Survival Anticipation Guide Directions: For each statement, write A on the line if you agree with it or D if you disagree. 1. Skill and experience make you more able to survive danger. _____ 2. To survive, you sometimes have to give up something precious to you. _____ 3. Having a positive attitude can help you survive an extreme situation. _____ 4. Survival skills are for emergencies and are not useful in everyday life. _____ 5. Your fear of a situation can help you survive it. _____ 6. Thinking about loved ones can help you survive a dangerous situation. _____ 7. Bullies can be handled only with physical force. _____ 8. It is better to stay put and wait to be rescued than to look for help. _____ 9. I could survive on my own for a year in the wilderness. _____ 10. I couldn’t survive a weekend without my cell phone or Ipod. _____ 11. Physical strength is more important than mental strength to survive a difficult situation. _____ 12. If stranded away from civilization, I would rather be with a close friend than alone. _____ 13. I believe that struggles in life just make us stronger people. _____ 14. Bad situations can be avoided in life. ______ Survival Discussion Questions What is a survivor? What does the word survival mean to you? Make a list of words that describe survivors. What types of challenges do people face that require survival skills? Is there a lasting effect of being a survivor? Talk about different ways of surviving (life threatening, things that get in the way of life success, physical survival versus emotional survival, personal survival versus survival of species, cultures, etc.) Is it ever okay to give up? When is it acceptable to quit trying at something? Do you think it takes courage to give up? SURVIVAL, DECISIONS, AND CONSEQUENCES VOCABULARY LIST Fiction – genre of literature, writing that tells an imaginary story Nonfiction – genre of literature, writing that tells about real people, places, and events Summary –in fiction, a description of the story that includes information about the main characters and main events. It is not a review and should not contain the opinions of the author. In nonfiction, an organized explanation of the main idea and details to support it. Theme - a central message or lesson in a story Conflict – struggle between opposing characters Character - a person or an animal that takes part in the action of a story Narrator – tells the story Adversity-- unnecessary and unforeseen trouble resulting from an unfortunate event Perseverance - persistent determination Determination - the act of making up your mind about something Tenacity – persistent; stubborn Willpower – the trait of firmly controlling your own behavior Motivation - the reason for the action; that which gives purpose and direction to behavior Intuition – instinctively knowing something without proof of it Consequence—the result of an action Survival Word Sort Activity Name: ____________________________________Section _________ Date: ___________ Read and separate each activity card. Identify and label categories. Sort the terms into your categories. summary theme adversity narrator character consequence perseverance determination tenacity willpower nonfiction conflict consequence motivation intuition Close Reading of “Hating Hansen” TEACHER DIRECTIONS: 1. Introduce the short story and students read independently. Other than giving the brief definitions offered to words students would likely not be able to define from context (underlined in the text), avoid giving any background context or instructional guidance at the outset of the lesson while students are reading the text silently. This close reading approach forces students to rely exclusively on the text instead of privileging background knowledge and levels the playing field for all students as they seek to comprehend Taylor’s prose. It is critical to cultivating independence and creating a culture of close reading that students initially grapple with rich texts without the aid of prefatory material, extensive notes, or even teacher explanations. 2. Read the story aloud to the class as students follow along in the text. Asking students to listen to the story “Hating Hansen” exposes them a second time to the rhythms and meaning of Taylor’s language before they begin their own close reading of the passage. Speaking clearly and carefully will allow students to follow Bates’s narrative, and reading out loud with students following along improves fluency while offering all students access to this complex text. Accurate and skillful modeling of the reading provides students who may be dysfluent with accurate pronunciations and syntactic patterns of English. 3. Ask the class to answer a small set of text-dependent guided questions and perform targeted tasks about the excerpt, with answers in the form of notes, annotations to the text, or more formal responses as appropriate. As students move through these questions and reread “Hating Hansen”, be sure to check for and reinforce their understanding of academic vocabulary in the corresponding text. At times, the questions themselves may focus on academic vocabulary. Most of the meanings of words in the exemplar text can be discovered by students from careful reading of the context in which they appear. Teachers can use discussions to model and reinforce how to learn vocabulary from contextual clues, and students must be held accountable for engaging in this practice. Where it is judged this is not possible, underlined words are defined briefly for students to the right of the text in a separate column whenever the original text is reproduced. At times, this is all the support these defined words need. Name: ____________________________ Date: ------------ CLOSE READ of “Hating Hansen” by Theodore Taylor Text Under Discussion The last he saw was Hansen’s face, blue eyes staring. Then he felt his body arc into the air, and the space beneath him opened. It was that quick. Then the water and the cruel barnacles; the rolling, buffeting waves; the cutting spray. Floating, he again thought that no one should have to die this way. But for the Hansens of the world, no one would have to die this way. Die, hell! This was murder! His own deep hatred of Hansen boiled up in his mouth and he vomited. Maybe the hatred of Hansen could keep him alive. The wind began to lower at first light and he floated wearily, his body chilling steadily. He made no effort to go anywhere. Why try? He’d just go to sleep and never wake up. He wondered if the Mackinaw had stopped again and broached. Maybe they were all in the lifeboats. In a way that was comforting, because he liked most of the men on the Mack. Before long he slipped off, submitting to weakness and a deep desire to sleep. Time passed, and he bobbed on the waves as the sunless gray light widened. A sound awakened him, a splat-splat-splat like the blade of a prop on a ship riding high without cargo. He kicked his feet to bring his head higher and saw a black shape, downward, with the familiar red running light; lights from portholes shone from beneath the bridge. Frantically, he sought the button on the life jacket’s small light. The white eye turned