which argument to favor. Then, the writer must provide fact-based evidences to support his/her claim, rather than giving his/her personal thoughts and opinions about the issue. Argumentative essays require good research, awareness of the reader’s biases, and a solid understanding of both sides of the issue. Learning Competency Compose an argumentative essay. (EN10WC-IIh-13) Exercise 1. Composing an argumentative essay follows a particular format to make your writing more effective. Identify the proper steps in crafting an argumentative essay by arranging which process should come first before the other. Accomplish the graphic organizer by referring to the pool of choices above it. Making an outline Writing the draft Editing/Revising the Essay Finalizing the essay Choosing a topic Doing the research Start here End here—good job! 2 3 5 4 Note: Practice personal hygiene protocols at all times. Downloaded by MALIDAS JOHANNA (malidas.jo@southernchristiancollege.edu.ph) lOMoARcPSD|35071644 Exercise 2. Put a check (✔) mark if the statement is true, and (X) if otherwise. ___1. A good topic for an argumentative essay should have more than one point of view. ___2. It is important to choose a broad topic to discuss in the essay. ___3. The thesis statement is the same as the writer’s viewpoint of the topic. ___4. Research is needed to make certain that you can defend your position. ___5. In writing argumentative essays, presenting fragments of your personal experience can be helpful in supporting your position. ___6. Doing an outline helps you to effectively organize your essay. ___7. Each body paragraph may focus on more than one main point. ___8. Using transitional devices is always important in all forms of academic writing including argumentative writing. ___9. The acceptable number of paragraphs for argumentative essay is four. ___10. You may conclude the essay by rephrasing the thesis statement and summarizing the key arguments. Exercise 3. An effective argumentative essay makes use of transitional devices to improve organization of ideas; thus, helping the reader to better understand the essay. Categorize each transitional device according to function. TRANSITIONAL DEVICES To compare To prove/ Emphasize To add To show time/ sequence besides however first obviously definitely in brief whereas indeed further next previously yet To give examples immediately despite in addition what’s more in fact as I have noted To show exception To repeat To summarize/ conclude moreover as I have said on the other hand in contrast in spite of on the whole nevertheless thereafter to illustrate take the case of in conclusion for instance Note: Practice personal hygiene protocols at all times. Downloaded by MALIDAS JOHANNA (malidas.jo@southernchristiancollege.edu.ph) lOMoARcPSD|35071644 My Guide Hello, learner! Before you move on to the succeeding tasks, you may refer to the sample structure of an argumentative essay below. Prompt/Topic: Education must continue despite the COVID-19 pandemic I. Introduction (A) Hook: DepEd is adamant about opening of classes amid health concerns caused by the COVID-19 pandemic. (B) Thesis Statement (TS): I stand with DepEd Secretary Leonor Briones when she said that education must continue II. Body Paragraph #1 First key argument: There are different learning modalities that require children to learn without risking their health. Supporting details/Examples: blended learning III. Body Paragraph #2 Second key argument: Unavailability of antiviral or vaccine Supporting details/Examples: Children should invest their time in education while health experts work on possible treatment/vaccine IV. Body Paragraph #3 Third key argument: Children may encounter more challenges if there is longer delay in education Supporting details/Examples: Children may lose interest or motivation if there is no learning continuity. V. Conclusion Rephrase TS: Education is important Sum up key arguments: DepEd offers alternative modes of learning without compromising the health and safety of the children. . Note: Practice personal hygiene protocols at all times. Downloaded by MALIDAS JOHANNA (malidas.jo@southernchristiancollege.edu.ph) lOMoARcPSD|35071644 My Guide Now read the sample essay and find out how the writer makes use of the essay structure above in composing his argumentative essay. Education Must Continue The Department of Education (DepEd) is adamant about opening of classes amid health concerns caused by the COVID-19 pandemic. I stand with DepEd Secretary Leonor Briones when she said that education must continue. First, education is equally as important as health, and DepEd offers various learning modalities without having to compromise the safety of the children. These learning modalities include electronic and online media learning as well as traditional learning, hence the term ‘blended learning’. In other words, blended learning is a combination of traditional and online learning and is believed to be the most fitting learning modality in this time of health crisis. Further, the education chief has already addressed the country that no face-toface learning shall take place until a vaccine is made available, so children may still continue with their education without the worry of contracting the virus. Second, health scientists across the globe are still working on potential treatment and vaccine for the coronavirus disease. According to science studies, it could be months or even longer before an antiviral or vaccine is available. With this, children may as well invest their time in education while the rest of the world awaits a new progress in medicine. Pursuing education at this time, given the aforementioned learning modalities, is far more sensible than letting our children become unproductive in the confines of our homes. Third, children may face more consequences if they feel like they are deprived academically. The longer delay in their education may adversely affect their interest and motivation to learn. Moreover, today’s children are deemed as 21st century learners and one manifestation of such is their preference in using technology in learning. Do you not think now is the time to leverage the power of technology to improve the learning progress of our children? Of course, there are other learning modalities if technology is not accessible, but the point is we must support the learning continuity of our children. There is no need to stress why education is important and there may be other several reasons why it must continue despite the existing threat in one’s health. Lastly, why should we deprive our children of their right to education if the DepEd can offer alternative ways to let them learn without compromising their health and safety? Note: Practice personal hygiene protocols at all times. Downloaded by MALIDAS JOHANNA (malidas.jo@southernchristiancollege.edu.ph) lOMoARcPSD|35071644 Exercise 4. You have learned from the previous activities that preparing an outline or structure of the essay is necessary to make your writing both efficient and effective. Complete the outline below prior to writing your first draft. Choose your preferred topic below. Prompt/Topic #1: Cagayan Black sand Mining is Beneficial to the Economy Prompt/Topic #2: Prayers Answer All of Life’s Challenges Prompt/Topic #3: Reading is Overrated Topic: __________________________________________________________________ I. Introduction (A) Hook: ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ (B) Thesis Statement (TS): ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ II. Body Paragraph #1 First key argument: _________________________________________________________________ Supporting details/Examples: _________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ III. Body Paragraph #2 Second key argument: _______________________________________________ Supporting details/Examples: _________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ IV. Body Paragraph #3 Third key argument: _________________________________________________________________ Supporting details/Examples: __________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________ V. Conclusion Rephrase TS: _________________________________________________________________ Sum up key arguments: __________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________ Note: Practice personal hygiene protocols at all times. Downloaded by MALIDAS JOHANNA (malidas.jo@southernchristiancollege.edu.ph) lOMoARcPSD|35071644 Exercise 5. After making an outline for your argumentative essay, you are now ready to write your first draft. Use your own pad paper in writing or encode your essay using the format found in the link https://natureofwriting.com/courses/essay-writing/lessons/the-essayformat/topic/the-essay-format-apa/. The rubrics below shall be used in evaluating your output. Rubric for Evaluation of Argumentative Essay Criteria Organization Argument Development of Ideas Outstanding (5 points) The writer establishes a clear position. All ideas are strongly related to the position and are focused on the issue. By sustaining this focus, the writer is able to create an essay that is unified and coherent. The argument is forceful and convincing because the reasons and evidence the writer uses to support the position are specific and well chosen. Scoring System Fair (3 points) The writer establishes a clear position. Most ideas are related to the position and are focused on the issue. The essay is coherent, though it may not