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ENG 101.XX
Semra Kunt-Akbaş
November 5, 2020
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Is There a Free Will?
For thousands of years, people have wondered if individuals have free will.
Different people have tried to find the answer with different types of arguments. In the
past, they used to use philosophical and religious arguments. Today, with the help of
the developments in science and technology, they use scientific arguments, which
are more objective and can be proven with rational evidence. However, there is no
certain answer for that question yet. Some people say that there should be a free will
because people will not see themselves responsible for their actions and this will lead
to a corruption in the society if people do not believe in free will. However, it can be
argued that free will is an illusion because there are internal factors such as human
neurology which affect the people’s choices. In addition, humans are vulnerable to
manipulation, which makes their decisions dependent on other people.
Some people suggest that free will cannot be an illusion, since our social
structure depends on it. When people believe in free will, they become more likely to
be morally responsible. Cave quotes an experiment conducted by Vohs and
Schooler. In the experiment, scientists divided the test subjects into two groups and
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they gave a passage which was against free will to one group, and a neutral passage
to the other one. Then the moral of each person was tested in various situations. The
conclusion is that when people do not believe in free will, they become morally less
responsible. They tend to cheat and steal because they think that, it is not their
choice. Therefore, they are not responsible for these actions (2). Although there may
be some problems when people do not believe free will, it is still more beneficial for
humanity to not to believe free will because by this way we can approach more
objectively to other people’s behaviors and we may understand the reasons behind
their behaviors. If we accept that human behaviors are effects of some neurological
functions, we can better understand the human brain and if we understand the
reasons behind harmful actions for society maybe we can prevent these actions more
permanently (Cave 4). We may find more effective cures for psychological problems
and it can lead to more improvements in the society. Therefore, even if believing that
people do not have free will can damage some social structures, in the long term it
will cause more benefits to humanity.
It can be suggested that everything including our decisions is a part of a cause
and effect chain, therefore, free will is an illusion. We are not free to choose because
there are internal reasons such as our brain structure affecting our choices. McLeod
argues that we are nothing but “biological machines” since every behavior of us is an
effect of our nervous system and hormones (1). It can be seen that; we are not as
free as most people believe. We are mostly dependent on our brain and small
changes in our brain structure can lead to serious differences in our personality.
People can observe the effects of the change in the brain in their daily life. For
example, when someone uses alcohol, there may be differences in that person’s
character. S/he may become more aggressive and less self-controlled. Another
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example is that people use antidepressants to overcome depression. These drugs
make change in brain and help people to be less depressed. These are simple
examples from daily life. Furthermore, there can be more serious results as Cave
implies “Cases of ordinary adults becoming murderers or pedophiles after developing
a brain tumor demonstrate how dependent we are on the physical properties of our
gray stuff” (1). Therefore, our behaviors are mostly related with our brain and they
can be changed by changes in our brain structure. This situation contradicts with free
will.
Another reason why free will is an illusion is that, people are easy to
manipulate, therefore, their choices do not exactly belong to them. Advertisements
and propaganda govern their ideas in daily life. For thousands of years, authorities
have used manipulation. However, today, it is more effective than ever because, with
the developments in technology, the authorities can know what people tend to. They
can specifically target the weak side of the people and manipulate them more easily
(Harari 3). They can see what people buy online, which websites they spend time,
what their opinions about different topics are. Thus, they can analyze the data they
obtain from people and they can create more precise propaganda to individual
people. For example, if someone has a prejudice against immigrants, it is more likely
that this person sees news against immigration on the internet. This news is probably
false and created by people against immigration (Harari 3). Eventually, this person
will be more against immigration than before because of this false news. The
important point is that, this person is manipulated and even if s/he does not realize
that, his/her ideas about immigration do not belong to him/her. Thus, people tend to
be easily manipulated and they do not have their own opinions about many thigs.
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They do not have free will because their choices are influenced by governments and
companies.
Briefly, there are strong arguments which are against free will. Although not
believing in free will damages the social structure, it might eventually be more
profitable for the humanity since we can better understand the reasons for people’s
behaviors if we accept that every action of people is dependent on neurological
functions. In addition, people are not free as they thought since their behaviors and
decisions are mostly dependent on their brain. When there is a change in the brain
structure, it can be observed that people’s personalities change too. Furthermore,
people’s ideas are usually manipulated by propaganda and this can prevent them to
have their own ideas. Therefore, free will is not real and every decision of us are
dependent on various other factors.
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Works Cited
Cave, Stephen. “There is no such thing as free will.” The Atlantic, June 2016,
https://www.theatlantic.com/magazine/archive/2016/06/theres-no-such-thing-asfree-will/480750/.
Harari, Yuval Noah. “Yuval Noah Harari: the Myth of Freedom.” The Guardian,
Guardian News and Media, 14 Sept. 2018,
www.theguardian.com/books/2018/sep/14/yuval-noah-harari-the-new-threat-toliberal-democracy.
McLeod, Saul. “Freewill vs Determinism.” Freewill and Determinism | Simply
Psychology, 2019, www.simplypsychology.org/freewill-determinism.html.
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