Name_________________ Media I November 15, 2013 Mr. Bastos Period _______ Yearbook Project This year, you will be constructing a layout for a hypothetical yearbook spread. The two-page spread will be autobiographical, covering your school career. The pages will all focus on one subject – AND two events within that subject. The photos may be re-creations, but should take place WITHIN THE REAL ENVIRONMENT. You will ~ Complete yearbook layout on internet - Attach photos into layout design in appropriate spot - Write captions for photos – o one PRESENT TENSE sentence describing action in photo ACTIVE VOICE o one PAST TENSE sentence extending information. ACTIVE VOICE o EVERY CAPTION WRITING MUST BE UNIQUE! Don’t start all with name - Attach name of photographer below all photos. - 3-4 word headline in present tense. RELATES to pictures. ~ Complete ‘senior’ ad - Your full name - Inspirational quote OR a message from your family - 3 photos from your youth - Use drop shadow or stroke to make photos “pop” - READABLE font - Change background color to one of your choice ~ Cover design - Theme title - Appropriate graphics/photos/clip art/colors/font - Yearbook name – EMBER - 2015 - Peters Township High School - Volume 72 Name_________________ Media I November 15, 2013 Mr. Bastos Period _______ ADD THIRD PERSON to Captions LEFT PAGE LEFT PAGE LEFT PAGE CATEGORY Photo 1 4 - OUTSTANDING 1-3 members’ faces 3 – MEET STAND 1-3 identifiable people 2–BELOW STD More than 3 1 – FAR BELOW STD Backs of heads, things 0 – No attempt, etc. No picture Photo 2 1-3 members’ faces 1-3 identifiable people More than 3 Backs of heads, things No picture Photo 3 1-3 members’ faces 1-3 identifiable people More than 3 Backs of heads, things No picture Photo 4 1-3 members’ faces 1-3 identifiable people More than 3 Backs of heads, things No picture Lead 1 quality Adds to story 1 mistake Repeats info in captions, copy Repeats info in captions, copy 2 mistakes Repeats OR “It was good/fun” “I Liked it” Repeats OR “It was good/fun” “I Liked it” 3 mistakes No lead LEAD 1 - PAST TENSE Adds to story with depth Adds to story with depth All in tense LEAD 1 - ACTIVE VOICE LEAD 2 - PAST TENSE ALL active All in tense One linking verb 1 mistake Two linking verbs 2 mistakes Three linking verbs 3 mistakes More linking verbs 4 or more mistakes LEAD 2 - ACTIVE VOICE Headline ALL active 3-4 words in present tense, teases story Explains what is happening in photo Correctly spells all names, bolded All present tense, ACTIVE VOICE, 3rd pers. Past tense, adds info not seen, ACTIVE VOICE Explains what is happening in photo Correctly spells all names, bolded All present tense, ACTIVE VOICE, 3rd pers. Past tense, adds info not seen, ACTIVE VOICE Explains what is happening in photo Correctly spells all names, bolded All present tense, ACTIVE VOICE, 3rd pers. Past tense, adds info not seen, ACTIVE VOICE Explains what is happening in photo Correctly spells all names, bolded All present tense, ACTIVE VOICE, 3rd pers. Past tense, adds info not seen, ACTIVE VOICE One linking verb 2 words or 6-8 words Two linking verbs Headline too mysterious. No connection to story Tells what we can visually see in picture 2-3 errors Three linking verbs Way too long, past tense More linking verbs No headline Lead 2 quality Caption 1 detail Caption 1 names Caption 1 first sentence in PRESENT tense Caption 1 second sentence Caption 2 detail Caption 2 names Caption 2 first sentence in PRESENT tense Caption 2 second sentence Caption 3 detail Caption 3 names Caption 3 first sentence in PRESENT tense Caption 3 second sentence Caption 4 detail Caption 4 names Caption 4 first sentence in PRESENT tense Caption 4 second sentence Adds to story 1 error 1 error Uses present tense or PASSIVE VOICE Tells what we can visually see in picture 2-3 errors Confusing OR doesn’t add info. 1 error Uses present tense or PASSIVE VOICE Tells what we can visually see in picture 2-3 errors Confusing OR doesn’t add info. 1 error Uses present tense or PASSIVE VOICE Tells what we can visually see in picture 2-3 errors Confusing OR doesn’t add info. Uses present tense or PASSIVE VOICE No names, or incorrect names Past tense Uses “I” No second sentence Does not explain picture PASSIVE VOICE Does not add to picture, repeats visual No names, or incorrect names Past tense Uses “I” No second sentence Does not explain picture PASSIVE VOICE Does not add to picture, repeats visual No names, or incorrect names Past tense Uses “I” No second sentence Does not explain picture PASSIVE VOICE Does not add to picture, repeats visual 4 or more mistakes Does not explain picture PASSIVE VOICE Does not add to picture, repeats visual No lead Confusing OR doesn’t add info. No names, or incorrect names Past tense Uses “I” No second sentence RIGHT PAGE RIGHT PAGE RIGHT PAGE CATEGORY