TABLE OF CONTENTS 162 In the Merry Old Land of America: Immigrants’ Journies Home Donna Marinkovich 165 Death, the Inevitable Crisis (for the Living) Susannah Moore 169 In a Vice Grip Ashley Smith 172 Black Noise: Something for Those Who Don’t Understand It Seth Magnuson 175 Inspiration & the Gift of Writing from Audre Lorde Emily McCarron 179 All Woman: The Timeless Struggle Between Motherhood and Career Julie Richardson 182 Cultural Landscapes of Haitian Life: Paradise Lost but Not Forgotten Janet Thelen 186 Break the Rules! Hao Huang 189 The Dread of Analysis Imelda Jimenez 191 Fastest Leg in the West (Of Ireland) Vance Buckreus 194 I Found Myself Through Hairspray: And Other Interesting Ways to Look At The World Sara Cunningham-Farish 197 Hitch-Hiking in Hollywood Maia Yepa 200 Is it Behaviour? or Behavior? Leah Quinn 203 In Search of the Golden Frog: A Practically Untarnished Book Sandy Hager 206 Cryptic Philosophies Christina Mardirosian 211 History of Film: From Awake to Unconscious Shannon Drake 215 “Just See the Movie” Nigel Genthner 217 Mad Woman Ramblings Elinore Eaton 220 Madman’s Language Jay Weber 223 Mirror of Myths Lori Bravo 226 Movies Exposed Brenna Dunn 228 Reshaping Reality: Finding Meaning in Abstract Art Gabe Houston 231 Take a Read on the Wilde Side Rob Goldschmidt 234 The Greek Myth Angel Luna 238 Seeing Pittsburgh through one Author’s Eyes William Norteye 241 Emerging from “The Poet’s Cave of Syllables” David Sullivan PGR 161 In the Merry Old Land of America: Immigrants’ Journies Home Donna Marinkovich “There’s no place like home…there’s no place like home…” —Dorothy in The Wizard of Oz Upon finishing Geographies of Home by Loida Maritza Perez I couldn’t help but to feel as if I had just traveled through a Latino version of The Wizard of Oz. Perez’ debut novel is filled with terror, hope, magic and self-discovery as is the film classic, yet Perez’ tale is even more twisted and surreal. Instead of settling on one protagonist, Perez weaves the experiences, memories, thoughts and yearnings of several members of a Dominican Republic family which has immigrated to New York City into one “Dorothy”, all of them questioning their place in their family and in their surrounding world. A passage from a chapter written in the perspective of the mother, Aurelia, shows the struggle that each family member is faced with – the concept of “home”: In the presence of strangers like those she had sheltered herself from since her arrival in the United States and in a hospital worlds removed from the New York depicted on postcards her eldest daughter had mailed to the Dominican Republic, Aurelia for the first time granted herself permission to sprout roots past concrete into soil. Throughout more than fifteen years of moving from apartment to apartment, she had dreamed, not of returning, but of going home. Of going home to a place not located on any map but nonetheless preventing her from settling in any other. Only now did she understand that her soul yearned not for a geographical site but for a frame of mind able to accommodate any place as home. (137) The title – Geographies of Home – suggests that “home” is a physical place. But the content of the novel raises questions about what “home” really is. Is it merely a residence? Is it a place of origin? Or is it an emotional or mental state, as Dorothy discovers when she learns the secret of her ruby slippers? I wish it was as simple as clicking our heels together and chanting a mantra to find out the answer. Perez attempts to guide us toward answering the question for ourselves, urging us to explore possibilities through the minds and hearts of PGR 162 Iliana, Aurelia, Papito, Rebecca, and Marina--the strongest characters in this family of fourteen. Undoubtedly, cultural heritage plays an important role in one’s perceptions of family and home as in the Dominican family members in this novel. However, by delving into issues which affect all of us — religion, the roles of men and women in the family and in society, mental illness, stereotypes based on skin color and domestic abuse — Perez widens the context beyond the experiences of one particular family within one particular culture. Perez discusses this wider context in the Penguin Press Readers Guide interview which appears at the end of the novel: …I nonetheless believe that – regardless of the possibly unique circumstances presented in Geographies – Dominicans and other Latinos will encounter familiar issues. But are these issues specifically Latino? I don’t think so. Ultimately, these issues pertain to the human condition: our need to belong and be accepted; the contradictions inherent in all of us; our attempts to do the best we can even in the worst of circumstances; our desire to guide our children and the risk of making mistakes along the way; our wondrous ability to sometimes understand and forgive; and our faith in a force greater than ourselves. Dorothy had to answer questions regarding similar issues for herself before she was given the key to her way home. In Perez’ “Land of Oz” there are the familiar characters trying to utilize their strengths, or develop their inadequacies to repair their own and their family’s situations: Iliana supposes she can use her well-educated brain; Aurelia, her witch-like magical powers; Rebecca, her false sense of courage; Marina, her heart filled with a manic devotion to God. Unfortunately, all of the Geographies characters — working independently — fail to reach their goals and get caught up in the insanity. But had they realized that if they worked together, embracing each other’s strengths rather than placing blame and pointing out shortcomings, they might have succeeded in finding the home they were all searching for. Dorothy and her counterparts were finally free to return home after Glenda and the Wizard had enlightened them with a similar lesson. I think of Santa Cruz, California as my home. I have lived here for twelve years, and this is where I feel comfortable, accepted, and a part of my community. Although my family is hundreds of miles away and in various geographical locations, I think of them as a much broader definition of home. It wasn’t until I had done some intense soul searching, resulting from the long (and still continuing) process of drug addiction re- PGR 163 covery, did I feel comfortable with this second, personal definition of home. Once I stopped blaming my family for my problems, criticizing them for their actions and behaviors, and communicated honestly with them I realized I had finally “come home”. That realization now defines my own personal concept of home– it is a never--ending journey, not a destination. Yes, I am a born-and-raised Californian, yet before this epiphany I may as well have been from another country. Whether one is an immigrant in a strange land, like the characters in Geographies, or a little girl and her dog traveling through a bizarre fantasyland, this is one realization we all have to make for ourselves. Works Cited Perez, Loida Maritza. Geographies of Home. New York: Penguin Press, 1999 Wizard of Oz, The. Dirs. Victor Fleming, Richard Thorpe. MGM, 1939 PGR 164 Death, the Inevitable Crisis (for the Living) Susannah Moore “ She was living in order to disappear…”(Williams 108). When I was young, I was what you would call a wild child. I had no regard for my health or personal safety; that is to say that I did much more then just experiment with drugs. After having one too many close calls I realized that this was not the way that I wanted to live my life and instead turned to sobriety and school. In the past few years many of my old friends have died due to their drug use. They, like me, had full knowledge of how the toxins introduced to their bodies could affect them, yet they lived in a haze believing that it would never happen to them. No one ever believes that they too can become a statistic. Eli was found on the bathroom floor three weeks ago. He had died of a heroin overdose two days prior. I would like to say that his death had the same profound effect on me as it did many others that I know— it did not. Through the last few years with many friends falling to the same fate as Eli, I have learned that this is the way things can end; there is nothing I can do to stop it. Sometimes you just need to let them disappear. * “What is the difference between being not yet born and having lived, being now dead?” (Williams 3). In the book The Quick and the Dead (published by Alfred A.Knopf / Random House), the author Joy Williams gives us momentary glimpses into the lives of many different characters all dealing with some form of death. Whether it is the death of a parent, as in the case for the three main female characters, the death of the soul, the death of the mind,as for our hopeful stroke victim,or the refusal to die, the haunting of a man by his dead wife. She spins her tale taking these many peoples’ lives and experiences and tells each of them with the detail of explaining color to the blind. Each tale is unique as the colors of the world yet she is able to take them and weave them into the rich tapestry that is the small southwestern town that they all live or end up in. In this weaving, Williams makes the reader realize that the all too common practice of looking at death as always something that comes “later” is not only not effective but leaves the living unprepared for the loss if and when it does occur. * “Remaining to you is any comfort available from dreams. We do not suggest attempting to dream of starting over”( 97). One of the most intriguing stories to me was that of Ray Webb. We jump into Webb’s life at the age of nineteen in Houston, Texas. Webb is a PGR 165 traveling man, no specific destination in mind, just “drifting across the country, working and stealing now and then” (57). Webb, we learn in later flashes of time, has had a hard childhood. After suffering many strokes as a youth, leaving his face and body partially paralyzed, he has left home so as not to trouble his mother any further with his condition. He is a dreamer, often too much so, losing himself in his mind at the most inopportune times. We travel with Webb across the southwest, joining him on his many adventures learning more of his good nature and mental anguish. Webb’s journey ends in the small town inhabited by the other characters of the book. Webb’s story ends as he walks out of the desert in the dark of night, the path ahead of him illuminated by the headlights of a parked truck. Tired and broken from yet another adventure, this time in the New Mexican desert, the characters of another plot shoot Webb as they fire their shotguns at the sugauro cacti. Ray had just come to the realization of his path in life. * “Was the last breath of a thing relevant? Emily wondered. She couldn’t imagine why it would be” (304). My grandmother is eight-nine and lives in a nursing home. She moved into the home five years ago after a severe heart attack left her unable to care for herself. My grandmother is the oldest member of my large Italian family. She was always a gentle woman; the negotiator between her eight brothers; patience and understanding were what she was known for. She is now close to death, the doctors say, as her health rapidly declines. Her quality of life has also declined, she is no longer able to walk and takes handfuls of pills daily for her many ailments. She eats only enough to continue living-- now weighing only sixty-nine pounds. I believe that my grandmother has become tired of living. Her personality has become violent and angry. She is angry that life has left her in the condition that she is in, yet she fears death more than she hates life, so she continues on. For my grandmother death will be a relief. Her last breath will be my last physical memory of her, but to her will that even matter? * “Over everything, a dimness that does not quite touch them, but hovers instead like those angels who are unable to tell if they are the living or the dead.” (Williams 198) Williams reverses the roles of the dead and the living in another plot of the book. The dead Ginger, has taken on the role of the mourner; morning the loss of her own life while her late husband Carter seems to be the one alleviated form suffering— almost. Ginger has become the mourner by assuming the role, traditionally held by the living, by haunting her widowed husband in an attempt to keep her own memory alive in his new home. Carter, on the other hand, would like nothing more then to move on with his life in this new town and be rid of this burden of a memory that is PGR 166 the ghost of his wife. Carter’s attitude with the ghost of his wife leaves the reader to muse whether he is friendly to her out of pure respect for the dead, or if he is frightened of what she could possibly do to him in her ghostly state. Can an angel cause bodily harm? * “This isn’t an intermission, unfortunately. It’s her final condition” ( 247). My mother was diagnosed with AIDS four years ago, it is terminal. She was infected with HIV from a blood transfusion during a hysterectomy 15 years ago. The prognosis is a fifty- percent mortality rate within five years of diagnosis. I have watched her health decline over the past eight months as I have lived with her. Because I am the only child living within a close proximity to her, I am responsible for telling my siblings the truth of her daily health. She was always so young when I compared her to her friends, the fun one. Now she is sick every other week and she has become a shell of herself due the sudden reality of her physical condition. I love my mother—she was the first person I knew as I came into the world— she is my mom. She has always been there for me continues to do so in spite of her condition. I always knew that she would die. We all die in the end. I had hoped that the people in the world with sprits such as hers would not have to end their lives in pain. So I watch her die as we go about our lives. I never knew that death could be this bad. It is the only thing that makes me cry. * They seem expectant still, though they have already walked the Riddle, not this day but long before. They had walked within the instant that is Death’s Riddle, and many moments later were reconstituted here, placed in the hollow liturgical court of this black garden. They roam in no wilderness. There is no wilderness. It preceded them into the hands of man (197). All of the characters in The Quick and the Dead gave me a reflection into how I deal with the deaths and processes of dying around me. Each story has a different perspective, each person shows a different character specific pattern of response to the same underlying situation. From my own life, I see three different deaths and three profoundly different responses from within myself. The fabric Williams weaves of these stories is the fabric that makes up the psyche of a person, the town they all live in symbolizing the body of that person. Within that body resides the many different responses—courses of action if you will— to the problems that we all face in life. Though everyone dies, we all die in a unique way. The book teaches us that there is no right or wrong way to deal with death: there is no right or wrong way to say goodbye. The important thing to PGR 167 remember is to not think of death as something that always comes later. Before you know it, later is the present and those you love, including yourself, are gone. Accept death as an end, but remember you never know just when that end is. Works Cited Willams, Joy The Quick and the Dead Alfred A. Knopf: New York, 2000. PGR 168 In a Vice Grip Ashley Smith Did you ever feel so captured by a book of poetry that you couldn’t let out of your hands for more then a few minutes, and didn’t want to give it back to the person who loaned it to you? Were you totally entranced by the words as they drizzled across the page and puddled intense imagery right before your eyes? The poet Ai, pseudonym for Florence Anthony, and Japanese for “love”, more then fulfilled all my expectations as a reader. Within her book titled Vice she confronts issues of society and violence and brings them to the attention of the public eye even more so then the evening news and is way more effective. This work is a collection of new and selected poems from previous publishings. Ai is nothing short of a chameleon as she morphs her character voices from veterans with “battle fatigue”, to a stalker, to a priest with sexual desires, to a rape victim, to a mother who brutally beats her daughter, to Jimmy Hoffa and a husband with “Penis Envy”. These are not the only voices in this book but they are a perfect example of her diverse skill level as a writer. Her newest book Vice is an absolute gripping piece of literature that critiques our culture’s violence through the voice of criminals and victims. Her work forces the reader to confront and acknowledge the many faces of a violent society. The cultural background of Ai plays a strong role in her life as a woman as well as an author. Ai is her middle name. Her father is Japanese and her mother is Choctaw Indian, Cheyenne, African American, Dutch and Irish. Ai is the only name by which I wish, and indeed, should be known. Since I am the child of a scandalous affair my mother had with a Japanese man she met at a streetcar stop, and I was forced to live a lie for so many years, while my mother concealed my father’s natu ral identity from me, I feel that I should not have to be identified with a man, who was only my stepfather, for all eternity (English). After being engulfed by her work, I feel that Ai is a person who has developed a very distinct and impressive style. Her dramatic monologues through the first person voice are a clear example of her gift for writing. When you read each piece in this book you get a sense of unease due to the reality of its context. It’s as if you are in the character’s head and hearing their thoughts echo within their skull. After reading certain pieces like “Stalking Memory” and “Child Beater” I felt uncomfortable due to the chills running down my spine. From the work “Child Beater”: PGR 169 I lay the belt on the chair And get her dinner bowl. I hit the spoon against it, set it down And watch her crawl to it, Pausing after each forward thrust of her legs And when she takes her first bite, I grab the belt and beat her across the back Until her tears, beads of salt filled glass, falling Shatter on the floor (Ai 16). Within these few lines that I selected you can see that her use of language is eloquent and clearly written. The little girl in this poem is dehumanized, with canine like images. “I hit the spoon against it, set it down/ And watch her crawl to it”. The little girl knows what’s going to happen and is hesitant but is over whelmed by hunger and decides to eat even though she knows the consequences, “pausing after each forward thrust of her legs”. These few lines don’t have any extremely complex vocabulary; it’s her way with the words that is so intriguing about her style. She molds the words like clay, letting them manipulate the reader and structuring each piece of work. Ai does not only invent character voices she becomes actual people. The work “Charisma” is about Waco, Texas and David Karesh, They prayed with me, They lay facedown in Waco, Texas, to await death and resurrection, as it came from all directions, all in flames (Ai 199). Ai is Police Officer Terry Yeakey, who committed suicide four days before he was going to receive a metal of honor for rescuing people after the Oklahoma City Bombing in the piece “The Antihero”. She is Richard Nixon in “Knock, Knock,” and she is an unidentified president (although we know who she is implying) who has had a presidential affair with a “sweet, big-haired” girl in the piece “Blood In The Water”. The majority of works in this book have violence as a main subject. When questioned on this in an interview she responded, “ I think violence is an integral part of American culture, and I set out to deal with it” (PBS). I believe that due to its confrontational subject matter it is extremely powerful. Ai looks at violence and some of our greatest fears directly in the face and doesn’t allow us to look away as a reader. She is allowing society to see the reality of what it is made up of. For example, according to the web site of the U.S. Department of Justice, Bureau of Justice statistics, in 1999 “white” people had a much higher rate of being the offender of a victim/offender PGR 170 relationship homicide then any other ethnicity. As a society we need to question our culture and its violent tendencies. We also need to question our source of information to where we inquire. Perhaps people don’t want to see the truth and would therefore not be able to read this book. Ai’s work is vital to literature and society. I’ve never been so mesmerized by a book of poetry then with Vice. I would whole heartedly recommend this book to anyone who can look reality in the face for what it truly is and learn from it, not ignore it. Works Cited Ai. Vice. W.W. Norton and Company, New York and London. 