always be unified due to minor lapses in focus. The argument is largely convincing because the reasons and evidence the writer uses to support the position are specific and appropriate. Poor (1 point) The writer’s position is weak or somewhat unclear. The lack of a clear, effective position or the writer’s inclusion of irrelevant information interferes with the focus and coherence of the essay. The argument is ineffective and unconvincing because the reasons and evidence the writer uses to support the position are inappropriate, vague, or insufficient. The writer develops the The writer develops essay in a manner that the essay in a manner demonstrates a good that demonstrates understanding of the only a limited persuasive writing task. understanding of the persuasive writing task. The writer demonstrates The writer has little an adequate command or no command of of sentence boundaries sentence boundaries and spelling, and spelling, capitalization, capitalization, punctuation, grammar, punctuation, and usage conventions. grammar, and usage conventions. The writer develops the essay in a manner that demonstrates a thorough understanding of the persuasive writing task. Language/ The writer Conventions demonstrates a consistent command of sentence boundaries and spelling, capitalization, punctuation, grammar, and usage conventions. Rubrics adapted and revised. Source: STAAR Persuasive Writing Rubric English II by the Texas Education Agency Student; Assessment Division; Fall 2010 Note: Practice personal hygiene protocols at all times. Downloaded by MALIDAS JOHANNA (malidas.jo@southernchristiancollege.edu.ph) lOMoARcPSD|35071644 Reflection Congratulations! You have come this far! After successfully accomplishing the tasks, I would like you to share your thoughts about writing an argumentative essay by discussing the following key points: 1. What did I learn from the activities? 2. How did the activities help me in improving my writing skills? Write your response here: _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ References for learners Department of Education. Celebrating Diversity through World Literature – Grade 10 Learner’s Material, p. 259 ● Retrieved from: https://owl.purdue.edu/owl/general_writing/mechanics/transitions_ and_transitional_devices/transitional_devices.html ● STAAR Persuasive Writing Rubric English II by the Texas Education Agency Student; Assessment Division; Fall 2010 • Note: Practice personal hygiene protocols at all times. Downloaded by MALIDAS JOHANNA (malidas.jo@southernchristiancollege.edu.ph) lOMoARcPSD|35071644 Answer Key Exercise 1 1. Choosing a topic 2. Doing the research 3. Making an outline 4. Writing the draft 5. Editing/Revising the essay 6. Finalizing the essay Exercise 2 1. X 2. X 3. ✔ 4. ✔ 5. ✔ 6. ✔ 7. X 8. ✔ 9. X 10. ✔ Exercise 3 (answers in no particular order) To add To compare besides whereas further on the other hand what’s more however moreover nevertheless in addition in contrast To show time/ To give examples sequence for instance immediately take the case of next to illustrate previously thereafter first To prove/emphasize indeed obviously definitely in fact To show exception despite in spite of yet To repeat as I have said as I have noted To summarize/ conclude in brief on the whole in conclusion Exercise 4 (answers may vary) (refer to My Guide) Exercise 5 (answers may vary) (refer to My Guide) Prepared by JOMELVI ALLEORE B. SIOCO Murong National High School Note: Practice personal hygiene protocols at all times. Downloaded by MALIDAS JOHANNA (malidas.jo@southernchristiancollege.edu.ph) lOMoARcPSD|35071644 . ENGLISH 10 Name of Learner:_____________________________________ Grade Level:_________ Section:______________________________________________ Score:_____________ LEARNING ACTIVITY SHEET Informative, Persuasive and Argumentative Writing Techniques Background Information for Learners Writing is one of the important skills for us to develop as it makes us more productive in terms of our communication skills. Writing brings out our emotions as we freely express ourselves through our write ups. We write because of varied reasons like to entertain, to explain or inform, to argue and to persuade our readers with our ideas. Sometimes, we perceive writing as a hard work and tend to avoid it. But if we started to brainstorm, let our good thoughts come out freely, plan, scribble our ideas and bravely share or publish it afterwards, would be self - rewarding, thus, we can certainly battle our fears to write. Remember, no writers are born, they are made meaning constant practice makes a writer. This module will be a big help for you. Here, you can let somebody be informed by the facts you have learned and read lately, convince or persuade others by your own point of view and argue with the principle you really believe in. Improve then your writing skills by learning this module. I advise you to read the entire module first, for you to easily catch up with the activities. The details you want to learn in developing skill is meticulously crafted for a determined learner like you. So what are you waiting for, sit and accomplish the activities intended for you. Embrace your fear of writing and believe in yourself that you could do it. You just follow the steps in writing discussed further in this activity sheet. Happy writing and congratulations in advance. Learning Competency & Code Use a variety of informative, persuasive and argumentative writing techniques EN10WC–III b -14.1.2 Note: Practice personal hygiene protocols at all times. Downloaded by MALIDAS JOHANNA (malidas.jo@southernchristiancollege.edu.ph) lOMoARcPSD|35071644 Exercise 1: Arrange Me Well! The following are the Steps of the Writing Process and their definitions. Rearrange them in the correct order by writing a, b, c on what comes first, second and so on. Write your answer on the blank provided before the number. ___________1. Evaluating - Reflecting and assessing what has been written. ___________2. Drafting - Focusing on writing ideas down and quickly putting thoughts on paper. ___________3. Revising - Reworking the organization and details. Making it better. ___________4. Planning - Thinking about a topic and brainstorming. ___________5. Editing - Reviewing and correcting spelling, grammar, capitalization and punctuation. Making it correct. ___________6. Publishing - Showing final writing with others. Used to convince your reader to accept your opinion Explains your point of view Uses convincing language Uses sensory details Educates and conveys information about a persons, places, things, events or ideas Uses comparison, cause and effect, and chronological order Makes you choose your position and know your audience Convinces readers to adopt a certain point of view or take a personal action Has a clear position Supports each claim with arguments and each argument with facts Exercise 2: Put Me in Place! The box above contains the characteristics of informative, persuasive and argumentative types of writing. Analyze each characteristic and plot five entries in their respective essay types. Informative Persuasive Argumentative Note: Practice personal hygiene protocols at all times. Downloaded by MALIDAS JOHANNA (malidas.jo@southernchristiancollege.edu.ph) lOMoARcPSD|35071644 Exercise 3: What Am I? There is a hidden word in each riddle below. Overall clue: these words are going to aid you in the writing activities you are about to do. Some letters are also given for you as additional clues. Write your answers on the blank provided after the puzzle. 1. I am the statement of your point of view or opinion, and I serve as the topic of your argument. C _ _ _ M - __________________________ 2. I am a set of proofs of or facts that support your opinion. You may start writing me by saying “for instance, another reason why,” etc. I am also called as supporting details. _V_ _ E _ C _ - ___________________________ 3. I am what you are going to use if someone disagrees to with your point of view. You may start writing me by telling “it’s easy to think that, others may say that, you might argue that,” and so on. C _ U N _ _ _ A R _ _ M _ _ T - ________________________ 4. I am the way you capsulized or restate your stand or opinion in a powerful way. You may use introductory words like, “it is clear that, therefore, to sum it up,”and so on if you write me. C _ _ C L _ _ _ _ N - ______________________ 5. I am the first thing you scribble in your paper. I am the beginning of the piece and I should hook your readers’ interest. I _ T _ _ D _ C T _ _ N - _______________________ Exercise 4: Understand Me More! Read and analyze the paragraph below and answer the questions that follow. Shade the circle that corresponds to the letter of your correct answer. I think I could be of a great help as well as a better leader on eradicating cases of bullying in school. Bullying can harm students’ social, emotional, psychosocial, physical aspects in which the effect is long – lasting as it comes in many ways and forms like verbal, physical and in social media. It is said that 28% of students in grades 6 – 12 experiencing bullying and sounds very alarming. You might think that I can’t be of help on the eradication of the acts. But I have demonstrated already a great responsibility like making platforms against it by helping in initiating seminars and brochures for proper downgrading of information dissemination for students’ awareness. I also encourage our victims to speak out and report matters