Peer Review Worksheet - Analysis Reviewer:___________________________________________________ Tell the writer what you see as the central claims, point out areas that lack clarity, and ask questions to help them refine their thinking. Pay special attention to flaws in their argument and transitions between ideas. At this point, ignore potential grammar, punctuation and spelling issues and focus on content. What is the thesis? Is it clear, non-obvious, and arguable? Explain why it is or is not working. Offer potential additions if it needs to be more arguable or specific. What are the main points that the writer addresses in the essay? Are there logical connections between them? Or is it closer to a static, 5-paragraph model of essay? Suggest possible connections that could be built between ideas. Does the writer provide evidence in the form of quotes to back up his/her claims? Is every quote introduced and explained? Missed Opportunities: What other ideas might the writer incorporate into their essay? Where have they missed a rebuttal or alternate interpretation that should be addressed? Are there additional questions that the essay brings up that need to be addressed, or implications that should be discussed? Ask at least three specific questions of the writer, and focus on questions that can push the writer’s thinking further.