LS526-01 Unit 3 Seminar Unit 3 Seminar Creating a Concept Map Strategies for Argumentation •Toulmin •Rogerian Choosing Credible Sources LS526-01 Unit 3 Seminar References for this presentation The Purdue OWL Glenn, Cheryl, et al. The Writer's Harbrace Handbook. 2nd ed. Boston: Heinle, 2004. UC-Berkeley, “Evaluating Web Pages” http://www.lib.berkeley.edu/TeachingLib/Guides/Internet/Evaluate.htm Cornell U. Library, “Critically Analyzing Information Sources” http://olinuris.library.cornell.edu/ref/research/skill26.htm Purdue Owl, “Using Research and Evidence” http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/588/02/ Lakeland Library, Research Guides http://library.lakelandcc.edu/sourceevaluation.html LS526-01 Unit 3 Seminar The PowerPoint Concept Map… • Is a graphic representation of the rhetorical path • Defines the path from Point A (your topic or subject) to Point B (your thesis claim or conclusion) • Helps with planning your persuasive paper, much as an outline would • Is due at the end of Unit 3 LS526-01 Unit 3 Seminar For the concept map, • trim the material from your freewriting exercise • discard useless ideas from your brainstorming • choose and address relevant counterarguments • distill down to several (at least 3) main points in support of your thesis • compile the details necessary to develop and explain these points clearly, concisely, and convincingly LS526-01 Unit 3 Seminar In Unit 3’s assignment, you’ll find a link to readwritethink.org’s Essay Mapping Tool, which will help you bring your ideas together and create a coherent concept map. Turn in your revised thesis statement and introduction both in the dropbox and in the notes section of your Powerpoint Concept Map. LS526-01 Unit 3 Seminar The Toulmin Method, a common formula for organizing an argument, works as follows: • Claim: The overall thesis the writer will argue for (a.k.a., conclusion drawn from evidence). • Data: Evidence gathered to support the claim. • Warrant (a.k.a. “bridge”): Explanation of why or how the data supports the claim, the underlying assumption that connects your data to your claim. A well thought-out warrant or bridge is essential. If you present data to your audience without explaining how it supports your thesis they may not make a connection between the two or they may draw different conclusions. LS526-01 Unit 3 Seminar • • • Backing (a.k.a. “foundation”): Additional logic or reasoning that may be necessary to support the warrant. Counterclaim: A claim that negates or disagrees with the thesis/claim. Rebuttal: Evidence that negates or disagrees with the counterclaim. Including counterclaims allows you to find common ground with more of your readers. It also makes you look more credible because you appear to be knowledgeable about the entirety of the debate rather than just being biased or uniformed. LS526-01 Unit 3 Seminar Example of Toulmin Method: • Claim: Hybrid cars are an effective strategy to fight pollution. • Data 1: Driving a private car is a typical citizen's most air polluting activity. • Warrant 1: Because cars are the largest source of private, as opposed to industry produced, air pollution switching to hybrid cars should have an impact on fighting pollution. LS526-01 Unit 3 Seminar • Data 2: Each vehicle produced is going to stay on the road for roughly 12 to 15 years. • Warrant 2: Cars generally have a long lifespan, meaning that a decision to switch to a hybrid car will make a long-term impact on pollution levels. LS526-01 Unit 3 Seminar • Data 3: Hybrid cars combine a gasoline engine with a battery-powered electric motor. • Warrant 3: This combination of technologies means that less pollution is produced. According to ineedtoknow.org, "the hybrid engine of the Prius, made by Toyota, produces 90 percent fewer harmful emissions than a comparable gasoline engine." LS526-01 Unit 3 Seminar Counterclaim: Instead of focusing on cars, which still encourages a culture of driving even if it cuts down on pollution, the nation should focus on building and encouraging use of mass transit systems. Rebuttal: While mass transit is an environmentally sound idea that should be encouraged, it is not feasible in many rural and suburban areas, or for people who must commute to work; thus hybrid cars are a better solution for much of the nation's population. LS526-01 Unit 3 Seminar Rogerian Argument: Psychologist Carl R. Rogers advocated communication based on compromise. He felt a person should listen to the point of view of his or her adversary and come to a conclusion that takes into account this other perspective. Rogerian argument takes this idea and applies it to the essay format. A Rogerian essay structure acknowledges that a subject can be looked at from different standpoints. LS526-01 Unit 3 Seminar Rogerian argument works best when people have strong, opposing positions, as with divisive subjects like gun control or abortion. Because Rogerian arguments are based on listening to the opposition and giving consideration to those concerns, this structure works to calm an audience who may be opposed to your opinion. LS526-01 Unit 3 Seminar The structure of Rogerian argument differs from the Toulmin model because the opinions of the opposition are presented earlier in the essay and given due consideration. Your thesis will appear after you have shown that you understand the arguments of those who have a different position. LS526-01 Unit 3 Seminar Introduction: From the beginning of your essay, acknowledge that there is another side to the argument, and it is dissimilar from your own. Give a fair assessment of the opposition in your introduction. Acknowledgment of the Opposition builds trust because it shows that not only do you acknowledge the other side of the argument, but that you also find some value in it. State the parts of the opposition in which you find some merit. LS526-01 Unit 3 Seminar State Your Thesis: Once you have shown that you are taking your opposition into consideration, you should state your own perspective. Support Your Thesis: Explain why your thesis is valid. The research you have done in support of your position should appear here. This section builds support for your point of view and illustrates that you have delved deeply into your subject and found material to endorse the position you have chosen. LS526-01 Unit 3 Seminar Conclusion: illustrates why your position in this argument would be beneficial and would resolve the problem. • Even though you have admitted that the other side of the argument has merit, you want to conclude by showing why your thesis is the better option. • If your position cannot completely solve the problem, as is often the case when writing about a controversial issue, admit that. State that while your ideas will help, more work needs to be done. LS526-01 Unit 3 Seminar Tone: the Rogerian