on. He Vocabulary Guiding Questions Q1: Where is Bates? Pounding or hitting repeatedly Q2: Describe Bates’s state of mind at this moment. Q3: How has Bates’s state of mind changed at this point, and why? Rose through the water and broke the surface Q4: “Time passed, and he bobbed on the waves as the sunless gray light widened.” What does this sentence mean? Q5: “He kicked his feet to bring his head higher and saw a black shape, downward, with the familiar red running light; lights from portholes shone beneath the bridge.” What did Bates see? Q6: Why does Bates describe the button as a “white eye?” remembered Hansen telling the apprentices how to do that and blow the overboard whistle. He yelled feebly, his breath coming in heaves as he tried to scull toward the shape. Soon a stream of light struck his face and stayed there, blinding him. He lay back in the long swell, exhausted. Finally he felt strong hands pull him into a boat. Then blows were striking his face, slaps; but he felt no pain. His body was a rag doll and he felt it being lifted up. He passed out. Sometime later, he awakened with a form hovering over him. Something liquid burned down his throat and he coughed it up. “You’re a lucky boy,” a voice said. Bates made no effort to answer. “What ship you off of?” the voice persisted. “Mackinaw, American.” “You’re aboard the Dillery. We’re British. You can only thank God …” Was this a dream? He slipped off into unconsciousness again and did not awaken for almost seven hours. Under several blankets, he was in crew’s quarters. A pair of pants and a shirt were on the end of his bunk. He dressed and painfully made his way topside, where he asked the Dillery’s chief mate, “Do you know what happened to the Mackinaw? Did she sink?” “Rest easy, son. She’s all right. Into Portsmouth several hours ago. We radioed her, told her we’d pick you up.” “Thank you,” Bates murmured. “Where is this ship going?” “Into Portsmouth, too.” Every muscle and joint ached, but he wanted to see the expression on Hansen’s face when he reboarded the Mackinaw. He wanted to hear A person(s) learning a trade Propel a boat using oars (in this case propel self using hands as oars) Q7: What does “feebly” mean? A slow, regular movement of the sea in rolling waves that do not break Q8: Why did the author use the words, “His body was a rag doll?” Q9: Give evidence to support the statement, “You’re a lucky boy.” what the rotten, murdering boatswain would say. He wanted to grind his fist into Hansen’s pockmarked face. The Dillery finally snugged alongside dock hours later, and Bates, refreshed from another long sleep, walked off her in a borrowed oversized wool sweater and a new pair of khaki pants. Through the forest of cargo booms and kingposts, he could see the squatty gray-white stack of the Mackinaw. He made his way to the ship and slowly, almost mechanically, climbed the gangway, sweeping the deck for the sight of Hansen. Instead, he saw Second Mate McCall over by Number 4 hatch, where cargo was being lifted out of the hold. He walked over to McCall, who extended his hand and said, “Thought we’d lost you …” Bates nodded. “That’s what I thought, too. Where’s Hansen?” He was usually on deck when cargo was being worked. McCall hesitated a moment, examining Bates’s face. “He drowned. He dived after you and tried to rescue you.” “Are you kidding me?” “I wish I was. Good man, Hansen.” Bates felt his knees buckling and sat down on a bitt. A ship’s officer in charge of equipment and the crew Q10: What is Bates’s motivation to find Hansen? Q11: What is likely going through Bates’s mind after hearing the news about Hansen? Q12: What is ironic about the statement “Good man, Hansen?” posts fixed in pairs on the deck of a ship, for fastening cables Q13: Why do you think the author selected “Hating Hansen” as the title for this short story? Writing Task: Pretend that Hansen did not die. Write a dialogue of a conversation that Bates and Hansen could have had when Bates was returned to the boat. Character Inference Chart Character Name: ______________________________________ Methods of Revealing Character Evidence/Quotations from the Story Character Traits Revealed Direct Comment Character’s Thoughts and Feelings Character’s Speech and Actions How Others React to Character Based upon your responses reported in the inference chart, write 1-2 sentences telling what type of person you think this character is. Name: ______________________ “Snapshot” of Literature Circle Roles Summarizer Questioner Character Captain Connector Passage Master Literature Circle Group Rules Rule/Term Respect Definition Show courtesy, consideration, and respect at all times Participation Everyone shares; everyone “actively” listens Time Use the time wisely; re-focus when needed Preparation Accomplish your goal and task; hold each other accountable for completed work Problem Solving Behavior Ask your group for guidance before you ask the teacher Stay in your assigned group; stay on task; don’t distract other students Looks/ Sounds Like Literature Circles Planning Sheet Name: ____________________________ Novel: ______________________________ Directions: For each lit. circle, fill in the names of members assigned to each role. Circle #1 Date: Circle #2 Date: Summarizer __________________ Character Captain______________ Questioner _________________ Passage Master_________________ Connector _____________________ Summarizer ______________________ Character Captain ________________ Questioner ________________________ Passage Master ____________________ Connector ________________________ Circle #3 Circle #4 Date: Summarizer ___________________ Character Captain ______________ Questioner __________________ Passage Master__________________ Connector ______________________ Circle #5 Date: Summarizer ____________________ Character Captain________________ Questioner ___________________ Passage Master ___________________ Connector _______________________ Date: Summarizer _________________________ Character Captain ____________________ Questioner __________________________ Passage Master ______________________ Connector ____________________________ Questioner-Literature Circles Name:_________________________________ Book: _____________________________ Date: _________________________________ Assignment:________________________ Questioner/Discussion Director: Your job is to develop a list of questions that your group might want to discuss about this part of the book. Don’t worry about the small details; your task is to help people talk over the big ideas in the reading and share their reactions. Usually the best discussion questions come from your own thoughts, feelings, and concerns as you read. You can list them below during or after your reading. You may also use some of the general question prompts below to develop questions for your group. Possible discussion questions or topics for today: 1. ______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 2. ______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 3. ______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 4. ______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ 5. ______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ What if…? How did….? Why did…? What would happen if…? What caused…? What might…? How would you feel if…? What character traits describe…? Why do you think…? Why is… Summarizer-Literature Circles Name: _________________________ Book: ______________________________ Date: __________________ Pages: ______________________________ Your job is to prepare a summary of the reading. Start with a headline. Don’t tell the whole story, just focus on the important parts and significant details. The other members of your group will be counting on you to remind them about this part of the story. Headline: _________________________________________________________________ Summary: ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ Connector—Literature Circles Name: _________________________ Book: ______________________________ Date: __________________ Assignment: _______________________________ Connector: Your job is to find connections between the book you are reading and the outside world. This means connecting what you read with your own life, to what happens at school or in the community, to similar events at other times and places, or to other people or problems. Describe the part in the book, and then explain your connection. ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________ PASSAGE MASTER NAME: ___________________________ Pages____________ As you read, think about parts of the text that are important, make you laugh, give you a good mental picture, or would trigger a good discussion. Fill out the chart below and bring this sheet with you to your next meeting. You may use the back for additional space if needed. HOW I PLAN TO CHAPTER AND/OR PARAGRAPH REASON I CHOSE THIS SHARE THIS PAGE NUMBERS BEGINNING PASSAGE PASSAGE WITH WITH… MY GROUP Read aloud Important to the story Chapter: ______ “When you because… Read with change to a partner Good descriptive Pages: ______ new…” writing when… Read to self To discuss… Made me laugh when… Literature Circles – Character Captain Name:______________________________________Date:_________________ Book: ___________________________________________________ Character Captain: Your task is to identify specific personality traits of the main character(s) within the novel. Find examples in the assigned reading of behaviors/actions that help group members know this character(s). Select three adjectives that describe the main character, and support your selection with evidence taken from your reading assignment. * Evidence could be: quotes from the book, a short passage, or a one- or two-sentence summary of a passage. Bonus: Identify a specific personality trait of a secondary character. Select an adjective that describes this secondary character and support your selection with evidence taken from your reading assignment. Character Trait (same as above) (same as above) *Bonus Analyzing Point of View *Evidence 1. Divide the class into two groups. Explain that they are going to be reading a short piece of text and their task is to remember as many details as possible from the text. Tell one half of the class that they are burglars and the other half of the class that they are real estate agents, without divulging the roles to the opposite groups. 2. Put the story, The House by Laurie Henry, on the overhead and read it aloud to your students. While you are reading, students should not be taking notes. Once the reading is complete, turn off the overhead and ask students to list as many details as they can remember about the house from the text (e.g., descriptions of rooms, items located in the house, layout of house). This part of the activity should be limited to 2-3 minutes. 3. Students then share their lists within their group. (For larger classes, students can be broken into 4 groups, 2 for each prescribed role.) Distribute chart paper to each group so that students can record their lists. 4. Hang both sheets of chart paper on the front wall of the classroom. Discuss the similarities and differences between the two lists, and allow students to guess the viewpoint of the other group. 5. Discuss whether the lists would be different from another perspective (e.g., child, interior decorator, pet dog). The House By Laurie Henry As I entered the front door, the marble floor glistened before me. The entryway opened to a grand staircase, which wound its way to the second level. My heels clicked across the cold, white floor as I proceeded to the living room on my left. A giant fireplace stretched across one end of the room. The impressive mantelpiece showcased a golden egg and porcelain figurines. A painting of sunflowers hung on the center of the wall. The white carpeting looked as if it had never been stepped on, and the entertainment center sprawled across the back wall. I turned around to face the dining room. A golden chandelier hung above a great mahogany table. A bank of French doors opened to a wrap-around deck at the back of the house. A lighted hutch contained crystal goblets and gold-edged dinnerware. Proceeding down the hallway, I discovered a custom kitchen on my left, opposite the far end of the dining room. The sleek counters were free of clutter. Cabinets hung on every inch of wall space. A breakfast nook looked out over the back garden. I soon retraced my steps to the entryway and ascended the stairs. A short hallway welcomed me to the second level of the house. To my left and at the front of the house was a small bedroom set up as a home office. The remainder of the upstairs consisted of a master bedroom suite. Two walk-in closets flanked the entrance to the master bedroom. No doubt, one closet was for him and the other one was for her. The matching bedroom furniture consisted of two dressers and night stands on either side of a fourposter bed. A wooden chest sat atop each dresser. A large bathroom sat off to the right side with double sinks inside. A whirlpool tub and shower stall lined the far wall. I slowly retreated and returned to the lower level and out the front door. I shall return to this exquisite abode. Copyright 2002 IRA/NCTE. All rights reserved. ReadWriteThink materials may be reproduced for educational purposes. Name: _______________________________ Identifying Point of View Directions: Read the following passages and determine the point of view. Then explain how you were able to identify the perspective. Point of View (perspective): first-person, second-person, third-person 1. The Wizard of Oz by L Frank Baum The Scarecrow found a tree full of nuts and filled Dorothy’s basket with them, so that she would not be hungry for a long time. She thought this was very kind and thoughtful of the Scarecrow, but she laughed heartily at the awkward way in which the poor creature picked up the nuts. His padded hands were so clumsy that he dropped almost as many as he put in the basket. But the Scarecrow did not mind how long it took him to fill the basket, for it enabled him to keep away from the fire, as he feared a spark might get into his straw and burn him up (49). Point of View: _______________________________________________________________________ How do you