Research Paper Informational Guide *DO NOT LOSE!* Name ________________________ Cycle ________________________ Period ________________________ 1 Research: What it is A research paper is the culmination and final product of an involved process of research, critical thinking, source evaluation, organization, and composition. It is, perhaps, helpful to think of the research paper as a living thing, which grows and changes as the student explores, interprets, and evaluates sources related to a specific topic. Primary and secondary sources are the heart of a research paper, and provide its nourishment; without the support of and interaction with these sources, the research paper would morph into a different genre of writing (e.g., an encyclopedic article). The research paper serves not only to further the field in which it is written, but also to provide the student with an exceptional opportunity to increase her knowledge in that field. It is also possible to identify a research paper by what it is not. Research: What it is not A research paper is not simply an informed summary of a topic by means of primary and secondary sources. It is neither a book report nor an opinion piece nor an expository essay consisting solely of one's interpretation of a text nor an overview of a particular topic. Instead, it is a genre that requires one to spend time investigating and evaluating sources with the intent to offer interpretations of the texts, and not unconscious regurgitations of those sources. The goal of a research paper is not to inform the reader what others have to say about a topic, but to draw on what others have to say about a topic and engage the sources in order to thoughtfully offer a unique perspective on the issue at hand. https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/658/01/ What Is a Citation? A citation is a reference to the source of information used in your research. Any time you directly quote or paraphrase the essential elements of someone else’s idea in your work, a citation should follow. Direct quotations should be surrounded by quotations marks and are generally used when the idea you want to capture is best expressed by the source. Paraphrasing involves rewording an essential idea from someone else’s work, usually to either condense the point or to make it better fit your writing style. Common knowledge does not need to be followed by a citation. Common knowledge means something that most people would already know, such as “George Washington was the first president of the United States.” http://commons.esc.edu/informationskills/cite/what-is-citation/ 2 What is Plagiarism? Many people think of plagiarism as copying another’s work, or borrowing someone else’s original ideas. But terms like “copying” and “borrowing” can disguise the seriousness of the offense. According to the Merriam Webster Online Dictionary, to “plagiarize” means 1. to steal and pass off (the ideas or words of another) as one’s own 2. to use (another’s production) without crediting the source 3. to commit literary theft 4. to present as new and original an idea or product derived from an existing source In other words, plagiarism is an act of fraud. It involves both stealing someone else’s work and lying about it afterward. Strategies for Avoiding Plagiarism 1. Put in quotations everything that comes directly from a text, especially when taking notes. 2. Paraphrase, using someone else’s ideas, by putting them in your own words but be sure you are not just rearranging or replacing a few words. 3. Read over what you want to paraphrase carefully; cover up the text with you hand, or close the text so you can’t see any of it (and so you aren’t tempted to use the text as a guide). Write out the idea in your own words without peeking. 4. Check your paraphrase against the original text to be sure you have not accidentally used the same phrases or words, and that the information is accurate. Student Signature _________________________________________ Date ______________ Parent Signature __________________________________________ Date ______________ Plagiarism is from a Latin verb that mean “to kidnap.” If you plagiarize you’re kidnapping and stealing others’ hard work and intellectual property. It is academic and public dishonesty. 