Orangeburg Consolidated School District 5 7th Grade Common Assessment: Writing Name______________________________________Date________________ Read the passage below and answer the question that follows. 1. (1) Take two pieces of bread out of the bag and place them on a plate. (2) Open the jelly, and grab a knife. (3) Put the two pieces of bread together, and your sandwich is finished. (4) Spread it on one of the pieces of bread. (5) Open the peanut butter. (6) Now use the knife to spread the peanut butter on the other piece of bread. Where should sentence 3 be moved? A. after sentence 6 B. after sentence 1 C. before sentence 5 D. Correct as is. 2. Which sentence uses descriptive words the best? A. He lost his things on the bus, too. B. We skipped class so we could do stuff together, sometimes. C. I love to read nice long mystery books with colorful characters. D. The magazine was okay, I guess. 3. Which of the sentences below is written correctly? A. If I didn't have to come; to school every day, I would be an airplane fighter pilot, I don't have to go to school for that and it would be so cool? B. In english class we are reading Oliver Twist; the story about the little boy in an orphanage is so sad and he had to sweep chimenies, too. C. Do you remember that scene from Beauty and the Beast when Belle is in the library, I love that song she sings? D. I go to school all day, and then I come home and do my homework; after that, I go to my room and play video games until dinner's ready. 4. What would be the correct pronoun to fill in the blank in this sentence? The group finished ___ paper two weeks before the deadline. A. our B. their C. its D. his/her Read the passage below and then answer the question that follows? Volunteer work doesn’t have to be a drag. You can lend your time to things that you already enjoy doing. Like to read books? Your local library could probably use some help. Prefer to play card games? The local senior center is always looking for someone to spend time with the elderly. They like cards, too, and could probably teach you some games you’ve never played before. If you’re passionate about the environment, you could help by simply picking up litter you see on your street? You could have a positive effect on the kids in your neighborhood. When they see you volunteering. They will find ways to be of service to others, too. Don’t try to cross the street alone, though. 5. Which of these is a sentence fragment? A. "Don't try to cross the street alone, though." B. "Prefer to play card games?" C. "When they see you volunteering." D. "They will find ways to be of service to others, too." 6. Which sentence uses quotation marks correctly? A. My favorite line from Romeo and Juliet is when Romeo says, "Did my heart love till now? Forswear it, sight! For I ne'er saw true beauty till this night." B. I never thought I'd say this, but I really did miss you when you were away at camp, little bro, "Tom said as he ruffled Timmy's hair." "I missed you, too, big bro," Timmy replied. "I missed you too." C. "Miss Lewis, the loud speaker roared." "Jennifer Lewis, please report to the principal's office immediately!" D. "This is how the cheer goes, girls," Maria said as she began clapping her hands and stomping her feet. 'You jump up and say "Go team! Go!" ' 7. What part of speech is um? "The answer is . . . um . . . What is Austin, Texas?" the boy replied. A. adverb B. subject C. noun D. interjection Read the passage below and answer the question that follows. (1) Greg Evans’ comic strip Luann is about a 16-year-old girl named Luann and all the challenges she faces growing up. (2) It also features her mom, dad, and older brother. (3) Luann’s best friends are Bernice and Delta. (4)Tiffany is her arch enemy, a girl who is just as dumb as she is beautiful. (5) Gunther is a nerdy boy who has the biggest crush on Luann. (6) She only has eyes for the most popular boy in school—Aaron Hill. (7) One of Luann’s best friends, Delta, has a kind of cancer called Hodgkin’s Lymphoma. (8) Another topic discussed in the strip was the sometimes deadly consequences of underage drinking. (9) Luann and her friends start a school chapter of Students Against Drunk Driving (SADD) as a result. (10) In the more than 20 years since it was first published, Luann has picked up a loyal following of readers in more than 300 newspapers nationwide. 8. Where should the following sentence be inserted? In one of the strip's milestone moments, Aaron moves to Hawaii with his family and Luann has to say goodbye. A. after sentence 6 B. before sentence 5 C. before sentence 9 D. after sentence 10 9. Which sentence below contains a coordinating conjunction? A. "In most cases, the last time you see someone, you do not know it will be the last time," he said. B. I wish you sweet dreams from now until we meet again in the other countries we plan to visit. C. The fortune cookie said, "A dream you have will come true," but Sara didn't believe in fortunes. D. The bright sun blinded her as she rolled her huge suitcase through the almost empty parking lot. 10. Which sentence is punctuated correctly? A. "We drove more than 100 miles to be here," she said? B. Why do you think that happened tonight of all nights? C. When do you want to go to dinner, tonight. D. Do you think we should go back to the hotel! 11. Which underlined word in this sentence is spelled incorrectly? I ocasionally enjoy a trip to the local art museum with my principal and other people from school. A. principal B. ocasionally C. people D. museum Read the passage below and answer the question that follows. Volunteer work doesn’t have to be a drag. You can lend your time to things that you already enjoy doing. Like to read books? Your local library could probably use some help. Prefer to play card games? The local senior center is always looking for someone to spend time with the elderly. They like cards, too, and could probably teach you some games you’ve never played before. If you’re passionate about the environment, you could help by simply picking up litter you see on your street? You could have a positive effect on the kids in your neighborhood. When they see you volunteering. They will find ways to be of service to others, too. Don’t try to cross the street alone, though. 