thesis should be delivered in neutral, non-adversarial language. The thesis should not be an attack on the opposition; rather, it should present the writer’s viewpoint without dismissing or demeaning the viewpoints of others. For example, in a thesis that advocated the death penalty, you would not want to refer to those on the other side of the issue as "bleeding-heart liberals." LS526-01 Unit 3 Seminar Support: The most persuasive support for a Rogerian argument comes through research. Saying that "anyone who takes a life should pay with his life" is an impassioned statement, which is all wrong for a Rogerian argument, and it is not supportable through research. Show the reader why your way of seeing the issue is valid in certain circumstances. LS526-01 Unit 3 Seminar Thesis: a Rogerian thesis differs from a regular thesis because it is presented only after the writer has conceded that opposite viewpoints exist and that they have some merit. This concession of merit may even lead into your thesis statement, as in this example: “Regardless of whether the fetus is entitled to legal protection, society as a whole will benefit if we treat a high abortion rate as symptomatic of a greater social illness. Identifying and addressing that illness will do more practical good than endlessly pitting the rights of a woman against the rights of her fetus." LS526-01 Unit 3 Seminar Assessing the credibility of sources: Who is the author? Credible sources are written by authors respected in their fields of study. Responsible, credible authors will cite their sources so that you can check the accuracy of and support for what they've written. (This is also a good way to find more sources for your own research.) LS526-01 Unit 3 Seminar Assessing the credibility of sources: How recent is the source? The choice to seek recent sources depends on your topic. While sources on the American Civil War may be decades old and still contain accurate information, sources on information technologies, or other areas that are experiencing rapid changes, need to be much more current. LS526-01 Unit 3 Seminar Assessing the credibility of sources: What is the author's purpose? When deciding which sources to use, take the purpose or point of view of the author into consideration. Is the author presenting a neutral, objective view of a topic? Or is the author advocating one specific view of a topic? A source written from a particular point of view may be credible; however, you need to be careful that your sources don't limit your coverage of a topic to one side of a debate. LS526-01 Unit 3 Seminar Assessing the credibility of sources: What type of sources does your audience value? • If you are writing for a professional or academic audience, they may value peer-reviewed journals as the most credible sources of information. • If you are writing for a group of residents in your hometown, they might be more comfortable with mainstream sources, such as Time or Newsweek. • A younger audience may be more accepting of information found on the Internet than an older audience might be. LS526-01 Unit 3 Seminar Periodicals are print sources that are published weekly, monthly or quarterly, such as magazines, newspapers and journals. They can be described as either scholarly or popular. LS526-01 Unit 3 Seminar Scholarly Journals contain articles written by professionals in the field. The articles may be original research or an extension of previous research, may be illustrated with graphs or tables, and will include a reference list. Articles submitted to a scholarly journal are peer-reviewed or juried, meaning other experts read and suggest revisions to the author before the final version is accepted for publication. LS526-01 Unit 3 Seminar Popular magazines are not in-depth enough to be scholarly. The magazine may have an area of interest; for instance, the magazine Parenting is devoted to raising children, while Time is a news magazine. Still, the articles in magazines are intended as overviews for general readers. Authors may or may not be named, there may be illustrations or charts, but there won't be a bibliography at the end. LS526-01 Unit 3 Seminar When deciding if a source is being objective about the information it is presenting, look for some of the following techniques used to convince readers that what they are reading is fact when it may not be. Loaded language — using words and sentences that solicit a positive or negative response from the reader LS526-01 Unit 3 Seminar Misquoting a source — this often happens in the news media when reporters reword, paraphrase or manipulate a statement or source’s information Selective facts — taking information out of context or selective use of data— picking only information that supports the argument and leaving the rest out LS526-01 Unit 3 Seminar Distortion or stretching the facts — making issues more extreme by using misinformation or exaggeration Flawed research —basing a claim on too small a sample, manipulating statistics, using “fuzzy science” or “bad math,” failing to report contrary conclusions from other scientists. LS526-01 Unit 3 Seminar Assessing Websites The web is self-published. Beyond the criteria mentioned for all resources, look for additional proof of value in websites. Some hoax sites look very credible until viewed with a critical eye. Look for: Mission/Vision/Purpose Statement — reveals purpose of the website and point of view LS526-01 Unit 3 Seminar Credentials —look for a well-regarded sponsoring organization or an expert author (Webpage content may not list an individual author). Domain name —Is the domain appropriate for the content? .com is a commercial site and is the least trustworthy (unless affiliated with a known entity like a news organization) Better bets are .gov or .mil for government information, .edu for education, or .org for nonprofit organizations LS526-01 Unit 3 Seminar Date of last revision —this reveals how recently the content of a website has been reviewed Contact information — is there a physical address and telephone number the researcher can use to contact a real person with questions? LS526-01 Unit 3 Seminar Loaded language —words that assign emotional value can be used to manipulate attitude. (“Patriot” sounds better than “vigilante,” “insurgency” less scary than “civil war”) Links —do other reputable websites link to the website, and does it link to other reputable sites? LS526-01 Unit 3 Seminar Additional information about using sources, specifically related to documentation in APA style, is available in the APA style guide in our class as well as in the files I’ve placed in Doc Sharing (Basic Citations, Advanced Citations, and Formatting). Good luck with this week’s assignments, and don’t hesitate to get in touch if you have questions or concerns. vhill@kaplan.edu or 912-429-9739