know? ___________________________________________________________________ 2. The War of the Worlds by H.G. Wells We crossed the road to a white house inside a walled garden, and found some food—two loaves of bread, and uncooked steak, and half of a ham. We also found several bottles of beer, a sack of beans, and a dozen or so cans of soup, salmon and vegetables. We sat in the kitchen in the dark—not daring to strike a light—and ate bread and ham and drank beer out of the same bottle. The priest wanted to keep going instead of resting and eating. I was urging him to eat and keep up his strength when, all of a sudden, disaster struck! (134) Point of View: _______________________________________________________________________ How do you know? ___________________________________________________________________ 3. The Freedom Writers Diary by The Freedom Writers with Erin Gruwell Dear Diary, Tonight I just finished one of the books for our read-a-thon, called The Wave. This story is about a school experiment that shows how peer pressure can get out of hand. One of the main characters was a guy by the name of Robert Billing. He pressured and bullied other teenagers into acting like modern-day Nazis. The teenagers were like sheep blindly following a leader. After reading this book, I realized how teens are very gullible; getting tricked into doing things to fit in or be popular (68-69). Point of View: _______________________________________________________________________ How do you know? ___________________________________________________________________ 4. Tuck Everlasting by Natalie Babbitt At dawn, Mae Tuck set out on her horse for the wood at the edge of the village of Treegap. She was going there, as she did once every ten years, to meet her two sons, Miles and Jesse, and she was feeling at ease. At noon time, Winnie Foster, whose family owned the Treegap wood, lost her patience at last and decided to think about running away. Point of View: _______________________________________________________________________ How do you know? ___________________________________________________________________ 5. Invitation to the Game by Monica Hughes And we scrounged. Next to survival, scrounge was probably the most important word in our new vocabulary. We found a store that was throwing out water-damaged mattresses. Getting them home was a problem, since we had to make two trips, leaving Brad and Katie, armed with sticks to guard over the remained. I truly expected them to be challenged by some gang boss, but they said that the only person who came by was a scrawny little rat of a girl living alone. We let her have one of the mattresses. Point of View: _______________________________________________________________________ How do you know? ___________________________________________________________________ 6. Alice's adventures in Wonderland by Lewis Carroll, John Tenniel Alice was beginning to get very tired of sitting by her sister on the bank, and of having nothing to do: once or twice she had peeped into the book her sister was reading, but it had no pictures or conversations in it, “and what is the use of a book,” thought Alice, “without pictures or conversations?” So she was considering, in her own mind whether the pleasure of making a daisychain would be worth the trouble of getting up and picking the daisies, when suddenly a White Rabbit with pink eyes ran close by her. Point of View: _______________________________________________________________________ How do you know? ___________________________________________________________________ 7. White Fang by Jack London They spoke no more until camp was made. Henry was bending over and adding ice to the bubbling pot of beans when he was startled by the sound of a sharp snarling cry of pain from among the dogs. Henry grunted with a tone that was not sympathy, and for a quarter of an hour they sat on in silence, Henry staring at the fire, and Bill at the circle of eyes that burned in the darkness just beyond the firelight. Point of View: _______________________________________________________________________ How do you know? ___________________________________________________________________ Identifying Point of View ANSWERS Directions: Read the following passages and determine the point of view. Then explain how you were able to identify the perspective. Point of View (perspective): first-person, second-person, third-person 1. The Wizard of Oz by L Frank Baum The Scarecrow found a tree full of nuts and filled Dorothy’s basket with them, so that she would not be hungry for a long time. She thought this was very kind and thoughtful of the Scarecrow, but she laughed heartily at the awkward way in which the poor creature picked up the nuts. His padded hands were so clumsy that he dropped almost as many as he put in the basket. But the Scarecrow did not mind how long it took him to fill the basket, for it enabled him to keep away from the fire, as he feared a spark might get into his straw and burn him up (49). Point of View: Third-Person How do you know? The story is told by the narrator who is not a character in the story and Scarecrow and Dorothy’s thoughts are revealed. 2. The War of the Worlds by H.G. Wells We crossed the road to a white house inside a walled garden, and found some food—two loaves of bread, and uncooked steak, and half of a ham. We also found several bottles of beer, a sack of beans, and a dozen or so cans of soup, salmon and vegetables. We sat in the kitchen in the dark—not daring to strike a light—and ate bread and ham and drank beer out of the same bottle. The priest wanted to keep going instead of resting and eating. I was urging him to eat and keep up his strength when, all of a sudden, disaster struck! (134) Point of View: First-Person How do you know? The story is told by "We" and "I." 3. The Freedom Writers Diary by The Freedom Writers with Erin Gruwell Dear Diary, Tonight I just finished one of the books for our read-a-thon, called The Wave. This story is about a school experiment that shows how peer pressure can get out of hand. One of the main characters was a guy by the name of Robert Billing. He pressured and bullied other teenagers into acting like modern-day Nazis. The teenagers were like sheep blindly following a leader. After reading this book, I realized how teens are very gullible; getting tricked into doing things to fit in or be popular (68-69). Point of View: First-Person How do you know? The narrator tells the story from the perspective of "I." 4. Tuck Everlasting by Natalie Babbitt At dawn, Mae Tuck set out on her horse for the wood at the edge of the village of Treegap. She was going there, as she did once every ten years, to meet her two sons, Miles and Jesse, and she was feeling at ease. At noon time, Winnie Foster, whose family owned the Treegap wood, lost her patience at last and decided to think about running away. Point of View: Third-Person How do you know? The story is told by the narrator who is not a character in the story and Mae's and Winnie's thoughts are revealed. 