3 Research Paper Scoring Guide Criteria Excellent-5 Good- 4 Fair- 3 Needs Improvement2 Poor- 1 Missing- 0 Contains all required parts Meets length requirement (5-8 pages) Meets source requirements MLA Format Follows outline Outline format Thesis stated clearly Introduction is attentiongrabbing Body paragraphs well organized Tone is formal and scholarly Quotations used appropriately Parenthetical citations in MLA format Supports thesis Factual and informative Conclusion sums up and offers new insight Works cited page Easy to follow (“flows”) Spelling/grammar/ mechanics/usage Editing/proofreading Overall effort Column total: Total Points: ____________ 4 Research Paper Requirements ● 5-8 pages ● MLA Format: heading, quotes, Works Cited page etc. ● Typed: ○ Double-spaced ○ Left side aligned ○ Black ink ○ Times New Roman ○ Stapled on the top left corner ○ Number pages on the top RIGHT corner (Smith 2, Smith 3 etc.) ○ 12 point font ○ Margins 1.0 on all sides ○ NO illustrations ○ NO cover page ● Scholarly Sources: MANDATORY 5-8 ○ 2 books ○ 3 of your choice (magazines, online text, reputable websites etc.) ○ NO Wikipedia 5 Topic Brainstorming Junior Directions: In the center of wheel, write down a general topic for your research paper. Think of what MOST interests you about your vocational program. For example, if you are in Culinary Arts, you might feel strongly about baking, but are less interested in front-of-the-house operations. If you are in Criminal Justice, you might be interested in the technology of security or surveillance systems versus criminal court and the justice system. Once you have a general topic, brainstorm possible research topics (i.e. recipe alternatives for gluten free baking or effective security systems for schools). Once you have brainstormed possible research topics, you will need to discuss your ideas with your vocational teacher to narrow down your topic. You will need their feedback about what research topics are achievable, and which ones might not be feasible, and will need to obtain their signature of approval prior to beginning your research. Senior Directions: In the center of the wheel, write down the topic you have chosen to research. Then, write down possible research topics based on the main topic. Consider the elements of the topic that are most interesting or important. Final approval of your research topic needs to be given before you proceed. 6 Thesis Statement Introduction ● A thesis statement is a specific CLAIM about your topic. ● A thesis statement is NOT a question. ● A thesis statement includes your topic and a specific claim about your topic. ● Topic-- Claim-- followed by Evidence in the body of your paper. ● The thesis statement should provide a road map for the rest of the paper. In other words, the thesis’ claims should be in the same order that they will appear in your paper. ● You should be able to support your thesis statement with evidence. If you find you can’t, then you will need to revise/rewrite your thesis. ● The thesis statement can go anywhere in the introduction paragraph, but is generally the last sentence. Example Thesis Statement: ● Barn owls’ nests should not be eliminated from barns because barn owls help farmers by eliminating insects and rodent pests. *The reader should expect to be presented with evidence supporting the claim that barn owls help farmers. Questions to ask when you’re writing a thesis statement: ● ● ● What is my claim about why topic? What is my evidence to support my claim? In what order should I present my reasons? 7 Name _______________________________________ Senior Project Research Paper Questionnaire (To be completed by Juniors) Shop _________________________________________________________________________________ Shop Teacher _________________________________________________________________________ What element of your trade do you find most interesting about your shop? ______________________________________________________________________________________ Senior Project Topic ____________________________________________________________________ Thesis Statement ______________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________ Shop Teacher’s Signature________________________________________________________________ 8 Name _______________________________________ Senior American Literature Research Paper Questionnaire (To be completed by Seniors) American Literature Research Topic: _________________________________________________________________________________________________ Why are you interested in this topic? _________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thesis Statement ______________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________ Student Signature________________________________________________________________ 9 Final Thesis Worksheet To construct your thesis statement, answer the following questions and then revise the questions into one strong thesis statement. 