responsibly to the Guidance Office or to the administration. I know that I would be more responsible and qualified to the said position. Therefore, my presence and my abilities could be of a great help as well as a better leader on eradicating cases of bullying in school which can create outstanding partnerships between and among students, administrators and the people in the community as well. Note: Practice personal hygiene protocols at all times. Downloaded by MALIDAS JOHANNA (malidas.jo@southernchristiancollege.edu.ph) lOMoARcPSD|35071644 ABCD O O O O 1. I think I could be of a great help as well as a good leader on eradicating cases of bullying in school. What do you call this in an argumentative writing? A. Claim B. Evidence C. Introduction D. Conclusion O O O O 2. Bullying can harm students in social, emotional, psychosocial, physical aspects in which the effect is long – lasting as it comes in many ways and forms like verbal, physical and in social media. It said that 28% students in grades 6 – 12 experiencing bullying and sounds very alarming. These are examples of _____________. A. Counter-Argument B. Evidence C. Introduction D. Conclusion O O O O 3. You might think that I can’t be of help on the eradication of the acts. But I have demonstrated already a great responsibility like making platforms against it by helping in initiating seminars and brochures for proper downgrading of information dissemination for students’ awareness. What do you call these examples? A. Counter-Argument B. Evidence C. Introduction D. Conclusion O O O O 4. Therefore, my presence and my abilities could be of a great help as well as a better leader on eradicating cases of bullying in school can built outstanding partnerships between and among students, administrators and the people in the community as well. This paragraph is an example of a/ an _____________. A. Claim B. Evidence C. Introduction D. Conclusion O O O O 5. What is the purpose of the selection? A. To persuade a reader to adopt a certain point of view or take a personal action B. To convince your reader to accept your opinion C. To educate and convey information about a person place thing events/ideas D. To give information to the reader After answering the first four exercises of this module, I know you are now excited and completely prepared to do the writing task. I encourage you to use the steps in writing and its respective characteristics. Exercise 5: Lay Your Thoughts Down! Time to use your pen for your first writing task. Write your own argumentative writing. Choose one topic from the suggested ones below. A. No Social Amelioration Program (SAP) for the middle-class families B. Electronic games negatively affect our mental health C. Learners should not be physically present in school during the COVID-19 D. No using of facemask inside a private car. Note: Practice personal hygiene protocols at all times. Downloaded by MALIDAS JOHANNA (malidas.jo@southernchristiancollege.edu.ph) lOMoARcPSD|35071644 Argumentative Writing Argumentative Writing Claim: ___________________________________________________________________ Reason#1_________ _________________ _________________ _________________ _________________ _________________ _________________ _________________ _________________ _________________ _________________ _________________ _________________ _________________ _________________ _________________ Supporting Details __________________ __________________ __________________ __________________ __________________ __________________ __________________ __________________ __________________ __________________ __________________ __________________ __________________ __________________ __________________ __________________ Reason#2________ ________________ ________________ ________________ ________________ ________________ ________________ ________________ ________________ ________________ ________________ ________________ ________________ ________________ ________________ ________________ Reason#3_________ _________________ _________________ _________________ _________________ _________________ _________________ _________________ _________________ _________________ _________________ _________________ _________________ _________________ _________________ _________________ Supporting Details Supporting Details ___________________ ___________________ ___________________ ___________________ ___________________ __________________ ___________________ ___________________ ___________________ ___________________ ___________________ ___________________ ___________________ ___________________ ___________________ ___________________ ___________________ ____________________ ____________________ ____________________ ____________________ ____________________ ____________________ ____________________ ____________________ ____________________ ____________________ ____________________ ____________________ ____________________ ____________________ ____________________ ____________________ ____________________ Note: Practice personal hygiene protocols at all times. Downloaded by MALIDAS JOHANNA (malidas.jo@southernchristiancollege.edu.ph) lOMoARcPSD|35071644 Explanation:________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ Conclusion:_________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________ Note: Practice personal hygiene protocols at all times. Downloaded by MALIDAS JOHANNA (malidas.jo@southernchristiancollege.edu.ph) lOMoARcPSD|35071644 Exercise 6: Challenge Accepted! Time to scribble your pen again. Write your own informative writing. Choose one topic from the suggested ones below. A. COVID 19 Pandemic B. Stress C. Poverty Informative Writing Topic: _________________________________________________________________________ Introduction: ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ __ Body: (Details) ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________ ____________________ Details:_____________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________ Note: Practice personal hygiene protocols at all times. Downloaded by MALIDAS JOHANNA (malidas.jo@southernchristiancollege.edu.ph) lOMoARcPSD|35071644 Conclusion: _______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________ ______________________ Exercise 7: Your Mightier Pen! Time to scribble your pen for the last writing activity. Write your own persuasive writing. Choose one topic from the suggested ones below. A. Should there be 20 students in a classroom in times of pandemic B. Should we make the school calendar this coming school year longer C. Dogs are better pets than cats Persuasive Writing Audience: _____________________________________________________________ Issue/Topic: ___________________________________________________________ Claim: ________________________________________________________________ Reason 1: Reason 2: Reason 3: Note: Practice personal hygiene protocols at all times. Downloaded by MALIDAS JOHANNA (malidas.jo@southernchristiancollege.edu.ph) lOMoARcPSD|35071644 Supporting Details Supporting Details Supporting Details Conclusion: Rubric for Informative Text Composition CRITERIA CONTENT (main idea is clear with supporting details using facts and figures) ORGANIZATION (it has clear introduction, body and conclusion, uses sensory images, compare contrast and transition signals) CLARITY OF IDEAS (presents clear and sound evidences which are authentic) EMPHASIS (has interesting and attention-grabbing introduction; has strong conclusion that includes a call to action) LANGUAGE MECHANICS AND CONVENTION (displays correct sentences, in spelling, punctuation, grammar) TOTAL LEGEND: Rating Description 5 Excellent 4 Very Impressive 3 Impressive 2 Convincing 1 Beginning 5 4 3 2 Note: Practice personal hygiene protocols at all times. Downloaded by MALIDAS JOHANNA (malidas.jo@southernchristiancollege.edu.ph) 1 TOTAL lOMoARcPSD|35071644 Rubrics for Persuasive & Argumentative Text Composition CRITERIA 5 FOCUS/CONTENT (states clear position at the beginning until the end of the work; topic captures the reader’s attention. PERSUASIVE/ARGUMENTATIVE TECHNIQUES USED (uses strong and effective persuasive techniques and details; support the thesis and the stand of the writer) DEVELOPMENT/ORGANIZATION (has strong organizational plan; has logically arranged statements from the most important to the least important or vice versa; develops the topic thoroughly with examples and supports) CLARITY OF IDEAS (presents clear and sound arguments and evidences are authentic) EMPHASIS (has interesting and attention-grabbing introduction; has strong conclusion that includes a call to action) LANGUAGE MECHANICS AND CONVENTION (displays minor error in spelling, punctuation, grammar and they varied in structure) TOTAL LEGEND: Rating Description 5 Excellent 4 Very Impressive 3 Impressive 2 Convincing 1 Beginning 4 3 2 1 TOTAL Reflections of the Learner In this lesson, cite the things in which you felt the following emotions: a. Interest ___________________________________________________________ b. Excitement ____________________________________________________________ c. Worry ____________________________________________________________ d. Sadness______________________________________________________________ References: Department of Education. English10 Learner’s Material Retrieved from: https://www.time4writing.com/writing-resources/writing-process/ Retrieved from: https://www.quora.com/What-are-some-examples-of-the-characteristics-ofpersuasive- writing Note: Practice personal hygiene protocols at all times. Downloaded by MALIDAS JOHANNA (malidas.jo@southernchristiancollege.edu.ph) lOMoARcPSD|35071644 Answer Key Exercise 1: 1.E 2.B 3.C 4.A 5.D 6.F Exercise 2: Informative 1.It educates and convey information about a person place thing events or ideas 2.Uses comparison, cause and effect and chronological order 3.It gives facts details examples and explanations 4.Organize writing with transition words 5.Uses sensory details Persuasive Argumentative 1.Choose your position and know your audience 2.To persuade a reader to adopt a certain point of view or take a personal action 3.Explain your point of view 4.Deliver a strong message that is repeated in the conclusion 5.Pull your audience in with an interesting hook in your introduction 1.Clear, concise and defined thesis 2.Strong conclusion 3.It has clear position 4.Support each claim with arguments and each argument with facts 5.It is use to convince your reader to accept your opinion Exercise 3: 1.CLAIM 2.EVIDENCE 3.COUNTER ARGUMENT 4.CONCLUSION 5.INTRODUCTION Exercise 4: 1.A 2.B 3.A 4.D 5.B Exercise 5 -7: Use the Rubrics for the Scoring Prepared by JOEAN ANDAL Bintawan National High School Note: Practice personal hygiene protocols at all times. Downloaded by MALIDAS JOHANNA (malidas.jo@southernchristiancollege.edu.ph) lOMoARcPSD|35071644 ENGLISH 10 Name of Learner:________________________________________ Section:________________________________________________ Grade Level:_______ Score:__________ LEARNING ACTIVITY SHEET Guided Critiquing of a Speech Delivery Background Information for Learners You have been reminded that the final task for this lesson is to compose an independent critique of a chosen selection. It is therefore essential that you know the key words that you will be using in composing an independent critique to come up with a good output. The following keywords will be used in your tasks and rubrics: 1. Content- the things that are held or included in something 2. Critique- evaluate (a theory or practice) in a detailed and analytical way. 3. Guided Critiquing- an act of criticizing or evaluating something using a set of standards 4. Relevance- the quality or state of being closely connected or appropriate. 5. Practical Application- is the use of something for a reasonable purpose. 6. Timeliness- the fact or quality of being done or occurring at a favorable or useful time 7. Values Integration- is a channel of values development through the teaching-learning activities in the different learning areas 8. Organization- the structure or arrangement of related or connected items. 9. Order of Ideas- In good paragraphs, sentences are arranged in logical order. 10. Delivery- the manner or style of giving a speech. 11. Stress- give particular emphasis or importance to (a point, statement, or idea) made in speech or writing 12. Enunciation- articulation; pronunciation 13. Phrasing- is the grouping together of words to come up with a thought 14. Voice- the sound produced in a person's larynx and uttered through the mouth, as speech or song. 15. Command of Language- knowledge of a particular subject, especially the ability to speak a foreign language 16. Modulation- variation in the strength, tone, or pitch of one's voice 17. Volume- the degree of loudness or the intensity of a sound 18.Voice Quality- That component of SPEECH which gives the primary distinction to a given speaker's VOICE when pitch and loudness are excluded. Since you have to critique a speech, it is also necessary that the speaker whom you will critique knows the required guidelines in proper speech delivery. Given below are the guidelines for delivering a speech properly. Note: Practice personal hygiene protocols at all times. Downloaded by MALIDAS JOHANNA (malidas.jo@southernchristiancollege.edu.ph) lOMoARcPSD|35071644 How to Prepare and Deliver a Speech Effectively 1. Focus on the Main Message If you’ve been asked to give a speech, the first step is to choose a focused message. Even if you’ve been given a theme for your speech such as “inspiration” or “strength,” this is more a general umbrella under which your specific points (and point of view) will fall. Make a short list of five ideas for your speech. It can be helpful to write them in command form. “Strength” a brainstorm of five speech messages could include: “don’t ever give up, “overcome failure,” “build physical strength” and “know your strengths.” If you feel stuck for ideas, a reference to your current political or social context can bring new insight to your theme. 2. Build Three Supporting Points By focusing on your central message with supporting evidence, you strengthen it. A stronger message will resonate more with your listeners. To come up with supporting points, ask yourself “why” about the speech message you’ve selected. For example, for “don’t ever give up,” you’d ask, “Why should you never give up?” Make a list of several possible supporting ideas. Read through your finished list, and at the end, cross off the weaker ones that don’t support your main point. 3. Keep your Audience in Mind After looking into the central message and supporting points for your speech, you can flesh out the rest by considering your audience. Knowing who your audience are and what they are expecting from this encounter can help you pick the right tone to optimal effect. 4. Be a Tactful Speaker Some speakers choose to generalize complex topics in a speech because they think it’s easier for the audience to understand. It’s actually better to do the opposite. Listeners tend to connect better with concrete examples and personal stories, so embrace detail in your speech. A personal anecdote about why one shouldn’t give up is more effective than just saying not to. Areas where your passion and knowledge overlap are generally the richest. If appropriate to the context, don’t be afraid to tell a joke about the topic. A little self-deprecating humor goes down well with the crowd, one can always give it a shot. 5. Brevity is the Soul of the Wit Some of the most effective speeches of all times have been brief. “The Gettysburg Address” was only 15 minutes, while “I Have a Dream” was for 17 minutes. Aim for brevity. A good formula is to speak for less time than you’ve been asked to, as people tend to overestimate the attention span of their audience. 6. Feedback is Important As the speech has to be delivered to an audience, it is important to get feedback from theoretical listeners. Read your speech to someone you trust and ask for some honest feedback. In particular, it can be helpful to ask if anything is confusing or unclear. Your speech will have more impact if the message is engaging. Note: Practice personal hygiene protocols at all times. Downloaded by MALIDAS JOHANNA (malidas.jo@southernchristiancollege.edu.ph) lOMoARcPSD|35071644 7. Eye Contact is Important During your speech, look at your audience while you are speaking. Put the content of your speech, either fully written out or in bullet points, so you are not staring straight down at a piece of paper while you speak. Engaging your audience visually makes you appear secure and confident. 8. Use Appropriate Gestures A well-placed gesture can add humor or aid greater understanding of your speech. For optimal effectiveness, punctuate your speech with gestures when appropriate. If you’re a very nervous public speaker, try just resting your hands against the podium. It will make you feel steadier. 9. Walk When Required If your speech is informal, walking from one side of the stage to the other can help engage people sitting in different parts. It will draw your audience in and enhance your confidence. 10. Use Props If appropriate, bring props to punctuate your speech for your audience. This can be anything useful such as a graph to handout to all attendees or even a personal item to drive home your speech’s content. Props can personalize your speech and add interest or humor. Limit yourself to one or two props maximum per speech. Learning Competency Compose an independent critique of a chosen selection (EN10WC-IIIg14) Task 1.1 Listen to Me. (For students with Internet Connectivity) Watch the video about “My Dad, My Inspiration: A Tribute Speech to JJ Jones (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vQkggTZmXgc). Then, answer the questions that follow. Note: Practice personal hygiene protocols at all times. Downloaded by MALIDAS JOHANNA (malidas.jo@southernchristiancollege.edu.ph) lOMoARcPSD|35071644 Answer the following questions: 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. What kind of speech is it? Was she able to deliver her speech properly? Why? Why not? How could she improve her speech delivery? Did you encounter the same difficulty in your speeches? What do you think are the other things to consider in delivering a speech of dedication? Task 1.2 State of the Mind (For Students with NO Internet Access). Ask an elder in the family to read the following speech. Be able to follow the guidelines for proper speech delivery. Then answer the questions that follow. Tribute Speech “Life is the sum of your choices.” That quote by Albert Camus, a Nobel Prize-winning novelist, is vividly brought to life in the story of one particular man I know. I would like to share with you someone in my life who has influenced me greatly, my father, Fred Nameless. My father is a self-sacrificing man, who is authentic in all of his dealings with others. However, in keeping with his authenticity, he tends to be