1999 http://www.english.uiuc.edu/maps/poets/a_f/ai/about.htm http://www.pbs.org/newshour/bb/poems/july-dec—/nba_11-18.html Works Consulted http://www.ojp.usdoj.gove/bjs/homicide/race.htm#typesrace PGR 171 Black Noise: Something for Those Who Don’t Understand It Seth Magnuson “Can violent images incite violent action, can music set the stage for political mobilization, do sexually explicit lyrics contribute to the moral ‘breakdown’ of society, and finally, is this really music anyway” (Rose 1)? In the late 1970’s rap music began to form a structure that consists of not only all of the artistic aspects—including graffiti, break dancing, music videos and the lyrics—but also the music—from both the voice of the MC and the mix of the DJ—contribute to the creation of hip hop. Tricia Rose closely breaks apart these elements in her book titled Black Noise: Rap Music and Black Culture in Contemporary America. When most, generally older, white people listen to rap music, they are turned off because of its loud bass and the offensive language that can be degrading to women. Perhaps this could also be from the lack of understanding of the culture that is behind hip hop. The author takes a birds eye perspective of the entire hip hop culture and fills her book with all of the detailed information that she has gathered over the past ten years of studies. She begins with the struggles of rap when it was just beginning. In the 1970’s a very powerful city planner by the name of Robert Moses came up with a plan to put in the Cross Bronx Expressway. This project was named “Moses’s Title I Slum Clearance program [and] forced the relocation of 170,000 people” (31) which mainly took place in the south Bronx, the original home of hip hop. After the relocation roots of hip hop were scattered all over New York, which set back the progression of hip hop because of the chaos that came with it. Rose takes a systematic approach beginning with the importance of independent record labels and the introduction of music videos. During the mid seventies six major companies controlled the music industry—which were not necessarily interested in rap music—and rap artists were also turned away from the mainstream radio, which forced them to find new ways to promote their music. In the early 1980’s the success of MTV quickly gave not only national exposure, but it also “created an environment in which the reception and marketing of music is almost synonymous with the production of music videos”(8). Although rap has only been around a little over twenty years it has made huge advances within the style and is now widely accepted worldwide by the younger generations that have grown up with it. The graffiti that litters the city walls, trucks and train cars, Rose points out, is just another form of advertising, which aided to the breakthrough of rap music. However, graffiti writing is not as respected, in fact PGR 172 it is much like the urine of a dog, used to mark and claim territory and is not exactly a pleasant sight. There are gifted artists who create elaborate multiple train car murals that are astonishing pieces of art, but still they are despised by the masses. This kind of artwork is always personalized, often with reference to their crew, which also serves as their visual icon. However, to be a writer “requires detailed knowledge of the train schedules”(42) along with the will to risk a lot for a little respect among their peers. Trucks and trains are common targets instead of buildings because they are mobile. Rose goes on to say that a “freshly painted train would be followed all day and when it reached its designated storage yard (the ‘layup’) at night, writers were ready to ‘bomb’ it”(43). This shows the dedication to this art form. Graffiti is the visual representation of the individuals behind the music while break dancing is the physical portrayal of the music. Breaking is another important aspect of hip hop, which was “originally [referred] only to a particular group of dance moves executed during the break beat in a Dj’s rap,” (47) the brief pause while the DJ is switching music. Break dancing is a combination of a number of different dances to imitate the music in a physical form. The dancers respond to the DJ’s personal mix of samples. In the earliest stages, DJs were the central figures in hip hop; they supplied the break beats for breakdancers and the soundtrack for graffiti crew socializing. Early DJs would connect their turntables and speakers to any available electrical source, including street lights, turning public parks and streets into impromtu parties and community centers (51). The music is still the central base of hip hop. Rose uses a number of quotes from DJ’s explaining their selections of music and the process of layering and mixing the samples together. The music that is produced simulates the surrounding noise of the city. This also brings with it the chaos and turmoil, which the lyrics help to amplify. “Rapping, the last element to emerge in hip hop, has become its most prominent facet”(51). Rose provides detailed analysis of the artists’ lyrics to show the use of their personal experiences to draw connections with the surrounding environment of rap music. The harsh language is used to express the anger of the artists in response to the racism and oppression that they deal with every day. A large portion of this book focuses on the lyrics and the differences of rap styles and flow between numerous artists of both genders. “Rap music brings together a tangle of some of the most complex social, cultural, and political issues in contemporary American society”(2). The issues in hip hop directly reflect the street life and the constant wars between both the police and drugs. East and west coast rap PGR 173 hold on to similar themes, but in the east rap has a longer history, which brings with it more culture and a style that is more refined. On the other hand, the style of language used turns many people away from the sounds of hip hop, but the majority of the T.V. shows and movies are just as bad if not worse. Hip hop, like many other forms of black music have surpassed many hardships throughout its development due to issues of racism and lack of acceptance. Each step in this culture’s development has been thoroughly examined, all of the information that is packed into this book is full of historical significance in regards to each individual facet of the hip hop style and culture. The way that Rose arranges her arguments and descriptions is very realistic. This is enhanced by all of the personal input from individuals in the hip hop culture. After reading Black Noise you have much more insight into the hip hop culture, which allows you to make a much stronger judgment toward the hip hop culture. Graphics from Black Noise PGR 174 Inspiration & the Gift of Writing from Emily McCarron Audre Lorde My whole life I have tried to be a writer. Throughout my writing career, I feel I have had many shortcomings. After reading The Collected Poems of Audre Lorde, I was inspired to continue my endeavors. Though I would never compare my talents in writing to her skill with the written word, she has inspired me to strive to write for the pure expression it allows me. The Collected Poems paints a vivid picture of over thirty years of history. Unlike Audre, I don’t want other people to read my poems but I am inspired to give the gift of history to myself according to her example. My writing style is similar to Audre Lorde; we both write with extensive use of metaphors and straightforwardness. I think everyone should read this book because she has a strong voice that needs to be heard. It was a touching journey through her life; her personal life, her political opinions, her racial issues, her spiritual life, her feminist issues, and her bisexuality. Some of her poems seem to express the deepest parts of her soul while others seem to be random thoughts reeling in her head. The book captures’ a plethora of emotions, and expressions which personify her. So much of her essence is in it. She even writes about being a writer in “After a first book” All the poems I have written are historical reviews of a now absorbed country a small judgement hawking and coughing them up I have ejected them not unlike children now my throat is clear perhaps I shall speak again (36). I felt like I could see her life unfold before my eyes. Hearing about her insecurities, fears, angers, anxieties, lusts, pleasure, and so on, reminds me of how life is one big random wave so you might as well write down what is going on with you along the way. When I read Audre’s book it made me wish that there had been more information on her somewhere in the book, but there is something to be said for the mystery and she did indeed share and expose a lot of her self in her poems. I got the impression from a number of different poems that she is spiritual. One of my favorite poems was ”Call”: PGR 175 Adio Hwedo is calling Calling Your daughters are named And conceiving My mother loosen my tongue Or adorn me With a lighter burden Adio Hwedo is coming. “Adio Hwedo: The Rainbow Serpent”; is a representation of all ancient divinities who must be worshipped but whose names and faces have been lost in time (417). This poem especially inspired me because it means something. Something that is bigger then all of us but also the core of us all. This book gave me a somewhat foggy insight into her life, which allows me to make isolated connections with her. Audre Lorde is so wise and her poems are full of important wisdom. “Generation II” helped me to sympathize with my own mother’s struggles of raising a daughter. A Black girl going into the women her mother desired and prayed for walks alone and afraid of both their angers ( 81). This poem also makes me wish my mom had used writing to deal with her fears while inspiring me to write out my fears. I enjoyed all of her poems but the blatant political statement in “Now” struck me on an unparalleled level. It voices the tireless adage of “Question Authority”, which has been prevalent in my life. Woman power is Black power is Human power is always feeling PGR 176 my heart beats as my eyes open as my hands move as my mouth speaks I am are you Ready (121). Her statement is so simple and, yet, so strong. I think the shortness of the lines added to the bluntness of how seemingly intrusive and important this message is. There were many poems about race in the book and ‘Between Ourselves’ gave me a point of few that I have not experienced, nor have a lot of people. But I will let her words speak for themselves. “Between Ourselves” Once when I walked into a room My eyes would seek out the one or two black faces For contact or reassurance or a sign I was not alone (223). This poem made me want to smile at people more; it made me want to write more of my thoughts on paper so I can be free to smile at people. The poem seems to crave a sense of diversity. It makes me hope for a solution to all the separation. One thing that kept me thirsty for more was her cry for justice. She lobbies for justice, and feels the most injured are women. Few want to hear or talk about the brutality of the way women are treated. A lot of political and social circles hesitate to include the feminist voice. A feminist is exactly what she is and does not hide it in “Need: A Choral Of Black Women’s Voices”: All: And how many of her deaths do we live through daily pretending we are alive? BJG: Do you need me submitting to a terror at nightfall to chop into bits and stuff warm into plastic bags near the neck of the Harlem River and they found me there swollen with you need do you need me to rape in my 7th year till blood breaks the corners of my child’s mouth PGR 177 and you explain I was being seductive (349). Bobbie Jean Graham, 34, beaten to death in Boston, 1979. One of 12 black women murdered within a 3-month period in that city. She wants to speak out for herself; she wants to speak out for everyone. I just wish I were inspired enough to follow her lead and speak out. Since we are on the topic of speaking out, I would like to say I am proud of her for publishing her poems about her bisexuality. This is an area which has largely been undocumented, and even so unpublished. Therefore she can be largely considered a pioneer. And I knew when I entered her I was high wind in her forests hollow (127). This poem was a passionate expression of experience that captures intense emotions. Descriptive and creative writing can be used not only in a fictional sense, but can also be used to provide an insightful narrative into pressing historical, political, and social matters. On more then one occasion, Audre Lorde’s poems provided historical insight. For esample, in “Viet-Nam Addenda” for/Clifford, she writes: Genocide doesn’t only mean bombs at high noon and the cameras panning in on the ruptured stomach of somebody else’s pubescent daughter (147). She knows how to force you to imagine different realities. I loved her poems because they always spoke the truth no matter how vivid or depressing it might be. To make it a full sample I have to include one of the mystical poems she wrote. One of my favorite poems I am not sure if I fully get her meaning behind it. In spite of its mystery, “The Black Unicorn” gave me a meaning and a strong feeling. I think that every one should read this book because it is historical, beautiful, and wisdom-filled in an eloquent yet necessary style. This book has convinced me to fill blank pages with my poems so maybe someday I will know who I am. She knows who she is, as shewaysin “Jessehelms”: I am a Black woman Writing my way to the future PGR 178 Off garbage scow knit from moral fiber (447.) Do you know who you are? PGR 179 All Woman: The Timeless Struggle Between Motherhood and Career Julie Richardson “Live as domestic a life as far as possible,” (quoted in The Forerunner, 1913) was the suggestion of a specialist regarding the depression of feminist writer Charlotte Perkins Gilman — the year was 1887. Leading up to her depression, Gilman was contemplating the very issue women of the 21st century are still struggling with – she was torn between work and marriage. After years of debating whether to marry or not to marry, she consented, and to the best of her abilities assumed the traditional roles of wife and mother. Shortly after her first child was born though, Gilman suffered a debilitating nervous breakdown (De Simone). The “rest cure” was suggested to Gilman as a way of dealing with her nervous breakdown. As a result, she plunged even deeper into the world of emotional instability. Gilman uses this moment in her life to later write the powerful short fiction story titled The Yellow Wallpaper (The Feminist Press) as a reminder to everyone that women need to be treated as equals and given the same opportunities in life as men. In The Yellow Wallpaper, originally published in 1899, Gilman presents the internal dialogue of a woman diagnosed with hysteria and for whom total rest has been prescribed. In the short fiction, the patient is slowly driven mad by her cure which cuts her off from any intellectual pursuits whatsoever. Although The Yellow Wallpaper is a work of fiction, it is partially based on Gilman’s own experience. At the time of her depression, the specialist told Gilman such things as, “have but two hours intellectual life a day” and for her to “never touch pen, brush, or pencil again” as long as she lived (The Forerunner, 1913). Desperate for some relief from her melancholia, she obeyed those directions for three months, and came so near the borderline of utter mental ruin that she could see no end. Then with the help of a wise friend, Gilman cast the noted specialist’s advice to the wind and went to work again. “Work, the normal life of every human being; work, in which is joy and growth and service, without which one is a pauper and a parasite” (quoted by Gilman in The Forerunner, 1913). Ultimately Gilman recovered some measure of power. This experience led her to leave her husband and her newborn child and relocate across the country. These bold actions were practically unheard of during this time, particularly for women. She then began to engage in and write about the social movements of the day. She PGR 180 became a prominent turn-of-the-century intellectual leader, writing such works as The Man-Made World, Herland, and Women and Economics (Schwartz). Gilman was at the forefront of a movement to allow women to be both mother and career-orientated intellectuals. She went to the extreme in her life to gain such independence by leaving her family behind and pursuing her career goals. We have progressed into a new era where it is acceptable for women to have both–yet the struggle still remains. Today’s woman is encouraged by some to be independent and career-oriented. While it is true that more women are developing careers, it is also true that many have a long way to go to catch up with men. Although women are no longer bound to a life of domestic tranquility, the guilt of having a career while raising a family can be discouragement enough to make women avoid it altogether. Yet many studies prove that women who work hard at a challenging job are doing something positive for their mental health (McChristie). How do women find that precious balance between work and family? For many females, timing is a problem. The phase of life devoted to forming relationships and establishing families is also the period of life when career-oriented individuals devote almost exclusive attention to developing their careers. Since many women in the workplace also carry the primary responsibility for children, this responsibility is often a time-and-energy restriction to career development (McChristie). Because often women are still expected to be homemakers, they find it difficult to take the time necessary to acquire job skills. So goes the age-long debate between the sexes of equal-rights and equal-responsibility. Gilman redefined womanhood, declaring women the equal of men in all spheres of life. This “new woman” was to be an intelligent, well-informed, and well-educated free thinker, the creator and expresser of her own ideas. She was to be economically selfsufficient, socially independent, and politically active. She would share the opportunities, duties, and responsibilities of the workplace with men, and together they would share the solitude of the hearth (Welter 151). This image carries over to the modern woman, yet that delicate balance remains elusive. Are we far enough away from the days of the yellow wallpaper, when women went mad from lack of intellectual stimulus in their lives? Deep-rooted oppression is hard to change. The Yellow Wallpaper was written as a warning to women in the late 19th century, and Gilman knew her shocking account of mental anguish would open up dialogue on the subject matter. “I did not intend to drive people crazy by writing The Yellow Wallpaper, but to save people from being driven crazy, and it worked (quoted by Gilman, The Forerunner, 1913). PGR 181 Works Cited Gilman, Charlotte Perkins. “Why I Wrote The Yellow Wallpaper?” The Forerunner Oct. 1913. De Simone, Deborah M. “Charlotte Perkins Gilman and the Feminization of Education.” WILLA, Volume 4, 13-17. (1995) Schwartz, Lynne Sharon. “The Yellow Wallpaper and Other Writings By Charlotte Perkins Gilman.” New York: Bantam Books, 1989. McChristie, Pat. “Women Need to Work.” CyberWoman (April 2001). http://www.cyberparent.com/women/needwork.htm A small country market on the Jacmel road, Pierre Verger PGR 182 Cultural Landscapes of Haitian Life: Paradise Lost but Not Forgotten Janet Thelen “You can take the [woman] out of the country but you can’t take the country out of a [woman].” —Common Folklore, Author Unknown Marilene Phipps uses poetry to paint a vivid picture of the struggles and social issues of Haitian island living. Through her words she leads the reader on a journey; woven in and out of the lives of family, friends, and acquaintances which have which have influenced Phipps’ writing. She is an accomplished poet and painter from Haiti. Crossroads and Unholy Water (published jointly by Southern Illinois Press and Crab Orchard Review), her first book, includes acclaimed published poems such as: “Haitian Masks”— International Quarterly, “Marassa Spirits of Haiti”—Crab Orchard Review, and “Pink”—The Beacon Best of 1999: Creative Writing by Women and Men of All Colors. There is a contrast of life by the casual traveler to Haiti and the writing of Marilene Phipps. She offers an inside view of Haitian survival. The author’s outlook of life in Haiti seems to me very different than from our American perspective of abject poverty, medical, educational, and economic crisis. Phipps describes the people as full of life “queen of the coal kitchen/…beaming/ the yellow kernels of her smile” with a fond remembrance (3). Her poems reflect on the surroundings of her childhood and remind the reader of conditions in Haiti today: The clock outside the church of Sacred Heart, downtown Port-au Prince, has shown ten of six for years. No one cares. Time cannot be read. Here people know what time it is by feeling each other’s faces. (30) Her poetry gives the reader a vision—“she sighed as she sat/ on a low straw chair, the heat-lacquered/ columns of her black legs folded in a squat/ her soiled apron caught between her knees”—taking us to a time and place in her mind with detailed descriptions (3). I believe the current U.S.