1. “I want to tell my reader that ___________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________about my project topic. 2. Why should the reader be interested in this topic? 3. What am I trying to tell my reader? 4. Why do I want to share this message? Using your answers from above, write a thesis statement about your topic, including supporting evidence. This will be your thesis: ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________ 10 Name:____________________________________________________________ Peer Editing Log: THESIS STATEMENT Directions: Each group should rotate your thesis statements clockwise, until everyone has read all the thesis statements. As you read, consider the questions below and provide your response to each question in the chart. How do I know if my thesis is strong? 1. Do I answer the question? Re-reading the question prompt after constructing a working thesis can help you fix an argument that misses the focus of the question. 2. Have I taken a position that others might challenge or oppose? If your thesis simply states facts that no one would, or even could, disagree with, it's possible that you are simply providing a summary, rather than making an argument. 3. Is my thesis statement specific enough? Thesis statements that are too vague often do not have a strong argument. If your thesis contains words like "good" or "successful," see if you could be more specific: why is something "good"; what specifically makes something "successful"? 4. Does my thesis pass the "So what?" test? If a reader's first response is, "So what?" then you need to clarify, to forge a relationship, or to connect to a larger issue. 5. Does my essay support my thesis specifically and without wandering? If your thesis and the body of your essay do not seem to go together, one of them has to change. It's o.k. to change your working thesis to reflect things you have figured out in the course of writing your paper. Remember, always reassess and revise your writing as necessary. 6. Does my thesis pass the "how and why?" test? If a reader's first response is "how?" or "why?" your thesis may be too open-ended and lack guidance for the reader. See what you can add to give the reader a better take on your position right from the beginning. Each peer editor must place his/her name next to a row. In the following chart, write “YES” if the thesis statement answers that specific question and “NO” if the statement does not. If “NO”, write on a separate piece of paper why not and some helpful hints that could make it stronger. Q1 Q2 Q3 Q4 Q5 Q6 11 MLA Works Cited Documentation Note: These citations serve as examples of how to format entries on Works Cited pages of student research papers. These examples may or may not be actual published literary works, and you should not be disappointed if the internet web site URLs are not functional. Again, this page is simply a set of examples to help you format a paper written in MLA style. When creating your Works Cited Page, remember to: ● ● ● ● ● ● Begin the Works Cited on a new page, but number consecutively (i.e., if the last page of your essay is page 3, the Works Cited is page 4) Alphabetize each entry by first letter Underline all titles of books, magazines, films, etc. Put quotation marks around the titles of poems, short stories, and articles Indent the 2nd line, the 3rd line, and all subsequent lines of each citation Double-space all entries...the examples which follow are single-spaced only to save space on this handout Correct citation Type of citation Gorman, Elizabeth. Prairie Women. New Haven: Yale University Press, 1986. Book (One author) Caper, Charles and Lawrence T. Teamos. How to Camp. Philadelphia: Doubleday, 1986. Book (Two authors) Ellis, Doris et.al. History of Japan. New York: Harcourt, Brace and Book (Three or World, Inc., 1989. more authors) Vanderkirk, Pamela, ed. Ten Short Plays. Los Angeles: Nowell Book Co., 1982. Book (One editor) Lockhard, David J. and Charles Heimler, eds. The Oregon Trail. New York: Bonanza Books, 1992. Book (Two editors) Carlson, David et.al., eds. Encyclopedia of Animal Life. Boston: Houghton Mifflin Co., 1985. Book (Three or more editors) Allende, Isabel. "Toad's Mouth." Trans. Margaret Sayers Peden. A Hammock beneath the Mangoes: Stories from Latin America. Ed. Thomas Colchie. New York: Plume, 1992. 