Impromptu Speech Evaluation Sheet Evaluator’s Name/ID: ________Paul, Lam Ka Kit____BB802052________ Speaker’s Name/ID: _____ HO KA TONG ___SB720355__________________ Date of when you received Video from the speaker: ______18/3/2020___________ Actual time of the speech: ___1__ minutes, and __51__ seconds Circle an evaluation mark in each category and add constructive comments in the provided space. Make sure to write some comment too. Delivery Technique Excellent Vocal Expression (volume, rate, pitch, clarity ✓ Facial Expression (relaxed, animated) Good Fair ✓ Diction, Grammar, and Word Usage (No “you know’s”, “um’s”, or “ah’s”) ✓ Eye Contact (looks at audience) ✓ Bodily Action and Gestures (no distracting movements, relaxed, comfortable) Poor ✓ ✓ Time Management (too short or too long) Organization and Content Introduction (attention gaining) ✓ Body (clear main points) ✓ Conclusion (good ending) ✓ Comments: Your speech volume and speed let me feel comfortable and pronunciation is clear. I can feel you are not too much nervous and relax yourself, that’s good. However, most of time you don’t make eye contact with us. You kept looking away from the camera. It is not a good habit when you are doing speech or other presentation, which will let your audience feeling you are not confident. If you do improvement, it will be better. During the speech, you were use a word “maybe” several time. I don’t know whether you are not know the real situation of your father, but I think it just was a transitional word that you were using in the speech. I think when you were sharing your experience, it should be reliable or real although it is wrong for your memory. About the time management, this video is not long enough. There is only 1 minute and 51 seconds. You can add more content to increase your speech time. For example, you can talk more about why your father didn’t trust anyone and add more information about the experience of your father. I think most of listener have felt curious about your father. At last, there are obvious clips in your video. It is a bad experience that it will affect the mood of your audience although you explain it is a accident that you do a wrong operation after. Anyway, this is not a big issue for me to enjoy your speech. I still remember your father in my mind. He is an interesting man. Keeping practice! I believe you will have better speech next time.