-Haitian relations have encouraged, supported, and promoted talented artists and poets like Phipps to come to America to study and earn a living. Dan Seiters of News from… Southern Illinois University Press writes, “Marilene Phipps…was born and grew up in Haiti. The 1993 Grolier Poetry Prize winner, she has been both a Guggenheim and Harvard University Bunting Institute fellow. She has won PGR 183 fellowships for the year 1999-2000 at the W. E. B. Du Bois Institute and the Center for the Study of World Religions, both at Harvard” <www.siu.edu>. The fact that Phipps is Haitian—living in the U. S. with a long list of credentials—is not unusual. According to Radin of The Boston Globe, “Haitians occupy a special place in the United States, in two ways. They are black, but they are not American blacks; they look at American blacks across deep historical and cultural divides. And they are immigrants, sharing many characteristics with the Irish, Italians, and Jews who preceded them: the work ethic, fervent religious commitment, strong emphasis on family and education” <infoweb.newsbank.com>. Phipps’ poetry makes me realize the harshness of everyday life in Haiti and how much we, as Americans, need to be more thankful for what we have. It seems that only when we have something taken away—we reveal a true appreciation—or regret. My thought, on some Americans living in the U.S., is how much is taken for granted in our daily lives. Phipps shares her life experiences with us the reader: We are dirt/ poor in Nerèt. No running water in these slums, most people over there will kill over water in the ravine: it’s a trickle and getting some is not like in America— you get a ticket and wait in line. (24) Phipps offers an up close and personal view of Haitians living in their island nation “the lushness of the black river women/…who travel down from sun-scorched hills/…to wash soiled, worn clothes” with honor and respect (15). The island once described as “one of the richest colonies in the 18th century French empire—pearl of the Antilles” is now a poverty stricken country; “a legal minimum wage of 36 gourds a day (about U. S. $1.80) applies to most workers in the legal sector.” That is probably why “about one of every six Haitians live abroad” <ehostvgw17.epnet.com>. An article on May 7, 2001 by Tim Padgett/Port-Au-Prince for TIME Magazine informs us that “the country suffers 80% unemployment and Colombian drug traffickers have begun using the island as a transit lounge” <www.time.com>. Like a puzzle, the pieces of Phipps’ past form an image “the house was green and white/ coconut trees fanned themselves/ over the termitehollowed balcony” (22). Each memory—like a piece of her life—fall into place “I am an object/ in her private graveyard of muscular men/ whose photographs are like inscribed headstones” (24). With a thoughtful voice she recalls her mother’s relationships “each man has enlarged the emptiness in her/ she has been mined like a great hill” (24). Phipps shows the PGR 184 reader that she misses her mother by recalling her mother’s words “you grew in me/ now you have gone/ too far for me to imagine you” (25). She offers a tribute to her parents’ memory in Crossroads and Unholy Water; “without them there is no life” (Special Acknowledgments). The average life expectancy is 54 years according to a “Republic of Haiti” report <ehostvgw17.epnet.com>. Just like Phipps’ painting on the cover of her book, her poetry adds color and dimension to the Haitian cultural landscape. Her poems reflect the people of Haiti with compassion and dignity; bringing their stories to life. The reader discovers a little more about the world we live in—events and people that have shaped Phipps’ writing and her life. Crossroads and Unholy Water “make me see the world from [her] eyes” (25). Works Cited Métraux, Alfred. Haiti:Black Peasants and Voodoo. “A small country market on the Jacmel road”. New York: Universe Books, 1960. Phipps, Marilene. Crossroads and Unholy Water. Carbondale and Edwardsville: Southern Illinois Press and Crab Orchard Review, 2000. Padgett, Tim. TIME Magazine. “The Once and Current President”. May 17, 2001 Vol., 157. 18. Online. 16 May 2001 <www.time.com/> Radin, Charles A. “From Haiti to Boston…” The Boston Globe. Sunday Magazine, p18. 15 Dec. 1996 Online. Newsbank. Cabrillo Coll. Lib., Aptos. 12 May 2001 <http:infoweb.newsbank.com/> Seiters, Dan. News from… Southern Illinois University Press. 12 May 2001 <http://www.siu.edu/> “Republic of Haiti.” Background Notes on Countries of the World, Apr. 2001 Haiti, pl. Online. EBSCOhost. Cabrillo Coll. Lib., Aptos. 8 May 2001 <http://ehostvgw17.epnet.com/> Haitian Pastorale, from bookjacket of Crossroads and Unholy Water, painted by Marilene Phipps PGR 185 Break the Rules! Hao Huang Are you sick of typical Hollywood films like Dude, Where is My Car? or that film which contains thousands of bullets but zero plots called 3000 Miles to Graceland? Yeah, me too. So you want to make your own film that touches the human heart, the kind, which we can barely find now. However, you have a zero budget and don’t know how? When people like you want to become filmmakers they should read: Feature Filmmaking at Used-Car Prices. According to Eduardo Sanchez, co-writer and co-director of The Blair Witch Project—it is “A must-have for no-budget filmmaking. A most valuable resource, just in case you…aren’t one of Spielberg’s kids”. Can this book help you to make an original, independent film? It is true that Rick Schmidt will teach you the ABC’s of preparing, filming and editing in his book; moreover, it is based on his own experience. But there is more to it than that; it is a book that teaches you how to break the rules of filmmaking. The author tells you almost everything you need to know about filmmaking, and while he is doing that, he also reminds people that those rules can be broken. The most recent edition, 2000, covers even more digital filmmaking which almost missing in the 1998 edition. The book is useful and most importantly, inspirational and critical of the Hollywood filmmaking industry. In 1913 Jesse Lasky, Samuel Goldwyn, and Cecil B. DeMille made the first full-length feature movie in Hollywood in that barn, “The Squaw Man.” When they formed a studio and named it Paramount, they moved that barn to another location. Ever since then, filmmaking has become synonymous with Hollywood. It became the heaven of filmmaking. Among the thousands of great movies produced in Hollywood, Citizen Kane (1941) and Dr. Strangelove (1964)…were only two examples. Hollywood had its time. However while in the 80s commercial box office success completely dominated artistic success. It is true that Hollywood films are formulaic— from the earlier Cowboy movies to today’s Arnold Schwarzenegger action movies and it is getting worse. Hollywood has become a huge advertise machine. While it is violence world we are living in today; Hollywood packages the violence and make it beautiful, and the only way to become a success in this society—Gladiator. While the love is complicated and it contains not only just beautiful romantic sharing of life but also selfishness and jealousy. The loves in Hollywood’s romantic movies are thinner than Titanic. In the foreword Schmidt summarizes his view of these formula films. “The shortcoming of Hollywood is that its confections are whipped up from recipes (you know: a dash of romance blended into a cup of suspense with a dollop of social relevance thrown on top to create the perfect PGR 186 post-dinner entertainment)” (Schmidt 6). Attacking Hollywood filmmaking is the very first thing he puts in his book and he let his readers know why. His ten “anti-rule” rules are exactly what new filmmakers need to consider. He is telling us to stop worrying too much about sets, props, locations, costumes and plot. Shoot something that is about life, about people. You will feel that the writer is encouraging you to do it. “But when you write for a feature that you will produce, the only one you have to satisfy is yourself.” (Schmidt 41) Any prospective investor should be reminded that filmmaking is…a gamble. There is no way to know ahead of time…a more important point is that…you create a unique film that may help expand the understanding of people on this planet (Schmidt 67). It may sound impossible at first but there are many filmmakers that have tried this method and succeeded. Wim Wenders, director of Wings of Desire and Paris, Texas is one of them. “He came away with the conviction that the original concept for the film should remain open so that during the filmmaking the director can discover and incorporate into the film new images and ways of seeing.” Roger F. Cook, wrote in his essay, “Angles, Fiction, and History in Berlin: Wings of desire”. Wim Wenders was named the Best Director of the 1987 Cannes Film Festival for Wings of Desire. Hollywood filmmakers spend too much time on the look of the films and forget the essential thing of filmmaking—life and humanity. Those “anti-rule” rules are elements the Hollywood films are missing. He keeps reminding us of these rules through his teaching of how to make a no-budget film. One of the reasons that it is easier and cheaper now to make a movie is because of the Internet. It is an oasis, where people can gain and give away their own information. Today, people can simply list their film on the Internet without going through the monstrous Hollywood promotion and distribution system. In the book, Schmidt really connects the reader to the Internet. All the tools, videos and organizations he introduces to readers have their Internet addresses next to the their names. There includes Websites such as Dogme 95, places that people can get information and connections to the independent filmmakers and watch their films. There are also price lists and phone numbers you should call for more help for the things you need to do while you decide to make a film. His book also includes an array of checklists, sample budgets and contracts. He will show you ways to make films out of nothing or almost out of nothing. He introduces the readers to a whole new world of filmmaking. However, I was disappointed with the part on film editing. Schmidt only shows us how to edit the film shot by 35mm. These days, Digital Video (DV) filmmaking is so much easier and cheaper with higher quality. Last summer, David Sullivan of Cabrillo College led an independent study group PGR 187 that made a fifteen-minute long film call Strange Flesh; I was at the opening. The film’s quality was so good that I couldn’t believe they had done the whole thing on one DV camera and an Apple G4 computer. Even Schmidt admits that “Video that looks like top-end film! That’s why the DV format deserves attention beyond the previous “video chapter”.” He adds chapter 11 for the digital video workstation, but I don’t think that it is enough. DV filmmaking is revolutionary because it gives us the power to make films that have almost the same quality as Hollywood’s. Rick used too little space to describe this most powerful tool for future filmmakers (The new 2000 Edition is greatly upgraded). Feature Filmmaking at Used-Car Prices is like a gateway to an alternate universe of artistic creation. It is time for filmmakers to break the rules of Hollywood and setup their own rules, and show them to the audiences. The digital revolution, that is, disinter mediation, make it possible for independent filmmakers to publish their work without huge money support from Hollywood or any other major cooperation. Low budget digital filmmaking changes not only the meaning of production but also the ownership. The aesthetic it espouses returns production to people and to a human scale. It is time for us to be free from Hollywood at last. Fear of female sexuality in Francis Ford Coppola’s Bram Stoker’s Dracula PGR 188 The Dread of Analysis Imelda Jimenez “The monstrous figures from our dreams are our images of our repressed selves, and thus Transylvania, by extension, becomes the land of the unconscious, an interpretation which is thoroughly confirmed by Stoker’s imagery” (Wood 369). I had never viewed the imagery in Bram Stoker’s Dracula in such a provocative way. This is a quote by Robin Wood in an essay called “Burying the Undead: The Use and Obsolescence of Count Dracula”, which takes a closer look at who “Dracula” is and how he is portrayed in different films. When I flipped through the book The Dread of Difference: Gender and the Horror Film (Texas Press; $24.95), edited by Barry Keith Grant, I thought it might be interesting to read and to learn more about the genre of horror. The book had some playfully entitled essays such as “’Beyond the Veil of the Flesh’: Cronenberg and the Disembodiment of Horror”, and “King Kong: The Beast in the Boudoir—or, ‘You Can’t Marry That Girl, You’re a Gorilla!’” making the book seem appealing. There are 21 essays in the book, each by a different author; the majority of them are college professors, with backgrounds ranging from cinematography to literature to psychology. As I read the essays, I found them very analytical and too descriptive. At times I was guided so far into descriptions, I would forget what was supposedly being discussed and need to check the title of the essay. For the most part, the in-depth look at films and portrayals of characters were well written, such as in an essay by Linda Williams called “When the Woman Looks”. “The vampiric act of sucking blood, sapping the life fluid of a victim so that the victim in turn becomes a vampire, is similar to the female role of milking the sperm of the male during intercourse” (Williams 23). Examples like this help the reader understand and look at the films from a different perspective. I was personally interested in the essays about Dracula. In an essay by Vera Dika, entitled “from Dracula—with Love”, she discusses his portrayal in films throughout the years: But in [Francis Ford Copolla’s 1992] Bram Stoker’s Dracula, the monster is also a handsome young man, played by Gary Oldman. Although Badham’s [1979] Dracula, starring Frank Langella, presents a devastatingly attractive Count who seduces his willing victims, he is never a lover in the real sense. In Bram Stoker’s Dracula, the monster is now rendered as an ardent lover who is passionately loved in return by the beautiful Mina. (Dika 390) PGR 189 Some of the more profound, symbolic meanings behind “blood” and the woman’s sexual role and influence in the movie were a little difficult to understand. Dika attempts to give a profound explanation about blood and women in Bram Stoker’s Dracula. First she begins discussing women and menstrual blood, arguing women can be seen as “evil” by society. “The female is associated with filth and defilement, that which must be cast away from the symbolic system. For this reason, woman can become synonymous with evil” (Dika 391). This is pretty clear. But, in the next sentence she states: In literature, this fear of the wound—of female genitalia and female genital function—has been incorporated, according to another theory, now by Sidmund Freud, in stories that inspire dread, fear, and loathing. In his essay “The Uncanny,” Freud argues that this emotion has its source in things once familiar to us, to what was ‘homey’ or heimlich, but is now suppressed. (Dika 392) Then she talks about castration and a mother’s womb: He [Freud] claims that within this familiarity, this comfort, lurks the opposite emotion, the unheimlich, or “uncanny,” the dread of our first home, of the womb, of our mother’s genitalia. And for the male, it also includes the fear of the mother’s imagined castration and, potentially, his own. (Dika 392) And then in the next paragraph, she leaps into this idea of the blood of life, “The blood that Dracula craves, and from which we recoil, the ‘blood of life,’ derives its power from the ancient fear of menstrual blood”(Dika 392). This line is clear. In Stoker’s story, the female “wound” is displaced upward, from the genital area to the neck, and the act of sucking is at once a perversion of sexual intercourse and of lactation as well. Mother’s milk and menstrual blood, as corporeal excrement, are the abject. (Dika 392) Despite the so-called “philosophical” explanations of symbolism and metaphors in the book, which is often not easy to follow, the book gets you to view what is really, according to the authors, being portrayed in horror movies. The authors point out that we are accountable for what is exposed in movies. Horror movies tend to always have a passive female running away from the terrible monster in search of her strong, masculine boy- PGR 190 friend to save her from being killed. Going back to Williams’ essay, she discusses women having to “cover their eyes … [and] hide behind the shoulders of their dates”, when viewing scary movies. She tells us the reason why women do this is because a woman is “asked to bear witness to her own powerlessness in the face of rape, mutilation, and murder” (Williams 15). Women are still seen in today’s culture as male dependent and weak and this is strongly reflected in every type of media. If issues of gender role, sexuality, violence, and adolescence and other topics are suppressed, then media will jump in and find some way to get us to see it up close. That’s why issues like this cause such debates between the media and parents…how much sex and violence should a child see? It’s up to us to change what the media exposes to us. As Robin Wood said, “The true subject of the horror genre is the struggle for recognition of all that our civilization represses or oppresses” (Intro 4). Cover for A Star Called Henry PGR 191 Fastest Leg in the West (Of Ireland) Vance Buckreus Henry Smart: easily played by Matt Damon on the big screen, is an Irish Revolutionary hero. The charismatic overly handsome main character loves his way into the midst of the Easter Rising, though it was a battle lost and took the lives of many important revolutionaries, “was critical in the growth of Ireland into a free republic” (O’Brien 240). Henry Smart carries on the family trade: murder by wooden leg. His infamous father was known for being able to whip the leg off his stump, and whack his victim on the head, a lot like an old-west gunfight. The books hero is soon on his own, with many exciting exploits to fill the pages. Doyle entertains us by giving us a romanticized history of Ireland, while simultaneously going past mere entertainment to inform as well. A STAR CALLED HENRY is a good example of Doyle’s street talking poetry, and a tale of love thrown in. The early novels of Roddy Doyle were recognizable simply by the way they were laid out in type: long strings of descriptions running down the pages; one and two-word bursts of speech set off by dashes. His book Paddy Clarke received the Booker Prize in 1993, this established him as a legitimately literary contributor. A Star Called Henry takes place during the founding of the Irish Republic; this historical novel begins with a prehistory set in Victorian Dublin. The fist view of Doyle’s history lesson details his image of the conditions for the average early 1900’s Irish person. Henry the hero is born successfully while other Henrys had died at birth in the slums of Dublin amidst the “pools of stagnant water, rats on the scent of baby milk…death in every breath” (11). Baby Henry Smart is destined to help save Ireland from the British tyranny. The young hero named Henry Smart is destined for greatness; his father, also Henry Smart, teaches his son the family business at an early age. Henry tells us he watches his father “balanced without needing to hop and brought the leg down on the cap of a man who was standing next to me. I heard bones breaking and screams”(60). Doyle’s slant on the mayhem is comical, reading much like a mini-series movie. Henry has few tender moments with his parents, fortunately he is able to recall all memories since birth. He remembers they would sit on the front steps and look up at the sky. Those memories will have to last a lifetime for soon his parents would be taken. Henry Sr. is caught in the middle of an underworld double-crossing and disappears “Who was he and where did he come from? I know nothing real about my father; I do not even know if his name was real” (61). Poor Henry and Victor are left with their only possession, a mahogany prosthetic leg, to fend off the world. Now PGR 192 Henry must take care of his brother, Victor, as they are orphaned and alone. Henry and Victor are out traipsing around on their own, with their desperate circumstances depicted as comic adventures. They find ways to entertain the crowd by grasping rats barehanded to earn spare change. It was a little too farcical when the writer has them sneaking into school only to be thrown out again for being too poor. They are characters on the margins excessively entertaining as iconoclastic dissenters. “You will beat the English because your drinks are better” (273). The story is a typical “historical” revolt story, it has everything needed to create an entertaining and informing experience, true love in the midst of war, from rags to a position of respect in wartime. Roddy Doyle has inserted his likable character into one of the most important events of Irish history The Easter Rising. The story is artfully told, line for line, the prose is vivid, sensual, and gripping, although the story line itself is not very original. One of the best historically based scenes is “The Easter Rising”. This was an armed assault by Irish rebels on the Dublin General Post Office and other parts of the city on Easter Monday, the 24th of April, 1916. The Irish revolutionaries run out into the street and briång back a bed with casters, they put the wounded commanding officer on “a brass bed on good true casters, so Connolly could continue to run the show…`I took one bed knob and, his body guard took the other, we shoved that bed all over the post office”’(146). Even though they lost, the rebels succeeded in bringing greater world and national attention to the oppressive ways with which England ruled over Ireland. It is believed that this was the real reason for the rebels following through with the assault. They knew that they were going into a battle which they probably would not win, but they also knew that they had to send a message to England saying that Ireland was no longer satisfied with broken promises and political games. Works Cited Doyle, Roddy. A Star Called Henry: volume one of the last roundup. New York: Penguin Books, 1999. O’Brien, William. 