83-88. Book (Single work from an anthology) American Medical Association. The American Medical Association Encyclopedia of Medicine. Ed. Charles B. Clayman. New York: Random, 1989. Book by Corporate Author 12 Hawthorne, Nathaniel. Twice-Told Tales. Ed. George Parsons Lathrop. Boston: Houghton, 1883. 1 Mar. 2002. <http://eldred.ne.mediaone.net/nh/ttt.html>. Keats, John. Poetical Works. 1884. Bartleby.com: Great Books Online. Ed. Steven van Leeuwen. May 1998. 5 May 2003 <http://www.columbia.edu/126/>. Book Online Book Online (Part of Scholarly Project) Roberts, Sheila. "A Confined World: A Rereading of Pauline Smith." Gale Literary World Literature Written in English. 24(1984): 232-38. Rpt. Criticism in Twentieth Century Literature Criticism. Ed. Dennis (previously Poupard. published Vol. 25. Detroit: Gale, 1988. 399-402. scholarly article in a collection) Doctorow, E.L. Introduction. Sister Carrie. By Theodore Dreiser. New York: Bantam, 1985. v-xi. Introduction, Preface, Foreword, or Afterword Stowe, Harriet Beecher. "Sojourner Truth, the Libyan Sibyl." 1863. One volume of The Heath Anthology of American Literature. Ed. Paul Lauter multivolume et al. Vol. 1. Lexington, Heath, 1994. 2425-33. work Maps ‘n’ Facts. Computer Software. Broderbund Software, 1995. Computer Software Frost, James. "Strawberries in a Field." Perrine's Literature: Structure, Sound,_and Sense. Ed. Thomas R. Arp and Greg Johnson. New York: Heinle and Heinle, 2002. Poem Frost, James. "Strawberries in a Field." Literature Resource Center. Alabama Virtual Library. 15 March 2004. <http://www.avl.lib.al.us>. Poem Online Crane, Stephen. "The Open Boat." Literature Resource Center. Alabama Virtual Library. 12 March 2004. <http://www.avl.lib.al.us>. Short Story Online Cather, Willa. "Paul's Case." Perrine's Literature: Structure, Sound, Short Story in and Sense.Ed. Thomas R. Arp and Greg Johnson.New an Anthology York: Heinle and Heinle, 2002. Dunn, Samuel. "Re: Any Ideas for My Country Project." E-mail to Tom Jones. 26 Feb. 2003. E-mail ** Barnridge, Thomas H. "Baseball." World Book Encyclopedia. 2001. Encyclopedia (Signed article)* "Egypt." The New Encyclopedia Britannica. 2002. Encyclopedia (Unsigned article) * Ito, Philip J. "Papaya," World Book Encyclopedia, 1998 ed. The Encyclopedia World Book Multimedia Encyclopedia, CD-ROM version of The 13 World Book Encyclopedia. (CD-ROM) * "Egypt." Encyclopedia Britannica Online. Vers. 97.1.1. Mar. 1997. Encyclopedia Britannica. 29 Feb. 2000 <http://www.search.eb.com/>. Encyclopedia (Internet) * The Empire Strikes Back. Dir. George Lucas. Perf. Mark Hamill, Harrison Ford, Carrie Fisher. Twentieth Century Fox, 1980. Film United States Office of Management and Budget. Budget of the United States Government, Fiscal Year 1999. Washington: GPO, 1999. Government Publication Whitehurst, Daniel, former mayor of Fresno. Personal interview. 5 Interview Mar. 2003. (Personal) Smith, John. "Beowulf: Archetypal Hero." English 102 Class. Vestavia Hills High School, Vestavia Hills, AL. 28 March 2003. Lecture Lin, Michael. "Compressing Online Graphics." Online posting. 27 April 1999. MacWeb. 28 Feb. 2003 <http://www.graphica.com/digitizing/intor.html>. Listserv Posting Cannon, Angie. "Just Saying No to Tests." U.S. News & World Report. Oct. 1999: 34. Magazine Cannon, Angie. "Just Saying No to Tests." U.S. News & World Report 18 Oct. 1999: 3. Alabama Virtual Library. Vestavia Hills High School Library, Vestavia Hills, AL. 28 Feb. 2003. <http://www.avl.lib.al.us>. Magazine, Online News Subscription Service (Alabama Virtual Library) Elliott, Michael. "The Biggest Fish of Them All." Time. 8 March 2003. 11 March 2003. <http://www.time.com/time>. Online Magazine Barrow, Matthew. "Skipping School? Plan On Walking." Sacramento Bee. 13 Oct. 1999, California final ed.: A1+. Newspaper Article, (Signed) "Gorilla attacks Martian." National Enquirer 16 Mar. 1999: A-14. Newspaper Article, (Unsigned) (Magazine web site) Newspaper Article, Online Bradley, Donald. "Is There a Right Way?" Kansas City Star 23 May News 1999: 2-4. SIRS Researcher. Alabama Virtual Library.. 