5. Invitation to the Game by Monica Hughes And we scrounged. Next to survival, scrounge was probably the most important word in our new vocabulary. We found a store that was throwing out water-damaged mattresses. Getting them home was a problem, since we had to make two trips, leaving Brad and Katie, armed with sticks to guard over the remained. I truly expected them to be challenged by some gang boss, but they said that the only person who came by was a scrawny little rat of a girl living alone. We let her have one of the mattresses. Point of View: First-Person How do you know? The story is told by "We" and "I." 6. Alice's adventures in Wonderland by Lewis Carroll, John Tenniel Alice was beginning to get very tired of sitting by her sister on the bank, and of having nothing to do: once or twice she had peeped into the book her sister was reading, but it had no pictures or conversations in it, “and what is the use of a book,” thought Alice, “without pictures or conversations?” So she was considering, in her own mind whether the pleasure of making a daisychain would be worth the trouble of getting up and picking the daisies, when suddenly a White Rabbit with pink eyes ran close by her. Point of View: Third-person How do you know? The story is told by the narrator who is not a character in the story and Alice's thoughts are revealed. 7. White Fang by Jack London They spoke no more until camp was made. Henry was bending over and adding ice to the bubbling pot of beans when he was startled by the sound of a sharp snarling cry of pain from among the dogs. Henry grunted with a tone that was not sympathy, and for a quarter of an hour they sat on in silence, Henry staring at the fire, and Bill at the circle of eyes that burned in the darkness just beyond the firelight. Point of View: Third-Person How do you know? The story is told by the narrator who is not a character in the story. A Step-by-Step Approach to Writing Summaries The following is a step by step approach to teaching students how to write a summary of a text. Please have them record all information in the graphic organizer (see attached). STEP ONE: Find the Main Idea of the Passage- The main idea can be explicitly or implicitly stated. Refer to One Hand Gone, but Not His Spirit from Course I, Volume II in the Expert 21 book. How do we find the main idea of this passage? 1) Identify the topic- Aron Ralston’s survival 2) Underline and highlight key words and words that are repeated- options, calm, focused, chose/choice, family, support 3) Putting that together, what does the author convey about the topic: Main idea: When Aron Ralston was put in a life and death situation, he considered his options, remained calm and focused, and made a difficult decision to save his life. STEP TWO: Find other relevant details to support the main idea Irrelevant detail- “Ralston fell in love with the outdoors upon moving from Indiana to Colorado at age 12” Relevant detail- “But Aron is the kind of person who actually becomes calmer and more focused when all the options are bad, the clock is ticking, and life hangs in the balance.” STEP THREE: Paraphrase the relevant details: “A mechanical engineer with years of backcountry experience, Ralston was a prisoner of geology for five nights.” Paraphrase: Despite his background in mechanical engineering and familiarity with outdoor adventure, Ralston was unable to free himself from a boulder for five nights. STEP FOUR- Collapse lists/ Make generalizations Quotation: “Keeping up that pace since the accident, he has completed the Leadville 100, a daunting 100- mile high mountain foot race; climbed the highest peak in five neighboring states within 24 hours; and traipsed to Vermont to see the final performances of Phish, his favorite band.” Generalization: Since his accident, Aron has had many extreme adventures. STEP FIVE: Identify the text structure (examples: chronological, cause and effect, compare/contrast, problem-solution) This particular passage is a problem-solution, so the summary should be written in that manner: When Aron Ralston’s arm was pinned inside a narrow canyon, he made the decision on the 6th day to cut off his right forearm in order to survive. STEP SIX- Put main ideas and details together using proper transitions according to the text structure: Problem/Solution: So, then, due to, nevertheless, in spite of, after STEP SEVEN- Use the graphic organizer to write your summary: When Aron Ralston was put in a life and death situation, he considered his options, remained calm and focused, and made a difficult decision to save his life. In 2003, Aron Ralston was hiking in Utah’s Canyonlands National Park, when he accidentally dislodged an 800 pound boulder. He became trapped in a narrow canyon with his right arm pinned by the boulder. Over the course of the next six days, Ralston tried several ways to free his arm, including chipping away at the stone. With supplies running out, and the knowledge that he had told no one where he was, Aron made a drastic decision to cut off his right forearm with a dull pocket knife. After applying a tourniquet, he climbed down a 65-foot cliff and hiked seven miles before being rescued by a search helicopter. He credits his survival to his calm and focused manner and his determination to see his family again. Since his accident, Aron has had many extreme adventures and has written a book about his experience. . Summary Graphic Organizer Find the topic:____________________________________________________________ List key words and words that are repeated: _________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ Write the main idea: _________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ Paraphrase first relevant detail: _________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ Paraphrase second relevant detail: _________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ Paraphrase third relevant detail: _________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ Paraphrase fourth relevant detail: _________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ Paraphrase fifth relevant detail: _________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ Text structure (cause and effect, problem/solution, compare/contrast, chronological, description): _________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ Literature Circle Reflection Name:___________________________________ Date:_____________________ Title:_____________________________ Circle:_____________ Reflection Statements Yes No Somewhat I completed my assigned reading before the meeting. I wrote thoughtful and complete responses on my role sheet. I asked questions to clarify my understanding of the book and/or to help me better understand other group members’ ideas. I brought all required materials to the Literature Circle meeting (book, role sheet, my brain, etc.) I shared parts of the book that were important to me and explained why they were important. I was a careful and caring listener by giving my complete attention to other group members when they were speaking. I responded to other group members’ ideas. What was an important contribution you made to the discussion today? _________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________ What was an important idea or explanation expressed by someone else during