04/05/01 “History Of The Easter Rising”. (www.irish revolt.com) Accessed 1 May 7, 2001 PGR 193 I Found Myself Through Hairspray: And Other Interesting Ways to Look At Sara Cunningham-Farish The World “I’ve been around and seen the Taj Mahal and the Grand Canyon and Marilyn Monroe’s footprints outside Grauman’s Chinese Theater, but I’ve never seen my mother wash her own hair” (39). And so begins Marcia Aldrich’s essay entitled “Hair” (Best American Essays, Houghton Mifflin). With wit and imagination she tells us the story of the women in her family and their hair, using it as a metaphor to expose the underlying expressions of the self. Through her personal experience and thought, she does what most of the essays in this book do; they ask us to look at the world in a new way, with new eyes, and understand the many layers of meaning in ordinary things. Aldrich seems to say, “Be afraid of a woman who dares to cut her hair”. When women change their hair, many times it reflects a deeper change in their lives; “sometimes they create a look that startles in its own originality and suggests a future not yet realized” (44) that rests on the brink of possibility. What is that “future not yet realized”? A change: I’m leaving, I’m going back to school, I like myself. Perhaps the ancient myth of Sampson and Delilah has changed form—since so few men have long hair anymore— and now rather than the long hair being the strength of Sampson, taking off the weight of long locks is the power of Delilah. There are of course women who ask the question that Aldrich’s sister does, “Don’t women have better things to think about than their hair?” Yes they do, but if they choose to think of their hair as the wings of their imagination, I think it is as worthy of thought as a uterus. Hair seems to embody notions of power and femininity but it can also display the flexibility of the soul. The mystical and mysterious hairdresser Rhonda who Aldrich finds in the end of her piece, explains it this way: I see hair…as an extension of the head and therefore I try to do hair with a lot of thought…Nothing is permanent, nothing is forever. Don’t feel hampered or hemmed in by the shape of your face or the shape of your past. Hair is vital, sustains mistakes, can be born again. You don’t have to marry it. Now tip back and put you head in my hands (45). When I read Annie Dillard’s essay “Stunt Pilot” I felt I had slipped into the short pageboy haircut I had as a kid. I remember standing next to PGR 194 my father who towered high above me, and for the first time seeing a plane do magical, fantastic things in the sky. Dillard shares how she “stood among dandelions between two asphalt runways in Bellingham, Washington, and began learning about beauty” (138). She transports us to the air show—to an event that I would not expect to show this—but does: the simple, fierce grace that every artist wishes to reveal. His was pure energy and naked spirit. I have thought about it for years. Rahm’s line unrolled in time. Like music, it split the bulging rim of the future along its seam. It pried out the present. We watchers waited for the split-second curve of beauty in the present to reveal itself. The human pilot, Dave Rahm, worked in the cockpit right at the plane’s nose; his very body tore into the future for us and reeled it down upon us like a curling peel…Who could breathe, in a world where rhythm itself had no periods? (138) She seems to dare us to define what is beautiful, what is art. Who are we who have not noticed the daring arc of the human pilot as he risks his life to carve art out of sky? Her description could be of painting, of dancing, music; in fact her writing has this same graceful arc, allowing us to experience the air show as she did. She could also be describing the finesse of making others laugh, as Ann Hodgman does in her essay “No Wonder They Call Me a Bitch”. Hodgman uses humor as a sword to explore the world in relation to the self. With wit and the matter-of-fact explanation of a soap commercial, she shares her experience in answering the questions “Is a GainesBurger really like a hamburger? Does dog ‘cheese’ taste like real cheese? Does Gravy Train actually make gravy in a dog’s bowl, or is that brown liquid just dissolved crumbs? And what exactly are by-products?” So she gives herself over to the bizarre task of sampling both dry and wet varieties of “bitch” food. Although we are led on the jocular journey of actually frying a Gaines-Burger and sampling Purina O.N.E. (Optimal Nutritional Effectiveness), the deeper commentary is about herself as a woman, and the criticism she has received: “bitch”! The Oxford dictionary defines a bitch as a “female dog or other canine animal; a spiteful woman; a very unpleasant or difficult thing” (Oxford 72). She is very subversive in this essay, denying their slang use of word—a spiteful woman, and addressing the literal use— female dog. She may eat the food, but she also uses humor and an almost mocking tone to laugh at the criticism, even going so far as to imply that she claims this word; “No Wonder” she says in the title. Her work shows us a new way to look at criticism: maybe there’s truth in it, and maybe PGR 195 that’s not so bad, just funny. I try to imagine I am all of these things: moved to transform myself through my hair, the human pilot creating art out of thin air, courageous and curious enough to pursue something so fervently that I would eat dog food. But I also try to absorb the way these different writers used their writing and thought to explore and push me to explore, the way I looked at the world. The writing is both the vehicle for new thought, as well as being a savory destination. In all three pieces—and in the many more to be found in the Great American Essays—the sense of exploration, honesty, and critical thought remind the reader that “nothing is more gladdening than knowing we must roll up our sleeves and move back the boundaries of the humanely possible once more”(xi). Robert Rauschenberg’s All Abordello Doze 2 (Japanese Recreational Clayworks) PGR 196 Hitch-Hiking in Hollywood Maia Yepa So, young Americans are the unfortunate ones, “weaned on MTV,” and unable to comprehend the beauty of a Hitchcock film, brought up in an era of artistic ignorance and cinematic sacrilege. David Freeman has no faith in the appreciative abilities of the modern audience, as he makes clear in the introduction to his The Last Days of Alfred Hitchcock. The book, a memoir of Freeman’s collaboration with the director who birthed such films as Dial M for Murder (1954), Vertigo (1958), Psycho (1960), and The Birds (1963), is more of an ego boost for a scriptwriter who hasn’t been recognized on a celebrity level. Freeman wants a piece of the pie. Unfortunately for him, Hitchcock ate it. The introduction, a critical, opinionated evaluation of modern society in relation to Hitchcock films, is better left for last, or perhaps not read at all. As a reader who enjoys forming opinions on my own, I didn’t appreciate Freeman’s idea that a young, post-Hitchcock audience member is incapable of true understanding of Hitchcock’s genius. Freeman also attacks modern filmmaking, and presupposes that Hitchcock, if he were alive today, would share his opinions. “I doubt that he would have much liked the slam-bang style that has now all but overwhelmed American movies, but he would have seen it for the irritating fad that it is” (Freeman ix). Yes, movies have changed, entertainment has changed, but who is Freeman to decide for millions that cinema of today is worthless, that contemporary audiences have dry tastes? Freeman has a point, that credit for deserving movies is often stolen by flashy effects and “the din of the multiplex.” Reference this year’s Academy Awards: the movie of the year was Gladiator, a film not to be completely disregarded, but certainly to be questioned in its superiority over other nominations. It is fairly clear that this business isn’t about quality over quantity, but looking at modern films and audiences, it can be seen that, beneath the Cheese-Glam surface of Hollywood filmmaking, there is still talent and taste to be found. Although we are of a culture in which instant gratification sells, there are still those who look for a slightly more stimulating (intellectually, that is) form of cinema. Freeman accuses today’s audience members of distorting Hitchcock’s influence. He claims that we have forgotten to look for the underlying psychological statements that are hidden in the gore and guts of Hitchcock’s films. In other words, where there was deep meaning for viewers of Hitchcock’s era, “what remains for a modern audience is only the grisly murder” (Freeman x). To contradict Freeman’s opinion I asked a twenty-year-old college student if she had an opinion about Vertigo. In response, she said that she PGR 197 “was impressed with the cinematography and the suspense it created… was constantly noticing potential stills, and…was impressed by [Hitchcock’s] ability to keep me hanging on… keep me interested till it was through” (personal interview). Perhaps not every youth of today is going to be in awe of Hitchcock’s direction; still, not everyone is in search of mindless entertainment. The memoir portion of Freeman’s book is full of interesting facts about Hitchcock’s movies and personality. For an avid Hitchcock follower, this section might be the icing on the cake; Freeman mentions the little things that one might not spot on their own and answers questions about strange occurrences in Hitchcock’s directing. For instance, why, in Vertigo, is there a strange cut from Madeleine (Kim Novak) running across the field, to Madeleine and Scottie (James Stewart) standing next to the bell tower? Who would have thought that it was Hitchcock’s wife, Alma, who suggested the scene be cut because of the appearance of Novak’s legs? Some of Hitchcock’s reasoning proves bizarre, but “the result is the finished print… Kim Novak’s heavy legs protected and all logic left on the cutting room floor” (Freeman 19). For those who are not regular critics of Hitchcock movies, Freeman says too much. He seems eager to share his secret Hitchcock facts, but in the process, he is not cautious about sacrificing the plot of the screenplays he refers to, and, in fact, does so liberally. I suppose if he does the film justice while giving it away, one might be inspired to hold a Hitchcock marathon. Otherwise, Freeman may as well be talking through the movie. The Short Night, which was never produced, is a bit of a change from the typical “film noir” style Hitchcock movies take on. The script, which still needs some polishing according to Freeman, is fairly lighthearted and easy to follow. Only a few moments provided suspense: most were teetering on the edge of comedy. Reading a Hitchcock script is not a terribly fulfilling accomplishment. The man is known for his suspenseful cinematography and his ability to lure the viewers to the edge of their seats with the mere angle at which he pans. Since the script on paper, no matter how detailed, can never parallel the final product film, reading a movie—well, it’s just not the same. This particular screenplay reached nowhere near the range of complexity that other Hitchcock films have. Truthfully, it felt like I was scanning an old Hardy Boys novel with the addition of a few PG13 scenes. What saved it was the build up that Freeman gives in his memoir of his collaboration on the project. If it weren’t for his explanations in the previous section of the book, the screenplay would have lost the appeal that being a Hitchcock product gives it. (Freeman gives a preview of the cinematographic choices Hitchcock was working on.) What spoiled it was the build up that Freeman gives himself for being a part of the process. Yes, the man deserves credit, but he often seems to turn the spotlight onto himself for no PGR 198 reason other than to remind his readers that he was Hitchcock’s last collaborator. The character development in The Short Night is shallow in comparison to earlier Hitchcock pieces. In Vertigo, for example, Scottie and Judy/ Madeleine are intensely fascinating people. Freeman does touch on this in his summarization of the film. Vertigo “is a puzzle within a puzzle that proceeds both by logic and by dreams” (Freeman 30). But try to apply this statement to The Short Night and Freeman would be paddling up river. There simply isn’t the same abundance of thought-provoking information, complexity of plot, or stimulation of curiosity that older Hitchcock films are known for. What I can appreciate about Freeman is his background in writing. I have become wary of memoirs written by authors who have no knowledge of language, who wish to convey an idea through non-captivating words. Freeman was a journalist and a scriptwriter, and it shows in the quality of his work. In describing Hitchcock’s storytelling, Freeman gives a perfect example of his own book: “It was an odd mixture of an obsession with detail and a slow, meandering style” (6). Freeman certainly exhibits these characteristics. He shows immense attention to the details, and his work entertains at a legible pace. Clearly, Freeman has an immense amount of respect and admiration for Hitchcock, as he places him on a pedestal that no director since has been able to reach. “If God couldn’t get it right the first time around, Hitch was going to have a go at it and see what he could do” (Freeman 53). The fact that Hitchcock is dead does not effect Freeman’s opinion. Hitchcock is a poster child for our obsession with celebrity, those unusual characters that never die in our heads. Hitchcock wasn’t assassinated. He didn’t die of a drug overdose or car accident. But that doesn’t change the fact that he is a legend in his genre, a character that Freeman won’t let us forget, who is embedded in our culture through a medium that was, in Hithcock’s day, a genre fairly unexplored. Although Freeman says too much in relation to his own career, in regards to Hitchcock’s, he says it all. “Today…many directors are well known and admired though they usually seem more like businessmen or politicians than artists whose ghosts can live in the collective unconscious of the nation” (Freeman xi). Works Cited Freeman, David. The Last Days of Alfred Hitchcock. Woodstock, New York: The Overlook Press, 1999. 281 pp. $16.95 Anonymous. Personal Interview. May 5, 2001 Works Consulted Vertigo. Dir. Alfred Hitchcock. Perf. James Stewart, Kim Novak. Paramount, 1958. PGR 199 Is it Behaviour? or Behavior? Leah Quinn Words, gotta love ‘em! They come in all kinds of shapes and sizes, textures and tones. Some words are full mouthed, big and round, others scrunched and plugged. Or perhaps you fancy the liquid smooth ones that slide from your lips, or the sharp ones that slice and bite? They can pop, click and bounce too and how about the words coughed up like phlegm and spit from your tongue like acid? Not me you say? Well then you can’t deny that words are down right useful now can you. If you’re not smitten with the sound and feel of words, don’t worry The Story of English by Robert McCrum, William Cran, and Robert Macneil, has something for you too. Behind each word there’s a little story, and if English happens to be your mother tongue then you’re in luck! The English language has over 500, 000 words to choose from and chances are at least a few will appeal to you (1). People use language to describe just about everything we possibly can about the human experience. Whatever it is that is important and meaningful to you, can most definitely be described using words. The study of language is essentially a study of people. Historic events and the process by which cultural identity is formed are contained within a language. Words are marked; they bear the past like a scar upon a smooth face the product of living, of chance and purpose. Upon inspection, words will reveal important cultural truths and fascinating insight into the character of the people who create them. I’ll tell you right off, this book is jam packed with information— important mind you, just not always, well let’s say...exciting. If you can sift through the desert of information, which admittedly is tedious at times, you will be rewarded. Buried in this desert are many tasty nuggets that will satisfy the curious mind and tickle even the most apathetic of verbal communicators. The Story of English tells the history of the English language. It taps its roots and explores its birth and its evolution over time and oceans. The book does this thoroughly and with attention to minute idiosyncratic subtleties that both surprise and delight the reader. The book keys in on the forces that have shaped English and provides us with logical explanations for its form today. The authors effectively win the readers interest by covering a broad spectrum of influences on English. This includes areas such as, Politics, Historical events, Culture, Immigration and the Arts to mention a few. Through many of these different outlets we find a subject that is interesting to us and are provoked to read on. As we follow the evolution of English we are made aware of the motivations behind certain changes and more fully able to appreciate and understand why they came about. PGR 200 Because I am an American, naturally the section in the book about “American English” appealed to me. Why is it that we speak differently than the British? Much of the changes English has undergone in this country can be traced to early nationalism. “ The American Revolution marked the turning point in the making of this new, American kind of English. The rebels wanted to announce their separation from the old country in every department of life” (226). The authors make their explanations complete with specific example of spelling changes the English in America underwent from the British traditions. To name a few of the most prominent we have the famous lexicographer Noah Webster to thank for things like colour to “color,” theatre to “theater” and defence to “defense”(232). The reader is also dipped into the melting pot of American culture and is satisfied with explanations on the regional differences of American English that are characterized by accents and subtle differences is word usage. We are taken to the South where the African slave population was most dense and see the influence it had on speech there. “The Southern accent of the United States would almost certainly been quite different without the influence of the Blacks. The influence of Black English was felt in the fields (where slave and overseer would mix), in the house (where master and mistress used plantation Creole to communicate with their slaves. But above all, it was found in the nursery...furthermore all nursing –as any reader of Southern literature knows was done by Blacks (204). If you’re still not impressed, don’t fret, there’s tons of fun, less serious material for those of us who don’t have a ravishing appetite for the subtleties of language itself. The authors dedicate ample pages to the origins of odd words, slang and common expressions in the English language. Can you guess what these words from “low Dutch”—fokkinge, kunte, and krappe—became? (77). Or how about the origins of the popular slang word “cool”? Turns out, “ Early Jazz was hot (frenetic), but when this word was over exploited by the Whites, it was considered best to develop cool (which may ironically, have come from white West Coast Jazz bands of the 1950s)”(209). Ever wondered how the American name for a mixed drink “Cocktail” got its name? Me either, but it was neat to find out. “...Like some other Americanisms it may have an African pedigree. In the Krio of Sierra Leon, kaktel means “scorpion”—a creature with a sting in the tail” (241). How appropriate, don’t you think? The richness of the English language is staggering and diverse as “English is used by at least 750 million people, and barely half of those speak it as a mother tongue” (1). I’d say that it is pretty obvious that it’s probably the most useful language to know, and the leader in the modern world. English reaches far and wide and it lives and breathes the people who speak it. Following the laws of nature it evolves with us from day to day, babbling into the future, carrying our history with it. The Story of En- PGR 201 glish is impressive and relevant reading material and if you’re into languages in a big way, watch out! It just might leave you speechless... Works Cited Robert McCrum, William Cran, and Robert MacNeil. The Story of English. Penguin Books: 394 pp. Giant Monkey frog perched on shower faucet, from The Golden Frog PGR 202 In Search of the Golden Frog: A Practically Untarnished Book Sandy Hager When invited on an expedition by the world’s expert on tropical tree frogs to survey amphibians and reptiles at a remote field site in the tropical forest of Amazonian Ecuador, the twenty-one-year-old senior biology student replied enthusiastically: “Yes! Take me with you!”