impulsive. It is because of his example, that I carefully consider the choices I make as a parent; knowing I can dramatically affect the lives of my children through my choices and characteristics. Fred’s characteristic of sacrificing his time and energy for others was quite authentic – he was never trying to gain anything for himself. I look back now and remember a scene that played itself out many times when I was a teenager. I see a man in his thirties who just wants to relax at the end of his day of work and familial responsibility. One by one each of my three younger siblings go off to bed. As the 10:00 news wraps up, I know that if I want to talk to him, now is the time; I certainly wasn’t going to get up at 4am to talk to him before he went to work. “Dad, can I talk to you about something?” Every time, he would give me his full attention, and I would begin to discuss whatever was on my mind that day. The topics ranged from expanding curfews to school subjects, to grand philosophical questions. No matter what the topic or how late the conversation went, he sacrificed his time and his sleep, without ever making me feel like I was an inconvenience. He did not do this because he felt he should or to be a “good” parent, he did it because he wanted to. Our conversations were genuine, and he talked to me as a peer, as much as any person possibly can when talking to a teenager. So as we have seen, my father was self-sacrificing and authentic. D. Transition Statement However, often a positive trait manifests itself in a negative fashion; as was the case with my father. His authenticity, being true to himself, often led him to impulsiveness. Some of the consequences for Fred’s actions fizzled out after a short time and left us with many entertaining stories; but other consequences were huge and could not be undone. Note: Practice personal hygiene protocols at all times. Downloaded by MALIDAS JOHANNA (malidas.jo@southernchristiancollege.edu.ph) lOMoARcPSD|35071644 For example, he was working as a policeman in Gary, Indiana under Mayor Richard Hatch during the seventies. (Mayor Hatch was a notoriously corrupt. It wasn’t until I took History 102 here at Palomar and learned that he had placed armed men at the polls to intimidate voters that I realized how corrupt he was.) One day, when my father saw the mayor come out of the city offices with his two bodyguards, he approached them and asked the bodyguards if they had permits for the weapons they were carrying. When they said they did not, he arrested them. The entertaining story that came from this is that for his “punishment”, his superiors put him on traffic duty, where he immediately bought a clown nose and Clarabelle horn and danced around in the intersection directing traffic. The serious side of the story is that the political ramifications of this single choice led to my father being convicted on trumped up drug trafficking charges that sent him to prison for 3 years. Although he was later exonerated when the FBI did a full investigation into this and other matters regarding Mayor Hatch, the consequence to our family was huge. Today we have looked at someone who has influenced my life greatly through his characteristics and his choices, my father, Fred Nameless. We have seen that he was a very authentic person who could be self-sacrificing and yet tended to be impulsive. The impact of living through the consequences of my father’s decisions has taught me to consider more fully the consequences of my own actions – before I act. To Mr. Camus’ quote that our life is the sum of our choices, I would like to add that the choices of others are often included in the sum as well. Answer the following questions: 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. What kind of speech is it? Was she able to deliver his/her speech properly? Why? Why not? How could he/she improve her speech delivery? Did you encounter the same difficulty in your speeches? What do you think are the other things to consider in delivering a speech of dedication? Your answers here: Note: Practice personal hygiene protocols at all times. Downloaded by MALIDAS JOHANNA (malidas.jo@southernchristiancollege.edu.ph) lOMoARcPSD|35071644 Task 2. Critique Me! Based on the task you have chosen in Task 1, critique the speech using the rubric below. Put a check (/) to the scale you rate the speaker. Elements Content Organization Delivery Voice Guided Critiquing Rubrics of a Speech Delivery Scale Criteria Poor Good Very Good 1 2 3 Relevance Practical Application Timeliness Values Integration Order of Ideas Stress Enunciation Excellent 4 Phrasing Command Modulation Volume Quality Task 3. Put Sum. From your ratings, sum up all your observations/responses in the itemized critique form using the chart below. Elements Criteria Good Points Remarks Points for Improvement Relevance Content Organization Delivery Voice Practical Application Timeliness Values Integration Order of Ideas Stress Enunciation Phrasing Command Modulation Volume Quality General Observation: ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________. Note: Practice personal hygiene protocols at all times. Downloaded by MALIDAS JOHANNA (malidas.jo@southernchristiancollege.edu.ph) lOMoARcPSD|35071644 Task 4. Sum It Up! Compose a paragraph in not less than ten (10) sentences summing up all your observations in Tasks 2 and 3. _____________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________. Task 5. Grow! (Guided Rubric On Work). Make you own Itemized Guided Critiquing Rubric using Task 2 as your guide. Remember that it is your own critiquing guide and it must not be the same with that of Task 2. Please use this sheet to make your Guided Critiquing Rubric table. MINUTE PAPER Name of Learner:___________________________ Grade Level:______________ Section:__________________________________ Score:___________________ Direction: Write brief answers to the following questions. What did I learn? ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________. What questions do I still have in mind? ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________. What did I like best in our lesson? ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________. How can I still improve my participation/performance? ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________. Note: Practice personal hygiene protocols at all times. Downloaded by MALIDAS JOHANNA (malidas.jo@southernchristiancollege.edu.ph) lOMoARcPSD|35071644 References: Retrieved from: https://www.englishmate.com/blog/how-to-prepare-and-deliver-a-speecheffectively/ Retrieved from: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vQkggTZmXgc Retrieved from: https://www.tjsl.edu/sites/default/files/files/Gabe%20Baldini%20%20 Dedication%20Speech.pdf Retrieved from: https://www2.palomar.edu/users/dhokett/Tribute_Speech_Sample.pdf Key to Correction: Task 1.1 and 1.2 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. Dedication Speech Answers may vary Answers may vary Answers may vary Answers may vary Task 2. Answers may vary Task 3. Answers may vary Task 4. Answers may vary Task 5. Answers may vary Prepared by: WILFORD A. MERCADO Munguia National High School Note: Practice personal hygiene protocols at all times. Downloaded by MALIDAS JOHANNA (malidas.jo@southernchristiancollege.edu.ph) lOMoARcPSD|35071644 ENGLISH 10 Name of Learner: _____________________________________ Section: _____________________________________________ Grade Level: _____ Score: _____ LEARNING ACTIVITY SHEET Literary Approaches Background Information for Learners Literary Approaches You might have experienced that while you were reading a particular selection, you got angry to one of the characters or you associated yourself to what was happening in that literary piece. Unaware, you were already doing literary criticism or literary analysis. The purpose of the literary approaches is to help the reader understand and interpret a selection. The following below are the approaches on how to make a critique or analysis to literary a text. Structuralist/Formalist Structuralism or formalism is an approach in analyzing and interpreting a selection by looking into the form of a selection. The critic, one who analyses the text, will scrutinize the elements such as point of view, theme, symbol, plot, setting, character, measure, rhyme, tone, imagery, etc. and how these create meaning. Moralist The philosopher Plato debated that literature has the ability to influence people. With this, moralist approach in literary criticism judges the value of literature based on the teachings that can be taken from a literary text. The role of the critic in this way of analyzing literature is to look into how the events, characters, themes, symbols, etc. develop or destroy a person’s value or morality. Marxist This approach in literary criticism is anchored on the political theory of Carl Marx. The focus of Marxist criticism is to describe how social class, economy, money and power play a role in literary selections. The social class struggles in literature reflect how the low class are being dominated by the upper class in the society. The critic will dig into how the dominant groups exploit the minority groups in a text and how to redeem the status of said minority groups. Feminist Most of the literature in the past were gender-biased due to domination of malewritten texts. Feminist criticism tries to change the mostly male-dominated perspective towards women on literature through the feminist