the discussion? _________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ Teacher Comments: _________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________ Point of View Assessment Rewrite the following excerpt from the Other June’s point of view. Your goal is to put yourself in the Other June’s shoes. After that, everyone called me Fish Eyes. And every Other Tuesday, wherever I was, there was also the Other June--at the edge of the pool, in the pool, in the locker room. In the water, she swam alongside me, blowing and huffing, knocking into me. In the locker room, she stepped on my feet, pinched my arm, hid my blouse, and knotted my braids together. She had large square teeth; she was shorter than I was, but heavier, with bigger bones and square hands. If I met her outside on the street, carrying her bathing suit and towel, she’d walk toward me, smiling a square, friendly smile. “Oh well, if it isn’t Fish Eyes.” Then she’d punch me, blam! Her whole solid weight hitting me. I didn’t know what to do about her. She was training me like a dog. After a few weeks of this, she only had to look at me, only to growl, “I’m going to get you, Fish Eyes,” for my heart to slink like a whipped dog down into my stomach. My arms were covered with bruises. When my mother noticed, I made up a story about tripping on the sidewalk. _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ How does changing the point of view affect how you feel about the characters and events in the story? _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ Point of View Assessment Rubric CRITERIA Content/Ideas Organization 3 The narrative is rewritten with a consistent and accurate point of view. Writing is cohesive, creative, and clear. 2 The narrative is rewritten with a mostly consistent and accurate point of view. Writing is mostly cohesive, creative, and clear. 1 The narrative is rewritten with an inconsistent and/or inaccurate point of view. Writing is not cohesive, creative, and clear. SCORE SCORE: Close Reading of “Tuesday of the Other June” DIRECTIONS FOR TEACHERS 1. Introduce the passage and students read independently. Other than giving the brief definitions offered to words students would likely not be able to define from context (underlined in the text), avoid giving any background context or instructional guidance at the outset of the lesson while students are reading the text silently. This close reading approach forces students to rely exclusively on the text instead of privileging background knowledge and levels the playing field for all students as they seek to comprehend Mazer’s prose. It is critical to cultivating independence and creating a culture of close reading that students initially grapple with rich texts without the aid of prefatory material, extensive notes, or even teacher explanations. 2. Read the passage out loud to the class as students follow along in the text. Asking students to listen to the excerpt from “Tuesday of the Other June” exposes them a second time to the rhythms and meaning of Mazer’s language before they begin their own close reading of the passage. Speaking clearly and carefully will allow students to follow June’s narrative, and reading out loud with students following along improves fluency while offering all students access to this complex text. Accurate and skillful modeling of the reading provides students who may be dysfluent with accurate pronunciations and syntactic patterns of English. 3. Ask the class to answer a small set of text-dependent guided questions and perform targeted tasks about the passage, with answers in the form of notes, annotations to the text, or more formal responses as appropriate. As students move through these questions and reread “Tuesday of the Other June”, be sure to check for and reinforce their understanding of academic vocabulary in the corresponding text. At times, the questions themselves may focus on academic vocabulary. Most of the meanings of words in the exemplar text can be discovered by students from careful reading of the context in which they appear. Teachers can use discussions to model and reinforce how to learn vocabulary from contextual clues, and students must be held accountable for engaging in this practice. Where it is judged this is not possible, underlined words are defined briefly for students to the right of the text in a separate column whenever the original text is reproduced. At times, this is all the support these defined words need. Name: ____________________________ Date: ------------ CLOSE READ of “Tuesday of the Other June,” by Norma Fox Mazer Text Under Discussion Vocabulary Monday, when the principal of Blue Hill Street School left me in Mr. Morrisey’s classroom, I knew what I’d been waiting for. In that room full of strange kids, there was one person I knew. She smiled her square smile, raised her hand, and said, “She can sit next to me, Mr. Morrisey.” “Very nice of you, June M. OK, June T., take your seat. I’ll try not to get you two Junes mixed up.” I sat down next to her. She pinched my arm. “Good riddance to bad trash,” she mocked. I was back in the Tuesday swimming class, only now it was worse, because every day would soon be Awfulday. The pinching had already started. Soon, I knew, on the playground and in the halls, kids would pass me, grinning. “Hiya, Fish Eyes.” The Other June followed me around during recess that day, droning Talking in a dull, in my ear, “You are my slave, you monotonous voice must do everything I say, I am your master, say it, say, “Yes, master, you are my master.” I pressed my lips together, clapped my hands over my ears, but without hope. Wasn’t it only a matter of time before I said the hateful words? “How was school?” my mother said that night. “OK.” A chest of drawers She put a pile of towels in a bureau drawer. “Try not to be sad about missing your old friends, sweetie; there’ll be new ones.” The next morning, the Other June was waiting for me when I left the house. “Did your mother get you that blouse in the garbage dump?” She butted me, shoving me against a tree. Guiding Questions Q1: What is ironic about Mr. Morrisey’s statement? Q2: What connotative and denotative meaning does the word “trash” have? Q3: What does the Other June’s repetition of the word “trash” (first used by June T.) tell you about her? Q4: Why does June fear that it will only be “a matter of time” before she repeats what the Other June tells her to? “Don’t you speak anymore, Fish Eyes?” Grabbing my chin in her hands, she pried open my mouth. “Oh, ha ha, I thought you lost your tongue.” We went on to school. I sank down into my seat, my head on my arms. “June T, are you all right?” Mr. Morrisey asked. I nodded. My head was almost too heavy to lift. The Other June went to the pencil sharpener. Round and round she whirled the handle. Walking back, looking at me, she held the three sharp pencils like three little knives. Someone knocked on the door. Mr. Morrisey went out into the hall. Paper planes burst into the air, flying from desk to desk. Someone turned on a transistor radio. And the Other June, coming closer, smiled and licked her lips like a cat sleepily preparing to gulp