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Summer Thomas, Payton Johnson, Tyrell Fowler
Payton Johnson
November 27, 2023
Final Group Simulation: Written Speech (3x3 submission)
Professor Bowers
Prewriting Submission
Analyze:
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The purpose of our speech is to communicate with the HT student body about the decline
of student performance and offer solutions.
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We want the receiver to believe that our solutions will help their performance in the
classroom.
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The channel we will use if face to face communication.
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The barriers that we may face is students may not retain all the information during our
presentation due to their lack of listening in class.
Anticipate
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The audience profile is displeased college students at Huston Tillotson University
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The receiver already knows how to preform positively academically proven by their
ability to be accepted into a selected higher learning institution.
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The receiver's response will be negative.
Adapt
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Techniques to Adapt our Message to the Audience
1. Knowing your audience
2. Highlight Relevance
3. Appeal to Emotions
4. Encourage Questions and Feedback
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How to Promote Feedback
1. Fill out a questionnaire for improvements, disagreements, benefits etc...
2. Promote dialogue between speaker and audience to allow their voice to be heard.
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Promoting Positive, Conversational, and Courteous Language
1. We can ensure this language by striving to keep the presentation positive although we
know the audience will be displeased with the information given to them.
Outline
Research
a.) What do we need to know to write this message?
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Strategies that can help improve the academic performance of students and their
unstructured study habits and effective listening skills.
b.) The resources were gathering information from
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Seek input from professors or alumni who have college degrees for insights and
experiences.
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Participate in discussions with graduating students to understand their perspectives and
obtain valuable input.
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Conducting outline research to discover tips and advice shared by knowledgeable
professionals.
Organize
a) Introduction
b) Body
c) Closing
Draft
Good evening students, we hope this message finds you well and that you’re navigating through
your academic journey with resilience and determination. As we strive to ensure an improved
and supportive learning environment for everyone, we wanted to take a moment to reflect on our
collective achievements and challenges. Your dedication and commitment to studies have always
been acknowledged, we realize that university life can be challenging. You’re juggling
coursework, personal responsibilities, and the desire to do things outside of school but we
believe that openly acknowledging and discussing the important factors that may impact
students' academic performance, could potentially work towards finding solutions that promotes
growth and success. With that being said the reason we gathered you here today is to discuss the
decline in academic performance amongst our student body. In a classroom, it can sometimes be
difficult to stay fully engaged and focus, and understanding the various factors that can
contribute to this challenge such as distractions, lack of interest, learning style mismatch, stress
and anxiety, fatigue and lack of sleep, health or medical conditions, and organization and time
management skills. Although we understand that we have professors that come from ethnic
backgrounds that are much different from your typical professor, that is no reason to create poor
listening skills that affect your academic performance. If you have a problem with
comprehension of what your professor is saying, raise your hand and communicate that to them
or after class have a chat and find out what needs to be done in order for you to be successful.
There are many ways to efficiently listen and comprehend in class, a very helpful way is paying
close attention to the speaker’s body language and non-verbal cues. You can get a lot of
information about one another without even saying a word. Making a mental image of what the
speaker is saying is also a great way to improve listening skills, it also helps with remembering
key words and phrases. One of the most used forms is to provide feedback to the speaker, so you
can get a deep understanding of what the speaker is saying so you as a student can fully
understand. You can even take it a step farther and find out your default listening style; every
student is different, the way you learn might be the opposite of the person sitting next to you.
There are 4 different styles, an analytical listener, relational listener, critical listener, and task
focused listener. If you do a little research, you can quickly find out which type of listener you
are. With that being said, it is important to recognize the current challenges we face regarding
student performance in the classroom. Together, we can create a positive shift in our academic
journey and achieve success we are capable of. Remember, your academic journey is a
marathon, not a sprint. By incorporating these tips into your routine, you're not just studying;
you're investing in your future success. If you have any questions or need further guidance, don’t
hesitate to reach out. Keep pushing forward, stay motivated, and know that your hard work will
undoubtedly lead to market accomplishments.
Best Regards
Works Cited
5 Strategies to Improve Students’ Listening Skills. (n.d.). Edutopia.
https://www.edutopia.org/article/5-strategies-improve-students-listening-skills/
Fran. (2022, March 9). 7 ways to improve your listening skills. FutureLearn.
https://www.futurelearn.com/info/blog/general/7-ways-improve-your-listening-skills
Guffey M. E. & Loewy D. (2019). Essentials of Business Communication (11th ed.). Cengage
Harvard Business Publishing Education. (n.d.). Hbsp.harvard.edu.
https://hbsp.harvard.edu/inspiring-minds/6-ways-to-improve-your-listening-skills-and-betterengage-your-students
https://www.adityabirlaworldacademy.com/blog/7-teaching-strategies-to-increase-your-studentslistening-skills
Indeed Editorial Team. (2021, March 28). How to Improve Your Listening Skills. Indeed Career
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Statement of Contribution
We as a group all contributed to this assignment by meeting in person and having detailed
discussions and listening to each other's thoughts and ideas. Brainstormed together and equally
put in effort to accomplish the task at hand.
Tyrell: Revising for conciseness and proofreading
Summer: Document Design and Enhancing Clarity
Payton: Evaluating the effectiveness of the message
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