Photo 1 4 - OUTSTANDING 1-3 members’ faces 3 – MEET STAND 1-3 identifiable people 2–BELOW STD More than 3 1 – FAR BELOW STD Backs of heads, things 0 – No attempt, etc. No picture Photo 2 1-3 members’ faces 1-3 identifiable people More than 3 Backs of heads, things No picture Photo 3 1-3 members’ faces 1-3 identifiable people More than 3 Backs of heads, things No picture Photo 4 1-3 members’ faces 1-3 identifiable people More than 3 Backs of heads, things No picture Photo 5 1-3 members’ faces 1-3 identifiable people More than 3 Backs of heads, things No picture Photo 6 1-3 members’ faces 1-3 identifiable people More than 3 Backs of heads, things No picture Caption 1 detail Explains what is happening in photo Correctly spells all names, bolded All present tense, ACTIVE VOICE, 3rd pers. Past tense, adds info not seen, ACTIVE VOICE Explains what is happening in photo Correctly spells all names, bolded All present tense, ACTIVE VOICE, 3rd pers. Past tense, adds info not seen, ACTIVE VOICE Explains what is happening in photo Correctly spells all names, bolded All present tense, ACTIVE VOICE, 3rd pers. Past tense, adds info not seen, ACTIVE VOICE Explains what is happening in photo Correctly spells all names, bolded All present tense, ACTIVE VOICE, 3rd pers. Past tense, adds info not seen, ACTIVE VOICE Explains what is happening in photo Correctly spells all names, bolded All present tense, ACTIVE VOICE, 3rd pers. Past tense, adds info not seen, ACTIVE VOICE Explains what is happening in photo Correctly spells all names, bolded All present tense, ACTIVE VOICE, 3rd pers. Past tense, adds info not seen, ACTIVE VOICE 1 error Tells what we can visually see in picture 2-3 errors Caption 1 names Caption 1 first sentence in PRESENT tense Caption 1 second sentence Caption 2 detail Caption 2 names Caption 2 first sentence in PRESENT tense Caption 2 second sentence Caption 3 detail Caption 3 names Caption 3 first sentence in PRESENT tense Caption 3 second sentence Caption 4 detail Caption 4 names Caption 4 first sentence in PRESENT tense Caption 4 second sentence Caption 5 detail Caption 5 names Caption 5 first sentence in PRESENT tense Caption 5 second sentence Caption 6 detail Caption 6 names Caption 6 first sentence in PRESENT tense Caption 6 second sentence Does not explain picture PASSIVE VOICE Does not add to picture, repeats visual 1 error Uses present tense or PASSIVE VOICE Tells what we can visually see in picture 2-3 errors Confusing OR doesn’t add info. Does not explain picture PASSIVE VOICE Does not add to picture, repeats visual 1 error Uses present tense or PASSIVE VOICE Tells what we can visually see in picture 2-3 errors Confusing OR doesn’t add info. 1 error Uses present tense or PASSIVE VOICE Tells what we can visually see in picture 2-3 errors Confusing OR doesn’t add info. 1 error Uses present tense or PASSIVE VOICE Tells what we can visually see in picture 2-3 errors Confusing OR doesn’t add info. 1 error Uses present tense or PASSIVE VOICE Tells what we can visually see in picture 2-3 errors Confusing OR doesn’t add info. Uses present tense or PASSIVE VOICE No names, or incorrect names Past tense Uses “I” No second sentence Does not explain picture PASSIVE VOICE Does not add to picture, repeats visual No names, or incorrect names Past tense Uses “I” No second sentence Does not explain picture PASSIVE VOICE Does not add to picture, repeats visual No names, or incorrect names Past tense Uses “I” No second sentence Does not explain picture PASSIVE VOICE Does not add to picture, repeats visual No names, or incorrect names Past tense Uses “I” No second sentence Does not explain picture PASSIVE VOICE Does not add to picture, repeats visual No names, or incorrect names Past tense Uses “I” No second sentence Confusing OR doesn’t add info. No names, or incorrect names Past tense Uses “I” No second sentence COVER COVER COVER COVER COVER COVER COVER CATEGORY 4 - OUTSTANDING 3 – MEET STAND 2–BELOW STD 1 – FAR BELOW STD 0 – No attempt, etc. Theme Title Yearbook Name Year Volume School Name Listed Ember 2014 72 Peters Township High School Theme Colors Theme Visualization SENIOR AD Name Creative, excellent visualization SENIOR AD Your full name First picture Second picture Third picture Quote/writing Photo design Background Identifiable photo Identifiable photo Identifiable photo Inspirational Drop Shadow used Color used Not on cover Not present Not present Not present Not listed 2013 Other volume PTHS Dull visualization SENIOR AD Not full name Quote TOTAL ___________/284 TOTAL x.7 = ___________/200 SENIOR AD First name or last name Back of head, thing Back of head, thing Back of head, thing Short statement SENIOR AD Abbreviated name Sarcastic Mono-chromatic Name of theme only SENIOR AD No name No photo No photo No photo No quote No design White