WRITING ESSAYS 1 27/06/2016 Essays: making the transition You have transferable skills which are important in essay writing eg: • • • • • • 2 problem-solving reporting the ideas of others evaluating the ideas of others summarising ordering material logically expressing an opinion Essays: making the transition 27/06/2016 What is an essay? ‘An essay is a well researched and logically structured answer to a particular question, or questions, usually presented as an argument. It is a point of view formulated by critically assessing the information or ideas relevant to the essay topic. It is presented in the form of a series of main points which support your direct answer to the question…… 3 Essays: making the transition 27/06/2016 ……Each of these points is addressed in a separate paragraph and is supported with evidence, explanation and/or examples. The argument presented in an essay should be supported by referencing authorities in the relevant field. The argument should also form a cohesive whole: this means the paragraphs need to be logically ordered and connections made between the points presented in those paragraphs…..’ http://unilearning.uow.edu.au/essay/ accessed June 24 05 4 Essays: making the transition 27/06/2016 ‘…answer to a particular question, or questions’ 5 the task set should guide all your reading, planning and writing up analyse the task carefully – the topic, the focus and what you are actually asked to do with it – the instruction Further guidance: See handout: Analysing your assignment title and link http://www.uefap.co.uk/writing/ select link to ‘Questions’ Essays: making the transition 27/06/2016 ‘well researched’ • • • • use your reading lists wisely don’t try to read everything let the task guide your reading go beyond the recommended reading where appropriate: secondary sources may well be your starting point but think about primary sources as well • 6 Further guidance: http://www.uefap.co.uk/writing/ select link to ‘Research’ Essays: making the transition 27/06/2016 ‘usually presented as an argument’ what is your main idea or ‘angle’? this should be expressed clearly in your introductory section subsequent points should develop this main idea argument involves analysis of ideas, not just the presentation of factual information: http://www2.ntu.ac.uk/sss/studysupport/Information/Writing/a nalytical.htm http://homepages.ed.ac.uk/rholton/write/writehome.html http://dissc.tees.ac.uk/Writing/writingyouressay/page2.htm http://dissc.tees.ac.uk/samplesmenu.html 7 Essays: making the transition 27/06/2016 ‘a point of view formulated by critically assessing the information or ideas relevant to the essay topic’ Being critical means that: • you are taking a questioning attitude to what you read • you are evaluating ideas and evidence • you are selecting from a range of sources or ideas, comparing and contrasting them • you are able to put ideas together to come up with something new 8 Essays: making the transition 27/06/2016 ‘a series of main points which support your direct answer to the question’ 9 Everything you write should relate clearly to the task There is no essay question which asks you to write everything you know or have read about a topic Essays: making the transition 27/06/2016 ‘Each of these points is addressed in a separate paragraph’ 10 a paragraph is a group of sentences on the same point it should include a topic sentence (usually the first sentence) with further development test your paragraph – if it’s a good one, you should be able to give it a heading http://dissc.tees.ac.uk/Writing/paragraphs/Cont ents.htm Essays: making the transition 27/06/2016 ‘and is supported with evidence, explanation and/or examples’ 11 Points need to be fully developed in depth What counts as evidence will vary from discipline to discipline Use the authority of published researchers to add weight to your points http://owl.english.purdue.edu/handouts/print/ge neral/gl_pgrph2.html Essays: making the transition 27/06/2016 ‘The argument presented in an essay should be supported by referencing authorities in the relevant field.’ • • • you must reference all ideas taken from other writers failure to reference properly will result in accusations of plagiarism check your course handbook for the referencing conventions that you must use more on this later……… 12 Essays: making the transition 27/06/2016 ‘The argument should also form a cohesive whole: this means the paragraphs need to be logically ordered..’ http://ioewebserver.ioe.ac.uk/ioe/cms/get.asp?cid=5054& 5054_0=6805 Follow links for ‘Argument’ and ‘‘Argument’ as text’ 13 Essays: making the transition 27/06/2016 ‘and connections made between the points presented in those paragraphs…..’ This is achieved by good signposting and careful use of linking words: Pronouns (this/these, it,) Repetition Cohesive markers (however, consequently etc) 14 Essays: making the transition 27/06/2016 Signpost Language (helps guide the reader) 15 ‘In this section I set out the aims…’ ‘My first/second concern is…’ ‘I shall argue that…’ ‘Table 3 shows …’ ‘A further example…’ ‘This will be discussed in section 2’ ‘I have described the way in which…’ Essays: making the transition 27/06/2016 Try this test to see if you have structured your points logically and clearly: 16 Cut your draft essay up into separate paragraphs or sections Ask a friend to put it back together again Essays: making the transition 27/06/2016 You should include 17 A clear introduction which identifies the issue, gives the context and states your main idea Clear signpost language A logical development of a (limited) number of ideas An interesting conclusion which relates back to the question Essays: making the transition 27/06/2016 Introductions 18 Interpret the essay title Give some background or context Present the main argument or thesis statement Define the terms used Map out the essay – so that your reader can see where you are going Essays: making the transition 27/06/2016 Conclusions 19 Draw together the points previously discussed, without repeating them Refer back to the question and show how it has been answered Clearly express the writer’s point of view based on the evidence presented earlier in the essay Bring the essay to a close Suggest further related ideas that could be explored Essays: making the transition 27/06/2016 More on referencing and plagiarism 20 Essays: making the transition 27/06/2016 What is Plagiarism? http://owl.english.purdue.edu/handouts/research/r_plagiar.html 21 Essays: making the transition 27/06/2016 What do I need to reference? 22 everything which is not considered to be ‘common knowledge’ summaries of other writers’ ideas paraphrases of other writers’ ideas direct quotations – including the exact page number internet sources – including the date you accessed the site Essays: making the transition 27/06/2016 Why do I need to reference? 23 to give credit where credit is due – academic integrity to help the reader find the material themselves if they wish to avoid accusations of plagiarism – a very serious offence with serious consequences Essays: making the transition 27/06/2016 How should I reference? Check your course handbook or website. No matter which system you use, it should be: Clear Consistent (eg in-text, footnotes) Complete (eg name, date, page) http://www.uefap.co.uk/writing/ Follow links for ‘Referencing’ and also ‘Citation’ 24 Essays: making the transition 27/06/2016 To recap: …..Essays are used as an assessment tool to evaluate your ability to research a topic and construct an argument, as well as your understanding of subject content.” http://unilearning.uow.edu.au/essay/ accessed June 24 05 25 Essays: making the transition 27/06/2016 References 1. Clark R(1998) ‘Characteristics of a good essay’. Effective Learning/SLDC Website 2. Creme P & Lea M (1997) Writing at University. Buckingham: OUP 3. http://unilearning.uow.edu.au/essay/ accessed June 24 05 26 Essays: making the transition 27/06/2016 Useful resources 27 Student Learning Development Centre: http://www.lancs.ac.uk/depts/celt/sldc/?openpage for resources and information about the El and ELLIS programmes http://www.uefap.co.uk http://owl.english.purdue.edu (American English) http://www.phrasebank.man.ac.uk (useful phrases for academic writing) Essays: making the transition 27/06/2016