28 Subscription Feb. 2003. <http://www.avl.lib.al.us/>. Service (SIRS) 14 "Charles Frazier." Contemporary Authors Online. 2001. Galegroup.com. Alabama Virtural Library. 28 February 2003 Gale Literary Criticism Online <http://www.avl.lib.al.us/>. (Unsigned) McCarron, Bill. "Images of War and Peace: Parallelism and Antithesis in the Beginning and Ending of Cold Mountain." The Mississippi Quarterly. 52.2 (1999): 273. Galegroup.com. Alabama Virtual Library. 25 February 2003. <http://www.avl.lib.al.us>.. Gale Literary Criticism Online (Signed) Achenbach, Joel. "America's river." Washington Post. 5 May 2002. 20 July 2003 <http://www.washingtonpost.com/wp-dyn/articles/A134252202May1.html>. Newspaper Article (Newspaper Website) Your Health. New York: Modern Woman, 1996. Pamphlet "Karma Chameleon." Northern Exposure. CBS. KCRA, Sacramento. Television or 29 Feb. 2000. Radio (Live) Smith, Greg. "Rhesus Monkeys in the Zoo." No date. Online image. Published Monkey Picture Gallery. 3 May 2003. Photograph <http://monkeys.online.org/rhesus.jpg>. "Candy Cotton at the Fair." Birmingham, AL. Personal photograph Personal taken by Quincy Adams. 5 March 2004. Photograph Adams, Cindy. "Critical Eye for the Fantasy Guy." 4 January 2004. Power Point Online PowerPoint. Studyguide.org. 7 March 2004. Online <www.studyguide.org/fantasy.htm>. Civil War Diary. Videotape. New World Entertainment, 1990. Videotape Springsteen, Bruce. "Dancing in the Dark." Born in the USA. Columbia, 1984. Music video. Dr. Brian De Palma. VH1. 10 May 2002. Music Video "Cabinet Nominations," Chapter 20. Powers of the President. Laser Video Laserdisc videodisc. Pioneer Communications of America, Inc. American Broadcasting Companies, Inc., 1995. "Castles in Medieval Times." yourchildlearns.com. 2000. Owl and Mouse Educational Software. 9 March 2003. <http://www.yourchildlearns.com/castle_history.htm>. Web Page that is part of a larger web site Schrock, Kathleen. "Digital Gadgets." Kathy Schrock’s Guide for Web page Educators. 20 February 2002. Discovery Channel. 11 March (Personal or 2003. Professional) <http://school.discovery.com/schrockguide/gadgets.html>. "Great Gatsby Study Guide." studyguide.org. 5 January 2002. 11 15 March 2003. <http://www.studyguide.org/gatsby_study_guide.htm>. Note: If no title for the page is provided, write Home page (do not underline and do not use quotation marks). The Cinderella Project. Ed. Michael N. Salda. Vers. 1.1.Dec. 1997. De Grummond Children's Lit. Research Collection, University of Southern Mississippi. 9 March 2003. <http://wwwdept.usm.edu/~engdept/cinderella/cinderella.html>. Web page from a university (scholarly online project) "Langston Hughes Poetry Circles." February 2003. National Council of Teachers of English. 10 March 2003. <http://www.ncte.org/special/LangstonHughes/>. Web page (Professional Organization) 16 MLA Works Cited Example Page Works Cited "Business Coalition for Climate Action Doubles." Environmental Defense. 8 May 2007. Environmental Defense Organization. 24 May 2007 <http://www.environmentaldefense.org/article.cfm?ContentID=5828>. Clinton, Bill. Interview. New York Times on the Web. May 2007. 25 May 2007 <http://video.on.nytimes.com/>. Keyword: Climate. Dean, Cornelia. "Executive on a Mission: Saving the Planet." New York Times on the Web 22 May 2007. 25 May 2007 <http://www.nytimes.com/2007/05/22/science/earth/22ander.html>. Ebert, Roger. "An Inconvenient Truth." Rev. of An Inconvenient Truth, dir. Davis Guggenheim. rogerebert.com. 2 June 2006. 24 May 2007 <http://rogerebert.suntimes.com>. Global Warming. 2007. Cooler Heads Coalition. 24 May 2007 <http://www.globalwarming.org/>. Gowdy, John. "Avoiding Self-organized Extinction: Toward a Co-evolutionary Economics of Sustainability." International Journal of Sustainable Development and World Ecology 14.1 (2007): 27-36. An Inconvenient Truth. Dir. Davis Guggenheim. Perf. Al Gore. Lawrence Bender, 2006. Leroux, Marcel. Global Warming: Myth Or Reality?: The Erring Ways of Climatology. New York: Springer, 2005. Milken, Michael, Gary Becker, Myron Scholes, and Daniel Kahneman. "On Global Warming and Financial Imbalances." New Perspectives Quarterly 23.4 (2006): 63. Nordhaus, William D. "After Kyoto: Alternative Mechanisms to Control Global Warming." American Economic Review 96.2 (2006): 31-34. ---. "Global Warming Economics." Science 9 Nov. 2001: 1283-84. 24 May 2007. Shulte, Bret. "Putting a Price on Pollution; Climate change laws seem inevitable, but their economic impact is unknown." US News & World Report 14 May 2007. 