(1). And thus begins and sets the pace for Marty Crump’s book entitled In Search of the Golden Frog. This real life field journal includes thirty years of invaluable research on habitat and wildlife while adapting to many different cultures. In addition, Marty raised two children while still continuing her work in the fields, making herself the first female biologist to ever do this. Although a lot of negative human impact has occurred in the past thirty years, she has worked hard to teach conservation and awareness. Overall, her descriptions of animals, plants and fungi are incredibly helpful with great color descriptions and size references. While her approach to biology is refreshingly human, being full of humor and understanding, the only critism I have is that from a scientific standpoint, she periodically anthropomorphizes animals she is observing and therefore may be doing them a great disservice. I’ll never forget going on one of my first biology field trips and experiencing first hand a bitter researcher and expert on dolphins do his best to completely destroy any ideas we may have about these wonderful creatures possessing any magical qualities. He said, “I want you all to erase any notions you have about them being telepathic or healing people because these creatures range from being dumber than dirt to no more smart than your household dog.” This extreme view and arrogance about something that can probably never be proven is completely wrong in terms of accurately and objectively observing animals. As human beings, we may also have the tendency to think as if all other forms of life think in the same patterns and have the same limitations that we have. This viewpoint is also limiting. Objective observation is one of the hardest tasks to master, but it can make all the difference in being the voice for the animals. While observing the physical combat of poison dart frogs, Marty writes, “The resident male, looking very self-important and pleased with himself, returns to his log and resumes his calling” (64). For a frog that sits poised and normally defending his territory, although he would likely be showing facial characteristics if he had human musculature in his face, this is just not an objective observation. While this kind of writing can work well for other kinds of literature, scientific research needs to remain open to all PGR 203 possibilities in order to best understand the animals. Young and far away in a field that is predominantly male, Marty manages to hold her own and establish herself. Her honesty and openness in communicating her feelings is refreshing and insightful. At the end of her first expedition she explains: After the first few weeks, I settled comfortably into how I wanted to be treated by my male companions. Through an unspoken series of compromises, the issue of “independence” versus “helpless female” became a non-issue. The guys gave me more credit, but offered a hand when they sensed it would be appreciated (27). On another expedition she recalls a humorous incident in which no attempts seem to be made to make her look more dignified. This is about a mysterious scary animal they encounter in the dark that turns out to be a bull. She writes: …tired and apprehensive about retracing our steps past the Asthmatic Monster. Sure enough, in the same place along the trail, we hear the heavy breathing. “Run!” I gasp. Three minutes later I’m tangled in a tree root and fall face down in the mud. John wheels around, thinking the creature is about to swallow me. He yanks me back onto my feet and off we gallop in an utter panic (78). Marty always seemed to try whatever was offered to her to eat or drink. From chicken feet soup to a ceremonial wedding saliva fermented drink, she is there for the complete experience. Here is a description of the process of making banana wine, of which she obligingly sampled: Ilde began by hanging several bunches of black rotting bananas from the rafters. These bananas were so far gone you wouldn’t even dream of using them for banana bread. He placed several wide buckets underneath. Over the next few days, juices from the rotting bananas dripped down into the buckets, where they continued to ferment. Ilde eventually strained the juice to eliminate the dead flies and rat turds (89). Teaching proper fieldwork to other cultures is so important to insure the future of tropical forests, but knowing how the other cultures do their fieldwork is so important to know how to begin. While collaborating with some biologists from Ecuador, she was not sure why they were look- PGR 204 ing at her strangely and not taking her seriously. She later found out that their fieldwork was predominantly accomplished not through field study and observing of an animal in its environment, but hiring people with less training to go into the field and bring back specimens. In addition to their difference in research styles, the fact that she was a female also confused them about her role on the expedition. She writes, “The crowning blow came when I wandered into camp last night clasping onto a large viper. Holding onto the last vestige of machismo, they’d exclaimed to Dave, ‘No es una mujer! Tiene Conjones!’ (‘She’s not a woman! She has balls!’)” (111). Whether she is dealing with the corruption of the Maxus corporation exploiting the land and its people, the Texaco company or the Army, she bravely carries out her duties collecting data and educating people to insure future generations will have the opportunity to enjoy tadpoles. As the years progress, with increasing information about amphibians, more positive attitudes have been adopted. The journal entries made by Marty’s daughter, Karen, as she is just beginning to learn to write are a wonderful accompaniment to her writing. How much richer our culture would be if all children were taught from such an early age the importance and joy that could be found doing fieldwork! For a broader audience to be able to understand and appreciate her observations, simplifying the interactions of animals in their environments may seem necessary; however, staying objective is the way to best help our understanding. She ends the book by saying, “Your search for the golden frog may lead you along many a different trail. No matter what the trail is, may your search be richly rewarding, and may you hold onto the golden frog once you’ve found it”. From Predicaments PGR 205 Cryptic Philosophies Christina Mardirosian Heather McHugh’s Father of the Predicaments (Wesleyan University Press, University Press of New England, Hanover and London, 1999) is a short book of poetry in which she plays with words, their syntaxes, contexts and meanings. This book shows McHugh’s mastery in wit, neologism and philosophy. She takes after Aristotle, who wrote, “the father of predicaments is being” (Jacket Cover), and she proves to us that being is very closely bound to our use of language, because being is existing, and in existing, our communication shapes itself in various forms. McHugh practically plays with her words and her use of language in every line, forcing us to submit ourselves to her style of writing. McHugh’s claims show how our culture is repressed in the way that we choose to communicate. The language she chooses to use is so technical and often difficult to understand that when read, it contradicts the very thing that she wants us to understand-which is that the breakdown of communication happens in every sentence and thought one expresses. Often cryptic, one must examine this collection of poems closer in order to understand their greater meaning. McHugh has successfully executed the use of neologism. Certain words she has invented range from half-consternatious, undertakerly, speech-quilt, namish, lackish and fastish. When you read into each poem, you can understand the concepts McHugh is trying to express with these neological words. She integrates these new words into several poems along with several words and phrases in French, Russian, German and Greek. She also responds to verses from the Bible and quotes from writers and philosophers such as Aristotle, Freud, Cioran and Thomas Mann. Her form, although at times baffling to the mind, often repeats whole lines or phrases: it seems that McHugh wants to express her concepts to the readers by doing so. The book begins with a short narrative poem entitled, “Not a Prayer.” This poem sets the stage on a personal note, speaking of a mother who is incoherent and slowly losing grips with reality as she comes closer to death. This poem is then followed by a series of shorter poems that respond to occurrences and situations, which may be observed in everyday life. To delve further into McHugh’s style of writing, let us take a closer glimpse of several stanzas from her narrative poem, “Not a Prayer.” This poem demonstrates McHugh’s use of neologism, wit and repetitive phrasing. In the sixth stanza, she writes: Throughout the daylong night, the nightlong day, the live long time that’s left, we mean to be her mates, go any PGR 206 where she drifts-we’d follow every surge of language, ev ery scrap and flotsam-give up every tillerwork for her, if she required. But what does she require? Theplace has no coordinates-or else it’s we who don’t-who fall asleep to j erk awake at her every “Are you there?” or “What are we?” or, now and then, her half-polite, half-consternatious Rus sian-French “Pardon?” ◊ “Malheureusement, pour être mort, il faut mourir...” [Unfortunately, in order to be dead, one has to die] (3-4) Here, McHugh plays with the words in the first line of this stanza. What “we mean to be her mates” refers to is not quite clear, but I would consider that she is speaking of earth here, or nature, which usually is referred to in the feminine. She also may be speaking of language itself, which would also make sense. It may also be referring to her friends and family. As mates, it connotes that they are on board a ship, in this case, that ship is slowly sinking because the mother is dying. In the beginning of this poem, McHugh quotes a verse from the Bible: “...she is nourished for a time, and times, and half a time, from the face of a serpent. / -Revelations 12:14” (3). Later on in this poem she writes, “And then she tried another. (Now the happy family / smiled.) A third, and I could breathe again. And then the snake of / speech was stirred” (10). As McHugh plays with her words as she writes them, she also lets us, the readers, see that she is definitely playing a game with the snake that is speech. In the thirteenth stanza, McHugh philosophizes. She is saying that even though a person may be incoherent they may still be more intelligent than those surrounding that person may. To put some sense together, she takes time: ten minutes, twenty, half an hour. The others come and go. Each thinks her thinking incoherent. But if anybody listens long enough he hears (among the many dozings) something terribly intelligible. (5) PGR 207 Following this stanza is the incoherent speech that comes from the mother who is slowly losing grips with reality. McHugh repeats lines and phrases over and over again as if speech is indeed a snake that twists and turns in all directions. “Yesterday yesterday I was [and here she falls asleep for seven minutes] yesterday I was full of new [she falls asleep for three] new life new life but today but today new life but today [she falls asleep for eleven minutes] I am full of full of yesterday I was [she falls asleep] was full of new life but today I am full of full of of [come back, come back I tell one of her sons, the sentence has a structure, when she falls asleep she’s not forgetting] but today [she falls asleep, he can’t believe me] I am full of but today I’m full of [somebody is calling him from somewhere else and then he’s gone] but today I am full of... [now she’ll tell me, now I’ll know]...I’m full of finished...” [Full of finished? is that the last word AFTER the ellipsis? should it be attached to how, instead of what, she meant? which parts were talking about talking, should I put some quotes in quotes? some kind of mind inside the mind, some time inside, or out? or what? This bracket is the writer’s. Who are you? are you? are you?] (5) This fragment, from “Not a Prayer,” is a good example of McHugh’s cryptic ideas. Here she is pondering on what to write next in the second part of this quote. She questions how language should be communicated and understood. It is interesting to actually see her thoughts as she is writing them. This confusing style of writing is what makes Father of the Predicaments so alluring. In “Mens in the West,” McHugh writes about observing an insane man. She ponders about every detail of the situation. “Mind! Mind! Mocking in mind!” the madman said who strode one then another way about the parking lot. He carried some infernal kind of metal cone (was this PGR 208 a weapon or a shield? was it a metaphor?) which came to its point in a bright red bulb. From there a wire ran to one ear (his right). What couldn’t such an apparatus hear? He was so bright, the passersby averted all their gazes. I hadn’t for weeks been able to tell, in these parts, two things apart-the homes from heliports, the churches from the luncheonettesso subtle was the architecture of a California distinction (humans having come west, after all, to be blessed with the absence of opposites). Here, however, was this one near-human spending not a moment’s time on understatement. Glaring, indiscreet, he was a form of nature, sure as any hill-face blackened to the whiskers, sure as any wildfire hot for fame, sure as any far-off star’s reminding. Even, in the evening, sure as pure Pacific: set upon, it’s blinding. (46) She remarks that this man, although insane, is still a part of nature as a whole. He is merely a thread in the great tapestry that is the human race. In “Streaming Audio,” McHugh responds to an age-old quote from Thomas Mann; “A writer is somebody for whom writing is more difficult than it is for other people” (48). We can see this is true in many of the poems. As you follow McHugh’s thought processes she allows us to see that there is great difficulty that comes in writing. McHugh is at battle with herself to search the correct words that express exactly what she feels. In “Ghazal of the Better-Unbegun,” she responds to Cioran’s quote, “A book is a suicide postponed. (39)” She battles here with the judgments her critics have passed over her, but she does not admit defeat. She writes, “Too volatile, am I? too voluble? too much a word-person? / I blame the soup: I’m a primordially / stirred person...McHugh, you’ll be the death of me-each self and second studied! / Addressing you like this, I’m halfway to the / third person” (39). PGR 209 McHugh’s combination of wit, cryptic wording and philosophies make Father of the Predicaments a wonderfully interesting poetic expression. She lets the readers see every battle with communication and the snake that is speech and she questions how we should express ourselves. McHugh’s intense language, although hard to follow, (due to her confusing style of writing) is still interesting and alluring. She shows us how our culture is repressed within the barriers of language. This book will keep you interested, and allow you to look inside at how every thought is as important as the next when it comes to communication. Heather McHugh PGR 210 History of Film: From Awake to Unconscious Shannon Drake To be quite honest the only reason why I picked up this book in the first place was because of the glossy pictures it had to offer, and it turns out that they were the only things keeping my interest for approximately 300 pages of text. Perhaps I should have read the book’s sleeve to get a better feel for the History of Film written by David Parkinson, but those descriptions can’t be trusted, considering it’s written by one of the publishers, in the attempt to sell a copy and make a profit. In this lively, informative and up-to-date new analysis, David Parkinson traces the evolution of the moving image the earliest shadow shows to the movies of today. (Cover Jacket) Did the publishers even read this book? In the end this guide to the history of film was written like a textbook, a history book at that, only it tried to cover too much information at once. This is not a book I would sit down and relax with, I can’t see it being of much use to any one who isn’t a film major cramming for a big test. What I was expecting was probably based on the judgments I made from the pictures inside. I thought that it would be written so that a layman who is just an appreciator of film and movies would be able to understand and enjoy what the author, David Parkinson, had to say. I was wrong. Perhaps I was expecting more personal interests than brief technical language. The main claim that the author seems to be making is that his version of the history of the film industry doesn’t involve any particular style or method that a director, producer, or inventor had of doing things, but just that they did something. Another requirement to make it into this particular book seemed to be that they had to have a memorable name, or at one time had a reputation of being visionary—not that the author ever explains how the people he chose were different from every one else. This book never really captured my attention, at any time. As any writer knows, or should know, you have to hook your reader from the very beginning, or at least make the attempt to do this—this book however did just the opposite. The first chapter, From “Science to Cinema”, explains, in the most painfully boring fashion, how and why moving photography was made. However this subject material seemed to be what really captured the author’s passion, he focused more on these inventors and inventions then he spent PGR 211 time explaining anything or writing about anything else. The author skips from one major movie icon to the next within a single page with only a skin deep analysis of how that particular person helped strengthen the film industry. Sound certainly accounted for the decline of both Harry Langdon (1884-1944) and Harold Lloyd (1893-1971). Joining Sennett in 1924, Langdon, a baby faced innocent trapped in a cruel world, enjoyed brief fame thanks to his collaborations with Frank Capra (1897-1992). (37) Four names are thrown at the reader with barely a reference to know who they are (Director? Producer? Actor? Etc.), except for the years they were alive—not even the years they were involved in the movie business. I suppose the writer just assumes that the reader would have a great knowledge about this subject matter before even glancing at his book. Over and over again this same textbook writing tactic is used, which not only kept me from enjoying or learning, but it also kept me from staying awake. Even though this claims to be a “history of film” it seems to paint the picture that during the years that film and moving pictures were being discovered and developed as an art form, nothing in the outside would happened, or in any way influenced the industry. History books should cover all angles without bias, but this book has only one interest which makes it difficult to follow what the author is talking about and referring to. Cinema going had been an American pastime for some thirty years. But, as the wartime emotional dependence on it receded, and as urban populations began to drift into the suburbs away from the downtown and neighborhood theaters, it became increasingly obvious that the habit was now just one of many leisure options competing for consumers’ dollars. (55) This is one of the rare occasions that the author relates his history lesson to the history of the real world. This example also shows how briefly he will touch on important subject matter that not only has importance to cinema, but to the rest of us as well. Earlier he briefly wrote about the lack of female involvement behind the camera, but breezed over it in only six lines of text. Personally I find this subject far more important, seeing how there are still fewer women then men involved in directing and producing. The title gives no indication that the main focus would be on only the inventing, directing, and producing. I thought this text would hit on PGR 212 every aspect of making a movie: acting, script, cinematography, publicizing, sound track, special effects, etc. Even though the focus was mainly on directing, there is more then enough material to keep the reader involved in. However, the manner in which this book is written there is so much repetitive technical language that the text becomes stale very quickly. However, his films had a compositional depth and density that exploited the artificiality of their interiors to intensify mystery and excitement. Managing to convey both naturalism and fantasy the atmospheric beauty of each episode derived form Feuillade’s poetic imagination and his emphasis on the creative use of movement and space within shots, rather that on their juxtaposition. (52) By using this type of language the author avoids telling us exactly how director Louis Feullade makes this happen and also leaves me wondering if he has actually seen any of his films. A great deal of the book is like this; I’m not sure if it’s the writer’s lack of knowledge in how to show us his arguments through his writing, or if it’s the fact that he either has not seen the movies he writes about, or does not appreciate their contribution to the film world. David Parkinson may have written this book, but very rarely does he truly share his opinions or views on the different occurrences he reports to us in his book. Von Stroheim’s obsession with symbolic naturalism chillingly exposed the cruelty and ugliness of the worlds he satirized, but the intricacy of his detailed realism was dismissed as extravagance by the studio head. (44) Here he really expresses himself, and shows that he has done more than just listened to what others said were the influential and brilliant artists, but that he really does know what he’s talking about and has assessed the facts for himself. This book is written in a way that suggest that if you have not seen the movies the author writes about, or do not have a precise understanding of the technical language he uses that you will be lost, or taking a nap. I would not recommend this book to some one who just wants to get the feeling of what it was like to be involved in the movie magic in it’s beginning, which is what I was looking for, because it doesn’t put you there. It doesn’t help you imagine what it was like to walk into a theater in the PGR 213 1930s and be amazed by what you saw there, be astonished at the sight of the first colored moving images, or be enthralled by the voices you heard for the first time by your favorite actors on the big screen. This book is just a guide to names and dates, but definitely not