consciousness. Note: Practice personal hygiene protocols at all times. Downloaded by MALIDAS JOHANNA (malidas.jo@southernchristiancollege.edu.ph) lOMoARcPSD|35071644 In this approach, the critic will look into how literature treats women such as their roles, images, portrayals, character, and characterization. It aims to uplift the women’s status from a discriminated or silenced one into women who are equal with men. Its intention is not to overcome the men but both to have harmony and collaboration. Historical This approach in literary criticism perceives that each literary work is a product of its time and its world. It investigates how a text manifests the attitudes, beliefs, ideas, and culture of the period it was created. In doing this, the reader or critic will look into the background of a story or a poem in order that he or she will understand the text better. Included in the background are the author, the time it was written, and the situation at that time. Reader-response This criticism focuses on what was going on in the mind of the reader before, during, and after reading. The critic is not interested on the intention of the author and what kind of text he or she reads. Instead, the meaning is created based on the reader’s experience while reading. This mean that there is no single meaning since the reader is the one producing it. Additionally, a reader’s understanding of a text may change from time to time due to his or her experiences and reader’s from different generations, culture, and place can have different understanding. Learning Competency: Critique a literary selection based on the structuralist/formalist, moralist, Marxist, feminist, historical, and reader-response approaches. Learning Competency Codes: EN10RC-IIIa-22.1; EN10RC-IIIb-22.2; EN10RC-IIIc-22.3; EN10RC-IIId-22.4; EN10RC-IIIe-22.5; EN10RC-IIIf-2.18; EN10RC-IIIg-2.18 Note: Practice personal hygiene protocols at all times. Downloaded by MALIDAS JOHANNA (malidas.jo@southernchristiancollege.edu.ph) lOMoARcPSD|35071644 Exercise 1: Match the words from the box into the situation they describe below. Write the letter of your answer on the space provided before the number. A. B. Feminist Marxist C. Moralist D. Reader-response E. Structuralist/Formalist F. Historical ____ 1. The story depicted a person who was working for his entire life as a slave to a rich boss. ____ 2. The old version of the story “Cinderella” presented her as an abused maid and who just taken out of miserable life when the prince married her. was ____ 3. “Daedalus and Icarus” intends to teach the reader about the right actions and attitudes should be possessed. that ____ 4. The novels of Jose Rizal illustrated how the Spaniards treated the Filipinos when the Philippines was colonized. ____ 5. In your English class, you were asked to give your reactions to the characters and how behave in the story. they ____ 6. Teacher Aguinaldo instructed you to analyze a sonnet by looking into the number of syllables, number of lines, the sounds of last words, and the theme. Reading Text: The Story of Keesh Jack London KEESH lived long ago on the rim of the polar sea, was head man of his village through many and prosperous years, and died full of honors with his name on the lips of men. So long ago did he live that only the old men remember his name, his name and the tale, which they got from the old men before them, and which the old men to come will tell to their children and their children's children down to the end of time. And the winter darkness, when the north gales make their long sweep across the ice-pack, and the air is filled with flying white, and no man may venture forth, is the chosen time for the telling of how Keesh, from the poorest IGLOO in the village, rose to power and place over them all. He was a bright boy, so the tale runs, healthy and strong, and he had seen thirteen suns, in their way of reckoning time. For each winter the sun leaves the land in darkness, and the next year a new sun returns so that they may be warm again and look upon one another's faces. The father of Keesh had been a very brave man, but he had met his death in a time of famine, when he sought to save the lives of his people by taking the life of a great polar bear. In his eagerness he came to close grapples with the bear, and his bones were crushed; but the bear had much meat on him and the people were saved. Keesh was his only son, and after that Keesh lived alone with his mother. But the people are prone to forget, and they forgot the deed of his father; and he being but a boy, and his mother only a woman, they, too, were swiftly forgotten, and ere long came to live in the meanest of all the IGLOOS. Note: Practice personal hygiene protocols at all times. Downloaded by MALIDAS JOHANNA (malidas.jo@southernchristiancollege.edu.ph) lOMoARcPSD|35071644 It was at a council, one night, in the big IGLOO of Klosh-Kwan, the chief, that Keesh showed the blood that ran in his veins and the manhood that stiffened his back. With the dignity of an elder, he rose to his feet, and waited for silence amid the babble of voices. "It is true that meat be apportioned me and mine," he said. "But it is often times old and tough, this meat, and, moreover, it has an unusual quantity of bones." The hunters, grizzled and gray, and lusty and young, were aghast. The like had never been known before. A child, that talked like a grown man, and said harsh things to their very faces! But steadily and with seriousness, Keesh went on. "For that I know my father, Bok, was a great hunter, I speak these words. It is said that Bok brought home more meat than any of the two best hunters, that with his own hands he attended to the division of it, that with his own eyes he saw to it that the least old woman and the last old man received fair share." "Na! Na!" the men cried. "Put the child out!" "Send him off to bed!" "He is no man that he should talk to men and graybeards!" He waited calmly till the uproar died down. "Thou hast a wife, Ugh-Gluk," he said, "and for her dost thou speak. And thou, too, Massuk, a mother also, and for them dost thou speak. My mother has no one, save me; wherefore I speak. As I say, though Bok be dead because he hunted over-keenly, it is just that I, who am his son, and that Ikeega, who is my mother and was his wife, should have meat in plenty so long as there be meat in plenty in the tribe. I, Keesh, the son of Bok, have spoken." He sat down, his ears keenly alert to the flood of protest and indignation his words had created. "That a boy should speak in council!" old Ugh-Gluk was mumbling. "Shall the babes in arms tell us men the things we shall do?" Massuk demanded in a loud voice. "Am I a man that I should be made a mock by every child that cries for meat?" The anger boiled a white heat. They ordered him to bed, threatened that he should have no meat at all, and promised him sore beatings for his presumption. Keesh's eyes began to flash, and the blood to pound darkly under his skin. In the midst of the abuse he sprang to his feet. "Hear me, ye men!" he cried. "Never shall I speak in the council again, never again till the men come to me and say, 'It is well, Keesh, that thou shouldst speak, it is well and it is our wish.' Take this now, ye men, for my last word. Bok, my father, was a great hunter. I, too, his son, shall go and hunt the meat that I eat. And be it known, now, that the division of that which I kill shall be fair. And no widow nor weak one shall cry in the night because there is no meat, when the strong men are groaning in great pain for that they have eaten overmuch. And in the days to come there shall be shame upon the strong men who have eaten overmuch. I, Keesh, have said it!" Jeers and scornful laughter followed him out of the IGLOO, but his jaw was set and he went his way, looking neither to right nor left. The next day he went forth along the shore-line where the ice and the land met together. Those who saw him go noted that he carried his bow, with a goodly supply of bone-barbed arrows, and that across his shoulder was his father's big hunting-spear. And there was laughter, and much talk, at the event. It was an unprecedented occurrence. Never did boys of his tender age go forth to hunt, much less to hunt alone. Also were there shaking of heads and prophetic mutterings, and the women looked pityingly at Ikeega, and her face was grave and sad. "He will be back here long," they said cheeringly. Note: Practice personal hygiene protocols at all times. Downloaded by MALIDAS JOHANNA (malidas.jo@southernchristiancollege.edu.ph) lOMoARcPSD|35071644 "Let him go; it will teach him a lesson," the hunters said. "And he will come back shortly, and he will be meek and soft of speech in the days to follow." But a day passed, and a second, and on the third a wild gale blew, and there was no Keesh. Ikeega tore her hair and put soot of the seal-oil on her face in token of her grief; and the women assailed the men with bitter words in that they had mistreated the boy and sent him to his death; and the men made no answer, preparing to go in search of the body when the storm abated. Early next morning, however, Keesh strode into the village. But he came not shamefacedly. Across his shoulders he bore a burden of fresh-killed meat. And there was importance in his step and arrogance in his speech. "Go, ye men, with the dogs and sledges, and take my trail for the better part of a day's travel," he said. "There is much meat on the ice - a she-bear and two