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Kean Matthew G. Santiago
GE 11 - C
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Kean Matthew G. Santiago
GE 11 - C
Critique paper on Extreme Animal Relationships | Earth Unplugged and Hungry Venus flytraps snap
shut on a host of unfortunate flies | Life - BBC
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Learning Points
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Kean Matthew G. Santiago
GE 11 - C
Reflection paper on Extreme Animal Relationships | Earth Unplugged
Reflecting on the concept of symbiosis in nature between different species, somewhat mirrors the
complexity of human interactions. Just like us humans, we either cooperate with one another to reach a
certain goal or gain benefit, or use one another to do likewise.
Certain types of fish would feed on the parasites, algae, and other unwanted objects carried by
other and mostly larger underwater dwelling species. Both parties would benefit from this partnership, one
having been fed, the other been cleansed. This is the brighter side or at least the most sought type of
relationship that everyone desires, mutualistic. Though in nature these species might just be doing this for
their benefit without realizing its outcome, and in this case, a good one. We, humans, are undoubtedly aware
of the outcome that the actions we practice may bring upon those we've acted to, and one good practice is
give-and-take, creating balance. Though people tend to emphasize the “take”, of course not all
relationships are equal, they can become one-sided.
By one-sided, it mainly suggests that only one party benefits from the relationship. This parallels
some real-life situations in human society, though if not all then most relationships are not balanced and
one tends to gain more from it than the other, though that also depends on preference, and that’s either the
other side of the relationship also gains a benefit or suffer loss from it, and its always those two outcomes,
rarely that a person receives nothing for it. In nature, however, there is a clear example of ants and their
domesticated aphids. Farming the aphids’ secretions for food that doesn't directly harm them, but ants, tend
to impose a more violent approach in order to gain more, and one method they use is deliberately
immobilizing their domesticated pets to have complete control over their relationship. Now at this point of
a relationship where it starts to go over the line that it can be labeled as toxic.
The last type of symbiosis depicts a toxic relationship, parasitism. Another one-sided kind of
relationship that would eventually lead to harm and suffering quite intentionally. This serves as a stark
reminder of the importance of healthy boundaries in our own lives. Fungi with the ability to manipulate
ants to reach the highest peak to thrive. People manipulate other people for the same symbolic reason. “It’s
a dog-eat-dog world”, a perfect metaphor for the cruel competitive nature in society. Nature demonstrates
how significant, and a powerful force cooperation is, whether voluntary or compelled.
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