to the heart and soul of this still very new and unpredictable art form. Works Cited Parkinson, David. History of Film. New York, New York: Thames and Hudson, 1995. Robert Rauschenberg’s Overdraw, 1963 PGR 214 “Just See the Movie” Nigel Genthner I have never uttered those words to a single person. After all, the book is always better than the movie . . . Right? Wrong! Mary Shelley’s Frankenstein is a piece of classical literature, which was amazing for its time and for its author, however, is this book applicable and enjoyable reading for those of us in the twenty-first century? The answer is both yes and no. I believe these are very different questions with very different answers. Frankenstein is very applicable to today’s society and deals with some very real issues we face today. However, I believe Frankenstein is not a very enjoyable book to read for today’s generation. I found myself dreading the very thought of reading one more chapter, even one more word. The movies have been entertaining, but the book leaves much to be desired. Let us first deal with the question of whether or not this book is applicable to today’s society. This book amazingly deals with some of the same questions we deal with today. Dr. Frankenstein creates a being by taking an inanimate object and giving it the spark of life. At first this idea consumes him, but when faced with his hideous creation he is mortified by what he has done. How can I describe my emotions at this catastrophe, or how delineate the wretch whom with such infinite pains and care I had endeavored to form. (39) Oh! No mortal could support the horror of that continence. A mummy again endued with animation could not be so hideous as that wretch. (40) In this chapter Dr. Frankenstein begins to realize he has tampered with some of the fundamentals of nature – life and death. And now he must find a way to deal with that realization. This is a now common theme in our news and so it is very amazing that a book written 200 years ago could shed light on a subject in today’s scientific world. This is the strength of the book and what I find appealing about it. There has been a lot of news recently about the role of science in nature. Cloning is one of the most controversial of these new boundaries being crossed. However the ability to genetically manipulate a fetus is also a controversial boundary which is being explored. This is known as the “genome project” which identifies genes in the fetus and identifies what those genes will affect. For example a gene that causes cancer could be identified, and in the future scientists may be able to replace that gene with a healthy one. It seems as though science is in such a rush to do what it can do, that it is not stopping to think what it should do. This very issue is discussed in Frankenstein. Dr. Frankenstein is PGR 215 so caught up in trying to find out what causes life to begin and what causes it to end, that when he discovers the secret to life he rushes to create a being of his own. He is so consumed by this desire to cross a boundary never before crossed by mankind that he doesn’t realize the horror of what he has created until it is too late. This is when the book finally becomes engaging for me. Finally 1/4 of the way through the book I find relevance. Unfortunately I find this relevance comes much too late to save the book for me. This brings us to the issue of whether or not this book is enjoyable to read for today’s generation. I believe it is not. This book takes an immense amount of time to get going. Shelley takes too long a time in getting at the heart of the story and by the time she does, I am exhausted and tired of reading this book. I will however concede that the way the story is told is interesting. It is told from the narrative of a person relaying the story as it is being told to him by Dr. Frankenstein after the events have already taken place. It is a very intriguing way to tell the story and leaves me wondering why Shelley would have chosen to tell the story this way and not simply in the present tense. The weakness I believe is in the writing itself. This book is fraught with verbigeration, which I believe causes the book to drag a little. Mary Shelley uses to many words and takes far to much time in setting the stage for the story to be told. This makes it hard for the reader to really get into the book. It may have been the style of writing for the times, but it does not work for me now. I also found that Shelley had a difficult time writing from a male perspective. She tends to engender the males in the book with feminine qualities. This again, as a male reader, makes the book very hard for me to relate to. This book has at its heart an incredible idea for a story. Especially when you consider the time it was written and the fact that it was written by a woman during a time when men dominated the arts. However, that it is where it ends. The story is not particularly well written, and were it not such a unique idea for the time, I doubt this book would be held in such high regard today. Although the book does address some issues we are facing today I do not believe that is enough for me to recommend this book to anyone. I say, “just see the movie,” although the movies are not very true to the book you will probably enjoy them more. I was told this book was born out of a ghost story made up by Shelley. It’s a great idea, but the book would have been better without the endless amount of words used to tell it. I probably would have really enjoyed the ghost story, but it is a shame I didn’t enjoy the book. Works Cited: Shelley, Mary, Frankenstein. New York: Oxford Press, 1993. PGR 216 Mad Woman Ramblings Elinore Eaton Suddenly I too see why everybody hates it— the manifestos of metaphor, the mad voice that mumbles all night in the dark: this is like that, that is this, the phosphorescent flares of vision, the busyness of words sweeping up after all that sputter... (77) Poetry comes from the fingers of a woman who would tear the hair from the life of its scalp if it wasn’t for the pen that occupied her hand. She whispers and screams all the hurt and joy and beauty and ugliness that fills the eyes and head of a woman, so that she may speak plainly what needs to be spoken of being a woman. Pages and pages of words navigate through the long, dark, stare into the soul of women through the eyes of Sandra Gilbert, in Kissing the Bread. Sometimes our lovers are not perfect. They do not always have a caring ear to lend to our mad ramblings and explosions of manic metaphors. Paper, on the other hand, lies blank with anticipation. The computer screen glows empty of its own expressions. These are objects devoted to the words of others, the infinite listener. These listeners give poets, such as Sandra Gilbert, a chance to write the most heavenly accounts of, say... turnips (from Turnips pg. 270), Connecticut (from Going to Connecticut—for J.R. pg. 28), or even the ending of a book (from Ending the Book pg. 61). Expressions are then accounted for, that would very likely be lost in Sandra’s memory if it were not for her the infinite listeners. What is a woman without her mad ramblings? And who has not tired of listening to the mad ramblings of a woman? This very question may have prompted women to go against such ways of thinking and to have fought to earn the vote, to have fought for a voice in equality, and perhaps for Sandra Gilbert to express her experiences and thoughts in words. There has been many ways that this society has been which has belittled a woman’s voice. The presence of the many feminist movements is enough to back such a claim up. The offerings of a major in “women’s studies” in colleges across America also says something about the wars that women have fought to gain strength in their voices (“U.S. History” appears to me a history of wars, and it is required at just about every American college). So, it is with such a book as Kissing the Bread that we have reason to rejoice for the use of a full range of expression given to us from PGR 217 the voice of a woman. With tenderness and sometimes anger, Kissing the Bread shows us the world through a woman’s eyes—Sandra Gilbert’s eyes. As she writes of many of the experiences she has had through out her life we cry, laugh and love with her. She writes of past travels and her observations of “feeling like voyeurs, like trespassers”(30) in “Going to Connecticut”. Gilbert speaks of the female stereotypes in “The One He Loves”: She’s the figure skater you’ve always hated, the princess of the spelling bee, the ice queen in velvet and fur with muscles tough as tusks and hair the color of charm bracelet. (211) She jokes coyly of a blind date where “Nobody drank too much, nobody told any interesting stories” (21) in “About the Beginning”. These, along with every other infinite experience of life that means either everything, nothing, or what was once nothing but is now everything, is tip-toed or trampled over in Sandra Gilbert’s Kissing the Bread. In the aforementioned piece, “The One He Loves” Gilbert teaches us the real woman’s perspective of society’s vision of feminine beauty. Perhaps brought on by jealousy, we watch with second-hand eyes the author observing a perfect “she”. Sandra observes the way she captures the attention of a man (could he be all the men?) and sits with her disappointments of her own body and sensuality: Next to her you’re flabby and noisy, something made of jelly instead of sinew, something that shivers and whimpers and passes out in the dark, a princess of pain with weak ankles and a head full of misspelled sentences. (211) We take a look through a woman’s eyes, the sorrows that sometimes come with imperfection as a female. I, as well as many of my female friends, have suffered the wrath of super models, and of the girl that captures the attention of all the boys at a party, of the obsession of perfection and thinness. I have two girlfriends that have suffered from anorexia and continue to be obsessed with thinness: never achieving that perfect skinny, little, body. Women spend billions of dollars a year on make-up, boob jobs, manicures, personal trainers, diet plans, dermatologists, hair stylists, plastic surgery, lingerie, tanning booths, and organic-nonfat-sugar-free-sodiumfree-protein-pumped-meals-in-a-can. Gilbert shares such struggles to the rest of the world in a poetic language that everyone can understand from PGR 218 some emotional stance. All can connect with suffering, as it is a part of human nature, through the glorious words of poetry. Through her medium of luscious poetry, Gilbert takes us through the dark and sometimes enchanting world of the mad ramblings of a woman. This collection of poetry is so helpful in relating anyone to the world of a woman through the eyes of a woman. The writings contained within Kissing the Bread are an honest, opening up of how a woman’s world is from Sandra Gilbert’s perspective. Anyone who takes the time to sit with this collection of poetry is opening the doors to a better understanding of a woman or even themselves as a woman. Beautifully composed, she places the language within anyone’s reach, so that the overeducated do not get bored, the under educated do not lose its meaning, and all acquire a pinch of a woman’s mind. PGR 219 Madman’s Language Jay Weber Individuals have beliefs instilled upon them through early social interaction, which in turn, defines them within the society. These set ideologies hold back societies from making a greater movement forward; they prevent social change. Individuals who are defined as unequal are not allowed to give a full contribution to society so they are put at a great social disadvantage. The Professor and the Madman, by Simon Winchester, (New York, Harper Colling, 1998) takes a look at this and the way society treats individuals who are considered unequal. The novel has a textbook style and does a nice job of shedding light on an individual who is plagued by demons, but is able to still contribute to society. The way that society defines individuals is like writing in stone, which makes it impossible for them to change; however, this needs to change or else society will never be able to face its social problems. The book tells the wonderful story of an individual, Dr. William Minnor, who is writing definitions for the Oxford English Dictionary (OED), and is slowly going mad. In a way he is defining society’s standards by working on the OED, yet he is also being rejected by society because he is becoming more and more unequal as his madness grows. Through the development of Dr. William Minnor’s character, The Professor and the Madman, reveals the great points and secrets of the OED but also shows the weakness that are present within the novel. From the beginning, Dr. William Minnor is shown to be normal by the facts, and facts that are presented early on in the novel. The normal Dr. Minnor was a well-respected individual in society until he went mad, causing him to be rejected and looked down upon as an unequal. Once he reaches this state, he contributes the most to society by helping with the lexicography work on the OED. A man, who is mad, is the one individual that the rest of the English world listens and respects without any idea. If the main population of his time had known they would have rejected any thought of listening to a madman, which certainly still holds for today. Dr. Minnor’s insaneness is revealed through his dreams and actions, take for example, this horrendous act: He tied a thin cord tightly around the base of his member to act as a ligature and to pressure – cauterize the blood vessels, he waited for ten minutes or so until the vein and artery walls had become properly compressed – and then, in one swift movement that most would prefer not to imagine, he sliced off his organ about one inch from its base. (193) PGR 220 Truly this is the peak of Dr. Minnor’s madness, but yet, Dr. Minnor was the one of the few individual that was able to control the definitions in the OED; he had the power to change the stereotypes, however he choose instead to reinforced them. The insanity that possesses him and the fact that he even gives more reason for society to imbed these stereotypes is certainly sad for such individual with a chance to let the world know that these stereotypes do not let individuals prove themselves. Dr. Minnor’s dementia was unique in the way he went mad, allowing society to believe that he was a special individual, he was then able to reach a state were he was a great asset to the English world. The fact that Minnor was a madman before he became a recognized influence on the OED allowed him to contribute to society instead of taking away from it. Dr. Minnor’s illness was caused by dementia praecox which caused great paranoia in his life this: “… early-flowering failure of the mental powers, and was used to distinguish a condition in which a person begins to lose touch with reality, as Minnor had done, early on in his life – – in his teens, his twenties, or his thirties” (209). The onset of this disease occurred later in his lifetime. Dementia praecox is now known as schizophrenia in which “a person is likely to have positive symptoms (hallucination, delusions), periods of negative symptoms (lack of motivation, social isolation), and periods of both. A person may be socially adjusted but unable to work or vice versa” (Allen). Dr. Minnor’s version of this illness allowed him to work while, on the other hand, he was socially plagued. If it had been the other way around neither the OED nor Dr. William Minnor would have been as successful in the world. Minnor’s illness was a gift for him – without this illness he would never have been the individual he was. Individuals in society who are plagued by illnesses that makes them mad should not be look down upon and rejected from society. People come to this world in all different forms, which enriches humankind. Who has the right to consider someone mad and push him or her away from the rest of society? There are obviously some social standards that call for the locking away of individuals such as those who commit murder or rape, but to put someone away because they are mentally unstable is unjust. This is a form of prejudice. Just because they scare the rest of society. Society punishes them and locks them up, or treats them as unequal. It is an illness like any other – society does not lock someone up if they have cancer or if they become infected with AIDS, which seems to cause more harm than mentally unstable people. Society needs to lose this fear and allow these individuals to grow to their full potential – doing this would benefit both subcultures. Today we are locking away one subculture, mental ill individuals, and are treating them with very little respect, because, they have been born with an illness that makes them socially unacceptable. All individu- PGR 221 als have the right to live a free life until they forfeit that right; until then society should not lock them up. The story of Dr. Minnor’s life is a good one, however, the textbook style does a great disadvantage to the novel. First of all, Dr. Minnor’s character is developed by facts that seem to keep on repeating themselves. With the first seventy-three pages we get the whole life story of Dr. William Minnor and it could end there, but then the piece goes on with facts that seem useless in telling a story about a man who contributed so much to the OED. The novel goes on telling, “ If the language that so inspired Shakespeare had limits, if its words had definable, origins, spellings, pronunciations, meaning – then no single book existed that established them, defined them, and set them down” (83). This fact was given by the author to prove that the OED was setting out to do something that never had been done before – which seems to only be a mistake because it sets a feeling early on that this piece is going to be stiff and boring. The OED would be exactly like this novel if it were written into a story. While the OED might be a great accomplishment for the English language, the telling of the story does not need to follow the same style as the OED, boring the reader with facts. The reason the OED is such a great piece of work is because it gives the facts of the word; the reason the novel is so bland is because it to gives the facts in the same style, which is only fitting for a dictionary. Just imagine reading two hundred and forty two pages on the definition of art. Now imagine reading two hundred and forty two pages on the definition of Dr. William Minnor’s life – same quality same boredom. Novels and dictionaries have different styles for a reason and should not be mixed. Dictionaries need facts. Novels need style. However, the book is able to raise some significant social issues on how society should treat mentally ill individuals and the bias that most people have against them. As long as society classifies people there will always be a problem of how to treat minorities in society from race, social class, to mental illness. Mentally ill people have the right to be treated with respect within our society. Social change only comes when individuals stop defining each other – until then society is missing out on a great resource that it has within it. The Professor and the Madman reminds us of way the stereotypes must be changed. Works Cited Allen, PhD, Jon G. “Schizophrenia” April, 24, 2001. http:// www.menninger.edu. Winchester, Simon. The Professor and the Madman. New York: Harper Collings, 1998. PGR 222 Mirror of Myths Lori Bravo At the age of three I caught a glimpse of unseen beauty. A broken abalone shell. The image in the rainbow looking glass reflected awareness of connection as I held it as I would a mirror. In mythology, high gods and human beings alike emerged from rocks, an indication that early people regarded them as a source of life. This myth stirred excitement and interest in me immediately. I was drawn to this particular myth because of my own connection with rocks and stones. This gift of direct spiritual connection with stones inhabits my spirit just as they do in certain myths. For example, the North American tribe’s beliefs were solid with my experiences with stones. (163). They claimed that they descended from stones. It appeared that in their way of thinking, if human beings could become stones, then stones, in turn, could become human beings. A number of rock gods and goddesses were given, but lacked sufficient information that one may need for research. This sparked my curiosity and I was inclined to uncover references that interest me in order to gather a deeper understanding of what was not available in full definition. There was however, information offered by the cross-references at the end of each entry, which was helpful, but only in provision of the book’s definitions. Categories of cross-cultural entries, as well as related gods and goddesses were also provided for outside sources. Although I am familiar with some cultures and their spiritual preferences, I have undoubtedly found explanations for questions I’ve asked in wonderment of the universe, and have learned the differences between what each ancient culture believed to be true the purpose of their gods and goddesses. Envision the sky as it darkens. For one to know nothing of astronomical phenomena would easily believe the light to be stolen. For the ancients, and people across the globe from the most ancient times, the realization of the power of the sun made survival possible. In return, their myths reflected their reverence. The power of the sun was recognized throughout the myths of solar movement, and reaffirmed the sun god’s role as creator. Crowned king of the sky and sustainer of life, the sun, like a god, died and returned, proving