half-grown cubs." Ikeega was overcome with joy, but he received her demonstrations in manlike fashion, saying: "Come, Ikeega, let us eat. And after that I shall sleep, for I am weary." And he passed into their IGLOO and ate profoundly, and after that slept for twenty running hours. There was much doubt at first, much doubt and discussion. The killing of a polar bear is very dangerous, but thrice dangerous is it, and three times thrice, to kill a mother bear with her cubs. The men could not bring themselves to believe that the boy Keesh, single-handed, had accomplished so great a marvel. But the women spoke of the fresh-killed meat he had brought on his back, and this was an overwhelming argument against their unbelief. So they finally departed, grumbling greatly that in all probability, if the thing were so, he had neglected to cut up the carcasses. Now in the north it is very necessary that this should be done as soon as a kill is made. If not, the meat freezes so solidly as to turn the edge of the sharpest knife, and a three-hundred-pound bear, frozen stiff, is no easy thing to put upon a sled and haul over the rough ice. But arrived at the spot, they found not only the kill, which they had doubted, but that Keesh had quartered the beasts in true hunter fashion, and removed the entrails. Thus, began the mystery of Keesh, a mystery that deepened and deepened with the passing of the days. His very next trip he killed a young bear, nearly full-grown, and on the trip following, a large male bear and his mate. He was ordinarily gone from three to four days, though it was nothing unusual for him to stay away a week at a time on the ice-field. Always he declined company on these expeditions, and the people marveled. "How does he do it?" they demanded of one another. "Never does he take a dog with him, and dogs are of such great help, too." "Why dost thou hunt only bear?" Klosh-Kwan once ventured to ask him. And Keesh made fitting answer. "It is well known that there is more meat on the bear," he said. But there was also talk of witchcraft in the village. "He hunts with evil spirits," some of the people contended, "wherefore his hunting is rewarded. How else can it be, save that he hunts with evil spirits?" "Mayhap they be not evil, but good, these spirits," others said. "It is known that his father was a mighty hunter. May not his father hunt with him so that he may attain excellence and patience and understanding? Who knows?" None the less, his success continued, and the less skillful hunters were often kept busy hauling in his meat. And in the division of it he was just. As his father had done before him, he saw to it that the least old woman and the last old man received a fair portion, keeping no more for himself than his needs required. And because of this, and of his merit as a hunter, he was looked upon with respect, and Note: Practice personal hygiene protocols at all times. Downloaded by MALIDAS JOHANNA (malidas.jo@southernchristiancollege.edu.ph) lOMoARcPSD|35071644 even awe; and there was talk of making him chief after old Klosh-Kwan. Because of the things he had done, they looked for him to appear again in the council, but he never came, and they were ashamed to ask. "I am minded to build me an IGLOO," he said one day to Klosh-Kwan and a number of the hunters. "It shall be a large IGLOO, wherein Ikeega and I can dwell in comfort." "Ay," they nodded gravely. "But I have no time. My business is hunting, and it takes all my time. So it is but just that the men and women of the village who eat my meat should build me my IGLOO." And the IGLOO was built accordingly, on a generous scale which exceeded even the dwelling of Klosh-Kwan. Keesh and his mother moved into it, and it was the first prosperity she had enjoyed since the death of Bok. Nor was material prosperity alone hers, for, because of her wonderful son and the position he had given her, she came to he looked upon as the first woman in all the village; and the women were given to visiting her, to asking her advice, and to quoting her wisdom when arguments arose among themselves or with the men. But it was the mystery of Keesh's marvellous hunting that took chief place in all their minds. And one day Ugh-Gluk taxed him with witchcraft to his face. "It is charged," Ugh-Gluk said ominously, "that thou dealest with evil spirits, wherefore thy hunting is rewarded." "Is not the meat good?" Keesh made answer. "Has one in the village yet to fall sick from the eating of it? How dost thou know that witchcraft be concerned? Or dost thou guess, in the dark, merely because of the envy that consumes thee?" And Ugh-Gluk withdrew discomfited, the women laughing at him as he walked away. But in the council one night, after long deliberation, it was determined to put spies on his track when he went forth to hunt, so that his methods might be learned. So, on his next trip, Bim and Bawn, two young men, and of hunters the craftiest, followed after him, taking care not to be seen. After five days they returned, their eyes bulging and their tongues a- tremble to tell what they had seen. The council was hastily called in Klosh-Kwan's dwelling, and Bim took up the tale. "Brothers! As commanded, we journeyed on the trail of Keesh, and cunningly we journeyed, so that he might not know. And midway of the first day he picked up with a great he-bear. It was a very great bear." "None greater," Bawn corroborated, and went on himself. "Yet was the bear not inclined to fight, for he turned away and made off slowly over the ice. This we saw from the rocks of the shore, and the bear came toward us, and after him came Keesh, very much unafraid. And he shouted harsh words after the bear, and waved his arms about, and made much noise. Then did the bear grow angry, and rise up on his hind legs, and growl. But Keesh walked right up to the bear." "Ay," Bim continued the story. "Right up to the bear Keesh walked. And the bear took after him, and Keesh ran away. But as he ran he dropped a little round ball on the ice. And the bear stopped and smelled of it, then swallowed it up. And Keesh continued to run away and drop little round balls, and the bear continued to swallow them up." Exclamations and cries of doubt were being made, and Ugh-Gluk expressed open unbelief. "With our own eyes we saw it," Bim affirmed. Note: Practice personal hygiene protocols at all times. Downloaded by MALIDAS JOHANNA (malidas.jo@southernchristiancollege.edu.ph) lOMoARcPSD|35071644 And Bawn - "Ay, with our own eyes. And this continued until the bear stood suddenly upright and cried aloud in pain, and thrashed his fore paws madly about. And Keesh continued to make off over the ice to a safe distance. But the bear gave him no notice, being occupied with the misfortune the little round balls had wrought within him." "Ay, within him," Bim interrupted. "For he did claw at himself, and leap about over the ice like a playful puppy, save from the way he growled and squealed it was plain it was not play but pain. Never did I see such a sight!" "Nay, never was such a sight seen," Bawn took up the strain. "And furthermore, it was such a large bear." "Witchcraft," Ugh-Gluk suggested. "I know not," Bawn replied. "I tell only of what my eyes beheld. And after a while the bear grew weak and tired, for he was very heavy and he had jumped about with exceeding violence, and he went off along the shore-ice, shaking his head slowly from side to side and sitting down ever and again to squeal and cry. And Keesh followed after the bear, and we followed after Keesh, and for that day and three days more we followed. The bear grew weak, and never ceased crying from his pain." "It was a charm!" Ugh-Gluk exclaimed. "Surely it was a charm!" "It may well be." And Bim relieved Bawn. "The bear wandered, now this way and now that, doubling back and forth and crossing his trail in circles, so that at the end he was near where Keesh had first come upon him. By this time he was quite sick, the bear, and could crawl no farther, so Keesh came up close and speared him to death." "And then?" Klosh-Kwan demanded. "Then we left Keesh skinning the bear, and came running that the news of the killing might be told." And in the afternoon of that day the women hauled in the meat of the bear while the men sat in council assembled. When Keesh arrived a messenger was sent to him, bidding him come to the council. But he sent reply, saying that he was hungry and tired; also that his IGLOO was large and comfortable and could hold many men. And curiosity was so strong on the men that the whole council, Klosh-Kwan to the fore, rose up and went to the IGLOO of Keesh. He was eating, but he received them with respect and seated them according to their rank. Ikeega was proud and embarrassed by turns, but Keesh was quite composed. Klosh-Kwan recited the information brought by Bim and Bawn, and at its close said in a stern voice: "So explanation is wanted, O Keesh, of thy manner of hunting. Is there witchcraft in it?" Keesh looked up and smiled. "Nay, O Klosh-Kwan. It is not for a boy to know aught of witches, and of witches I know nothing. I have but devised a means whereby I may kill the ice-bear with ease, that is all. It be headcraft, not witchcraft." "And may any man?" "Any man." There was a long silence. The men looked in one another's faces, and Keesh went on eating. Note: Practice personal hygiene protocols at all times. Downloaded by MALIDAS JOHANNA (malidas.jo@southernchristiancollege.edu.ph) lOMoARcPSD|35071644 "And . . . and . . . and wilt thou tell us, O Keesh?" Klosh-Kwan finally asked in a tremulous voice. "Yea, I will tell thee." Keesh finished sucking a marrow-bone and rose to his feet. "It is quite simple. Behold!" He picked up a thin strip of whalebone and showed it to them. The ends were sharp as needlepoints. The strip he coiled carefully, till it disappeared in his hand. Then, suddenly releasing it, it sprang straight again. He picked up a piece of blubber. "So," he said, "one takes a small chunk of blubber, thus, and thus makes it hollow. Then into the hollow goes the whalebone, so, tightly coiled, and another piece of blubber is fitted over the whalebone. After that it is put outside where it freezes into a little round ball. The bear swallows the little round ball, the blubber melts, the whalebone with its sharp ends stands out straight, the bear gets sick, and when the bear is very sick, why, you kill him with a spear. It is quite simple." And Ugh-Gluk said "Oh!" and Klosh-Kwan said "Ah!" And each said something after his own manner, and all understood. And this is the story of Keesh, who lived long ago on the rim of the polar sea. Because he exercised headcraft and not witchcraft, he rose from the meanest IGLOO to be head man of his village, and through all the years that he lived, it is related, his tribe was prosperous, and neither widow nor weak one cried aloud in the night because there was no meat. Exercise 2: Put a check mark on the items below that possibly connect the story to events in the past. (Historical) ______ 1. Jack London was born in California where there is winter similar to that of the place of Keesh. ______ 2. The Story of Keesh depicts a place where bear hunting and living in igloos are evident. 3. Igloo is a dome-shaped structure serving as shelter for people who lived in the place of ______ snow. 4. The grouping of people like in a tribe shows how people in the past lived in a ______ community sharing food and shelter. 5. The person who is mighty is the one chosen as the leader of a community. ______ 6. People in the past believed in witchcraft. Exercise 3: Go over the story then answer the questions below. You can write your answer on a sheet of paper. (Feminist) 1. 2. 3. 4. 5. Is the author a male or a female? Who is the protagonist? How were the women portrayed in the selection? What is their role? How were they treated? Were the women in the selection discriminated? Why or why not? What events in the selection where the women were empowered? Cite sentences or words from the selection. Note: Practice personal hygiene protocols at all times. Downloaded by MALIDAS JOHANNA (malidas.jo@southernchristiancollege.edu.ph) lOMoARcPSD|35071644 Exercise 4: Supply on the blank provided the element used in the selection then discuss on the left their meanings or usage. You may use extra sheet of paper if the space is not enough. (Formalist) Example: Character: Keesh He represents the people who have special skills but people doubt them. Tone: _______________ Imagery: _______________ Symbol: _______________ Setting: _______________ Theme: _______________ Note: Practice personal hygiene protocols at all times. Downloaded by MALIDAS JOHANNA (malidas.jo@southernchristiancollege.edu.ph) lOMoARcPSD|35071644 Exercise 5: Provide events from the story where discrimination of the minority group is evident. You can cite words or tell them on your own words. Arrange them according to their degree. (Marxist) Worst Worse Bad Note: Practice personal hygiene protocols at all times. Downloaded by MALIDAS JOHANNA (malidas.jo@southernchristiancollege.edu.ph) lOMoARcPSD|35071644 Exercise 6: Draw an emoticon (angry, happy, undetermined, etc.) on the first column that matches your reaction towards the events, characters, theme, etc. of the selection which are in the second column. Then, explain on the third column why you put that emoticon for the said item. (Reader-response) Emoti-con ______ Event, character, theme, etc. 1. 2. ______ 3. ______ 4. ______ 5. ______ Explanation 1.____________________________ The people of the village need to hunt or _____________________________ kill the bear for them to have food. _____________________________ Bim and Bawn spied at Keesh since 2.____________________________ they also don’t believe in his capability. _____________________________ The bear grew weak and never ceased _____________________________ crying from his pain. 3.____________________________ "Put the child out!" "Send him off to _____________________________ bed!" "He is no man that he should talk _____________________________ to men and graybeards!" 4.____________________________ "He hunts with evil spirits," _____________________________ _____________________________ 5.____________________________ _____________________________ _____________________________ Exercise 7: Give the positive and negative teachings that can be taken from the selection. Use the table below. (Moralist) Positive Teachings Negative Teachings Note: Practice personal hygiene protocols at all times. Downloaded by MALIDAS JOHANNA (malidas.jo@southernchristiancollege.edu.ph) lOMoARcPSD|35071644 Exercise 8: Choose from the following tasks below then put your output on the box provided or on another sheet of paper. A. B. C. D. Make a cartoon drawing of how you wanted to honor the talented people around you. Make a comic presentation that shows equality of either social status, race, or gender. Write a letter to tell the world about the importance of harmony in the society. Compose a song or poem that talks about the life of the protagonist. ________________________________________________ Title of Your Output Scoring Rubric: Criteria 4 Meaning The output is meaningful for all audiences. Clarity The output clearly present the topic chosen. Creativity The output is attractive to all audiences. The output is unique. Originality 3 2 1 There are three things that are not meaningful in the output. There are three things that are not clear on the output. There are two things that are easy to do. There are two things that were copied from other resources. There are four things that are not meaningful in the output. There are four things that are not clear on the output. There are three things that are easy to do. Three things were copied from other resources. The meaning of the output is far from the chosen task. There are a lot of things in the output that are not comprehensible. The output is very easy to do. Four or more things were copied from other resources. Total points: ___________ Note: Practice personal hygiene protocols at all times. Downloaded by MALIDAS JOHANNA (malidas.jo@southernchristiancollege.edu.ph) lOMoARcPSD|35071644 Reflection: Complete the statement below. I have learned that… __________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________. What I want to do is/are… __________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________ References: Andres, Salirick. Altervista. Retrieved from: https://salirickandres.altervista.org/approachesliterary-criticism/. Accessed May 22, 2020. London, Jack. "The Story of Keesh." In Celebrating Diversity Through World Literature English Learner's Material, by Liza R. Almonte, Lerma L. Flandez, Angelina Lourdes A. Hermosa, Nedia Lagustan, Liberty A. Mangaluz, Elenita R. Miranda, Paul Anthony B. Mendoza, Lito A. Palomar, Grace Annette B. Soriano and Karen B. VillanuevaPasig City: Department of Education. 2015. pp. 299-305. The University of New Mexico. Retrieved from:https://www.unm.edu/~hookster/Critical%20 Approaches%20to%20Literature.pdf. Accessed May 22, 2020. Note: Practice personal hygiene protocols at all times. Downloaded by MALIDAS JOHANNA (malidas.jo@southernchristiancollege.edu.ph) lOMoARcPSD|35071644 Answer Key: Exercise 1. 1. B 2. A 3. C 4. F 5. D 6. E Exercise 2. 1. √ 2. √ 3. √ 4. √ 5. √ Exercise 3. 1. Male 2. Keesh 3. Answers vary. 4. If YES- explanation be based on “…his mother only a woman, they, too, were swiftly forgotten, and ere long came to live in the meanest of all the IGLOOS.” If NO- please refer to key answers in item 5. 5. a. …the least old woman and the last old man received a fair portion… b. Keesh and his mother moved into it, and it was the first prosperity she had enjoyed since the death of Bok. Nor was material prosperity alone hers, for, because of her wonderful son and the position he had given her, she came to he looked upon as the first woman in all the village; and the women were given to visiting her, to asking her advice, and to quoting her wisdom when arguments arose among themselves or with the men. c. And Ugh-Gluk withdrew discomfited, the women laughing at him as he walked away.” Exercise 4. Elements Tone: Reflective Imagery: (multiple answers) Symbol: (multiple answers) Setting: In a cold place (Igloo) Theme: Underestimating one’s capabilities Meanings Reflecting how people forget someone’s accomplishments; Reflective of people’s doubt on one’s capabilities. (Varied answers) (Varied answers) It shows the culture of people living in cold places. The council members did not believe in the hunting capability of Keesh so they sent spies to prove if he was doing witchcraft. Exercise 5. (Answers vary) Exercise 6. (Answers vary) Exercise 7. (Answers vary) Exercise 8. (Outputs vary but all should be scored based on the rubrics.) Prepared by: MARK VALENTINE MALUTA Paima National High School Note: Practice personal hygiene protocols at all times. Downloaded by MALIDAS JOHANNA (malidas.jo@southernchristiancollege.edu.ph)