24 May 2007. Uzawa, Hirofumi. Economic Theory and Global Warming. Cambridge: Cambridge UP, 2003. 17 How to Format In-Text Citations General Guidelines ● The source information required in a parenthetical citation depends (1.) upon the source medium (e.g. Print, Web, DVD) and (2.) upon the source’s entry on the Works Cited (bibliography) page. ● Any source information that you provide in-text must correspond to the source information on the Works Cited page. More specifically, whatever signal word or phrase you provide to your readers in the text, must be the first thing that appears on the left-hand margin of the corresponding entry in the Works Cited List. ● Your citations should be integrated seamlessly into your paper-- never include a quote without some sort of introduction, such as referencing the author or using the quotation to complete a sentence. In addition, continue to tie the quotation into your paper afterwards by explaining how it helps prove your point, or by using the quotation as a “jumping off point” for analysis. Quotes Shorter than 4 typed lines: The author's name may appear either in the sentence itself or in parentheses following the quotation or paraphrase, but the page number(s) should always appear in the parentheses, not in the text of your sentence. For example: ● ● ● Wordsworth stated that Romantic poetry was marked by a "spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings" (263). Romantic poetry is characterized by the "spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings" (Wordsworth 263). Wordsworth extensively explored the role of emotion in the creative process (263). Quotes Longer than 4 typed lines: For quotations that are more than four lines of prose, place quotations in a free-standing block of text and omit quotation marks. Start the quotation on a new line, with the entire quote indented one inch from the left margin; maintain double-spacing. Only indent the first line of the quotation by an additional quarter inch if you are citing multiple paragraphs. Your parenthetical citation (author’s last name and page number) should come after the closing punctuation mark. You should maintain double-spacing throughout your essay. For example, when citing more than four lines of prose, use the following example: Nelly Dean treats Heathcliff poorly and dehumanizes him throughout her narration: They entirely refused to have it in bed with them, or even in their room, and I had no more sense, so, I put it on the landing of the stairs, hoping it would be gone on the morrow. By chance, or else attracted by hearing his voice, it crept to Mr. Earnshaw's door, and there he found it on quitting his chamber. Inquiries were made as to how it got there; I was obliged to confess, and in recompense for my cowardice and inhumanity was sent out of the house. (Bronte 78) 18 Special Circumstances If you have a source with more than one author, sources whose authors have the same last name, more than one source written by the same author etc. then please do some research on how to properly cite those types of sources in-text. https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl 19 From Mrs. Meade: Using the Library to Obtain Sources In order to get to our library resources, go to www.sersd.org, click on students, student links and library media center links. You can use these resources from home or at school. ● ● For most of the databases the login is as follows: Username: sersd Password: search. Student login – (the letter) S plus their 5 digit student id; Password 9999. A few of the resources/databases that you may find helpful: ● Easybib – register for an easybib account while you are on the premises of the school and you will have free access to this online citation maker which includes APA and Chicago Turabian. Once registered you can use this at school or at home. ● Gale Resources – this group of subscription databases are provided to our school from the state of Massachusetts. College libraries also have these databases available. To use this subscription database, click on Gale databases from the list located under the library media center links tab. You will find icons of the individual databases available through GALE - hover over these icons to find out what topics these databases cover. You can also use the power search tab at the top of the page to search