resurrection which made survival possible. Tamra Andrews, author of Nature Myths links to my beliefs of nature and the significance of myths, through her book. Let’s put it this way; the book had me hooked. I was eager to explore more of the book and impressed with the numerous myths given in reference to each culture and their differences. With experience and imagination as tools, people created myths to PGR 223 solve mysteries. The book allows one who may not identify with, or may want to learn why the ancients stood firm in their belief that “all forms of natural phenomena acted by will.” (12). “The myths of ancient thinkers are so full of metaphors that it’s easy to interpret them as we would the modern poem or abstract painting.” (13). But while artists use the abstract to explain the concrete, is it not true ancient mythmakers used the concrete to explain the abstract? In our modern day life we refer to clouds as protection from the sun’s rays, or indicators of potential upcoming weather changes. In myth, as described by Andrews, the clouds take on a supernatural quality. Like celestial gods, they can create patterns and shapes, and help predict nature’s moods. As mentioned in Polynesian myth, the clouds formed when Hina, the moon goddess, stretched her white tapa cloth across the heavens. The Chinese believed that dragons brought rain, so coincidentally they also believed dragons materialized as clouds that assumed odd shapes or floated through the sky with serpentine tails. The book of Nature Myths presents a wide spectrum of natural phenomena that are explained today by science, but in the ancient world, they were simply mysteries. This way of thinking supports my belief in nature as my form of faith. I believe we are the fabricators of the depth of our grave. We weave our undivided fibers (consciously or unconsciously) into the roots that bind our substance. How much do we appreciate the gift of life? In other words, How far are we willing to illuminate the cosmic process back to our design? In reference to the example of the sun gods I interpreted previously, I discovered that one who may choose to explore this book of myths might feel they are scanning the surface of myths. Andrews provides significant details of ancient myths that are easily approachable by the reader due to simple and effective definitions. Andrews chose a wide history of context, which caused me to question certain definitions of myth gods and goddesses. I feel that Andrews provides a source of information needed in Nature Myths for quick references. The context is helpful in giving information in a style assembled to summarize rather than to deeply analyze each definition. This book is a starting point for people who are interested in spiritual explanations of natural occurrences. Works Cited Barthes, Roland. Mythologies. Hill and Wang, New York 1987. Young, Jonathan, Campbell, Joseph Saga—Best New Writings On Mythology White Cloud Press Ashland, Oregon 1996. PGR 224 Walsh, P.G. Apuleius The Golden Ass. New York: Oxford University Press Inc. 1994 Eliade’s, Mircea. Encyclopedia of Religion http://www.cybercom.com/~grandpa/classical_links.html http://navisite.collegeclub.com/servlet/search.HandlePostServlet http://home.netscape.com/ Robert Rauschenberg’s The Ancient Incident (Kabal American Zephyr) 1981 PGR 225 Movies Exposed Brenna Dunn Popcorn, soda, and a candy bar. When you hear of these things what do you think of? I think of taking a trip to the movie theater. These are the necessities of watching a movie. Whenever I go to the movies I think about how much money these movie people are making and how easy it must be to make a movie. But is it really easy to make a movie? The answer would definitely be no. Have you ever wondered what goes into making a movie? I know I have and I’m pretty sure you probably have as well. There is so much more than just writing a story and having some actors act it out while filming. An intriguing book to read would be The Art of Movie Making, Script to Screen by Richard Beck Peacock (Prentice Hall). From the screenplay to the casting to the editing to the final marketing of films, this book has it all. From the little guys to the big head honchos, you will learn what important role every crewmember has. One of the “little guys” who is extremely important to making a movie, but is often overlooked is the person it all begins with. This person is the writer. It starts with the writer-it’s a familiar dictum, but somehow it keeps getting forgotten along the way. No filmmaker, irrespective of his electronic bag of tricks, can ever afford to forget his commitment to the written word. (61) This quote by Steven Spielberg says it all. Every movie starts with written words, the base of it all, and is then developed into something more. When you go see movies or hear about a movie, it is always “who’s in it?” and the response is usually Julia Roberts or another famous actor/actress. The question is never “who wrote the screenplay?” There are many more quotes like the one above. Peacock did a wonderful job of tying in many interesting quotes by directors, writers, actors, etc. Like the quote by Steven Spielberg, other quotes help us to better understand exactly what is being explained and how it applies to the movie business. It also shows that he is very much in-tune with the movie world and he really does know what he is talking about. This is important because it shows that the author of the book has experience with the subject he is writing about. I have been talking a lot about movies but what exactly is a movie? Most people would probably say a two-hour long film. When in fact a film can be anything from thirty seconds to ten hours. As long as it is on film it is considered a movie. A good example of a short movie would be Spike and Mike’s Sick and Twisted Festival of Animation. This is a collection of a series of short movies, each one is only about thirty seconds to a few minutes long PGR 226 but each can be considered a movie within itself because it is on film. Peacock goes into the in-depth details of this aspect of movies, a very interesting insight on what a movie is. “Movies are mirrors of the culture.” I always thought movies represented fairy tale lives that we never can have. It is an interesting point to see that many movies do reflect on the culture we live in. This is true when perhaps seeing a French film and comparing it to an American film, the culture in the movie will be drastically different. Movies reflect how our culture has changed over the years. If you look at Mary Poppins it represents a fairy tale life, having a nanny staring in it any kid would love to have as a caretaker. Compared to a more recent film like Traffic, which shows us the reality of the drug world and just how bad it is today, it is amazing how different our culture has become and it is very alive and portrayed in the movies we see. In the same way that movies have changed with the changing of our culture, special effects have also gotten much more elaborate over the years. How in the world do these movie people make some of these elaborate sets and special effects? From an ordinary hospital room to a castlethese people can do it all. Would you believe that it is easier to make a castle than an ordinary hospital room? This is because it is difficult to make a realistic hospital room that we haven’t seen a hundred times before. Special effects can range from being very simple to very elaborate, like the ones done in many movies today. If you look at the movie Matrix, you see some amazing special effects that could not have been done when movies first came out. It takes a lot of careful planning and talent to pull of some of these magnificent effects we see in the movies today. Did you know that a hairstyle could mean so many different things? This is especially true for actors and actresses. The hairdresser can change the mood and the personality of the character by changing even a simple thing like the length of the hair. A hairstyle can be a very important thing in a movie. Like in the movie Used People one character plays a women with three different hairstyles, constantly changing them throughout the movie. This shows the three different personalities the character has. Changing the hairstyle is a very effective way of understanding exactly which personality the character is currently following. Overall this is a very effective book and it is most definitely worth reading. If you love movies and would like to learn the details of movie making this is the book for you. On almost every page there is a blurb about a movie, Peacock quotes movies from the early 1900’s to current movies. Maybe after you read this book you will have a little more compassion for the movies you see, knowing what hard work it requires to create such a work of art. PGR 227 Reshaping Reality: Finding Meaning Gabe Houston in Abstract Art Is it the scene of a bloody murder, or is it a safe resting-place? The location of an unspeakable crime, or a soft, warm place to find comfort? While these questions seem to have nothing in common, these are interpretations, coming from different people, of the same painting. How could opinions about the same piece of art be so completely different? Particularly with modern and abstract art, the viewer can interpret a piece in a number of different ways. One definition of art is: “Human effort to imitate, supplement, alter, or counteract the work of nature” (dictionary.com). Abstract art presents an altered reality or unreality. As a springboard for imagination, art can change one’s perception of the everyday objects of our lives – familiar objects that are habitually overlooked. Seeing mundane objects in art and as art elevates these objects out of the realm of the ordinary, thus altering one’s view of what is ordinary. Encounters with Rauschenberg, by Leo Steinberg, is a lecture published as a book. The book includes anecdotes, the author’s opinion of pieces of art, and numerous quotes of other critic’s opinions regarding the work of Robert Rauschenberg. What makes the book unique is the author’s pointof-view, that of a “rare art historian who has known the pressures implicit in reviewing the work of living [emphasis mine] artists” (Steinberg back cover). Steinberg gives insightful analysis of various pieces of art, most of which are the works of Rauschenberg. Robert Rauschenberg is an American painter who played an important role in the transition from abstract expressionism to pop art. He was born in 1925 in Port Arthur, Texas. Rauschenberg studied art in Paris and at several schools in the United States. PGR 228 During the early 1950s, he produced collage paintings in which freely brushed expressionist canvases were overlaid with bits and pieces of actual textiles, photographs, and torn newspaper clip pings. In 1955, he made his first ‘combines’, three-dimensional assemblages in which paintings were combined with found im ages, such as photographs, and objects of popular culture — traf fic signs, light bulbs, Coca-Cola bottles, radios — to create ironic or ridiculous effects (Encarta) Steinberg begins the book with a disclaimer: “I have left this lecture largely as delivered and have not purged it of quips and by-blows which listeners to a live speaker are more likely to tolerate than readers of cold print” (Steinberg iv). The book starts off slowly, and I often lost interest in the early parts of Steinberg’s lecture. However, I found the author’s wittiness and subtle humor enjoyable; I think they made the book easier to read. The author’s personal acquaintance with Rauschenberg adds another dimension to the book by including several conversations between the author and the artist. Perhaps the best aspect of the book is the abundance of full-color images. The pictures greatly enhance the reader’s understanding of the author’s opinion on various paintings. In many cases, the book would struggle to survive without the images. Without the accompanying photo, the reader, unless an art historian, would not know what Steinberg is talking about when he writes: “My first piece was a rave review of [Willem] de Kooning’s Woman paintings – and Hilton [Kramer] was dismayed to see me take that stuff seriously” (Steinberg 2). I had never heard of Willem de Kooning, let alone known what his Woman paintings looked like; but as I look to the page opposite the statement, I see a picture of an abstract painting of two women, and immediately understand the author. I don’t particularly care for or understand abstract art, and I’ve always wondered what’s so great about it, thinking to myself “Hey, I could do that.” In Rauschenberg’s work, he used ordinary objects — chairs, a chicken, a stuffed goat, a T-shirt, a clock – strangely juxtaposed in startlingly unexpected ways. While the meaning of his work is subject to interpretation, I found most of his work intriguing. In his work, the ordinary becomes extraordinary. One of Rauschenberg’s most famous pieces, Bed, is a perfect example of how a piece of art that seems simple can create many different opinions and controversy. Bed is a combine painting made up of a real quilt, sheet, and pillow, heavily splattered with paint (75_ x 31_ x 8 in). When I first saw the combine, I thought to myself, “OK, a bed — with paint splattered on it?” When Rauschenberg entered the combine at the Venice Biennale, and ended up winning the grand prize, it started a firestorm of controversy in Europe. “The award brought forth European headlines of TREAPGR 229 SON AT VENICE and blasts at the American’s ‘grotesque pieces of junk and trash cans…’ The Patriarch of Venice ordered Catholics to stay away from the show because works like Rauschenberg’s ‘offended human dignity.’ The artist himself calmly accepted the $3,200 prize. He had already explained his Bed: ‘I think of it as one of the friendliest pictures I’ve ever painted. My fear has always been that someone would want to crawl into it’ ” (Steinberg 47). One common interpretation is that Bed implies a scene of a rape or a grisly murder. Rauschenberg’s dealer, Leo Castelli, described it in a 1984 interview: “A real pillow and quilt heavily splattered with paint, in which some horrible act – a rape or murder – seemed to have occurred” (Steinberg 48). Other critics/commentators also see a deep, dark meaning; a commentary on the violence and nihilism of modern culture. Steinberg has a different opinion of Bed: “…the smears and drips work here pretty much as they do elsewhere in Rauschenberg. They are what you see – drips and smears. Red paint reeks no more of blood-shed than white invites crying over spilled milk” (Steinberg 49). I find it interesting that Steinberg, with his personal knowledge of Rauschenberg, doesn’t interpret this combine in lurid terms. Steinberg implies that Rauschenberg is manipulating media, form, shape, color, and texture in his work. One could say Rauschenberg is just having fun transforming ordinary objects into anomalies. I would like to thank Leo Steinberg for introducing me to the work of Robert Rauschenberg in an entertaining and comprehensible manner. The combine paintings are interesting and unconventional, sometimes grotesque; not necessarily my taste in art. Yet, I appreciated Steinberg’s perspective on contemporary analysis of Rauschenberg’s work. “Steinberg warns against the modish interpretations that now load Rauschenberg’s work with murderous symbolism or same-sex iconography. He argues that meaning in the artist’s work is almost unspeakable…” (Steinberg back cover). What is the message of modern, abstract, and pop art? The objects that have been so familiar are no longer ordinary. Works Cited “Rauschenberg, Robert”, Microsoft Encarta Online Encyclopedia 2001. <http://encarta.msn.com> Steinberg, Leo. Encounters with Rauschenberg. Chicago: The University of Chicago Press, 2000. Dictionary.com. 5-03-01. <http://www.dictionary.com> Works Consulted “Rauschenberg Links”. Robert Rauschenberg Links. 12-20-01 <http:/ home.talkcity.com/InfiniteLoop/razamataz rauschenberg.html> PGR 230 Take a Read on the Wilde Side Rob Goldschmidt Even after a hundred and fifty years, Oscar Wilde tickles the funny bone, cultivates the imagination, and challenges the integrity and intentions of our dysfunctional society. True, this was a guy writing from a Victorian Age perspective, but Oscar was a very different kind of guy. A Playwright, novelist, poet, critic, professed hedonist, practicing aesthetic, and convicted homosexual, Oscar had a unique interpretation of human interaction. In a broad sense, his writings elaborate on the darker side of intolerance in society and the struggles of personal morality. Wilde’s book, Complete Shorter Fiction (published by Oxford University Press, $8.95), is a veritable smorgasbord of his imaginative and critical perspective on humanity and his disdain for aristocratic society and ruling classes. Though less obvious, we live in a world dominated by new economic elites just as exploitative as yesterday’s aristocracy. Born Oscar Fingan O’Flaherte Wills Wilde on October 16th, 1854 in Dublin, Ireland, he enjoyed the benefits of a prosperous family. His mother, Jane Francisca Elgee, was a poet under the pen name Speranza, and his father Sir William Wilde was a successful eye and ear surgeon. Young Oscar was able to obtain an excellent education, including a scholarship to Magdalen College at Oxford University. It was during his studies at Oxford the John Ruskin influenced Oscar about the ideas of hedonism and aestheticism (biochan). Hedonism—the doctrine that pleasure or happiness is the sole or chief good in life—and aestheticism—the cultivation of art for art’s sake and the refusal to take oneself too seriously—became fundamental characters of his writings, no matter the issue he was addressing. While he was touring Italy in 1875, Oscar began writing his first poetry, and in 1878, he was awarded a Newgate Prize for his poem “Ravenna”. Then, in 1881, he spent a year touring the United States and lecturing. The American women adored him, but the press berated and ridiculed him fervently; it is little wonder that American society was on his short list of targets. Oscar married Constance Lloyd in 1884 and fathered two sons, Cyril and Vyvyan. It was his 1891 novel The Picture of Dorian Grey (a look at narcissism), and his 1895 play “The Importance of Being Earnest “ (a parody about role playing and mistaken identity) that finally brought fame and fortune (biochan). In 1895, after an affair with Lord Alfred Douglas (and an ensuing legal battle with Douglas’ father The Marques of Queensbury), Oscar was sentenced to two years of hard labor at Reading Gaol Prison. The experience would profoundly impact the remainder of his life. Upon his release from incarceration, Oscar’s marriage was dis- PGR 231 solved and he ended up dying in poverty three years later, in 1900. During this later period, he wrote De Profundis (love letters from prison) and The Ballad of Reading Gaol Prison (his personal reflections on imprisonment), considered to be his most morose and intense works (bibliomania). Understanding a little bit about Oscar enables us to better understand his context and intention in the fantastic scenarios he sometimes portrays. Complete Shorter Fiction is a compilation of stories and poetry from his happier days-1887 to 1891. “Lord Arthur Savile’s Crime” takes a farcical look at predestination, and the lengths to which people will go in their pursuit of that destiny. A young man of good standing, after having his palm read, is convinced that he must murder someone—anyone really— before he can fulfill his marriage vows to his beloved Sybil. Lord Arthur’s most serious crime—aside from attempted and accomplished murder— was his complete detachment and lack of humanity. Through his character, Wilde portrays a society “lacking in all harmony…amazed at the discord between the shallow optimism of the day, and the real facts of existence”(29). In it, Arthur regards friends, family, acquaintances, and strangers more as experimental subjects than human beings. The murder plans are conceived with laboratory-like efficiency and minimal fuss. At one point, the main character decides upon the use of a poison for his next victim as, “it was safe, sure, and quiet, and did away with any necessity for painful scenes, to which, like most Englishmen, he had a rooted objection”(35)—a jab at aristocratic pretentiousness and callous indifference in the face of misery and suffering. Another story, “The Remarkable Rocket” uses pyrotechnic devices and animals as subjects in a study of social stratification and the evils of arrogance. Wilde gives the powerful elite another poke when the rocket replies as to its tangible usefulness, “A person of my position is never useful. Indeed, I have always been of the opinion that hard work is simply the refuge of people who have nothing whatever to do”(135). Wilde explores the issues of socio-economic disparity as well as personal morality. In “The Fisherman and His Soul,” the implications of a soul and the lengths to which we will go to for love is the subject at hand. In order to be with his love—a mermaid—the fisherman must cast out his soul (which proceeds on a bloody rampage) and sacrifice going to Heaven. Feeling that “love is better than wisdom, and more precious than riches, and fairer than the feet of the daughters of men”(234), our hero forsakes God and unleashes his remorseless shadow. In the end, the fisherman finally becomes aware of the nature to his darker side, and the tragic consequences of denying proper morality. He looses the girl—mermaid—and burdens himself with controlling his demonic shadow-displaying self-sacrifice-a theme that resonates in many of Oscar’s other stories as well. No subject, including William Shakespeare, is off limits to Wilde. PGR 232 In “The Portrait of Mr. W.H.” a storyline is devised around the hypothesis that Shakespeare’s Sonnets were dedicated not to Lord Pembroke (as most scholars agree), but to a male actor in his theatrical company. A young, delicately handsome, male actor of female roles named Willie Hughes, to be precise. The theory alleges that the innate beauty, eloquence and feminine acting ability of Willie inspired the play “Romeo and Juliet”, as well as the author’s famous sonnets. Evidence is even fabricated to add credence to the claim, a portrait of young Willie, yet by the end I wanted to believe in the theory as well. I suppose that is what Oscar had in mind when he wrote it, though. To show that naiveté, compulsion and irrationality can be troublesome combination. Ready to express his views with his pen, Oscar enjoyed ridiculing, or at least parodying, contemporary society, moral frailty, and intolerance alike. We may not have the rigid aristocratic classes of Victorian England and its social problems, but we do have economic disparity and social stratification. Our society has numerous problems of intolerance and injustice, discrimination and persecution, to name a few, that were in some respects similar to those over a century and a half ago. Somehow though, by conveying his message in often-humorous form, Oscar humanizes our problems and makes them more fathomable, as well as fun. He once said that “Imagination is a quality given a man to compensate him for what he is not, and a sense of humor was provided to console him for what he is”(biographychannel), and his stories have plenty of both. The relevance of his message remains intact, but it is his wry, rebellious humor and imaginative style that mark Oscar Wilde as one of the preeminent authors of the 19th century, and well worth reading today. Works Cited Wilde, Oscar. 