Unit4 Growing up Task The person who has influenced me most! Longpao secondary shool Chen Daojin who has influenced you most？ （对你影响最大） influence（影响） influence me most？ Luckily （幸运的是） Growing up（成长） （对我影响最大） hard（艰难的） words and actions face many problems aroundparents（father、mother） us（我们身边） （面对很多问题） （言行） relatives（亲戚） teachers friends neighbours（邻居） 父爱如山 • Father’s love is like a mountain Thank you ，Father I love you! • Learning aims 描 述 • 1） To learn to describe the person who has influenced you most. • 2）To learn to be grateful to others and care for others. 关 爱 感 恩 • Importance and difficulty • 1) To learn to write about the person who has influenced you most. The person who has influenced me most A Mr Wu is asking each of the Class 1, Grade 9 students to write about the person who has influenced him or her most. He shows them an article. （books open，P60） Listen carefully & Answer questions 1. Who has influenced the writer most? 2.How old is her father? 3.What is her father like and what does the writer think of him? Listen carefully & Answer questions 1. Who has influenced the writer most? Her father. 2.How old is her father? He is in his fifties. in one’s twenties/ thirties/ forties/… 3.What is her father like and what does the writer think of him? He is kind and helpful and has a heart full of love . B Read the article and complete the blanks. most The person who has influenced me ______ my father Para1 working A_______factory Introduction local fifties In his_________ age place something unusual about him 1.He is ready to help anyone. Main body 2.He gave our TV to a family who could not___________one. afford Personality 3.He ________ cares for the children who have lost their parents. Para2-34.Whenever he has some _________ money left, he gives it to someone kind and ________ helpful in need. blood 5.He has donated ___________ many times since 1990. cancer 6.He has donated blood cells to people with blood___________. 7.To my surprise,he has decided to donate his _______ body for 血癌 medical research血细胞 after his death. Para4 Conclusion My opinions He always seems to be _______to kinder others than to his own family love He has a heart full of ________. Pre-writing: Useful expressions ...is the person who has influenced me most ...is in his ...(twenties/thirties/forties) You will not find anything unusual（了不起的事情） about him until... ...has always been kind/helpful , ...... To my surprise,... When I was a little girl/boy, I could not understand...Now I realize that… 假如你是Sandy, 你学校正在举行写作比赛，主题是 “The person who has influenced me most", 字数 100个字左右。内容如下： 四十多岁， 在当地医院工作 工作细心 对待病人有耐心 My uncle 以前我没发现他有什么 不同寻常的（了不起） 地方，现在我意识到... 乐于助人 关爱一些失独老人 使我惊讶的是， 他已经决定... Structure My Uncle Introduction Para1 Main body Para2-3 Conclusion Para4 age,job Personalities Examples My ideas 假如你是Sandy, 你学校正在举行写作比赛，主题是 “The person who has influenced me most", 字数 100个字左右。内容如下： 四十多岁， 在当地医院工作 工作细心 对待病人有耐心 My uncle 以前我没发现他有什么 不同寻常的（了不起） 地方，现在我意识到... 乐于助人 关爱一些失独老人 使我惊讶的是， 他已经决定... Criteria 评 分 标 准 满分 内容、信息全面、完成任务 5分 语言（句子结构、语法、用词） 5分 行文连贯、逻辑 3分 （字数、大小写、标点等） 2分 总分 15分 得分 Post-writing: Sample The person who has influenced me most is my uncle.He is in his forties.He has worked in this hospital for years. As a doctor, he is both kind and patient with patients.he is so careful that he has never made any mistakes. He says:"As a doctor,We can't be too careful."Moreover,he cares for the old who have lost their only children.To my surprise, my uncle has decided to donate not only all his money but also his body after his death. I didn't find anything unusual about him before.Now I realize that he is a man who has a heart full of love. Homework: 1. Remember some useful expressions. 2. Write about the person who has influenced you. Thank you for listening!