most of these databases at once. Useful tips: click on “full text” option so that you only get articles that contain the full text as opposed to just abstracts of articles. Click on the journal tab to get scholarly articles. ● SAILS – if you want to get books as part of your research, click on the SAILS link, use the drop down menu to choose library search to search all libraries in our network. Books can be placed on hold and will be sent here on Tuesdays and Thursdays. ● Ebooks from Proquest. In addition to being able to get actual copies of books, we have a subscription to Ebooks which allows us access to 1000s of electronic books. Click on this link and enter your search term in the search bar. If username and password are required – username: sersd and password: search. *Please see Mrs. Meade in the media center if you need assistance!* 20 Outline for Research Paper Writing your research paper requires careful forethought. Use the outline below to provide a framework for your paper. This outline may not reflect all of the research you will be including in your final paper, but it should show that you have done enough research that you know the main topics and subtopics that you will be using. The outline does not need to be in complete sentences. I. Introduction- thesis statement a. First point used to support thesis statement b. Second point used to support thesis statement c. Third point used to support thesis statement II. 1st Body paragraph- restate first point to help support thesis statement (I. a.) a. 1st fact to reinforce I. a. b. 2nd fact to reinforce I. a. c. 3rd fact to reinforce I.a. III. 2nd Body paragraph- restate second point to help support thesis statement (I.b.) a. 1st fact to reinforce I. b. b. 2nd fact to reinforce I. b. c. 3rd fact to reinforce I. b. IV. 3rd Body paragraph- restate third point to help support thesis statement (I. c.) a. 1st fact to reinforce I. c. b. 2nd fact to reinforce I. c. c. 3rd fact to reinforce I. c. V. Conclusion- closing statement a. Review I.a. b. Review I.b. c. Review I.c. 21 Name:____________________________________________________________ Peer Editing Log: Rough Outline How do I know if my outline is strong? 1. Do I clearly state my thesis statement in ONE sentence? 2. Do I clearly state the points I am trying to make to support my thesis? Are these points relevant? 3. Do I restate the points I am trying to make in each of my body paragraphs? 4. Do my facts fully support the points I am trying to make in my body paragraphs? 5. Does my conclusion clearly summarize my thesis and facts to support it? Each peer editor must place his/her name next to a row. In the following chart, write “YES” if the outline answers that specific question and “NO” if the outline does not. If “NO”, write on a separate piece of paper why not and some helpful hints that could make it stronger. Q1 Q2 Q3 Q4 Q5 22 PEER EDITING WORKSHEET Editor’s Name:_________________________ Author’s Name_______________________ The Introductory Paragraph(s): What's memorable to me? What phrases catch my attention? Is the purpose of the paper made clear? What is the paper's thesis? Is there a brief summary of the topic which makes sense to you and which provides enough context for the argument which follows? The Body of the Paper: What words, phrases, and passages seem important, generative, resonant? (These passages need not be the paper's intended focus. They are simply moments which grab your attention.) 23 What do you want to hear more about? What is the strongest use of textual evidence to support the argument? What is the weakest evidence? Where does the writer need to provide evidence where there is none? Grammar and Mechanics: Review the paper for mistakes in grammar and spelling. Mark any mistakes directly on the paper, and offer specific suggestions below for rewriting any passages that are vague or confusing. 24 Research Paper Due Dates Assignment A Cycle- B Cycle- Plagiarism Worksheet (page 3) 10/16 10/8 Topic Choice/ Teacher Signature (page 8 or 9) 10/26 (juniors- page 8) (seniors- page 9) 10/19 (juniors- page 8) (seniors- page 9) Topic Wheel (page 6) 10/26 10/19 Thesis Worksheet/ Final Thesis (page 9) 10/30 10/23 Works Cited Page- at least 4 sources (see pages 1217) 11/6 11/2 Completed Works Cited Page with at least 5 sources(see pages 11-16) 11/13 11/16 12/7 11/30 12/21 12/18 2/8 2/1 Outline (sample page 21) First 3 pages of Paper Final Paper 25