4/21/01. <Gaol/ Complete.htmp” http://biblio mania. com/Fiction/wilde/ Reading Gaol/Complete.htmp> Wilde, Oscar. 4/20/01. <http:// biographychannel.com/cgibin/biomain.cgi> Wilde, Oscar. Complete Shorter Fiction. New York: Oxford University Press, 1998. PGR 233 The Greek Myth Angel Luna In order to uhave a better idea of what Greek drama is we need to have a basic background and knowledge about Greek mythology. Greek drama and plays have been examining the fundamentals and principals of the elements that create life in all moving things in the universe. Most of Greek drama and its characters have been surrounded by mythological thought; the universe they body forth and the gods they show represent all human creatures. Myths, and especially the Greek Myths, refer to manifestations of the cosmos since its formation; they concern the principal components of creation. The myth emerges out from the creation; Eros originally symbolizes that. If it were not for the research that I conducted, it would be difficult to understand Aristophanes’ play. Even then the play turned out to be difficult to read; some of its terms were unknown to me. If it were not for other books and web sites I would not be able to have a clue about Greek drama and its myth. Greek drama and its myth in modern times seem to be the continuity of ancient facets of drama. Perhaps in modern times, as well in Greek times, we are trying to make the world comprehensible through myths. Throughout the years, the myths have been introduced to the action comedy drama; that is to say, Aristophanes’ Plays play on contemporarily times by following the rules of action comedy drama of ancient times. In contemporarily plays it is worth noting the sarcasm and ironies which almost always accompany serious issues; the method that has been used in Greek drama as well. But there is something different in the way they implement those variations between ancient and modern times. In modern times the play writers use the sarcasm in order to examine tragedy in two different ways. On the other hand, in ancient times there were more references toward the myths, implementing names of creatures such as bird. Speaking about the Aristophanes’ play, most of his plays are surrounded by these mythical metamorphosed characters are represented as a form of bird that characterized the daily issues of that time. That is to say, both ancient and modern times use daily issues such as socially life politically, morals, and economics. The bird, therefore represent in a sarcastic way the daily problems that affect the laborers people in society. Of the origin of tragedy it is not the purpose of this work to speak. Its beginnings are fairly elear. Of comedy the same cannot be said Even the great Aristophes was somewhat in doubt (See page 4 lines 8-12 PGR 234 Our Debt to Greece and Rome). Once again, what he is revealing here is not only the purpose of speaking about tragedy throughout the comedy; therefore he is in doubt of what can be relevant. It is to be hoped that drama as well as tragedies have been played in a way that it is worth seeing as a protest; against the way of life people in authority would give on during those times to the slaves and in modern times to the laborers. Considering man in its own individual sphere, limited by a cycle time and the corporal Material; representing to a determinant character in this Grand Drama or cosmic action. That needs every sense in one deeply conscious of the actor, remembering at the Moment when hi is acting his role of a character; memorizing how the souls did before Incarnating, and then enter into the scene. (See the Myths of Er of Panfilia: Plato in Republic). Once you are up on stage interpreting a character, the actor needs to concentrate on projecting his line vividly. Time is short on a theatrical stage, so whatever needs to be done needs to be squarely done; otherwise it means that no one was prepared for his role on the set of stage. What I mean is that time during live plays goes more quickly then in rehearsal. And the more the actor is prepared the better his acting will be. Also, the concentration helps the actor to express his character as if he or she were the one in the story literally. The bird characters in the play are unique. Aristophanes used the metamorphosis of birds, to interpret daily human issues sarcastically that reveal social problems. Like in ancient times as well in modern times, laughing, crying, and the sarcasm of tragic comedy make us feel fine. Perhaps is just the irony that reflects back to us, as the essence of our self-steam. In Birds, there is a dialogue between Peisetairos and Hoopoe that grabs my attention by emphasizing the duality between what is right and what is wrong. Peisetairos: You use to be a man—just like us two. And owed the the city money—just like us two. And liked not paying your Debts —just like us two. But then you changed your nature for Bird’s, and flew across the land and over the sea. Your mind Contains the thoughts of man and bird. That’s why we’ve come As suppliants to your door, to ask if you know a city that’s Warm and woolly—a place to curl up in, like a big soft blanket. Hoopoe. Your want a greater city than rugged Athens? Peisetairos: Not greater—just more comfortable for us. Hoopoe: You obviously want to live as an aristocrat. Peisetairos: What, me? Not at all. I hate Aristokrates. Hoopoe: Then what’s the sort of city you’d like to live in? Peisetairos. One where life’s greatest problems would be like PGR 235 This. The posture of Peisetairos is to propose the duality in the dialogue keeps going and going, and therefore Hoopoe stops questioning about what the sort of city you’d like to live in. Before the last two lines in their dialogue, Peisetarios sarcastically denies his purposes of what he really wants to obtain from Hoopoe. In other words, put into modern times, what Peisetairos means is that he and Hoopoe are running a way because of his debt with their creditors. Therefore, at the beginning of the dialogue, Peisetairos mentions the metamorphoses that Hoopoe suffers in order to fly away crossing seas and lands to get where he is now. It is a way to represent two worlds by using duality. The Greek in this case, Aristophanes used this method to project properly and on ironic way toward things. Rightly so [the myth speak to the man that understand and they are receptors of an actualized ritual throughout themselves.] Therefore the manifestation of myths and the duality toward all moving things in the universe, that makes life possible for these characters in birds. What we see in Aristophanes play, it is just the ancient drama that implies the myth by using the duality of being and its metamorphoses of characters; therefore understanding Aristophanes play is like comprehending Greek mythology at the same time. The understanding and interpretation of duality as well the characterization of metamorphoses characters make Aristophanes play more comprehendible. In other words, no matter what the subject is, without having basic background one way or the other will be difficult to understand the subject we might read. Works Cited http://www.geocites.com/symbolos/nota03.ht Aristophanes, His Plays and His Influence Lord, Louise. E. Our Debt to Grecee and Rome. Cooper Square Publishers, New York, 1963 PGR 236 PGR 237 Seeing Pittsburgh Through One Author’s Eyes William Norteye I sit here in twilight zone scheming through leaves bagged in a hard cover. I am wondering what this author is talking about. What exactly is he saying? To what audience is he speaking to? I am overwhelmed to discover, after several rounds of research, that there is no information pertaining to this winner of the 1997 poetry series—Robert Gibb. However, some of his poems have previously appeared in the Cincinnati poetry review the Illinois review, the Kenyon review, the laurels review and a whole host of other books and reviews. So, with very little knowledge of this author and his works, I am going to embark on a journey to dissect a few of his metaphorical lines. I hope that when I finish dissecting, I will know what The Origin of Evening—the title of Gibb’s book—is all about. However, before I do that I will like to clearly state that after reading it once, I noticed that Gibb’s book is not one that you can read and understand in a sitting. It falls short of having the reader experience the reality of his words easily. Having read a few of Gibb’s poems, I am of the view that he is reintroducing his childhood life to the reader. So it is some sort of a true story, a dive into a certain time period in an attempt to bring to life again what used to exist. Gibb courageously begins his trip into the past with a historical landmark (Carnegie). He provokes the readers’ thoughts with befitting imagery and commendable metaphors. However, his attempt to open the eyes of the readers mind to see at first hand the horrible and depressing events that occurred at a time when he was growing up somehow opens a door to a big flaw. In a way, I feel Gibb tries too much to involve the reader using enriched metaphors and broken lines that his attempt to recapture his childhood days is more or less lost. He seizes to fully express and proceeds to impress the reader with amassed metaphors and quite too many broken lines. If his ultimate aim of this book was to introduce the general reader to new metaphors and the use of broken lines, then I will say, he did an excellent job. Otherwise, he succeeds only fifty percent of the time in allowing the reader to see his life sometime ago. Whilst some of his metaphor filled lines is easy to digest, others are hard nuts to crack. “In the Carnegie museum” for instance, Gibb takes a journey back to his childhood days with his stepmother, he gives the impression that their destination was not a place to dwell. The image he bestows on the reader makes you feel his urgency to leave the museum. At that is what it seems like to me when I read this line…“Through the leaves in their vein…/ there must be some way to enter the world/ and keep on moving into leaving the old life, / rug by rattles, lying there in the dark”, Gibb uses thoughtful broken lines to describe situations and events he simply detest and those he like to welcome. But the excessive use of such broPGR 238 ken lines can prompt readers to translate the metaphors in several ways. Then again, the general reader may find it difficult digest such a complicated piece. In the “Moths”, he speaks of change, of transformation to another life. I like the leaf ones best, For whom the ends of transformation Are resemblance He dives into two worlds and makes a comparison of what was and what is. Moreover, he makes this very apparent in the concluding part of the “Moth”. Change was a rending. Even the saints, we learned, Had first to shed the chrysalis Which blocked the sight, Feeling themselves bleed outward Into their wings Before lifting from the bark Once again, I used my intuition to make sense out of yet another complicated piece. Certainly, any reader in the right frame of mind can easily make a general assumption as to what the above quoted piece means. However, not all the assumptions made will be right. In a case where a reader misinterprets a piece in the poem, the whole sense of portraying a true story will be lost. As if on purpose, Gibb deliberately transports the reader back to when he was a kid, this time he re-lives a moment with his father and how the harshness of that time laid his toll on him. In “father and sons”, we witness the fall of tree in a stormy weather. Those days my father would collapse. Go down, stricken on all fours. We’d find him, massive shadows. On the floor, face down. In a cold atmosphere, we see a father crumble; we see desperation written on the face of a son. The above-mentioned quote is one that is easy to translate. In a way, the piece is self explanatory on its own. If Gibb could write more straightforward like that, I am sure the general reader without much sweat will see the harshness of his past and maybe experience at first hand the cruelties of that time period instead of simply being overwhelmed with new metaphors. PGR 239 In “Seeing Pittsburgh”, the reader gets a chance to see through the author’s eyes. It is at this point that I begin to hear what Robert Gibb was saying. Seeing Pittsburgh through Gibbs eyes, I feel the fear that grabbed him when his father was down. I can see the horrors he encountered daily in his life. I see the sweat and exhaustion pile up on his face as he traveled up the carban and back. I smell the air and I hate the scent—it is stale. I can clearly see the darkness “of 1938”. However, think of Einstein traveling at the speed of light, that is a remarkable sight and a long ways from the dark. Nevertheless, this is the light Gibb saw; this is what he was talking about—that nothing is impossible. He is motivated by the ironies of the dark to keep on moving, reaching for that light. Now I feel his need to transform, to change, to leave that old life behind, to live life after the dark. Having seen and felt Gibb’s world, back when he was a kid, I remain adamant on my view that “The Origins of Evening”—Robert Gibb’s book requires previous knowledge, maybe a brief history of Pittsburgh before the general reader can understand and see the meanings of his metaphors. I saw and I felt the darkness of Pittsburgh sometime ago, but not once throughout the whole book did I find myself in the author’s shoes. The vision was clear, the touch was rough, but I did not experience either. So, how come Robert Gibb was able to make me see and feel his life but failed to give that experience a reader yearns for? Well except for the poem— “Seeing Pittsburgh”—which gives a picture perfect image of a time period and a clue that he was talking about Pittsburgh, all the other poems talks about his childhood and the need for change and transformation. His extravagant use of metaphors is difficult to crack. Furthermore, his excessive use of broken lines makes it a pain for the general reader to follow and understand his writing. In a nutshell and as it is well put by Ernest Becker in his confrontation of Otto Rank’s works, Gibb “is very diffuse, very hard to read, so rich that he is almost inaccessible to the general reader”. From Graham McGrew’s let’s switch PGR 240 Emerging from “The Poet’s Cave of Syllables” David Sullivan You may have heard the analogy about our condition on earth being like chained men trapped in a cave who can only see the shadows of images being paraded behind them in front of a fire. This analogy can be found in Plato’s Republic. Plato’s parable of the cave describes a man, a clear stand in for the philosopher, who seeks to enlighten his companions by wrenching them free of their fetters, then marching past the illusioncreating fire and up through the tunnel to the sunlit surface. They promptly curse him, rubbing their sun-blinded eyes, until they slowly adjust to the new sights, which are all the more compelling because of their long tenure in the half-lit darkness of their uncomfortable “home”. Soon, however, they begin to praise their rescuer who has expanded their world view by introducing them to a world beyond anything they had known (Republic). It would be over-ambitious to claim that Graham McGrew performs a similar feat in his books of poetry b/w and let’s switch (both published by Emerick, Bell, Brown, which, with the falacious and funny back cover quotations suggests this is a desktop publication), yet there is something analogous to the magical transformation of our seeing that occurs as one reads these poems. If one willingly succumbs to their odd changes of direction, their mix of neologisms and slang, and the way their meditations on someone’s eyelashes can suddenly become specuations on nuclear destruction, then these poems’ undercurrent will pull you into deep oceanic valleys where unusual flora and fauna gambol in the wave. In the first poem of Graham McGrew’s quirky, thin black book, Let’s Switch, we encounter a speaker who is meditating on the fluids that flow-out of his own body. “Yes, it’s awful, sealed in the meat husk, curdled / Reeking of yesterday’s come” (1). The voice is at once lyric, with its “meat husk,” casual in its address, and discusses what most of us would shun to mention in public. Yet McGrew’s strange poem has a haunting resonance, because the writing touches on what few of us would say, and, like a man at a bar who has grown loquacious after his second highball, he speaks eloquently of what the mind usually meditates on only in private. After chronicling the excesses of the body that one exudes, the speaker switches tactics, and starts to imagine a body devoid of such unpleasant functions. How bouyant released from this carcass: bones extracted, organs dispersed, fat boiled away, into the stratosphere: mind, drifting, PGR 241 casts a rushing shadow, pale, faint, less than a cloud’s. (1) Suddenly all the dead weight of the opening lines, and their intentionally repellant language, falls away, and the poem, like the body, is lifted up. It rises on the thermal of the words; up past what we are stuck in, the sentinent world of weights. It is “up there silently pasing / through Plato’s justice, horse, and chair” (1). It is as if the speaker has become so euphoric that Plato’s idea of Forms is now made manifest, and he rises past that imagined realm where the ideal copies of things are made. But he reverses directions again at this point, because he imagines never smelling: “Never the lustral aroma of old pages” (1). It is the page itself, its tactile qualities, that, even as he writes, pull him back down. “Never / your eyes to drink the black ink. Not to tremble as the needle / traverses ‘Volver’s vast grooves” (1). At first the reader might think the name is some strange Italian songsmith, but then the nickname clicks: Revolver, the Beatles breakthrough album which exploded pop music and created a new art form. By reducing the title to ‘Volver we’re left to puzzle over the nature of myriad re-volutions. McGrew then makes the images even more material with the lines: The glow among the trees as the light leaves the Earth and never again to touch jennifer’s skin. (1) Such moments of clarity are not found often in McGrew’s torturous, language-rich poems, and the inattentive reader is apt to exclaim: “finally a clear thought and a real image!” but these dense packages do unravel with a little worrying. Like John Ashbery’s work they sometimes feel overfilagreed and impossible, but when then do fall into place the effect can be magical. Watch these images play off each other in a poem from the volume b/w: seal the shores between your fingers over the flashlight’s eyes glow the living orange of rust, the pink of veiled blood. (11) The simple image of childish delight at the way the hand is revealed, its veins accentuated, even as it veils the flashlight’s “eye” is marvelous to behold. Again and again these poems encounter, and attempt to render, the simplest of moments. And language itself is often a subject around which PGR 242 they pívot. Let me end with a small miracle of a poem, which resembles a John Donne meditation in the flow of images, and ends with a paeon to the power of poetry to appear to lift us into Plato’s realm of ideals. What holds up the vault of the sky? Is it the arches of the swallows’ flight? Is it the steam with rises from afterlimbs of lovers? Is it the once living, in their columns of ask? Is it the burnt chocolate bacon odor of outshorted amps, climbing in spirals from woodpanelled recrooms and cool cinderblock basements of veloursleeved teenage rockers, bouncing in Vans on shag, on cement? Or is the empty blue dome merely the reflection of the poet’s cave of syllables? (17) Works Cited Plato’s Republic. Translated by G. M. A Grube. Indiana: Hackett Pub. 1974. From Graham McGrew’s let’s switch PGR 243