WRITING A THEMATIC STATEMENT ABOUT A TEXT When figuring out a text’s theme, we want to ask ourselves: What does this work say about being alive? What’s the big, idea that runs through the text? What is the writer observing about how we behave? Even though this story is about a girl and a giraffe living on a submarine, what idea is the author exploring that can apply to almost all of us? We start by considering the life subjects or abstract ideas or behaviors we find in the text. Here’s a list we can use. (Although you may—and will--find a subject in a text not listed here.) Alienation Anger Fantasy vs. Reality Betrayal Loss of Innocence Courage Dreams Education Escape Evil Fear Forgiveness Freedom Grief Honor Honesty Identify Justice Love Loyalty Nature Perseverance Power Prejudice Pride Rebellion from authority Relationships Revenge Faith/Religion Revenge Ritual Social status Success Temptation Time Violence Wealth Loneliness Hatred Beauty (inner/outer) Cowardice Learning Free Will Insecurity Individuality (and loss of) Despair Heroism Deception Equality Obsession Duty Facing hardship Corruption Stereotypes Hubris Conformity Family Friendship Tradition Failure Sin War Judgment of others Acceptance of reality/truth Knowledge Sacrifice Oppression Progress Self-Awareness Doubt Youth Will to survive ADDITIONAL IDEAS Here’s one possible structure for writing a thematic statement. (If we are faced with the prompt: What’s the central theme of _______? we are being asked to write a thematic statement for that text.) 1) Chose a Thematic Idea Example Text: “Bullhead” by Leigh Allison Wilson Thematic Idea: memories 2) Now….I want to make an assertion—a claim or argument—about what the text specifically has to say about the thematic idea I’ve chosen. In this story, how does the mother handle her memories about the boy she loved? How do the mother’s memories affect the narrator? Example In the short story “Bullhead,” Leigh Allison Wilson presents the idea that clinging to a memory from our past can prevent us from appreciating our present life (assertion about what the text specifically has to say about the thematic idea—in this case, memories) 3) Now I want to get a little fancier and add a qualifying clause. This gives me the chance to be more specific about how this particular text addresses the thematic idea. Some words that can help set up a qualifying clause are the following: (not your choices, but a start) When So Until Because So that Since Unless Whether Which Even If Although Example In the short story “Bullhead,” Leigh Allison Wilson presents the idea that clinging to a memory from our past can prevent us from appreciating our present life , EVEN causing us to hurt others we care about by making them feel undervalued. (qualifying clause) Text: “Us and Them In “Us and Them,” (title of text) Thematic Idea: ______________________________________ David Sedaris (author’s name) presents the idea that _____________________________ ________________________________________________________ (thematic idea) (your assertion about what the text has to say about the thematic idea) (qualifying statement—where you further explain or explore your assertion and/or show more specifically how this specific text addresses your thematic idea)