down a mouse. I remembered my dream of kicking her, punching, biting her like a dog. Then my mother spoke quickly in my ear: Turn the other cheek, my Junie; smile at the world, and the world’ll surely smile back. But I had turned the other cheek and it was slapped. I had smiled and the world hadn’t smiled back. I couldn’t run home as fast as my feet would take me. I had to stay in school—and in school there was the Other June. Every morning, there would be the Other June, and every afternoon, and every day, all day, there would be the Other June. She frisked down the aisle, stabbing the pencils in the air toward me. A boy stood up on his desk and bowed. “My fans,” he said, “I greet you.” My arm twitched and throbbed, as if the Other June’s pencils had already poked through the skin. She came closer, smiling her Tuesday smile. “No,” I whispered, “no.” The word took wings and flew me to my Q5: What do the similes in these two paragraphs tell us about June T’s state of mind? Q6: Explain why June decides to deliberately go against her mother’s advice. Q7: What does the word “frisked” mean in this sentence? Q8: Explain the effect of the personification in this paragraph. feet, in front of the Other June. “Noooooo.” It flew out of my mouth into her surprised face. The boy on the desk turned toward us. “You said something, my devoted fans?” “No,” I said to the Other June. “Oh, no! No. No. No. No more.” I pushed away the hand that held the pencils. The Other June’s eyes opened, popped wide like the eyes of somebody in a cartoon. It made me laugh. The boy on the desk laughed, and then the other kids were laughing, too. “No,” I said again, because it felt so good to say it. “No, no, no, no.” I leaned toward the Other June, put my finger against her chest. Her cheeks turned red, she squawked something— it sounded like “Eeeraaghyou!”—and she stepped back. She stepped away from me. The door banged, the airplanes disappeared, and Mr. Morrisey walked to his desk. “OK. OK. Let’s get back to work. Kevin Clark, how about it?” Kevin jumped off the desk, and Mr. Morrisey picked up a piece of chalk. “All right, class—“He stopped and looked at me and the Other June. “You two Junes, what’s going on there?” I tried it again. My finger against her chest. Then the words. “No—more.” And she stepped back another step. I sat down at my desk. “June M.,” Mr. Morrisey said. She turned around, staring at him with that big-eyed cartoon look. After a moment she sat down at her desk with a loud slapping sound. Even Mr. Morrisey laughed. And sitting at my desk, twirling my braids, I knew this was the last Tuesday of the Other June. Q9: How does the class’s reaction help June T.? Q10: Is June T. a static or dynamic character? How about the Other June? Explain. Q11: How do you think that June T’s mom will react when she hears about what happened? Explain. Conflict Letter Writing Activity 1. Identify a conflict facing the main character in your novel,______________________, and put yourself in the character’s place. 2. As that character, write a letter to someone you know explaining your problem with detail and ask that person for advice. 3. Write an answer in letter form from the person you wrote to, offering a solution to your (the main character’s) problem. Dear__________________________________, _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _______________ _________________________________, _________________________________ (character’s name) ***Write your return letter on the back of this page. From Call It Courage, by Armstrong Sperry It was the sea that Mafatu feared. He had been surrounded by it ever since he was born. The thunder of it filled his ears; the crash of it upon the reef, the mutter of it at sunset, the threat and fury of its storms-on every hand, wherever he turned--the sea. He could not remember when the fear of it first had taken hold of him. Perhaps it was during the great hurricane which swept Hikueru when he was a child of three. Even now, twelve years later, Mafatu could remember that terrible morning. His mother had taken him out to the barrier-reef to search for sea urchins in the reef pools. There were other canoes scattered at wide intervals along the reef. With late afternoon the other fishermen began to turn back. They shouted warnings to Mafatu's mother. It was the season of hurricane and the people of Hikueru were nervous and ill at ease, charged, it seemed, with an almost animal awareness of impending storm. But when at last Mafatu's mother turned back toward shore, a swift current had set in around the shoulder of the reef-passage: a meeting of tides that swept like a millrace out into the open sea. It seized the frail craft in its swift race. Despite all the woman's skill, the canoe was carried on the crest of the churning tide, through the reef-passage, into the outer ocean. Mafatu would never forget the sound of his mother's despairing cry. He didn't know then what it meant; but he felt that something was terribly wrong, and he set up a loud wailing. Night closed down upon them, swift as a frigate's wing, darkening the known world. The wind of the open ocean rushed in at them, screaming. Waves lifted and struck at one another, their crests hissing with spray. The poles of the outrigger were torn from their thwarts. The woman sprang forward to seize her child as the canoe capsized. The little boy gasped when the cold water struck him. He clung to his mother's neck. Moana, the Sea God, was reaching up for them, seeking to draw them down to his dark heart.... Off the tip of Hikueru, the uninhabited islet of Tekoto lay shrouded in darkness. It was scarcely more than a ledge of coral, almost awash. The swift current bore directly down upon the islet. Dawn found the woman still clinging to the purau pole and the little boy with his arms locked about his mother's neck. The grim light revealed sharks circling, circling.... Little Mafatu buried his head against his mother's cold neck. He was filled with terror. He even forgot the thirst that burned his throat. But the palms of Tekoto beckoned with their promise of life, and the woman fought on. When at last they were cast up on the pinnacle of coral, Mafatu's mother crawled ashore with scarcely enough strength left to pull her child beyond reach of the sea's hungry fingers. The little boy was too weak even to cry. At hand lay a cracked coconut; the woman managed to press the cool, sustaining meat to her child's lips before she died. Setting and Its Roles SETTING AND ITS ROLES Analyze Setting Is it real or imaginary? Is it indoors or outdoors? Is it in a country, city, or some other place? Where What do you see, hear, taste, or feel as an observer of this setting? How do people act in this place? Is it hard or easy to be there? Is it past, present, or future? What time of day is it? When What time of year or season is it? What special event or time period is happening? What are people’s homes, clothes, and technology like? 1. The setting (time & place) of the story is… ____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ 2. What clues in the story helped you to determine the setting? Refer to the