12. Read this sentence from the passage. "If you're passionate about the environment, you could help by simply picking up litter you see on your street?" What is wrong with the punctuation in this sentence? A. The sentence is correct as is. B. The sentence should end with period instead of a question mark. C. The sentence should have a comma after the words "picking up." D. The sentence needs quotation marks around "If you're passionate." 13. Choose the correct verb tense for the sentence below. After waiting an hour for her mom, Lauren ____ home from school and had a snack. A. walked B. will walk C. has walks D. walking 14. Which sentence below demonstrates correct subject-verb agreement? A. Needless to say, I hasn't been able to walk through a crowd of birds peacefully since then. B. Ever since I saw Alfred Hitchcock's movie The Birds, I have been uneasy around birds. C. In the film, a huge flock of birds descend upon this small town and begin attacking people. D. The main reason I hate going downtown is because there is so many pigeons everywhere. 15. Choose the best adverb to complete the sentence. The car moved so _____ on the highway that all the others were forced to go around it. A. careless B. happily C. slowly D. slow Read the passage below and answer the question that follows. (1) Greg Evans’ comic strip Luann is about a 16-year-old girl named Luann and all the challenges she faces growing up. (2) It also features her mom, dad, and older brother. (3) Luann’s best friends are Bernice and Delta. (4)Tiffany is her arch enemy, a girl who is just as dumb as she is beautiful. (5) Gunther is a nerdy boy who has the biggest crush on Luann. (6) She only has eyes for the most popular boy in school—Aaron Hill. (7) One of Luann’s best friends, Delta, has a kind of cancer called Hodgkin’s Lymphoma. (8) Another topic discussed in the strip was the sometimes deadly consequences of underage drinking. (9) Luann and her friends start a school chapter of Students Against Drunk Driving (SADD) as a result. (10) In the more than 20 years since it was first published, Luann has picked up a loyal following of readers in more than 300 newspapers nationwide. 16. What, if anything, is wrong with the capitalization in sentence 9? A. "chapter" should be capitalized B. It is correct as is. C. "against" should not be capitalized D. "students" should not be capitalized 17. Which of the following sentences is capitalized incorrectly? A. I keep the book Legends: women who have changed The World on my desk for inspiration. B. After we finished shopping at MacArthur Center, we went for a cruise on the Spirit of Norfolk. C. When you go to New York, make sure you visit the Metropolitan Museum of Art. D. Kim loves Winnie the Pooh; he's her favorite Disney character in the whole wide world. 18. Which of the sentences below is written correctly? A. After Tony got caught cheating on the test, he was sent to the principal's office, and his mom came to get him from school. B. After Tony got caught cheating on the test he was sent to the Principals' Office, and his mom came to get him from School. C. After Tony got catched cheating on the test he got sent to the Principles' office and his mom came to got him from School. D. After Tony got caught cheating on the test, he got sent to the principles' office, and his mom came to got him from school. 19. Which sentence is capitalized correctly? A. I'm jealous because my Brother and Sister are going on vacation to hawaii without us this year. B. When Mom and Dad came to visit me at school, they gave me money for lunch. C. My Housekeeper is tired of washing all of the clothes my Dad messes up while he's at work. D. Make sure you take these Permission Forms home to your mom and dad, boys and girls. 20. What is the best way to combine two sentences from the passage? A. Another topic discussed in the strip was the sometimes deadly consequences of underage drinking, however, Luann and her friends start a school chapter of Students Against Drunk Driving (SADD) as a result. B. One of Luann's best friends, Delta, has a kind of cancer called Hodgkins Lymphoma and another topic discussed was the consequences of underage drinking. C. It also features her mom, dad, and older brother, her best friends are Bernice and Delta. D. Gunther is a nerdy boy who has the biggest crush on Luann, but she only has eyes for the most popular boy in school—Aaron Hill. Read the passage below and answer the question that follows. Volunteer work doesn’t have to be a drag. You can lend your time to things that you already enjoy doing. Like to read books? Your local library could probably use some help. Prefer to play card games? The local senior center is always looking for someone to spend time with the elderly. They like cards, too, and could probably teach you some games you’ve never played before. If you’re passionate about the environment, you could help by simply picking up litter you see on your street? You could have a positive effect on the kids in your neighborhood. When they see you volunteering. They will find ways to be of service to others, too. Don’t try to cross the street alone, though. 21. Which of these is the best way to combine sentences from the passage? A. Your local library could probably use some help; prefer to play card games? B. Like to read books, your local library could probably use some help. C. Volunteer work doesn't have to be a drag; but, you can lend your time to things that you already enjoy doing. D. You could have a positive effect on the kids in your neighborhood when they see you volunteering. 22. Choose the correct verb for the sentence below. Neither Candace nor Tammy _____. A. drives B. swim C. walk D. bike 23. Which one of these sentences uses commas correctly? A. To make the pasta, you will need, boiling water, and a pinch of salt. B. Don't forget to bring your medicine, and your two favorite pillows. C. Stella's favorite line from the movie is "Here's looking, at you kid." D. Her favorite colors are pink, red, blue, and various shades of yellow. 24. What is the correct spelling of the underlined word? Spell check indicates which words you have mispelled by underlining them in red. A. misspelleed B. misspeled C. It is correct as is. D. misspelled 25. What kind of sentence is this? When Roxie was lost, Ally was sad and couldn't sleep a wink. A. compound/complex B. simple sentence C. complex D. compound 7th Grade Writing Common Assessment Answer Key Item # 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 Answer A C D C C A D A C B B B A B C B A A B D D A D D C Indicator 4.5 4.5 4.6 4.4 4.2 4.6 4.6 4.5 4.4 4.6 4.7 4.6 4.4 4.4 4.4 4.6 4.6 4.2 4.6 4.5 4.5 4.4 4.6 4.7 4.2