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February 15, 2023
President Adela de la Torre
San Diego State University
5500 Campanile Drive
San Diego, CA 92182
Dear President Adela de la Torre,
My name is Jaewon Shin, currently a sophomore at SDSU. I am writing this letter to you in
regards to a change towards the desire for an increase in parking. I am happy with all the services
that SDSU is providing to students. Providing good resources for students, supporting students
who are struggling from finance or academics, etc. However, parking at SDSU is giving students
a really hard time.
Many students have been attending class late and have been missing the opportunity to be in
class due to low parking spots. Many students find themselves spending a long time finding a
spot instead of going to their classes.
It would be beneficial to students if they expand parking structures. By doing so students have
the ability to get to class on time and pick parking spots that are a good location for them. I
acknowledge that this might be a financial burden for SDSU, however this is necessary for
students' satisfaction and success in achieving their academic goals.
Thank you for taking the time to read this letter.
Sincerely,
Shin
Jaewon Shin
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Making resources more easily available to students
Lack of support for students who are struggling with academics
Increases in the price of housing due to more students being required to live on campus
More parking lots or parking fees
1. Persuasive Letter
There is only one option for this letter. Carefully review our materials on persuasive
letters before completing this letter:
● Write a letter to SDSU’s President, Adela de la Torre, suggesting a change to
current practices or procedures to the University that are important to you as a
student. These changes can range anywhere from lowering student fees and
tuition to adding an additional gym facility or more parking. Be persuasive in
your letter but remember that you are limited to one page. How can you make a
clear, persuasive argument to President de la Torre using a business letter with
business style and format? Use evidence and support.
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