chart. ____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ 3.How would this story be different if it took place in another setting? Explain. ____________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________ 3.How would this story have been different if the setting were changed? Explain. _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________ \ Clues to Theme In some folktales and stories, the theme is directly stated by a character or narrator. In most works of literature, though, the theme is not usually revealed in the form of a direct statement. As a reader, you need to infer, or guess, the theme. To make a reasonable guess, you have to consider certain clues. The elements in the chart below can all serve as clues. THE CLUES TITLE: The title may hint at a theme by highlighting an important idea, setting, or character. Ask: PLOT & CONFLICT: A story’s plot often focuses on a conflict that is important to the theme. Ask: CHARACTERS: What conflicts do the characters face? How are the conflicts resolved? Characters can reflect a theme by how they act and what they learn. Ask: SETTING: To what in the story does the title refer? What ideas does the title emphasize? What are the main characters like? (Notice what they do and say.) How do the characters deal with the conflicts? How do the characters change? What lessons do the characters learn? A setting can suggest a theme because of the conflicts it creates for the characters. Ask: What conflicts does the setting create? How do the characters feel about their surroundings? Vocabulary Assessment Name:____________________________________ Date: _______________ Block: ________ Below are vocabulary words pertaining to survival. Use each word in a sentence that relates to characters and their experiences in your survival readings. Be sure to cite specific examples. Underline the vocabulary word used in each sentence. Example: Courage - the quality of mind or spirit that enables a person to face difficulty, danger, pain, etc., without fear In “Tuesday of the Other June”, June demonstrated courage at the end of the story when she finally stood up to the Other June and said “No more!” Adversity _________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ Consequence _________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ Perseverance _________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ Determination _________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ Tenacity _________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________ Willpower________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ Motivation _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ Intuition _________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ Theme Assessment Found Poetry: A found poem uses language from non-poetic contexts and turns it into poetry. Think of a collage -- visual artists take scraps of newspaper, cloth, feathers, bottle caps, and create magic. You can do the same with language and poems. Writing this type of poetry is a kind of treasure hunt. You can search for interesting scraps of language, then put them together in different ways and see what comes out. This can lead to surprising results. YOUR TASK: 1. Search through your novel for words, phrases, and sentences that highlight the story’s theme. Look for details that you find particularly powerful, moving, or interesting, but all should relate to the theme. Copy everything down in the order in which you find it. As you collect, don’t worry about the poetic form right away. You should have roughly 75125 words. Double-space between lines so that the lines are easy to work with. 2. Look back over your list and cut out everything that is dull, or unnecessary, or that just doesn’t seem right for a poem about this theme. Try to cut your original list in half. 3. As you look over the shortened list, think about the tone that the details and language convey. Make sure that you have words that communicate your message clearly. 4. Make any minor changes necessary to create your poem. You can change punctuation and make little changes to the words to make them fit together (such as change the tenses, possessives, plurals, and capitalizations). 5. When you’re close to an edited down version, if you absolutely need to add a word or two to make the poem flow more smoothly, to make sense, to make a point, you may add up to two words of your own. That’s two (2) and only two! 6. Read back over your edited draft one more time and make any deletions or minor changes. 7. Check the words and choose a title that reflects the theme of your novel. 8. Type your words. Space or arrange the words so that they’re poem-like. Pay attention to line breaks, layout, and other elements that will emphasize important words or ideas in the poem. • Read aloud as you arrange the words! Test the possible line breaks by pausing slightly. If it sounds good, it’s probably right. • Arrange the words so that they make a rhythm you like. You can space words out so that they are all alone or allruntogether. • You can also put key words on lines by themselves. • Emphasize words by playing with boldface and italics, different sizes of letters, and so forth. 9. At the bottom of the poem, type your name, and underneath it, tell where the words in the poem came from, for example, From Julie of the Wolves, by Jean Craighead George. Final Assessment Directions You are the host of a well-known news or talk show. You have been selected to interview any survivor, real or fictional, from this unit. You will ask your guest questions about his/her survival experience, including ones that address the essential questions for this unit: In the face of adversity, why do some people survive while others don’t? and, what does it take to be a survivor? You need to produce a script of the entire interview, questions as well as answers. Your answers should include information, facts, and/or quotes from the text related to your guest. Your script should be at least two pages. After your script has been approved by your teacher, you will choose one person to perform your script with during a scheduled class time. Decide who will play which role (host and survivor) and practice before your presentation. Decide which props your character might need to create an entertaining performance. You will be graded on both your script and your presentation in class. HOTSEAT Hotseat is an excellent activity as students will remember a great deal more of the story when they have been involved in a role play. Directions During literature circles, each student is asked a contentious question that could be asked of the main character in the novel. The student assumes the role of the character and answers the question according to how he/she believes the character would answer them. Do you ever feel overwhelmed? What could you have done differently? Do you blame others for the situation you are in, or was this a choice you made? Were you prepared for this experience? Why/why not? How are you able to stay positive? Which have you relied upon more, mental strength or physical strength? Explain. How is your health (emotional and physical)? Explain.